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Reading for Writing
Book2 Unit 4 P44-45
Beautiful Ireland And Its Traditions
2nd period
Language
Study
Learn some useful English structures from the passage
Ireland's beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses.
to give sb the idea for sth
to make sb feel very pleased, interested or enthusiastic
give birth to
The peaceful landscape of the "Emerald Isle" and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
sight
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
hearing
touch
smell
personification拟人
hearing
With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
浓郁的风情
make a short visit to
taste
If you're lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
taste
sure, more possible
1. 他对周围的人有很大的影响。
He had a great influence on those around him.
2. 他在毒品的影响下犯罪。
He committed the crime under the influence of drugs.
对……产生深远的影响
在……的影响下
have an influence on:
3. 新冠疫情对我们地方的工作和生活影响不大。
Covid-19 has little influence on our work and life in the local area.
环游北京是一场视觉盛宴。
A walk around Beijing is a feast for the eyes.
我们的校园是如此美丽，在里面漫步真是令人赏心悦目。
Our school is so beautiful that it is a feast for the eyes to walk in it.
Visiting the Great Wall is really a feast for the eyes.
视觉盛宴，大饱眼福，大开眼界
a feast for the eyes
Write the senses and places in the order that they appear. And describe sensory details
Senses
Places
Analyse
sight
hearing
touch
smell
in the green counties and hills
by the sea
In the mountains
In the mountains
feast for the eyes
sweet scent
feel the sun on your skin
roar, cries, music of the coast, morning song
Description of senses
writing
Describe an interesting, exciting, or surprising place.
Step 1: Work in pairs. Choose one of your favorite places and tell a partner why you think it is interesting, exciting, or surprising.
Step 2: Use the questions below to describe the place you have chosen.
What can you see
What can you hear
How does the place feel
How does the place feel
What can you taste there
What does the place make you think or feel
Step3. Use your answers to draft a passage about the place.
Introduction
In my village, every day starts with a “fire”! The houses turn red as the sun rises above the mountains.
Make the reader eager to read your writing
A striking image
Something surprising
A quote or question
In the morning/ afternoon/evening
First, second, etc.
In the north …
In the east …
Transitions
Help the reader follow
your ideas
Body
Details and examples
Use sensory details
Do not use general words
Give examples
What can you see, hear, smell, etc.
I learn a lot. → What did you learn → There were many things… → What Some people… → Who
At night, the stars come out to tell us that all is well and my village grows quiet. For now we'll sleep, and tomorrow the sun will set us on fire again for a new day!
Let the reader know that the passage ends
Help the reader remember your writing
Ending
In my village, every day starts with a “fire”! The houses turn red as the sun rises above the mountains.
Seeing the flames, the roosters(公鸡) sound the alarm. They wake everyone in the village with their loud cries, chasing the children to school and rushing the adults to work. In the evening, a gold haze settles over everything. This is my favourite time of the day, when all work for the day has been completed. When the smell of hot oil and fragrant(芳香的) spices float through the air, I know that it will soon be time for dinner. My neighbours begin to call to their children to come home. The birds begin their nightly quarrel over their favourite places to rest.
At night, the stars come out to tell us that all is well and my village grows quiet. For now we'll sleep, and tomorrow the sun will set us on fire again for a new day!
Possible version
How to describe a place that you like
Body
(transitions; details and examples)
Introduction
(make the reader eager to read your writing)
Ending
(let the reader know that the passage ends;
help the reader remember your writing)
Review
1. Recite the wonderful sentences in the passgae.
2. Find a picture of your favourite place and share it next class.
Homework
Thank you all ！

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