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2025中考英语作文特训
2025中考英语作文特训
目录
写作提分技巧
技巧一 丰富词汇、灵活表达
技巧二 扩写句子
技巧三 巧用衔接词
技巧四 巧用高分句式
技巧五 巧用俗语谚语
写作类别全解析
（命题分析+思路点拨+背记模板）
类别一 说理议论类
类别二 写人叙事类
类别三 说明介绍类
类别四 看图写作类
中考常考话题
（话题探究+真题剖析+写作步骤+提分佳句+佳句仿写）
话题一 人物介绍
话题二 地点介绍
话题三 志愿服务
话题四 规则
话题五 健康与安全
话题六 学生学习与生活
话题七 环境保护
话题八 人际沟通
话题九 假期活动
话题十 文体活动
话题十一 传统文化
第一部分 写作提分技巧
技巧一 丰富词汇、灵活表达
写作时，应尽量避免反复使用相同的词汇，否则易造成文章枯燥、呆板。在英语中，相同的意思往往有不同的表达。用稍难单词或短语代替一些简单、常见的表达，可以使文章更生动，更有表现力。
【词汇晋级】
1.许多，大量many/much→a great many of/a large number of→a great deal of
2.喜欢 like/love→be fond of/have an appetite for
3.非常 very→terribly/greatly
4.好的 good→fantastic/brilliant/meaningful
5.美丽的 beautiful→attractive/eye-catching
6.处理，解决solve→do with/deal with/cope with
7.长大 grow up→advance in years
8.想要want to do→intend to do/desire to do
9.使用use →make full use of（充分利用）/make good use of（好好利用）
10.应该should→be supposed to do
11.造成，导致cause→lead to/result in
12.知道know→come to realize
13.越来越多more and more→a growing number of/an increasing number of
14.坚持keep→stick to doing
15.对……感兴趣be interested in…→take a great interest in…
16.对……有好处be good for…→be beneficial to…/sb. benefit from sth./have a great effect on…
17.对……有害be bad for…→have terrible influence on…/be harmful to…/do harm to…
18.赞成agree→be in favor of
19.在我看来Ⅰ think→in my opinion/as far as I'm concerned
20.首先 first→to begin with/to start with
21.此外 besides→in addition/what's more
22.最后finally→last but not least/last but most importantly
23.努力做try to do→spare no effort to do/make every effort to do
24.无论何时whenever→no matter when
【学以致用】
改写下面句子中的画线部分。
1．Smoking ____________ people's health.
Smoking ________________ people's health.
2．________ online shopping is an important part of modern life.
________________________________________________, online shopping is an important part of modern life.
3．________________ people begin to realize the importance of learning English well.
________________________________________________________ people begin to realize the importance of learning English well.
4．__________ I try to read this book, I feel sleepy.
__________________ I try to read this book, I feel sleepy.
5．Neo __________ finish his project on time.
Neo ______________________________________________________ finish his project on time.
技巧二 扩写句子
写作的时候，我们常遇到写完主谓宾就不知道如何往下写的情况。这时可以运用一定的方法对句子进行扩展以表达更完整、更具体的意思。
【技巧点拨】
▲添加定语对名词进行限制或说明，如形容词、介词短语、分词短语、定语从句等。
例：Vanessa is a teacher.
定语1.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher.
定语2.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher in a senior high school.
定语3.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher in a senior high school who is popular among the students.
▲添加状语表示时间、地点、方式、程度、目的、原因、结果等。如副词、不定式、分词、状语从句等。
例：We should learn English well. （扩写原因）
We should learn English well because it is spoken most widely around the world.
例：She often listens to music. （扩写目的）
She often listens to music to help her relax and forget her worries.
例：You will get good grades. （扩写条件）
You will get good grades as long as you listen to the teacher carefully and finish your homework on time.
▲添加同位语，如名词、名词短语等。
例：I'm Li Hua. （添加同位语）
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from Hangzhou.
▲添加例子作补充说明，如用like、such as列举事物或用for example举例说明等。
例：I often help my parents do housework. （举例）
I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.
例：We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. （事例说明）
We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.
【学以致用】
根据汉语提示扩写下面的句子。
1．He is a cute boy. （用with添加定语）
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2．She works very hard. （添加目的状语）
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3．He likes different cultures. （举例说明）
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4．Hangzhou is a modern and international city. （添加定语从句）
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5．I prefer living skill training. （添加原因）
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技巧三 巧用衔接词
一、逻辑关系类
恰当地运用连接词把词与词、短语与短语、句与句之间连接起来，可以使语言表达更加准确、流畅。现将常用连接词总结如下：
▲表示并列或选择关系：and, both…and…, not only…but （also）…, either…or…, as well as等。例如：
Reading is interesting. Reading can make me get more knowledge.
→Reading is not only interesting but also can make me get more knowledge.
【学以致用】
1．These activities have helped me have a better understanding of our city. They left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. （合并句子）
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▲表示转折关系：but, while, however等。例如：
Love can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phone call. None is better than going back home and spending time with our families.
→Love can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phone call. However, none is better than going back home and spending time with our families.
【学以致用】
2．I'm not sure whether Mrs. Liu still remembers me. I want to tell her that she will be in my heart forever. （合并句子）
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▲表示因果关系：so, therefore, as a result, thanks to, because of, because等。例如：
When I was in trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help. We were at the same age and we could understand each other easily.
→When I was in trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help because we were at the same age and we could understand each other easily.
【学以致用】
3．She made every effort in studying. She got a high score in the final exam. （合并句子）
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▲表示条件或让步：if, unless, as long as, even if/even though, though/although等。例如：
We have too much stress. We can't sleep at night and we may feel too tired.
→If we have too much stress, we can't sleep at night and we may feel too tired.
【学以致用】
4．My father is very busy. He always gives me a hand when I am in trouble. （合并句子）
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▲表示目的或结果：so…that…, so that等。例如：
I will keep practicing drawing/painting. I can go to an art college.
→I will keep practicing drawing/painting so that I can go to an art college.
【学以致用】
5．I'm going to do my best to get good grades. I can go to college to get good education.
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二、框架搭建类
行文连贯是衡量书面表达水平的重要标准之一。《英语课程标准》对五级写作的要求是“能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系”，如何做到行文连贯呢？我们可以恰当使用连接词或短语，使全文条理清楚、结构紧凑。
【技巧点拨】
▲引出下文：first/firstly, to begin/start with, at first, first of all, above all 等。例如：
（1）In order to win the competition, one has to make a good preparation. First of all, he or she must do a lot of practice.
（2）People can do much to protect the environment. To start with, turn off the lights when leaving the room.
▲承上描述：second/secondly, third/thirdly, then/next, also, after this/after that, what's more/besides等。例如：
（1）Sarah went to the office to finish her work in the morning. Then she entered the canteen to have lunch where there is a lot of delicious food.
（2）To fit in the new class, you can follow my tips. Firstly, be active to communicate with others sincerely. Secondly, find out someone who shares the same interest with you.
（3）There are various advantages of shopping online. To start with, it provides a lot of convenience to our lives. What's more, it helps us save much time and money.
▲结束话题：finally, lastly, last but not least等。例如：
（1）Finally, if you follow my suggestions above, you will realize your dream in no time at all.
（2）Last but not least, let's thank Tom for giving us an earthshaking speech.
▲总结话题：in short, in a word, as for me, in my opinion等。例如：
（1）In short, every problem has a solution.
（2）In a word, communication is really important in making friends.
【学以致用】
Passage 1
secondly, thirdly， in a word， besides， last but not least, firstly
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions. 1. , we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. 2. , watching English movies is also helpful to us. 3. , we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. 4. , we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. 5. , we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
6. , as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
Passage 2
first of all， third， in short， what's more， finally
In order to make more friends, I have some advice. 1. , we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. 2. , we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other. 3. , don't be afraid to admit（承认） mistakes. Nobody is perfect. What matters is the bravery to admit the mistakes. 4. , we can't say bad words about others so that we can get on well with each other. We should keep secrets.
5. , if we can follow the suggestions above, we will make many friends.
技巧四 巧用高分句式
一、使用固定句式
写作中恰当运用固定句式不仅可以避免语法错误，还可以使表达更加多样化，从而使文章更加生动。现将初中英语写作中的常用句式总结如下，希望同学们熟记并学会运用。
▲it代替动词不定式作形式主语，其常用句式有：
1.It is important/（necessary, difficult, convenient, possible…） for sb. to do sth. 例如：
It is necessary for us to have labor education.
2.It's（+a/an+adj.）+名词+to do sth. 例如：
It's a good idea to play basketball every day.
【仿写】
1．在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语都是非常重要的。
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2．在互联网上分享日常生活也是外国人了解本地文化的好方法。
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▲it代替动词不定式作形式宾语。常用结构为“find/think/believe it+adj.+to do sth.”，意为“发现/认为/相信做某事……”。例如：
I find it educational to watch the film Chang An（《长安三万里》）, which was directed by Xie Junwei.
【仿写】
3．汤姆认为读《哈利·波特》那本书很有趣。
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Harry Potter
▲“make+宾语+宾语补足语”，make为使役动词，宾语补足语可以是形容词、动词或名词等。
例如：What he said in class made the whole class surprised.
【仿写】
4．它可以帮助提高我的语言技能，使我自信。
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▲形容词和副词的比较级形式：“as…as…”“比较级+than”“the+比较级, the+比较级”“比较级+and+比较级”等。例如：
The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.
【仿写】
5．世界越环保，我们享受的生活环境就越好。
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6．通过阅读我学到了很多，它让我变得越来越好。
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▲动名词短语作主语。例如:
Reading a good book is like talking to an intelligent person.
【仿写】
7．坚持写日记是提高写作技巧的好方法。
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二、使用含有较高级语法结构的句式
特殊句式（强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等）、各类从句（定语从句、名词性从句等）、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的交替使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映考生的语言运用能力。
1.据说/报道
It is said/reported/known/thought/believed（that）…
2.众所周知
As we know/As everybody knows/It is known to all that…
3.那就是说……
That is to say…
4.基于这个理由
For this reason…
5.换言之
In other words…
6.更严重的是
What is more serious is （that）…
7.这/那就是……的原因
This is the reason why+句子
The reason why+句子+is that+句子
That is because+句子 那是因为……
That is why+句子
8.在……的帮助下
with the help of sb.=with one's help
9.随着……
with the development of… 随着……的发展
with the increase of… 随着……的增长
10.the+最高级+n.+that sb. have/has seen/heard/known/read/…
例如：It's the highest mountain that I have ever seen.
11.no matter what/who/when/where/how=whatever/whoever/whenever/wherever/however
12.It's+adj.（important/necessary/useful/dangerous/easy/difficult/…） for sb. to do sth.
It's+adj.（kind/nice/polite/impolite/clever/…） of sb. to do sth.
13.sb. find/think/make/… it+adj. for sb. to do sth.
14.so/such…that… 如此……以至于……
too…to… 太……而不能……
15.not…until… 直到……才……
16.运用倒装句，语言更活泼
Books are not only shared but they can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
→Not only are books shared but they can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
【学以致用】
The children can be mentally and physically healthy only in this way.（用倒装句改写）
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17.运用省略句，行文更简洁
Maybe you can take outdoor activities when you feel bad.
→Maybe you can take outdoor activities when feeling bad.
【学以致用】
Although they were faced with many problems, they didn't lose heart.（用省略句改写）
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18.运用感叹句，感情更强烈
From the expression on the face, I knew my math teacher was surprised.
→What a surprised expression was on my math teacher's face!
【学以致用】
It is a very wonderful moment!（用感叹句改写）
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19.运用with复合结构、分词（短语）等，结构更简明
Our school lies at the foot of a mountain and there is a river flowing in front of it.
→At the foot of a mountain lies our school with a river flowing in front of it.
【学以致用】
The teacher came into the lecture hall and many students followed him.（用with复合结构改写）
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20.运用复合句，句式更多变
To our surprise，the little girl knows so many things.
→What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.
【学以致用】
It was quite an experience for both of us, and I will never forget it for the rest of my life.（用复合句改写）
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21.运用it句式, 表达更丰富
Personally, drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary.
→I think it necessary that we should drink plenty of boiled water every day.
【学以致用】
To master a foreign language requires a lot of practice.（用it句式改写）
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技巧五 巧用俗语谚语
在写作中合理地运用谚语会起到画龙点睛、深化主题的作用，是作文提分的有效途径。
一、时间
1.How time flies! 光阴似箭!
2.Time is the greatest teacher. 时间是最好的老师。
3.Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。/时光不待人。
4.Lost years are worse than lost dollars. 一寸光阴一寸金，寸金难买寸光阴。
5.Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today! 今日事，今日毕。/明日复明日，明日何其多!
二、学习
1.Every minute counts. 分秒必争。
2.It is never too old to learn. 活到老学到老。
3.There is no end to learning. 学无止境。
4.A young idler, an old beggar. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
5.A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
6.Knowledge starts with practice. 实践出真知。
7.There is no royal road to learning. 学无坦途。
8.Books and friends should be few but good. 读书如交友，应求少而精。
9.Knowledge advances by steps not by leaps. 知识的获得是循序渐进而不是突飞猛进的。
10.A man becomes learned by asking questions. 不耻下问才能获得学问。
11.Reading is to the mind while exercise is to the body. 读书健脑，运动强身。
12.Knowledge makes humble; ignorance makes proud. 博学使人谦逊，无知使人骄傲。
三、习惯
1.Habit is the second nature. 习惯成自然。
2.Don't leave today's work for tomorrow. 今日事，今日毕。
四、勤奋
1.No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。
2.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
3.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。/冰冻三尺非一日之寒。
4.Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才不过是劳动加勤奋。
五、自信
1.Great hopes make great man. 伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
2.Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。
3.Where there is a will, there is a way./Nothing is impossible to a willing mind/heart. 有志者事竟成。/世上无难事，只怕有心人。
六、成功
1.Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。
2.The finest diamond must be cut.玉不琢,不成器。
七、团结
1.Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。
2.People with one mind will remove Mount Tai. 人心齐，泰山移。
3.When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high. 众人拾柴火焰高。
八、交友
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
2.Friendship is one soul in two bodies. 友谊就是两人一条心。
3.He is rich enough who has true friends. 有真朋友的人是富翁。
九、健康
1.A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口。
2.Prevention is better than cure. 预防胜于治疗。
3.It is not work that kills, but worry. 劳动不伤人，忧虑才伤人。
4.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一日一苹果，医生远离我。
5.Health is not valued till sickness comes. 病时方知健康可贵。
第二部分 写作类别全解析
类别一 说理议论类
命题分析
该类文章通常要求考生结合题目所给的要点信息，针对某个问题或某个事件进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张。
思路点拨
初中阶段说理议论类文章的写作格式常为三段式，即开头、主体和结尾。一般写作思路如下：
模板记背
（1）观点看法型
The topic of （主题） is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say （看法A） is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of （理由一）. What's more, （理由二）. Moreover, （理由三）. While others think that （看法B） is a better choice for the following three reasons. First, （理由一）. Second（Besides）, （理由二）. Third（Finally）, （理由三）.From my point of view, I think （个人观点）. The reason is that （原因）. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former/latter is surely a wise choice.
（2）解决问题型
In recent days, we have to face a problem of （问题）, which is becoming more and more （具体情况）. First, （现状一）. Second, （现状二）.Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to change the situation. For onething, （解决方法一）. For another thing, we'd better （解决方法二）. Besides, we are supposed to （解决方法三）.Personally, I believe that （以上解决方法的作用）. As long as we take active action from now on, we can make a positive difference.
类别二 写人叙事类
命题分析
该类文章通常要求考生结合题目所给的要点信息，针对某一人物或事件进行描述，并表达自己的感受。
思路点拨
此类作文通常采用三段式写作，答题时应注意认真分析要点，不要遗漏内容。一般写作思路如下：
模板记背
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks most is （引出人物）. He/She is （身材）. He/She has （五官特点）.He/She is always （性格）. He/She always helps me out whenever I am in need. Once （事例描写）. To my surprise, he/she （他/她的做法）.He/She has a great influence on me. He/She is （我的看法）.And I wish （表达愿望和祝福）.
类别三 说明介绍类
命题分析
该类文章通常要求考生根据题目所给的要点信息，对某一事物的概况进行介绍，帮助读者了解其基本信息，或对某一活动的计划安排进行说明。
思路点拨
此类作文通常采用三段式写作，答题时应注意涵盖题干所给的要点信息，不要遗漏内容。一般写作思路如下：
模板记背
（1）地点介绍型
It's my honor to give you a brief introduction to （地名）. Located in （地理位置）, the weather here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.It is a place with many famous places of interest and tourist attractions. Not only can you pay a visit to （景点一）, but you can also go （景点二）. （必去景点） is a must-see for tourists, as it is well-known at home and abroad. There are also many kinds of delicious food, such as （美食举例）.It is very convenient for you to come to our city by （交通方式）. You are sure to have a wonderful time in （地名） and I hope all of you will enjoy it.
（2）具体事物介绍型
Have you ever heard （事物名）？ （事物名）has a long history. It's said that （相关人物） was the first to discover/invent it. （事物名） is produced in many different areas such as （地名）. There are lots of advantages of （事物名）. First, （优点一）. Besides, （优点二）. It seems that people all over the world （人们的态度）.In a word, it is not only （特点一）, but also （特点二）. It is worth knowing by more people.
（3）计划安排型
The holiday is a special time for us to relax from the hard work at school. Some students like spending holidays with no plans, but I think making some plans is important and necessary. The （具体假期） is coming. Here are my plans.Firstly, as a student, I must finish my homework first, read some classical books and exercise regularly to keep healthy. Secondly, I plan to visit （具体对象）. I haven't seen them for a long time, so I miss them very much. Thirdly, I'm going to （活动内容）. It can not only （活动的意义） but also let me learn more necessary skills.I believe that it will be a colorful and meaningful holiday, which will make me a better self.
类别四 看图写作类
命题分析
看图作文以记叙为主，要求学生根据所给的图画，写出一篇情节完整、句子通顺、语义连贯、符合图意的英语短文。
思路点拨
通常英语看图作文的写作从整体上可分为两个过程：
（1）感性理解过程，即通过画面直接获得信息的过程（究竟画面展示了一个什么情景）；
（2）理性理解过程，即针对画面发挥想象力，挖掘画面间的内在联系融入自己的思想与见解（画面的内涵是什么）。
在实际写作过程中可将这两个过程具体渗透到五个环节（一“抓”，二“列”，三“变”，四“连”，五“检”）中去：
①“抓”。抓主题。首先，根据图片内容确定好题材与体裁，是写人还是写景，是说理还是叙事，是书信还是日记或其他应用文体。这个环节可采用求同法或者求异法。求同法即寻找画面中相同的人物、地点或时间等，来协助学生确定主线，不至于跑题；求异法即启发学生观察几幅图的不同之处，挖掘出它们之间的内在联系从而确定体裁。
②“列”。列要点。因为书面表达是以一定的情景为基础，考查具有一定的针对性，所以要点要全面，无遗漏。要点主要是结合图片中的情景，用自己熟悉的结构与词汇列出，忌用生疏的结构与词汇按汉语思维盲目罗列，原则“不求难，不求异，唯求准”。
③“变”。变要点为句子。将第二个环节中所罗列的要点，先按一定的时间、空间及逻辑顺序排列；然后选定恰当的主语与人称，再根据动作发生的时间与主谓关系拓词成句。建议同学们尽量用自己熟悉、简单的结构来表达，避免因用长句和大量的复合句而出现过多的语法错误。如果遇到必须用长句表达时，可仿照、套用课本或各种阅读材料中出现的句型，切勿用汉语思维造句。
④“连”。连句成篇。这个环节是最关键的一环。首先，要根据题目要求及画面展示确定好题材与体裁。其次，要确定好行文的人称与时态的基调。再次，要在句与句以及段与段之间加一些表转折、递进和因果等关系的关联词与过渡句，使文章前后照应，行文流畅。最后结合题目要点和字数适当加入一些表达自己思想、见解的内容，使文章丰满,显得有血有肉。
⑤“检”。文章检查。检查这一环节可以有效帮我们规避文章中可能存在的语法错误。检查可从以下几方面入手：●文章的体裁格式是否准确；●要点有无遗漏；●句子（人称、时态、语态、主谓一致、结构、词语搭配等）；●词汇（意义、拼写、时态语态，形容词与动词的形式，名词单复数）；●标点符号是否有遗漏与错误。
第三部分 中考常考话题
话题一 人物介绍
分析全国近3年中考真题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：1.介绍自己想感谢的人以及对自己的影响； 2.写一封自荐信，介绍自己的基本情况、能力特长等；3.介绍自己心目中的英雄或榜样。
典例剖析
假如你是李华，通过你校外籍教师，你认识了一位英国的新笔友 Richard，他很想了解你的一些情况。请你根据下面表格中的信息，给他写一封邮件，向他介绍情况。
Personal Information（个人信息） Personality outgoing, friendly…
Hobby play basketball, listen to music…
Family happy, warm…
Dream（梦想） want to be, be going to…
Friendship（友谊）between you and Richard learn from each other, visit…
要求：1.邮件包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4.词数不少于80，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Richard,
I'm glad to know you.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 审题
1．定主题：__________________________________
2．定人称：__________
3．定文体：给笔友写邮件，文体为________
4．定时态：介绍自己的情况用____________；说明未来的梦想和表达对两人未来友谊的期待用____________
5．定要点：根据表格信息可知包括____、____、____、____、____________共5个要点
第二步 列提纲
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
连句成篇 句子升格
Dear Richard,I'm glad to know you. I heard that you wanted to know more about me. I am writing to tell you something about myself.I am outgoing and friendly. ①I am nice to everyone and like to help others. ②I like playing basketball and listening to music in my spare time. Basketball helps me be strong and music makes me feel relaxed. I have a happy and warm family and we love each other. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I am going to study hard. Because ③I believe I will become better if I study harder.I am glad to be your pen pal and I am sure we can learn a lot from each other. I'm looking forward to your visit to China.Yours,Li Hua ①用be willing to do sth.升格:________________________________________________________________②用be fond of升格：________________________________________________________________________________________________③用“the+比较级, the+比较级”句式升格：________________________________________________________________________
第四步 誊写
Dear Richard,
I'm glad to know you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Li Hua
提分佳句
【开头亮句】（开篇点明要介绍的人物，引出后文）
1.Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to my mother.
2.The person who I want to express thanks to is my English teacher. （用who引导的定语从句引出想要感谢的人）
3.The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better.
4.There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. （用there be句型引出话题，开启叙述）
5.My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways. Now let me tell you something about him.
6.I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself.
7.Learning that the England Education Group is coming to our school, I am writing to recommend myself as a volunteer.
【中间好句】（从不同的角度对人物进行具体介绍）
1.Whoever needs a hand, she is there to offer.
2.What moves me more is his love for people around the world.（用what引导的主语从句强调人物的高尚人格）
3.However, he never gave up his dream and in the end he had a great success.
4.He proved himself with his great performance.
5.He is a helpful boy who often helps people around him.
6.She is very popular in our school because she is polite to everyone.
7.Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports, but maths and science are my favorite.
8.As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. I'll make friends with my kids.（用as for短语完成论点的自然过渡）
9.First and foremost, I am familiar with the situation of our school.
【出彩尾句】（表达对人物的感情/对未来的期待）
1.That person and that event will always remain in my memory like a shining star.
2.She is truly an inspiration to us all, showing us the power of kindness and determination.（用动名词短语作伴随状语，说明人物之所以是榜样的原因）
3.I am proud to have such a wonderful person in my life, whose qualities I will always admire and try to emulate.
4.I'm so grateful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.
5.There is no doubt that it would be difficult for me to win the prize without her help. （用There is no doubt that…句型描写人物对自己的深刻影响）
6.I have made up my mind to follow his example and offer more help and love to anyone in need.
7.I will appreciate it very much if I can get the valuable chance. I am looking forward to your reply.（用高级词汇appreciate及it作形式宾语，表明对这次机会的珍惜）
8.Let us follow in their footsteps and create a better future for ourselves and for others.
佳句仿写
1．我是一个对学习新事物感兴趣的人。（用who引导的定语从句仿写）
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2．有一个人，我非常想对他说声谢谢。（用there be句型+who引导的定语从句仿写）
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3．这位伟人最让我们印象深刻的是他的勇气。（用what引导的主语从句仿写）
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4．至于帮助别人，他总是第一个伸出援手。（用as for短语仿写）
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5．我父亲每天都在努力工作，思考如何为我们的家庭提供更好的生活。（用动名词短语作伴随状语仿写）
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6．毫无疑问，赢得奖牌的球员以他们的出色表现激励着我们。（用there is no doubt that…仿写）
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7．如果我能有机会在英语戏剧表演中演出，我会非常感激。（用appreciate及it作形式宾语仿写）
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写作自测
同学们，你最想感谢的人是谁呢？最近你校校报英文版正在征稿。请根据思维导图提示，以“I Want to Thank ____________ Most”为题，用英语写一篇短文给你校校报投稿。
要求如下：
1.结合实际，用适当的名词或名词短语补全标题；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3.谈谈你要感谢他/她的理由；
4.不少于80词。
I Want to Thank __________Most
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话题二 地点介绍
话题探究
分析全国近3年中考真题可知,此话题通常还有以下命题角度：1.对比介绍家乡的过去与现在； 2.宣传介绍家乡。
典例剖析
假如你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线”（The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line）为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。
1.风情线总览（the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River）;2.聚焦景观（Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel（水车）， many parks）;3.休闲娱乐（ fly kites, play chess…）4.特色游览［go sightseeing, sheepskin raft（羊皮筏子）, water bus］。
要求：1.80词左右；
2.条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；内容上可适度发挥。
注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。
第一步 审题
1．定主题：参加校报主题征文活动，主题为__________________
2．定人称：__________
3．定文体：________
4．定时态：____________
5.定要点：需涵盖题干信息包括的4个要点
第二步 列提纲
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
连句成篇 句子升格
The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist LineThe Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has Let me tell you!The Yellow River runs through the city of Lanzhou. ①There is a famous highway called Binhe Road. It runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheels and so on. ②There are many activities for leisure and entertainment. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus.The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you! ①用which引导的定语从句升格：________________________________________________________________________________________________________②用such as扩写活动：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第四步 誊写
The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line
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提分佳句
【开头亮句】（开门见山，点明要介绍的事物内容）
1.In recent years, great changes have taken place in our city with the help of the favor policies of our country.（“with+名词短语”作方式状语，说明变化发生的条件）
2.I'm honored to give a speech on the great changes that have taken place in my hometown.
3.Welcome to my hometown and I'm glad to be your guide.
4.There are three tourist attractions I want to recommend to you.
5.Everyone has a place they call hometown. For me, my hometown is a wonderful place that I'm proud to introduce.
【中间好句】（具体说明事物的客观信息和显著特征）
1.The scene is as beautiful as a painting! （用as…as…结构生动形容该地风景如画）
2.I would recommend Tianshui for a family vacation.
3.The old town dates back to the late seventeenth century.
4.Located on the banks of the Yellow River, this beautiful old city has a popular tourist attraction now.
5.The environment in my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful, which adds to our happiness.（用more and more…结构表达事物的发展变化）
6.It lies in the southwest of China and covers an area of about 485,000 square kilometers.
7.Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, whose water is so clear that you can see the bottom of them. （用be well known for短语介绍事物最显著的特征）
【出彩尾句】（总结全文，概括主题）
1.I will study hard to make my hometown more beautiful in the future.
2.All in all, the whole city has taken on a fresh look.
3.I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in my hometown.
4.It is no wonder that hundreds of thousands of visitors spend their holidays here every year.（用It is no wonder that…句型表现事物对人们的吸引力，侧面展现其魅力和特点）
佳句仿写
1．在这些景点的帮助下，游客可以体验这座城市的魅力和历史。（用with the help of…仿写）
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2．我家附近的河水像玻璃一样清澈。（用as…as…结构仿写）
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3．我们社区附近的图书馆越来越受欢迎。（用more and more…结构仿写）
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4．黄河风情旅游线以其美丽的风景和沿线独特的文化活动而闻名。（用be well known for仿写）
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5．在甘肃，到处都是美味的当地小吃。难怪美食爱好者想去游览这个地方。（用It is no wonder that…仿写）
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写作自测
生活中，我们或曾在大自然中感受锦绣山河，或曾在名胜古迹中感受人文历史。请以“A Wonderful Place I Have Travelled To”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1.包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4.词数：80左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Wonderful Place I Have Travelled To
Last year, I went on a trip to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Last year, I went on a trip to
话题三 志愿服务
话题探究
分析全国近3年中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：申请参加志愿者活动。
典例剖析
假设你是李华，你校广播站英文专栏以“Volunteering in Summer Holiday”为题，面向广大学生征稿，倡导同学们积极参与志愿者服务工作，鼓励大家度过一个愉快而有意义的假期。请结合以下要点，谈谈你对此的看法和建议，用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要求：1.短文应包括以上所有的写作要点；
2.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息；
4.词数80左右，文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Volunteering in Summer Holiday
Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way？
第一步 审题
1．定主题：____________________________________
2．定人称：谈论个人对志愿者服务工作的看法和建议，用__________
3．定文体：________
4．定时态：____________
5．定要点：根据导图内容可知共包括__________、__________、__________3个要点
第二步 列提纲
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
连句成篇 句子升格
Volunteering in Summer HolidayDo you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way Maybe volunteering is a good choice.①For us students, volunteering is really a great way to spend the summer holiday. Through helping people in need, we can get new experiences and make new friends. There are many chances for volunteer service in our life. ②Firstly, many parents have much work. And they have no time to take good care of their kids. So we can play games with them and tell stories to them. What's more, the old people are always lonely during the day. ③We can chat with them. We can also take a walk with them on a nice day.Every act of kindness has meaning. Let's make the world better by starting with small things around us. ①用make full use of升格：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②用be busy with升格：______________________________________________________________③用both…and…将两句合并为一句：________________________________________________________________________________________
第四步 誊写
Volunteering in Summer Holiday
Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way
提分佳句
【开头亮句】（开篇表意，阐明写作意图或背景）
1.I'm writing to invite you to join our volunteer service.
2.It is my pleasure to work as a volunteer and join you in cleaning People's Park. （用形式主语强调想要加入志愿活动的强烈意愿）
3.The summer vacation is coming, and I am going to do some voluntary work.
4.May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute（孔子学院）
5.I know you are fond of the volunteer work, so I'd like to invite you to go with us.
6.We'll make every effort to serve the old people to make them feel happy and hopeful.（用高级短语make every effort表明此行的目的）
7.The volunteering spirit has spread among Chinese people in recent years, especially among young people.
【中间好句】（展开介绍原因/计划/事件发展经过）
1.As a volunteer, you can not only help people in need, but also learn a lot from your experience.（用并列连词短语有逻辑地点明了活动的多重意义）
2.In order to help the children in poor areas and raise their spirits, we decide to organize a voluntary activity next week.
3.There we helped to do some cleaning and spent time chatting with them.
4.We raised money for the community to help the children who couldn't attend school.（用定语从句对被帮助者的情况进行了细节介绍）
5.To our surprise, all the things were sold out in a short time.
6.The reason why I choose this activity is that it is crucial（至关重要的） to reduce the waste and protect the environment.
7.As soon as we reach the old people's home, we'll help the old to clean their rooms first. Then we'll have a talk with them.（用as soon as引导的时间状语从句介绍活动的安排）
【出彩尾句】（表达期待/总结感受和收获）
1.I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help.
2.If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.
3.Not only do I feel very happy about helping other people, but also I can spend time doing what I love to do.
4.Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference.
5.Seeing their smiles made me feel joyful.（用动名词短语作主语直截了当地表达个人感受）
6.As a teenager in the new era, we have the responsibility to serve society.
7.This experience taught me that small acts of kindness can bring big happiness.
8.It was amazing to see everyone coming together for a good cause.
“参加活动的积极意义”常用表达：
enrich our daily life 丰富我们的日常生活 make new friends 结交新朋友
broaden one's mind 开拓某人的视野 get new experiences 获得新体验
learn new skills 学习新的技能 bring people closer 拉近人与人之间的距离
be helpful to personal development 有助于个人发展 develop teamwork spirit 培养团队精神
佳句仿写
1．我很乐意把书捐给有需要的孩子。（用It's my pleasure to…仿写）
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2．我们尽一切努力捡拾垃圾来让这个公园变得干净美丽。（用高级短语make every effort表明此行的目的）
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3．这次活动不仅让我们交到了新朋友，也让我们知道了帮助他人就是帮助我们自己。（用not only…but also…仿写）
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4．我们为那些初次来到兰州的游客提供导游服务。（用who引导的定语从句仿写）
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5．我们一有空闲时间，就会参加志愿活动去帮助那些有需要的人。（用as soon as引导的时间状语从句仿写）
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6．节约用水对保护我们的环境很重要。（用动名词短语作主语仿写）
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写作自测
[2024包头]你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历，请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Time last Sunday
Activities made eco-friendly（环保的） productsgave out reusable water bottles and bagsworked at the learning stalls（摊位）
注意：1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
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Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
话题四 规则
话题探究
分析全国近3年中考真题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：1.校规； 2.交通规则； 3.家规或家风。
典例剖析
现如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文报旅游专栏正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。假设你是李华，请结合表格内的信息，用英文写一篇短文去投稿。
Impolite behaviors Opinions Advice
throw rubbish everywhere impolite… put…into dustbins…
pick flowers in a park … put up signs…
speak loudly in public places … make rules…
内容包括：
1.简述表格中的不文明行为（任选其中两个）；
2.提出个人观点及建议；
3.倡导文明旅游。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息；
4.文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：tourist attractions（景区）
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.
第一步 审题
1．定主题：________________________________________________
2．定人称：__________
3．定文体：________
4．定时态：____________
5．定要点：根据题干要求可知共包括____________、__________________、________________3大要点
第二步 列提纲
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
连句成篇 句子升格
Traveling in Good MannersNowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. ①However, there are still some impolite behaviors during trips. For example, some tourists throw rubbish everywhere. This is terribly impolite and also pollutes the environment. ②Another impolite behavior is picking flowers in a park. It does harm to the natural beauty and is not allowed.In my opinion, we should always be polite when traveling. For one thing, we are supposed to put rubbish into dustbins. For another thing, we can put up signs in tourist attractions to remind people not to pick flowers. And for those who speak loudly in public places, tourist areas can make rules to stop such behaviors.Let's all travel in good manners and enjoy the beauty of different places while also protecting them. ①用被动语态进行升格：____________________________________________________________________________________②用非限制性定语从句将两句合并为一句：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第四步 誊写
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.
提分佳句
【开头亮句】（介绍背景，引出话题）
1.School rules play an important role in shaping our learning environment.
2.For me, our school is a place where teachers educate students to be better persons. And school rules are the force that drives us to move forward. （用that引导的定语从句介绍规则的角色和作用）
3.While they enjoy the convenience, they should also pay attention to some rules of train-taking.
【中间好句】（阐述看法观点以及原因）
1.For instance, we are supposed to arrive at our school and hand in homework on time.
2.No matter where you go, no matter what you do, when you are in public places, you have to be in good manners. （用no matter+疑问词（组）引导的让步状语从句强调遵守规则的重要性）
3.Some students may see the rules as a way which teachers and parents control them.
4.I think I should be allowed to make this choice myself. Only then will I have a chance to achieve my dream. （用“only+状语”置于句首时的部分倒装结构说明这一建议的意义）
5.I suggest loosening this rule to create a warmer family atmosphere through open conversations.
6.When we ride the bikes, we should neither ride side by side with our friends nor listen to music.
7.If everybody follows the traffic rules above, we will make us safe when we go across the road. （用if引导的条件状语从句强调遵守交通规则的积极意义）
【出彩尾句】（总结全文，重申对规则的看法）
1.Although our school rules are strict, they are necessary for a good learning environment. Let's follow them.
2.As the saying goes, “Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.” Instead of breaking the rules, we should obey them to be civilized students.
佳句仿写
1．当我们旅游时，我们应该尊重那些与我们不同的当地文化。（用定语从句仿写）
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2．无论我们在旅途中遇到什么困难，我们都应该保持冷静和礼貌。（用no matter+疑问词（组）引导的让步状语从句仿写）
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3．只有遵守校规，我们才能创造一个良好的学习环境。（用only+状语置于句首时的部分倒装结构仿写）
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4．如果我们在景点遵守规则，我们就能享受一个愉快的旅程。（用if引导的条件状语从句仿写）
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写作自测
[2024福建三模]“心中有规矩，行为定方圆。”假如你是李华，你在家和学校需要遵守一些规则。你的笔友Susan想了解这些规则。请根据以下提示，给她写一封电子邮件。
注意：1.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2.意思清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
4.词数：80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.
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What about you What rules do you have to follow
Yours,
Li Hua
话题五 健康与安全
话题探究
分析全国近3年中考真题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：1.对健康的看法及如何保持健康； 2.如何保证自身的安全； 3.如何安全上网。
典例剖析
以“being lost”为主题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think about this topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.
●Where was Mary？●What was Mary doing？●What happened to her？●What did Mary feel when seeing her mother？
The following words may help you：
●crowded with visitors
●so interested in the animals
●no one around
●turn to…
要求：1.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息。
第一步 审题
1．定主题：________________________________________________________
2．定人称：__________
3．定文体：________
4．定时态：根据points中的4个问题的时态可知，时态用____________
5．定要点：包含提示内容中的4大要点，即__________________、____________________、__________________、__________________________
第二步 列提纲
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
连句成篇 句子升格
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon. The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. ①She was interested in the animals and she looked at every small movement of them carefully.②After a while, she found something interesting about these animals. And she wanted to tell her mother these. However, she noticed there was no one around. She was afraid and worried. But she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo.Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. ③Mary saw her mother. She was very happy and ran to her. ①用“so…that…”升格：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②用what引导的宾语从句升格：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________③用现在分词作状语升格：__________________________________________________________________________________
第四步 誊写
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提分佳句
【开头亮句】（点明文章主题，引出后文）
1.As we know, eating healthily is extremely important for teenagers.
2.Daily exercise brings benefits to our health, such as lowering the risk of disease. （用such as…举例说明日常运动的好处）
3.As middle school students, we should develop a positive attitude towards life and try to make ourselves excellent.
4.We are supposed to spend more time exercising instead of playing computer games. （用be supposed to do sth.说明勤锻炼的重要性）
5.It's necessary for us to learn how to protect ourselves from a fire. Here are some suggestions. （用It's necessary for sb. to do sth.阐述学习火灾逃生常识的必要性）
6.Recently, some people like to share details of their lives on the Internet. I think it will cause some safety problems.
7.Life is made up of not only sunshine but also hard times.
8.It's very important for us to learn how to protect ourselves. （用It's very important for sb. to do sth.阐述学习自我保护的重要性）
9.Health is happiness. Only when we are healthy, can we study and work happily.
10.Everyone has only one life. It is our parents' best wishes to see us grow up happily and healthily.
【中间好句】（阐述保持健康和安全的具体措施、建议）
1.Though I'm busy with my study, I spare some time to take exercise every day to keep healthy. （用though引导的让步状语从句介绍坚持锻炼的习惯，说明其重要性）
2.We should get at least eight hours' sleep at night so that wen can have enough energy to study.
3.What's more, instead of sleeping late on weekends, I get up at the regular time and go jogging for 30 minutes.
4.I like sports not only because they can help me to keep healthy but also because they make me relaxed.
5.Use a piece of wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose so that you don't breathe in smoke. （用祈使句与so that引导的结果状语从句向读者说明相关措施及其目的）
6.Try covering a fire with water, sand or something else that can keep the air away from it.
7.When we are surfing the Internet, we should be careful to make friends online to keep ourselves safe.
8.Don't give away your personal information like name or address online.
9.Don't click on any strange link so as to avoid property loss.
10.Always look both sides before crossing the road and follow traffic signals.
11.Exercise such as playing sports is fun, and you can spend time with your friends and family as you play together.
【出彩尾句】（总结全文，再次强调主题）
1.Let's stay alert（警惕） and always keep safe.
2.So precious（珍贵的） is health that we cannot afford to lose it. （用含so…that…的倒装结构强调健康的珍贵程度）
3.All in all, we can come to the conclusion that health is more important than wealth.
4.All in all, we should realize the importance of healthy diet.
5.Only in this way can we live a healthier and better life. （用“only+状语”置于句首时的部分倒装结构说明该做法的意义）
6.No matter how hard life is, we won't fail unless we give up our hope.
7.All in all, my experiences with sports have greatly affected my life in many ways.
8.In a word, we should keep the importance of fire prevention in mind all the time.
9.Let's work together to create a safe and healthy environment for students to grow up.
佳句仿写
1．一些危险物品在学校是不被允许的，比如刀具和火柴。（用such as…仿写）
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2．我们在使用电器时应该小心，以避免发生意外。（用be supposed to do sth.仿写）
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3．对于我们来说，学会以恰当的方式处理心理问题是有必要的。（用It's necessary for sb. to do sth.仿写）
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4．均衡的饮食对我们来说是非常重要的。（用It's very important for sb. to do sth.仿写）
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5．虽然如今使用互联网很普遍，但我们必须意识到所有可能的危险。（用though引导的让步状语从句仿写）
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6．在危急情况下保持冷静，这样你就能清晰思考并采取恰当的行动。（用祈使句+so that…仿写）
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7．安全上网如此重要以至于我们应该高度重视它。（用含so…that…的倒装结构仿写）
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8．只有在有了健康饮食之后,我们才能有足够的精力去学习。（用“only+状语”置于句首的部分倒装结构仿写）
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写作自测
[2024长沙三模]为了增强同学们的安全意识，你校英语报正在以“Keep Safety in Mind”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：1.需包含图示中的所有要点信息，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息；
3.词数80左右。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Keep Safety in Mind
Safety is very important in our life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Safety is very important in our life.
话题六 学生学习与生活
话题探究
分析全国近3年中考真题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：1.介绍学校的课程； 2.介绍学习方法及建议； 3.介绍阅读的好处； 4.介绍“双减”政策后丰富多彩的学校生活； 5.介绍学校环境。
典例剖析
学习一门新的语言不是一件容易的事情，不过万事都有规律可循。请根据思维导图的提示，结合自己的语言学习经历和经验，以“How Can We Become Good Language Learners？”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：1.应包含思维导图提示中所有要点， 可适当进行拓展；
2.词数：80词左右；
3.书写工整规范；
4.标题、首末段已给出， 不计入总词数；
5.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How Can We Become Good Language Learners？
What makes a good language learner There are some things that good language learners do and some things they don't do.

Don't forget that it's never too late to become a good language learner.
第一步 审题
1．定主题：____________________________
2．定人称：__________
3．定文体：________
4．定时态：____________
5．定要点：思维导图中给出的____要点+省略号处需考生自己补充的要点
第二步 列提纲
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
连句成篇 句子升格2025中考英语话题写作
答案解析
第一部分 写作提分技巧
技巧一 丰富词汇、灵活表达
【学以致用】
【答案】is bad for； does harm to
【答案】I think； In my opinion/As far as I'm concerned
【答案】More and more； A growing number of/An increasing number of
【答案】Whenever； No matter when
【答案】tries to； spares no effort to/makes every effort to
技巧二 扩写句子
【答案】He is a cute boy with short straight black hair.
【答案】She works very hard in order to enter a good university and find a good job.
【答案】He likes different cultures. For example, he is interested in museums and likes trying local food.
【答案】Hangzhou is a modern and international city which/that is famous for its beautiful sights and buildings of different styles.
【答案】I prefer living skill training because all the living skills I will get will be of great value to my later life.
技巧三 巧用衔接词
一、逻辑关系类
【答案】These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
【答案】I'm not sure whether Mrs. Liu still remembers me, but I want to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
【答案】She got a high score in the final exam because she made every effort in studying.
【答案】Though my father is very busy, he always gives me a hand when I am in trouble.
【答案】I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to college to get good education.
框架搭建类
Passage 1
【答案】1．Firstly 2．Besides 3．Secondly 4．Thirdly 5．Last but not least
6．In a word
Passage 2
【答案】1．First of all 2．What's more 3．Third 4．Finally 5．In short
技巧四 巧用高分句式
一、使用固定句式
1.【答案】It is very important for everyone to learn English well in the rapidly developing world.
2.【答案】It is also a good way for foreigners to learn about the local culture by sharing everyday life on the Internet.
3.【答案】Tom thought it very interesting to read the book .
4.【答案】It can help improve my language skills and make me confident.
5.【答案】The greener the world is, the better living environment we will enjoy.
6.【答案】I have learnt a lot through reading. It makes me become better and better.
7.【答案】Keeping writing the diary is a great way to improve the writing skill.
二、使用含有较高级语法结构的句式
16.【答案】Only in this way can the children be mentally and physically healthy.
17.【答案】Although faced with many problems, they didn't lose heart.
18.【答案】How wonderful a moment it is!
19.【答案】The teacher came into the lecture hall with many students following him.
20.【答案】It was quite an experience for both of us, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.
21.【答案】It requires a lot of practice to master a foreign language.
第三部分 中考常考话题
话题一 人物介绍
第一步 审题
【答案】写邮件向笔友介绍自己的情况
【答案】第一人称
【答案】应用文
【答案】一般现在时； 一般将来时
【答案】性格； 爱好； 家庭； 梦想； 二人的友谊
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
I am nice to everyone and willing to help others.
I am fond of playing basketball and listening to music in my spare time.
I believe the harder I study, the better I will become.
第四步 誊写
【答案】
Dear Richard,
I'm glad to know you. I heard that you wanted to know more about me. I am writing to tell you something about myself.
I am outgoing and friendly. I am nice to everyone and willing to help others. I am fond of playing basketball and listening to music in my spare time. Basketball helps me be strong and music makes me feel relaxed. I have a happy and warm family and we love each other. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I am going to study hard. Because I believe the harder I study, the better I will become.
I am glad to be your pen pal and I am sure we can learn a lot from each other. I'm looking forward to your visit to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
佳句仿写
【答案】I am someone who is interested in learning new things.
【答案】There is a person who I want to say thanks very much.
【答案】What impresses us most about the great man is his courage.
【答案】As for helping others, he is always the first to offer a hand.
【答案】My father works hard every day, thinking about how to provide a better life for our family.
【答案】There is no doubt that the players who win medals inspire us with their excellent performances.
【答案】I will really appreciate it if I can get a chance to perform in the English drama show.
写作自测
【答案】
I Want to Thank My Mother Most
The person I want to thank most is my mother. My mother is a worker and she is a common woman. She is not tall or beautiful. But I love her most and she is also the person I want to say thanks most. Because she gave me my life and the deepest love.
One day, I didn't pass an English test. I felt too sorry to talk with my mother. I didn't want to let her down. I didn't feel like eating dinner and only stayed in my room alone sadly. In fact, my mother knew me well. She was sure that I had failed the test. But she pretended not to know it at all. She knocked at the door and asked me to have dinner. After that, she smiled and encouraged me as if nothing had happened. I was so thankful that I wanted to hug my mother.
Since then, I have studied very hard. I'll get good grades and go to university to make her proud of me. I'll give her a better life in the future.
话题二 地点介绍
第一步 审题
【答案】介绍黄河风情线
【答案】第三人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般现在时
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
There is a famous highway called Binhe Road which runs along the Yellow River.
There are many activities for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on.
第四步 誊写
【答案】The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has Let me tell you!
The Yellow River runs through the city of Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheels and so on. There are many activities for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus.
The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!
佳句仿写
【答案】With the help of these attractions, tourists can experience the charm and history of this city.
【答案】The river near my house is as clear as glass.
【答案】The library near our community is getting more and more popular.
【答案】The Yellow River Custom Tourist Line is well known for its beautiful scenery and the special cultural activities along the line.
【答案】In Gansu, there are delicious local snacks everywhere. It is no wonder that food lovers want to visit this place.
写作自测
【答案】Last year, I went on a trip to the Forbidden City, also known as the Palace Museum, in Beijing, China.
During my trip, I saw the fantastic imperial palace that was once the home of Chinese emperors. Walking through the grand halls and courtyards, I was deeply attracted by the beautiful decorations. Besides, I also learned about the history and culture of the Ming and Qing dynasties.
There are many different kinds of buildings. I felt like I had stepped back in the ancient China, which made my trip amazing.
Overall, my trip to the Forbidden City was an unforgettable experience. I hope to visit it again someday and explore more of the museum's treasures.
话题三 志愿服务
第一步 审题
【答案】对志愿者服务工作的看法和建议
【答案】第一人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般现在时
【答案】你的看法； 你的建议； 你的期望
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
For us students, volunteering is really a great way to make full use of the summer holiday.
Firstly, many parents are busy with their work.
We can both chat with them and take a walk with them on a nice day.
第四步 誊写
【答案】Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way Maybe volunteering is a good choice.； For us students, volunteering is really a great way to make full use of the summer holiday. Through helping people in need, we can get new experience and make new friends. There are many chances for volunteer service in our life. Firstly, many parents are busy with their work. And they have no time to take good care of their kids. So we can play games with them and tell stories to them. What's more, the old people are always lonely during the day. We can both chat with them and take a walk with them on a nice day.
Every act of kindness has meaning. Let's make the world better by starting with small things around us.
佳句仿写
【答案】It's my pleasure to give away books to the children in need.
【答案】We make every effort to pick up rubbish to make the park clean and beautiful.
【答案】This activity not only allowed us to make new friends, but also taught us that helping others is helping ourselves.
【答案】We provide tour guide services for the tourists who come to Lanzhou for the first time.
【答案】As soon as we have free time, we will take part in the volunteer activities to help those in need.
【答案】Saving water is important for protecting our environment.
写作自测
【答案】Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of the Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock. We volunteers were then divided into groups. Some made eco-friendly products. Others gave out reusable water bottles and bags we made. I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash in town.
I shared what I know with others through the activity. Sharing is caring. Wish everyone could care about our community and earth.
话题四 规则
第一步 审题
【答案】“Traveling in Good Manners”/文明旅游
【答案】第一人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般现在时
【答案】不文明行为； 个人观点及建议； 倡导文明旅游
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
However, some impolite behaviors can still be seen during trips.
Another impolite behavior is picking flowers in a park, which does harm to the natural beauty and is not allowed.
第四步 誊写
【答案】Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, some impolite behaviors can still be seen during trips. For example, some tourists throw rubbish everywhere. This is terribly impolite and also pollutes the environment. Another impolite behavior is picking flowers in a park, which does harm to the natural beauty and is not allowed.
In my opinion, we should always be polite when traveling. For one thing, we are supposed to put rubbish into dustbins. For another thing, we can put up signs in tourist attractions to remind people not to pick flowers. And for those who speak loudly in public places, tourist areas can make rules to stop such behaviors.
Let's all travel in good manners and enjoy the beauty of different places while also protecting them.
佳句仿写
【答案】When we travel, we should respect the local cultures which/that are different from ours.
【答案】No matter what difficulties we meet on the journey, we should keep calm and polite.
【答案】Only by following the school rules can we create a good learning environment.
【答案】If we follow the rules in tourist attractions, we can enjoy a pleasant journey.
写作自测
【答案】Dear Susan,
Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.
There are many rules at my home. For example, I must help with dishes after dinner every day. Besides, to protect my eyes, I am only allowed to use the smart phone for an hour every week. And I have to finish my homework first after school. Before I go to bed, I have to take a shower.
Our school also has school rules. We must arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. For our safety, we are not allowed to run or shout in the hallways.
In my point of view, the rules play a very important role in shaping our living and learning environment. It's necessary for us to follow them.
What about you What rules do you have to follow
Yours,
Li Hua
话题五 健康与安全
第一步 审题
【答案】讲述Mary在动物园走失的经过及她是如何应对的
【答案】第三人称
【答案】记叙文
【答案】一般过去时
【答案】事件发生的地点； Mary迷路前做的事； Mary迷路的过程； Mary看见妈妈时的场景
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully.
After a while, she wanted to tell her mother what she'd found about these animals.
Seeing her mother, Mary was very happy and ran to her quickly.
第四步 誊写
【答案】Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon. The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully.
After a while, she wanted to tell her mother what she'd found about these animals. However, she noticed there was no one around. She was afraid and worried. But she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo.
Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. Seeing her mother, Mary was very happy and ran to her quickly.
佳句仿写
【答案】Some dangerous things are not allowed in school, such as knives and matches.
【答案】We are supposed to be careful when using electrical appliances to avoid accidents.
【答案】It's necessary for us to learn to deal with mental problems in a proper way.
【答案】It's very important for us to eat/keep/have a balanced diet.
【答案】Though using the Internet is common nowadays, we must be aware of all possible dangers.
【答案】Keep calm in dangerous situations so that you can think clearly and take proper actions.
【答案】So important is surfing the Internet safely that we should pay great attention to it.
【答案】Only after having a healthy diet can we have enough energy to study.
写作自测
【答案】Safety is very important in our life. We should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
First of all, when we are on our way to school, we should go along the right side when we walk or ride a bike on the street. Secondly, we should be careful when making friends and don't meet net friends alone. Thirdly, never eat the food that has gone bad. The bad food is harmful to our health. Finally, make sure you are safe when you are doing sports. Warm up before doing exercise.
In a word, we should always keep safety in mind and take actions to keep ourselves safe. I hope all the students can pay attention to their safety and protect themselves well.
话题六 学生学习与生活
第一步 审题
【答案】如何成为好的语言学习者
【答案】第二人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般现在时
【答案】五大
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
Good language learners can notice their mistakes and learn from them rather than hide them.
It is useful to watch movies or listen to songs when you want to enjoy the beauty of the language.
In a word, the more good learning habits you develop, the better grades you will get.
第四步 誊写
【答案】What makes a good language learner There are some things that good language learners do and some things they don't do.
To start with, don't be afraid of making mistakes. Good language learners can notice their mistakes and learn from them rather than hide them. In the second place, do group activities and use the language to communicate with others. Also, be sure to use a dictionary to check the meanings of the words you don't know. Don't forget to make notes. What's more, have fun with the language. It is useful to watch movies or listen to songs when you want to enjoy the beauty of the language. At last, it is helpful to practice your spoken language as often as possible.
In a word, the more good learning habits you develop, the better grades you will get.
Don't forget that it's never too late to become a good language learner.
佳句仿写
【答案】It is known that asking teachers for help when having problems is a good habit for students.
【答案】When I think of the school activities like art festivals and sports meetings, I feel excited and remember the importance of teamwork.
【答案】It is true that reading books can make students more knowledgeable.
【答案】The teacher's words remind me that I should study harder for the coming exam.
【答案】Unless we are willing to put in the effort and time, we will not be able to achieve good results.
【答案】I spend much time on study while I also make time for hobbies.
【答案】As long as we help each other, we can overcome difficulties in study.
【答案】If you want to learn painting well, you must put your heart fully into it.
【答案】The more you communicate with foreigners, the more confident you'll become in using the language.
【答案】It is by joining the English club that we make more friends who love English.
【答案】We should be grateful for the chance to study in school.
【答案】Not only do I help my classmates with their studies, but also I take part in various activities.
【答案】No matter when I feel tired, I always try to find a way to relax.
写作自测
【答案】Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me， I like studying alone better.
Firstly， studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time， I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly， when I study alone， I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head， I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
话题七 环境保护
第一步 审题
【答案】作为中学生应该如何保护环境并介绍其意义
【答案】第一人称； 第三人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般现在时
【答案】七条
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
To protect the earth, we can start by doing little things, such as saving water, planting more trees, reducing pollution and throwing the rubbish into the dustbin.
Besides, choose to ride a bike instead of taking a car so that we can help reduce the pollution.
第四步 誊写
【答案】【答案】
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It's crying for our help now. As middle school students, it is time for us to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by doing little things, such as saving water, planting more trees, reducing pollution and throwing the rubbish into the dustbin. We can also save animals and recycle the wastes whenever possible. Besides, choose to ride a bike instead of taking a car so that we can help reduce the pollution.
As long as we do our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves.
佳句仿写
【答案】It is clear that riding bikes instead of driving cars is good for the air.
【答案】Some simple actions can make a big difference to the environment, such as turning off the tap when brushing teeth and walking to school.
【答案】We are supposed to reduce waste to protect the environment.
【答案】We should not only stop polluting the rivers, but also clean them up.
【答案】We can make our school greener by growing flowers and grass.
【答案】We had better divide rubbish into different groups so that it can be recycled easily.
【答案】Our small actions can make a big difference to protecting the environment.
【答案】It's time for everyone to realize the importance of environmental protection.
写作自测
【答案】Hello! I'm Li Ming. I want to share my opinions about environmental protection here.
As we can see, our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done. The polluted water, air and food have a great effect on our health. Therefore, it's high time that everyone should try their best to do what they can to protect the environment.
As middle school students, we can also do a lot of things for the environment. First of all, we should protect the environment by saving energy, including turning off electrical equipment and taps in time. In addition, we must contact environmental protection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment. Above all, we should also plant more trees and travel green. As for me, I often go to school by bike to protect the environment. Besides, I pick up rubbish in the park on weekends.
In a word, the effort from everybody can make a great difference to our world.
话题八 人际沟通
第一步 审题
【答案】介绍与父母沟通的技巧和做法
【答案】第一人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般过去时； 一般现在时
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
It is common to have disagreements, but we'd better not get too angry.
Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced by everyone.
Last but not least， be sure to be polite.
第四步 誊写
【答案】Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly, we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most. Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. It is common to have disagreements, but we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced by everyone. Last but not least， be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
In my opinion, let's try our best to communicate well with our parents and make our family life better.
佳句仿写
【答案】I'm sorry to hear that you don't know how to get along with your classmates.
【答案】A friend is someone who is willing to listen to you, offer you help, and give you care and support.
【答案】My problem is that I am afraid to communicate with others.
【答案】If we do something wrong, it is really important to learn to say sorry.
【答案】I will not talk back to my parents anymore.
【答案】You'd better communicate with your friends face to face and explain the reason.
【答案】Why not take part in some activities with your new classmates
【答案】You're supposed to leave more time for getting to know the people around you.
写作自测
【答案】Communication is of great importance to our growth. It's a basic skill for us teenagers in study and life. When people sometimes disagree with each other， communication may be the best choice to solve the disagreement. Also， when having difficulty dealing with some problems， we can get help and creative ideas by communicating with others. Last Friday I failed an important exam. I was in such a low mood that I couldn't pay attention to what the teacher taught in class. Realizing my fault， I communicated with my teacher and explained to him what happened after class. Finally, he forgave me and offered me many useful suggestions as well.
This experience has a great influence on me. It is communication that helps me get along well with others. It is also a good way to get more knowledge and broaden my mind.
话题九 假期活动
第一步 审题
【答案】假期计划与安排
【答案】第一人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般现在时
【答案】什么是假期； 假期对学生的意义； 我的计划； 假期如何使我变得更好； 我的希望； 我是否能得到假期带来的收获
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such as washing dishes or tidying up the house.
It adds to my knowledge,helping me become better.
By completing these plans with joy, I'm sure I'll return feeling happy and ready for new experiences.
第四步 誊写
【答案】My Wonderful Holiday Plans
A holiday is a special time for students to take a break from school and relax. It's a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes.
During my holiday, I plan to spend wonderful time with my family by having picnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents. I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such as washing dishes or tidying up the house. Additionally, I want to do much reading because reading is what makes a full man. Besides, travelling is another good choice for such a long holiday. It adds to my knowledge, helping me become better. If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood. I can learn new skills, broaden my mind and make new friends through these plans.
I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family, reading more, learning new things, and showing more love to the world during this holiday. By completing these plans with joy, I'm sure I'll return feeling happy and ready for new experiences.
佳句仿写
【答案】My summer holiday was full of exciting water sports activities.
【答案】After a long term, she couldn't wait to start her summer holiday and travel around.
【答案】In order to experience different cultures during the holiday, I chose to travel abroad.
【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival is around the corner. We will have a family party.
【答案】I will never forget the days which/that I spent on the beach during the holiday.
【答案】What I am looking forward to during the holiday is that I can read many books.
【答案】Reading an interesting book is more relaxing than playing mobile games during the holiday.
【答案】During the winter holiday, I plan to do some outdoor activities such as skiing, skating and making snowmen.
【答案】During the holiday, I not only read many interesting books but also learned to cook.
写作自测
The summer vacation is coming and how to spend this long holiday becomes the hot topic discussed by the classmates.
Some plan to travel and others want to stay at home. As for me， I plan to do a lot of things. First， I'm going to do something fun to release pressure， such as watching TV and having parties with classmates. Second， I plan to read more books and preview senior school lessons so as to make good preparations for future study. Third， I am going to practise swimming and learn to paint， which can help me develop special skills. Fourth， I'll do some housework and take part in some voluntary activities， in which I can learn a lot from real life.
This is my plan for the coming vacation. I'll spend it in a healthy and happy way.
话题十 文体活动
第一步 审题
【答案】我眼中的马拉松
【答案】第三人称； 第一人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般过去时； 一般现在时
【答案】政府； 跑者； 志愿者
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
It provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettable experience.
Not only did they try their best to finish the marathon, but their spirit also encouraged more people.
Last but not least, the volunteers also played an important role in the event.
第四步 誊写
【答案】This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proud of my hometown. I'd like to share my ideas with you.
To begin with, the government organized the event well. It provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettable experience. In the second place, the runners were welcome. Not only did they try their best to finish the marathon, but their spirit also encouraged more people. After the event, they tasted some delicious foods. Last but not least, the volunteers also played an important role in the event. They worked hard to support the runners. What they did showed the true meaning of selflessness.
In my opinion, the event was a great success. We should hold it every year. It is not only good for our health, but also a wonderful way to bring people closer together.
佳句仿写
【答案】As is known to all, doing morning exercises is an important part of school sports activities.
【答案】With the development of the Internet, we can watch all kinds of cultural performances online.
【答案】My sister is fond of dancing to the music in her room.
【答案】She takes up basketball as her main sport and trains hard every day.
【答案】I am confident that this art festival will be more wonderful and unforgettable than ever before.
【答案】The purpose of doing morning exercises is to start the day with energy.
【答案】I read a lot of books so as to learn more about different cultures.
写作自测
【答案】Dear Bob，
How are you doing I'm writing to invite you to the Chinese Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it. We know China is a great country with a long history and rich cultures. In order to tell Chinese stories to more people around the world and spread Chinese voices, our school plans to hold a Chinese Culture Festival next week on the playground. I know you're very interested in Chinese culture， so you must be excited to join us in this festival. We will have lots of interesting activities during the festival. For example， some students and teachers will read Chinese poems. You can learn a lot of Chinese history and excellent ancient poets from the poems. Besides, you can also watch wonderful Chinese dancing. Dancers will be in beautiful Chinese-style costumes to show fantastic Chinese dancing. What's more, as you are lost in Chinese culture, you can enjoy delicious Chinese food. Lastly, our headmaster will draw the luckiest one from the lottery box. Would you like to be the lucky dog
I'm looking forward to getting your reply!
Yours，
Li Hua
话题十一 传统文化
第一步 审题
【答案】介绍其中一个传统节日及下阶段课题研究计划
【答案】第一人称
【答案】说明文
【答案】一般现在时； 一般现在时
【答案】节日习俗； 历史； 日期； 庆祝活动； 食物； 下阶段计划
第三步 填细节，巧升格，成篇章
【答案】
We've collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.
Small gifts are usually offered when they give right answers.
第四步 誊写
【答案】Dear classmates,
I'm very happy to share our research with you. The subject we've chosen is the Lantern Festival. We've collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.； The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2,000 years. It falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month. People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usually offered when they give right answers. It's a tradition to eat tangyuan on this special day.
As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles, which will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That's all. Thank you!
佳句仿写
【答案】The Spring Festival is a traditional festival which is celebrated by Chinese people all over the world.
【答案】As the autumn comes, many people go hiking and enjoy the beautiful scenery on Double Ninth Festival.
【答案】We are proud of Chinese traditional culture and think about how we can pass it on to the next generation.
【答案】Many foreigners believe that wearing
is a good way to experience Chinese culture.
【答案】When we eat dinner with other people, it's impolite to point at others with chopsticks.
写作自测
【答案】Dear Linda,
I got your letter last week. In your letter, you told me that you were very interested in Chinese traditional art and wanted to know about Chinese porcelain. Let me tell you.
Chinese porcelain is made from kaolin, a special kind of clay. It's used to make plates in our daily life and is also given as a gift. To make Chinese porcelain, it usually has to experience some processes. First, kaolin is shaped by hand and then allowed to air-dry. After drying, they're fired at a very high heat. Finally, it is polished and painted with nature designs. It takes several weeks to complete all the work. Now Chinese porcelain has some special meanings. It's seen as a symbol of wealth and higher class.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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