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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项牛津译林版
（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．赤峰文旅火爆出圈，你的笔友Mike来信说他暑假要来赤峰旅行，请你用英文写一封回信，介绍一些本地的景点和特产，以及一些注意事项。内容包括：1.表示欢迎和期盼。2.介绍一些本地景点和特产。3.注意事项。
参考词汇：beef jerky（牛肉干）, Double Cooked Pork Slices（锅包肉）, Asihatu Stone Forest（阿斯哈图石林），grassland（草原，牧场）
要求：
1)文中不要出现与考生相关的真实信息；
2)适当增加细节，词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱，为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。
内容要点如下：
(1) Learn about tea picking;
(2) Observe (观察) plants and animals;
(3) Plant trees along the river;
(4) Visit places of interest and museums.
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数80左右；
(3) 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译，补充一两点个人看法；
(4) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：experience v. 体验 nature n.自然 meaningful adj.有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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3．为了提高社区居民的环保意识、创建优质的居住环境，社区居委会正在举办以“Live a Low-Carbon Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文参加活动。
提示：
1.为什么要过低碳生活？
2.如何过低碳生活？请提出三条建议。
要求：
1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，可适当发挥；
2.100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：energy能源；plastic 塑料；mode 模式
Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, protecting the environment is important.
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4．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校每年组织远足活动 (如：春游和秋游等)，下周学校将举行“Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文和同学们分享。
1. What do you think of school trips 2. What did you do in one of your school trips 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful
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5．生活中不只有眼前的试卷和作业，还有诗和远方。暑假快到了，你们校刊的英文栏目正在征集“The place I want to go most”稿件，请你投稿吧！
写作内容：
1.你最想去的地方是哪里；
2.你为什么想去这个地方；
3.你打算在那里做些什么。
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；
2.词数要求90左右。
The place I want to go most
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6．
愚公移山的故事在中国家喻户晓，在古代要人工搬移大山是一件艰巨而又难以完成的工作，你作为旁观者，对这件事情有何看法，请根据提示写一篇英语作文，发表你的观点。
提示：
1. Tell the story simply;
2. Do you agree with Yu Gong’s action Why or why not
要求：
1、要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2、词数 80 个左右；
3、文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time,
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7．在我们成长过程中，我们去过许多不同的地方。有的地方会给我们留下深刻的印象，成为我们心中最美好的回忆。请你根据以下提示要点，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你去过的最好的地方。
要点如下：
(1) 去了哪里；
(2) 做了什么；
(3) 你的感受。
注意：
(1) 词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is
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8．假如你是 Nancy，今天你班开展了“珍爱地球，保护环境”主体班会活动，通过此次活动，你对环境正在恶化有了深刻的认识。会后，你打算写一份以“Going green”为主题的倡议书，号召全校同学立刻行动起来，为保护环境而努力。倡议书必须包括下面表格中内容。
steps should shouldn’t
公共交通 1.步行或骑自行车去上学；2.…… ……
节约能源 1.较短时间淋浴；2.…… ……
减少污染 像塑料、纸这些东西被分类，然后被回收 ……
你的希望 ……
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实人名、单位名：
2.补齐要点，适当发挥；
3.词数在90左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
相关词汇：交通车辆 transport 减少 reduce
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
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Yours,
Nancy
9．假如你是刘明，你校上周举办了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下表格信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show clothes, chairs, model planes, …
What are they made of/ from (制成) waste paper, plastic bottles, used wood and glass,...
What’s your feeling …
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于60词。(开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。)
Working the Waste into Magic
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
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10．假如你是 Linda，两个月前你坐飞机从美国来到中国，在北京游览了一周。这是一次难忘的旅行，请根据表格内容，介绍旅行情况。
Time Two months ago
Transportation Plane
Activities 1. Visited many places of interest (名胜古迹) 2. Went to some famous universities 3. Tasted Roast Beijing Duck, Beijing Zha Jiang Noodles... (请补充至少2个活动)
Feelings (请补充至少1个感受)
要求：①文章必须包括表格中的全部内容，语句通顺，语意连贯，可适当增加内容；
②短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；
③词数80左右，文章标题和开头已经给出，不算在总词数内。
An Unforgettable Travel
I had an unforgettable travel in China.
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11．假如你是李华，你的新加坡笔友Tom发邮件说最近对中国传统文化很感兴趣，请你以“The story of Yu Gong”为主题，给他写一封邮件。
内容包括：
1.简要叙述“愚公移山”的故事；
2.你从故事中学到了什么。
写作要求：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
12．为了提高小区居民的环保意识、创建优质的居住环境，你所在的社区的居委会正在开展以“Live a low-carbon life”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加此次征文活动，倡导人们过低碳生活。
要点提示：
(1) Why should we live a low-carbon life (climate (天气) change)
(2) What should we do to live a low-carbon life ( At least two ways.)
写作要求：
(1) 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
(2) 必须包括所给提示内容，并适当发挥；
(3) 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
(4) 词数：70~80。（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数 ）
参考词汇： energy 能源； duty 职责； low-carbon 低碳的
Live a low-carbon life
Because of climate change and human activities,
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13．文明从点滴做起，城市因你我而美丽。近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的短文。内容应包含以下要点：
行为习惯 遵守交通规则，公共场合举止礼貌……
公益活动 捐钱给慈善机构，做志愿者……
绿色生活 节约用水，选择公共交通……
暑假计划 按时完成作业，多读有意义的书……
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Huai’an more civilized.
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14．很快就要到世界环境保护日，你校组织以“Being a volunteer of going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛，提示如下：
1. What are you like
2. What have you ever done for going green
3. Tell us the reasons for going green and how to do it
Being a volunteer of going green
Hello,everyone. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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Thank you for listening!
15．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack打算暑假来中国游玩，体验中国文化。请你写一封邮件向他推荐一处中国的旅游景点，并向他提几点来中国旅游需要注意的事项。
内容提示：
1．表达欢迎。
2．推荐一处中国的旅游景点。
3．注意事项。
要求：1．词数80—100。
2．中心突出，语义连贯，书写规范。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
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Li Hua
16．为了讲好呼和浩特故事，深入了解丰富多彩的本土文化，你校组织了有关呼和浩特文化的研学活动(study trip)。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格信息及要求给你的美国朋友 Aaron写一封电子邮件，介绍这次研学之旅及收获。
Process Time June 15. 2024
Place Ely Health Valley (伊利健康谷)
Activities visit the factory, have a taste of dairy (牛奶的) products…
Gains understand history and local culture better…
要求：
1）内容必须包括以上表格中所有信息，可适当增加细节；
2）活动和收获至少补充一条；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校及班级名称；
4）词数80词左右。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Aaron,
I’d like to share my experience of my school study trip with you.
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Do you want to know more about our local culture Let’s take a study trip together this holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
17．随着《我的阿勒泰》的热播，来自新疆的草原、雪山、旷野和森林震撼了无数人的心灵，让新疆再度成为网友心目中旅游的热门地点之一。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在举办以“Beautiful Xinjiang”为主题的英语征稿活动，让更多的朋友了解新疆，请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇文章简单地介绍一下新疆并投稿。
内容包括：
1. 新疆位于我国西部；交通方便；人们热情好客；
2. 日照丰富，因此水果的产量和种类丰富，在这里人们可以品尝各种水果和美食；
3. 有许多著名的旅游景点，如天山(The Tianshan Mountains)、赛里木湖(Sayram Lake);
4. 旅游时间及原因(至少一条)。
要求：
1. 意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得抄袭试卷原文。
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you.
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18．假设你叫王浩，在今年五月学校组织的游学活动中，你去了英国伦敦参观学习，收获很多。你准备将这次游学经历以邮件的形式告诉你的好朋友Paul。请根据下面表格中的信息，完成这封邮件。
My travel study
Time arrived on May 2 and left on May 11
Activities visited museums, studied with local (当地的) students, lived with a local family, tasted real English food and took photos
Feelings happy and excited
要求：
1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名和地名等）
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Paul,
Have you ever been to London I went there for a travel study in May. Now let me tell you about it._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Well, this is what I want to share with you. Hope you can have a chance to visit London, too.
Wang Hao
19．今年五一，河南凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了世界各地的游客前来“打卡”， 在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 简要介绍你对旅游的态度或看法，并详细介绍一个旅游胜地；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
20．旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。假如你是八（1）班的李海，很喜欢旅行，请用英语写一篇短文，与同学们分享一下你的旅行体验。
内容需包括以下要点：
1. 旅行的好处（至少两点）；
2. 介绍你的一次旅行经历（时间、地点、人物、出行方式、经过、心得、感受）；
3. 你对同学们有关旅行的倡议。
要求：
1. 词数在80-100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Welcome to Chifeng! There are many beautiful places to visit here. You can go to the Asihatu Stone Forest to see the wonderful stones. You can also go to the grassland to enjoy the fresh air and the blue sky. Don’t forget to try our local specialties, such as beef jerky and Double Cooked Pork Slices.
When you come here, you should pay attention to the weather. It can be very hot in summer, so you should bring some light clothes and sunscreen. Also, be careful when you are traveling.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章围绕欢迎 Mike 来赤峰，介绍当地景点、美食及注意事项展开，内容较完整，符合书信交流场景。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达收到来信的喜悦并欢迎 Mike 来到赤峰，点明当地有许多美丽景点可供游览；
第二步，具体介绍赤峰值得一去的景点，如阿斯哈图石林和草原，还推荐了当地特色美食；
第三步，提醒 Mike 来赤峰时要注意天气情况和旅行安全，最后表达期待其到来。
[亮点词汇]
①local specialties 当地特色美食
②pay attention to 注意
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①Don’t forget to try our local specialties, such as beef jerky and Double Cooked Pork Slices.（否定祈使句）
② It can be very hot in summer, so you should bring some light clothes and sunscreen.（so 连接的因果关系并列句）
2．例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is helpful for us. We can experience different activities and get close to nature. We can also learn more meaningful things. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容要点中的信息，介绍学校组织的到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出这次活动；
第二步，介绍活动中做了什么，体验并学习到了什么；
第三步，介绍自己的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in person 亲自
②by hand 用手
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply.（after引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.（宾语从句）
3．例文
Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, protecting the environment is important. Living a low-carbon life is crucial for us. Currently, the excessive emission of carbon dioxide has led to global warming and various environmental problems. Here are some ways to live a low-carbon life.
First, choose green transportation. We can walk or ride bikes for short-distance trips, and take buses or subways instead of driving cars when going far. Second, reduce the use of plastic products. Replace plastic bags with reusable cloth bags and avoid using disposable plastic tableware. Third, save energy. Turn off lights and electrical appliances when leaving rooms, and try to use natural light during the day.
Let’s take action and live a low-carbon life to make the earth a better place.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：介绍低碳生活，提出关于低碳生活的建议，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述低碳生活的重要性，以及过低碳生活的原因；
第二步，提出关于低碳生活的建议，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，号召大家一起过低碳生活，注意用词准确，行文流畅。
[亮点词汇]
①be crucial for 对……很重要
②instead of 代替，反而
③take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①Living a low-carbon life is crucial for us.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s take action and live a low-carbon life to make the earth a better place.（不定式做目的状语）
4．范文
Our trip to Xuhui campus Last week, we had a school trip to Xuhui campus.
We started on a sunny day in the morning. It took us two hours to drive there. When we got there, we were attracted by the landscape garden of Xuhui campus. Then we visited the history of Rongqiao middle school in the museum. We were deeply moved by the spirit of Rongqiao people. Finally, we tasted the delicious food of Xuhui canteen.
To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. In this way, we can gain more knowledge and have a better understanding of what we see. All in all, we had an interesting and meaningful school trip.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记述学校旅行经历的文章；
②时态：主要为一般过去时；
③提示：文章包含学校旅行的相关要点，介绍旅行去徐汇校区，描述旅行当天的行程，还给出让学校旅行更有意义的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍上周进行了一次去徐汇校区的学校旅行；
第二步，按时间顺序详细描述学校旅行当天的经历，包括出发时间、路上用时，到达后被校园景观吸引，参观学校历史博物馆，被荣桥人精神打动，以及品尝食堂美食等；
第三步，就如何让学校旅行更有意义提出自己的建议，旅行前对目的地做研究、旅行中做笔记，并强调这样做能带来的收获，最后总结此次旅行有趣且有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①attracted吸引
②moved感动
③gain获得
[高分句型]
①It took us two hours to drive there. (It takes sb some time to do句型)
②To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. (不定式作目的状语)
5．例文：
The place I want to go most
There are so many wonderful places to have a holiday. This time, the place I want to go most is Sanya.
As we all know, Sanya is a good place to relax ourselves. It has beautiful sea and clean beaches. The weather there makes people comfortable. Another reason I want to go there is Sanya’s hotels. Most of the hotels have wonderful condition and service. I really want to have a try.
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. I’ll also taste seafood and try something new. I think a day is not enough for me, and Sanya is really the place where I want to go most.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当发挥，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最想去的地方是三亚；
第二步，介绍为什么想去三亚；
第三步，介绍打算在三亚做些什么；
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②have a try试一试
③try something new尝试一些新的东西
[高分句型]
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. (if引导条件状语从句)
6．例文
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time, there was an old man named Yu Gong. His house was blocked by a big mountain, so he decided to move it with his family. They worked very hard every day, but the mountain was still there. Some people laughed at him, but he never gave up.
I agree with Yu Gong’s action. Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals. Yu Gong’s story teaches us to be brave and persistent, no matter how difficult the task is.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍对愚公移山的看法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍愚公移山的故事；
第二步，介绍自己对愚公移山的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②laugh at嘲笑
③agree with同意
[高分句型]
①Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. (让步状语从句)
②Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals. (条件状语从句)
7．例文
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is Yunnan.
I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old. When we got to Yunnan, we fell in love with its beauty of nature. My father didn’t use to like taking photos. To our surprise, he stopped the car on the way to Gaoli-gongshan Mountain and asked my mother and I to take some photos. We enjoyed different special food there. I also ate the worms as food for the first time.
As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again. It has not only beautiful scenery but also delicious food.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接点出自己去过的最美的地方；
第二步，具体介绍自己去云南旅行的经历；
第三步，书写结尾，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with 爱上
②to my surprise 让我惊讶的是
③neither...nor... 既不……也不……
[高分句型]
①I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old.（时间状语从句）
②As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again.（条件状语从句）
8．One possible version:
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
First, whenever possible, we should take public transportation, walk or ride our bikes to school to reduce the amount of carbon emissions from cars. We’d better not drive our cars if not necessary. Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use. It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on. Third, we should sort our rubbish and recycle plastic, paper and other materials to reduce pollution. We’d better not mix different wastes.
Small changes in our daily lives can make a big difference to the environment. Let’s work together to create a cleaner, greener, and more beautiful world for ourselves.
Yours,
Nancy
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示写一篇保护环境的倡议书，主要从公共交通、节约能源和减少污染三方面谈谈如何保护环境，最后谈谈自己的希望。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次从公共交通、节约能源和减少污染三方面谈谈如何保护环境，讲述应该做和不应该做的事情；
第三步，最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take public transportation 乘坐公共交通
②had better not do 最好不做
③turn off 关掉
[高分句型]
①Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on.（it作形式主语）
9．例文
Working the Waste into Magic
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主旨；
第二步，介绍环保展览的一些作品，以及它们是用什么制成的；
第三步，表达个人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a number of 许多
②be made from 由……制成（看不出原材料）
③be interested in 对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①They are glued together and painted in different colors.（被动语态）
②I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. （how引导的宾语从句）
10．例文
An Unforgettable Travel
I had an unforgettable travel in China. I went on a trip to Beijing, the capital of China, a really great city in China by plane two months ago. I stayed in Beijing for one week. During these days, I visited lots of places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on. The Great Wall is over 6000 kilometres long with a long history. China is famous for the Great Wall. I took lots of pictures there. The Palace Museum is very large. When I was in the Palace Museum, I really didn’t konw the directions. People from all over the world come to see it every day. I also visited some famous universities, like Beijing University and Tsinghua University. These universities are so big and modern. I went to Wangfujng Street and tasted delicious Roast Beijing Duck and Beijing Zha Jiang Noodles. I also went to the countryside to experience the local life in Beijing. And on the last day, I went to the Front Gate Walking Street. It was a good place to go where I bought various kinds of souvenirs and clothes for my families and friends.
The trip to Beijing was so interesting and wonderful. I really enjoyed it.
【解析】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：一般过去时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
【写作步骤】第一步，点出主题：两个月前到中国北京的旅行令人难忘；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，游览了北京的名胜古迹、名牌大学，品尝了北京烤鸭和炸酱面，体验了北京农村生活，最后给家人和朋友买了纪念品。
第三步，书写结语，“我”对此次北京之行的感受。
【亮点词汇】①various kinds of 各种各样的
②lots of许多
③from all over the world来自全世界
【高分句型】It was a good place to go where I bought various kinds of souvenirs and clothes for my families and friends.（定语从句）
11．例文：
Dear Tom,
I am delighted to share with you a famous Chinese story called “The Story of Yu Gong”. Yu Gong is an old man living in the village. There were two big mountains blocking his way home. He decided to move the mountain with the help of his family. People laughed at him, saying it was impossible. But Yu Gong replied that even if he couldn’t complete the task, his descendants would continue. In the end, the gods were moved by his determination and helped him move the mountain.
From this story, I learned the importance of perseverance and determination. No matter how difficult the task is, as long as we continue to work hard and never give up, we can achieve our goals.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要叙述“愚公移山”的故事；
第二步，谈谈从故事中学到的道理。
[亮点词汇]
①block one’s way阻挡某人的道路
②perseverance and determination毅力和决心
③as long as只要
[高分句型]
①People laughed at him, saying it was impossible. (现在分词作状语)
②No matter how difficult a task is, as long as we continue to work hard and never give up, we can achieve our goals. (让步状语从句)
12．例文：
Live a low-carbon life
Because of climate change and human activities, our environment is becoming worse and worse.
The climate has changed a lot. There are more storms and droughts, which leads to a lot of loss for people. In order to protect the environment, we need to live a low-carbon life. We should take public transport when travelling instead of private cars. In this way, we can save more energy. When shopping, we had better take our own bags, without using plastic bags.
Let’s live a low-carbon life and make it our duty to protect the environment.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中过低碳生活的介绍要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“倡导人们过低碳生活。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“环境现状、过低碳生活的方法等”几个方面重点介绍过低碳生活的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，发出“让我们过低碳生活，把保护环境作为我们的责任”的倡导。
[亮点词汇]
①lead to导致
②in order to为了
③need to do sth需要做某事
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①There are more storms and droughts, which leads to a lot of loss for people. (there be句型)
②Let’s live a low-carbon life and make it our duty to protect the environment. (祈使句肯定形式)
13．例文
How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student？
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Huai’an more civilized.
First, we should always obey traffic rules when crossing the road. In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. For example, we must keep quiet in the library. Then, learning to care about others is also important. We can donate our pocket money to charities and work as volunteers at the community centre.During the summer holiday, we can also take part in charity activities.
Moreover, we can save water by taking shorter showers. (At the same time, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room). It’s wise for us to choose public transport, because protecting the environment can help us live a green life.
Finally, as a middle school student, I plan to finish my homework on time and read more meaningful books in the next two months. Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. Just as the saying goes, read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
From now on, let’s join together to be civilized students. And we’ll have a happy and meaningful summer holiday!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何做一个文明的中学生的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的短文。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“行为习惯、公益活动、暑假计划等”几个方面重点介绍如何做一个文明的中学生的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们将有一个快乐而有意义的暑假”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心；
②take part in参加；
③plan to do sth计划做某事；
④from now on从现在起。
[高分句型]
①In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. (“It’s+形容词+to do sth”句型)
②Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. (动词不定式作目的状语)
14．例文
Being a volunteer of going green
Hello, everyone. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I’m kind to others. I’m willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. We shouldn’t drop the litter carelessly. I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，是一篇材料作文。
②时态：文章以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。表明作者想成为绿色环保志愿者并进行演讲的意图。
第二步，具体阐述原因。通过描述自己的性格、爱好和志愿者经历，说明自己具备成为志愿者的素质和能力。
第三步，书写结语。文章结尾强调了保护环境的重要性，并表示自己会尽力为地球做出改变。
［亮点词汇］
①be willing to do sth愿意做某事
②raise money 筹款
③make a difference 产生影响
［高分句型］
①I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.（when引导时间状语从句）
②If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment.（if引导条件状语从句）
15．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know that you’re coming to China. I’m writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome. I’d like to tell you something about Dalian. Dalian is famous for its beautiful beaches. The weather here in summer is fine. There is an International Beer Festival every summer and you can try seafood and beer here. I think the best time to visit Dalian is in summer. It’s a good idea to relax yourself on the beach in the sun. You’d better take your swimming clothes because you might want to go swimming in the sea. Sometimes it rains a lot, so bring an umbrella with you.
I hope you have a fantastic time exploring China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎；
第二步，介绍大连的景观，美食和旅行注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②relax yourself放松自己
③had better do sth.最好做某事
[高分句型]
①You’d better take your swimming clothes because you might want to go swimming in the sea. (原因状语从句）
②I hope you have a fantastic time exploring China! (宾语从句)
16．例文
Dear Aaron,
I’d like to share my experience of my school study trip with you.
We went to Ely Health Valley on June 15, 2024. It was a sunny day. We did a lot of interesting things there. We visited the factory. The machines and robots there are quite smart and they make the work easier. We know that Ely is famous for its milk and dairy products. Luckily, we had a chance to have a taste of them. They are really delicious. We also watched a short film about Ely and learnt a lot. Ely is really amazing and I am proud of it as a native.
From this unforgettable study trip, I have learnt not only something about Ely, but also the history and local culture of Hohhot. In addition, we have realized how important the good teamwork is! Last but not least, it has also given me confidence to study hard and make our Hohhot better.
Do you want to know more about our local culture Let’s take a study trip together this holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是分享自己的研学旅行；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间、地点、活动”三方面来阐述自己的研学之旅；
第三步，表达这次研学旅行的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②be proud of以……为骄傲
③in addition此外
④last but not least最后但同样重要
[高分句型]
①We know that Ely is famous for its milk and dairy products. (宾语从句)
②Let’s take a study trip together this holiday. (祈使句)
17．One possible version:
Beautiful Xinjiang
Hello, everyone. Welcome to Xinjiang! Let me introduce Xinjiang to you.
Xinjiang is located in the west of China. It’s very convenient for people to come here by train or by plane. People here are very kind and friendly. Xinjiang has enough sunshine so it’s home to different kinds of fruits. If you come here, you can enjoy delicious fruits. There are many famous places of interest, such as The Tianshan Mountains and Sayram Lake. They are very beautiful. I suggest you come in summer, which is very cool and you can enjoy beautiful scenery.
Come to Xinjiang! I’m sure you will enjoy yourself.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍一下新疆，包括它的位置、交通、特产以及旅游景点，并推荐一下旅游时间。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍新疆的位置、交通、特产以及旅游景点，并推荐一下旅游时间；
第三步，最后表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同各类的
②such as 比如
③enjoy oneself 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① It’s very convenient for people to come here by train or by plane.（it作形式主语）
② If you come here, you can enjoy delicious fruits.（if引导的条件状语从句）
18．Dear Paul,
Have you ever been to London I went there for a travel study in May. Now let me tell you about it. I arrived in London on May 2, and lived in a local family. During my travel study, I visited some famous museums and saw thousands of amazing things. I went to a local school and studied with the students there. They helped me with my English. Of course, I tasted some real English food. How delicious! I took lots of nice photos, too. I’ll show them to you next time. On May 11, I left London for China. During my stay in London, I was happy and excited and I learned a lot. Well, this is what I want to share with you. Hope you can have a chance to visit London, too.
Wang Hao
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出在伦敦学习的经历和生活经历。
第二步，写出自己的收获和感想。
[亮点词汇]
①arrived in 到达
②helped sb. with 帮助某人关于某事
③took lots of nice photos 拍很多好看的照片
[高分句型]
①I visited some famous museums and saw thousands of amazing things.（and连接并列成分）
②How delicious!（How引导的感叹句）
19．参考例文:
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Jiyuan. Jiyuan is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the Wangwu Mountain. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the next day, we went to Wulongkou and saw many monkeys on the mountain. I had a great time.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Jiyuan is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
20．例文
Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle. As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans, travelling is loved by more and more people. Traveling can not only broaden our horizon, but also relax us physically and mentally.
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It’s a good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb the mountains and took many photos. We all had a good time. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.
When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather. We also need to bring some common medicines.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍旅行的好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次旅行经历；
第三步，提出关于旅行的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②took photos照相
③had a good time玩得高兴
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere.（情态动词的被动语态）
②Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.（让步状语从句；宾语从句）
③When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather.（时间状语从句）
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