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学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
Unit7 Outdoor fun 单元话题（户外活动）
写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材主题）
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．在初一的学习、生活中，你肯定参加过一些户外活动，像“a school trip”或“going camping”等。你班将开展以“An amazing outdoor activity”为题的征文活动,并在班级内展示。请根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
注意：1.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.内容必须包括但不限于图示中的要点，可以适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
An amazing outdoor activity
Time flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many amazing outdoor activities. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
An amazing outdoor activity
Time flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many amazing outdoor activities. Last summer, my classmates and I joined in an unforgettable school trip to the nearby hills.
We spent the day climbing the hill, taking in fresh air and seeing different animals. We even had a small picnic by a river, where we shared stories and laughter. When we reached the top of the hill, we were so excited to see a view of the entire valley.
This activity was amazing because it gave us a chance to take a break from noisy daily life and connect with nature. It was also a great opportunity to communicate with our classmates and create good memories.
I felt so happy and couldn’t wait to attend the next outdoor activity!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是一般过去时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你对这次活动的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出活动，并介绍这次活动的时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述这次活动的内容；
第三步，对这次活动的评价以及参加活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②have a picnic野餐
③take a break休息
④communicate with和……沟通
[高分句型]
①When we reached the top of the hill, we were so excited to see a view of the entire valley.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②This activity was amazing because it gave us a chance to take a break from noisy daily life and connect with nature.（because引导的原因状语从句）
2．请根据以下提示，以 “My Favorite Outdoor Activity” 为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。
(1) 我最喜欢的户外运动是野营；
(2) 原因：省钱，对健康有益；待在户外可以欣赏美丽的湖光山色；
(3) 曾经 (once) 有一次在海边野营……
(4) 本周末如果有空，我打算邀请我的几个好友一起去野营。
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
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【答案】例文：
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
My favorite outdoor activity is camping. It’s very cheap and it’s good for my health. I can stay outside and enjoy the beautiful lakes and hills.
Once, I went camping by the sea. The sunrise was so beautiful. I enjoyed nice food and drinks. The camping really brought me a lot of fun. If I am free this weekend, I will invite my good friends to go camping with me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动是野营；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢野营的原因；
第三步，分享自己的一次野营经历与接下来的野营计划。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 很多
②go camping 去野营
[高分句型]
①It’s very cheap and it’s good for my health.（and连接并列句）
②If I am free this weekend, I will invite my good friends to go camping with me.（if引导条件状语从句）
3．假如你是李华，为了在校园里营造更好的英语氛围，你们班决定以学校花园为载体，开展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”项目式学习(COOC Project)。经过分组讨论，你们拟定了Plan A与Plan B两个实施方案（见下表）。假设你所在的小组选择Plan A，请你根据下表写一篇短文，代表小组在英语拓展课上进行汇报。
注意:（1）短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息，并适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数：70左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is ___________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is “Naming the plants in English”.
There are mainly two steps. We’ll first do a survey to find information about the plants. We can surf the Internet or ask our teachers for help if we meet difficulties. The second step is to design name cards. We’ll describe each kind of plants in English. To make the cards look prettier, we will add a photo of the plant to each card.
We believe this plan will make our school garden a better place to learn about nature and improve our English. I can’t wait to see it come into practice.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍选择的方案的内容；
第二步，介绍选择的方案的优势；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①mainly主要地
②do a survey做一个调查
③meet difficulties遇到困难
④can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待地想做某事
⑤come into practice付诸实践
[高分句型]
We can surf the Internet or ask our teachers for help if we meet difficulties.(if 引导条件状语从句)
4．本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议)，向社团投稿。包含所有要点，80词左右。
Main points
1. What outdoor activity do you like
2. Why do you like it
3. What is your plan (when, where, what to do...)
Dear Sir,
I’m excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
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I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir,
I’m excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
I really love climbing mountains with my classmates. It allows us to enjoy nature’s beauty, make friends, and help each other along the way.
To make the activity more fun, I hope to go to East Mountain on 25 June. Since it’s a bit far, we could meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and take a bus there. We can collect some interesting stories about the mountain’s history and share them with each other. It’ll also be great to try some local food for lunch. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to help protect the environment. After that, we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We’re sure to have a wonderful time.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，参考要点写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，另起一段；
第二步：介绍自己喜欢的户外运动及其原因；
第三步：介绍自己对活动的安排，包括集合时间、地点以及具体活动等；
第四步：承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy nature’s beauty欣赏自然的美
②help each other帮助彼此
③pick up the rubbish捡垃圾
[高分句型]
①Since it’s a bit far, we could meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and take a bus there. (Since引导的原因状语从句)
②It’ll also be great to try some local food for lunch. (It作形式主语)
5．为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
Kites
History Mozi, in the Warring States period
Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:…
Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province…
Your ideas …
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood. It was the first kite in history. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is deeply loved by people. It is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend, I can see many people flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点；
第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况；
第三步，最后提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① with the invention of paper随着纸的发明
② take on呈现
③ all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
① I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down.（宾语从句）
② But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores.（定语从句）
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．假设你是学校英文报社的小记者，上周末参加了学校为提升学生综合素质组织的户外活动，请你给报社写一篇报道。
活动情况 活动地点 大鹏较场尾
参与人员 七年级全体师生
活动内容 周六：看日出、环保徒步、海边拍照
周日：自由活动（唱歌、游戏、烧烤晚会……）
活动评价 ……
参考词汇：综合素质 overall quality
环保徒步 environmental hiking
烧烤 barbecue
要求：1. 文章不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
The weather was fine last weekend. Our school organized an outdoor activity to improve our overall quality. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The weather was fine last weekend. Our school organized an outdoor activity to improve our overall quality. All the Grade 7 students and teachers took part in the activity in Jiaochangwei, Dapeng.
On Saturday morning, we got up early to watch the sunrise. As soon as we arrived at the seaside, we enjoyed the sunlight and took lots of photos. Then we went on an environmental hiking. During the hiking, we picked up rubbish and cleaned the road. Next day we did what we like. We sang and played games together. In the evening we had a barbecue party.
It’s a meaningful and exciting activity. We’ve realized it’s our duty to protect the environment. We had a lot of fun the whole weekend. I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍参与人员、活动地点以及活动名称；
第二步，详细介绍活动内容；
第三步，总结全文，并给出活动评价。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②take photos拍照
③pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①As soon as we arrived at the seaside, we enjoyed the sunlight and took lots of photos.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
②Next day we did what we like.（what引导的宾语从句）
③We’ve realized it’s our duty to protect the environment.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．假设你是初中生李华，你正在参加一个为期2天的冬令营(a 2-day winter camp)。以下是你的日程表，请写一封明信片给你的朋友Tina，明信片须包含以下内容：
1. 你参加过的最喜欢的一项活动，并简述理由。
2. 你在冬令营的收获或感受。
Day 1 Morning Hiking
Afternoon Ice fishing
Evening Star Photography (Taking photos of stars)
Day 2 Morning Mountain biking
Afternoon Snowball fighting
Evening Outdoor Music Evening
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.
注意：
1. 卷面整洁，书写端正；
2. 标点符号不占格；
3. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Tina,
I hope this postcard finds you well!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tina,
I hope this postcard finds you well! I am currently participating in a 2-day winter camp. The activities included hiking, ice fishing, star photography, mountain biking, snowball fighting, and an outdoor music evening.
My favorite activity was the evening star photography on Day 1 because it was magical to capture the night sky. This camp has taught me the importance of teamwork. Whether it was hiking or snowball fighting, every activity required us to work together and overcome challenges. I also made new friends and learned about different cultures from them.
I can’t wait to share more stories with you when I return!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述冬令营的活动；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的一项活动及原因，自己的收获和感受；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in参加
②require sb to do sth要求某人做某事
③can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事
④share sth with sb与某人分享某事
[高分句型]
①My favorite activity was the evening star photography on Day 1 because it was magical to capture the night sky. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I can’t wait to share more stories with you when I return! (when引导时间状语从句)
8．假定你是Li Hua，你所在的学校将举行“阳光少年”英文演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图以“My Favorite Outdoor Activity”为题撰写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己最喜欢的户外运动。词数60左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含以上信息，且适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名。
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
Hello, everyone! I’m so glad to be here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
Hello, everyone! I’m so glad to be here. I’m Li Hua. My favorite outdoor activity is hiking.
I often go hiking with my family or friends all year round. On sunny weekends, we go hiking in the mountains. There we can see trees, flowers and birds. I learn a lot about nature.
Hiking makes me free and keeps me happy, healthy and strong. I love hiking! It’s lots of fun.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作提示，注意要涵盖所给要点，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先简单介绍自己，并直入主题点明自己最喜欢的户外活动——徒步旅行；
第二步，结合自身经历具体介绍自己喜欢的运动——徒步旅行；
第三步，介绍徒步的益处和自己的感觉，并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①go hiking去远足
②all year round整年
③learn a lot about学到了很多关于……的知识
[高分句型]
①Hiking makes me free and keeps me happy, healthy and strong.（形容词作宾语补足语）
9．愉快的暑假马上就要开始了，学校英语角“如何让暑假生活更有趣”展开讨论。请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈看法。
Study *read books ... *do homework ...
Activities *take part in outdoor activities ... *work as volunteers ... *have a trip ...
Plans *plans for the coming Grade 8 ...
注意事项：1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，“...”处展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
2.词数在80个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总数；
3.短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting
The Summer Holiday is coming. I will become a Grade 8 student soon. How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting
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【答案】例文
How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting
The Summer Holiday is coming. I will become a Grade 8 student soon. How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting
First of all, I want to read more books, because it can not only enrich my knowledge, but also open my vision. At the same time I have to do homework carefully. Second, I will take part in outdoor activities and work as volunteers. I like playing basketball very much. If there is time, I will go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Of course, I will have a trip to relax myself. Finally, I also have to make plans for the coming Grade 8.
I hope I can have a good holiday.
【总体分析】①体裁与题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态用“一般现在时”；
③提示：短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，注意不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题 (题干中已经给出)；
第二步，根据所给提示，介绍如何让暑假生活更有趣，并给出自己的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
【亮点词汇】①first of all首先
②at the same time同时
③take part in outdoor activities参加户外活动
【高分句型】①First of all, I want to read more books, because it can not only my knowledge, but also open my vision. (because引导的原因状语从句，not only ... but also ...并列结构)
②If there is time, I will go to the park with my friends to play basketball. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10．本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据下面要点写一篇短文，向社团投稿。
要点：
1. What outdoor activity do you like
2. Why do you like it
3. How do you arrange (安排) this activity (when, where, what to do…)
要求：
1. 短文应包括上述所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数90左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like going on a trip to the countryside with my classmates. I can not only enjoy fresh air but also take exercise. It’s good for us to learn about nature.
To make the trip more interesting, I’d like to share my suggestions. Firstly, I hope to go to the East Farm because it’s not far. Secondly, we can do some farm work. We can talk with the farmers to know about different plants. After that, for lunch, maybe we can cook and eat the vegetables on the farm. Finally, we can make friends with the children in the countryside. I’m sure we will have a good time there.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，说明理由。
第三步，描写具体的活动安排。
[亮点词汇]
①go on a trip去旅行
②not only … but also …不仅……而且……
③be good for有益于
④make friends with和……交朋友
⑤have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①I like going on a trip to the countryside with my classmates. I can not only enjoy fresh air but also take exercise. (not only … but also …句型)
②I hope to go to the East Farm because it’s not far. (because引导原因状语从句)
能力综合实践5篇
11．经常参加户外活动对我们的身心大有好处。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。
1.上周日，你与老师、同学一起去野营；
2.你们在湖边搭了帐篷，老师教你们如何生火（make a fire）；
3.你忘记带午餐盒（lunchbox），同学们与你分享午餐，大家一起在树下享受美食和饮料；
4.这次活动带给你……
要求：
1.包含所有内容提示，第4点适当发挥1—2句；
2.80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Taking part in outdoor activities is really wonderful.
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【答案】例文
Taking part in outdoor activities is really wonderful.
Last Sunday I went camping with my teacher and classmates. We put up tents beside the lake. Our teacher taught us how to make a fire. I forgot to take my lunchbox, but my classmates were happy to share their food with me. We enjoyed lots of nice food and drinks together under the tree. This camping really brought us a lot of fun and we learned to help each other.
I will never forget this happy experience and I’m looking forward to another fun day now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的信息，适当增加细节，注意语法正确，语句通顺，条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体讲述上周日参加的户外活动的经历；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①go camping去野营
②put up tents搭帐篷
③share...with...和……分享……
④look forward to期望
[高分句型]
①Our teacher taught us how to make a fire. (疑问词+不定式)
②I will never forget this happy experience and I’m looking forward to another fun day now. (并列句)
12．暑假来临之际，学校拟举办征文活动，以鼓励学生亲近自然，乐享户外。请以“Outdoor fun”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你所经历的记忆深刻的户外活动。包含所有要点，词数80左右。
1. When and where did you go
2. What activities did you do
3. How did you feel
Outdoor fun
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【答案】例文：
Outdoor fun
Last Saturday, our class went camping together.
We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m., and then took a bus to the Wetland Park. We brought food, drinks, tents, sleeping bags and warm clothes with us. We arrived at the Wetland Park at 9:00 a.m. After we got off the bus, Daniel and Simon put up the tents. Kitty and Amy went to the lake to carry water and then started a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating on the lake. In the evening, we gathered around a campfire, singing and dancing.
We had an amazing time. The camping trip was so much fun that we will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，直接引出 “户外活动” 主题；
第二步，介绍户外活动的时间、地点以及具体的活动内容；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①go camping去露营
②put up搭建
③start a fire生火
④go boating去划船
[高分句型]
The camping trip was so much fun that we will never forget it.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)
13．假如你是一名中学生，现在是户外活动时间，你和你们班的很多同学都在操场上进行一些户外活动，请根据以下要点和要求，以“Our Outdoor Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：1. 你和同学们正在进行哪些户外活动？
2. 进行户外活动的意义。
要求: 1. 文章应包含提示的所有内容, 可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息；
3. 词数80左右。
Our Outdoor Activities
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【答案】参考例文
Our Outdoor Activities
I’m a junior high school student. Now classes are over. It’s time for us to do some outdoor activities on the playground. What are my classmates and I doing
Look! Some of my classmates are running around the playground. Some boys are playing basketball on the playground. Two girls are teaching some other girls to dance there. What about me I’m playing soccer with my friends. We like our outdoor time.
I think doing outdoor activities is very good for us. It can make us strong and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体介绍作者和同学们正在进行的户外活动。
第三步，介绍户外活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①on the playground在操场上
②play soccer with和某人踢足球
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①It’s time for us to do some outdoor activities on the playground. (It固定句型)
②I think doing outdoor activities is very good for us. (宾语从句)
14．请参考下面几个问题, 写几句话，推荐一项你最爱的户外活动。Questions: 1. What’s your favourite outdoor activity
2. What can you learn from this outdoor activity
3. What’s the reason for your recommendation
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【答案】Sample writing:
There are all kinds of outdoor activities in our daily life. I like hiking best.
During this activity, I can get close to nature and enjoy the fresh air, which makes me relaxed. I often go hiking with my friends, so I can build the teamwork skills.
I will recommend it because it is fun and healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明自己最爱的户外运动；
第二步：介绍自己从这项户外运动中学到的东西；
第三步：书写结语，表达目的。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②in our daily life在我们的日常生活中
③get close to亲近，靠近
[高分句型]
①During this activity, I can get close to nature and enjoy the fresh air, which makes me relaxed.（定语从句）
②I will recommend it because it is fun and healthy.（原因状语从句）
15．假如你是李华，你的英语笔友Tom想了解你的暑假社会实践活动，请结合下面表格内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
Social Practice Plan
What Why
●outdoor activities ●life skills (技能) ●a trip to Yunnan ●keep fit (健康) ●look after ... ●weather, food ...
参考词汇：do chores 做家务
注意：
1. 必须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名，校名；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Tom,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you. First, I will do more outdoor sports. I like playing basketball very much. If I have time, I will go to the park to play basketball with my friends. Because I want to keep fit. Secondly, I want to learn some life skills, such as cooking,washing clothes and so on, because I want to look after myself in the future. Finally, I want to travel to Yunnan. Because the weather there is very good, and there are a lot of food, especially rice noodles. I hope I can have a good holiday.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一封电子邮件，用于与英语笔友Tom分享暑假社会实践活动的计划；
②时态：主要使用一般将来时；
③提示：写作要求和提示已给出，不要遗漏信息，依据表格内容介绍计划，包括户外活动、生活技能学习以及云南之旅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，表达分享计划的意愿；
第二步，具体介绍计划内容及原因，分别是户外活动、学习生活技能和云南之旅；
第三步，表达对暑假的期盼，并期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①do more outdoor sports 进行更多的户外运动
②learn life skills 学习生活技能
③try local food 尝试当地食物
[高分句型]
①If I have time,I will go to the park to play basketball with my friends. (if引导条件状语从句)
②I hope I can have a good holiday. (宾语从句)学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
Unit7 Outdoor fun 单元话题（户外活动）
写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材主题）
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．在初一的学习、生活中，你肯定参加过一些户外活动，像“a school trip”或“going camping”等。你班将开展以“An amazing outdoor activity”为题的征文活动,并在班级内展示。请根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
注意：1.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.内容必须包括但不限于图示中的要点，可以适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
An amazing outdoor activity
Time flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many amazing outdoor activities. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．请根据以下提示，以 “My Favorite Outdoor Activity” 为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。
(1) 我最喜欢的户外运动是野营；
(2) 原因：省钱，对健康有益；待在户外可以欣赏美丽的湖光山色；
(3) 曾经 (once) 有一次在海边野营……
(4) 本周末如果有空，我打算邀请我的几个好友一起去野营。
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
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3．假如你是李华，为了在校园里营造更好的英语氛围，你们班决定以学校花园为载体，开展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”项目式学习(COOC Project)。经过分组讨论，你们拟定了Plan A与Plan B两个实施方案（见下表）。假设你所在的小组选择Plan A，请你根据下表写一篇短文，代表小组在英语拓展课上进行汇报。
注意:（1）短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息，并适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数：70左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is ___________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
4．本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议)，向社团投稿。包含所有要点，80词左右。
Main points
1. What outdoor activity do you like
2. Why do you like it
3. What is your plan (when, where, what to do...)
Dear Sir,
I’m excited to hear that our school will have an outdoor activity at the end of the month.
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I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
5．为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
Kites
History Mozi, in the Warring States period
Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:…
Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province…
Your ideas …
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．假设你是学校英文报社的小记者，上周末参加了学校为提升学生综合素质组织的户外活动，请你给报社写一篇报道。
活动情况 活动地点 大鹏较场尾
参与人员 七年级全体师生
活动内容 周六：看日出、环保徒步、海边拍照
周日：自由活动（唱歌、游戏、烧烤晚会……）
活动评价 ……
参考词汇：综合素质 overall quality
环保徒步 environmental hiking
烧烤 barbecue
要求：1. 文章不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
The weather was fine last weekend. Our school organized an outdoor activity to improve our overall quality. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假设你是初中生李华，你正在参加一个为期2天的冬令营(a 2-day winter camp)。以下是你的日程表，请写一封明信片给你的朋友Tina，明信片须包含以下内容：
1. 你参加过的最喜欢的一项活动，并简述理由。
2. 你在冬令营的收获或感受。
Day 1 Morning Hiking
Afternoon Ice fishing
Evening Star Photography (Taking photos of stars)
Day 2 Morning Mountain biking
Afternoon Snowball fighting
Evening Outdoor Music Evening
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.
注意：
1. 卷面整洁，书写端正；
2. 标点符号不占格；
3. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Tina,
I hope this postcard finds you well!
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是Li Hua，你所在的学校将举行“阳光少年”英文演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图以“My Favorite Outdoor Activity”为题撰写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己最喜欢的户外运动。词数60左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含以上信息，且适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名。
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
Hello, everyone! I’m so glad to be here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．愉快的暑假马上就要开始了，学校英语角“如何让暑假生活更有趣”展开讨论。请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈看法。
Study *read books ... *do homework ...
Activities *take part in outdoor activities ... *work as volunteers ... *have a trip ...
Plans *plans for the coming Grade 8 ...
注意事项：1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，“...”处展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
2.词数在80个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总数；
3.短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How To Make My Summer Holiday More interesting
The Summer Holiday is coming. I will become a Grade 8 student soon. How can I make my Summer Holiday more interesting
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10．本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据下面要点写一篇短文，向社团投稿。
要点：
1. What outdoor activity do you like
2. Why do you like it
3. How do you arrange (安排) this activity (when, where, what to do…)
要求：
1. 短文应包括上述所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数90左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
能力综合实践5篇
11．经常参加户外活动对我们的身心大有好处。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。
1.上周日，你与老师、同学一起去野营；
2.你们在湖边搭了帐篷，老师教你们如何生火（make a fire）；
3.你忘记带午餐盒（lunchbox），同学们与你分享午餐，大家一起在树下享受美食和饮料；
4.这次活动带给你……
要求：
1.包含所有内容提示，第4点适当发挥1—2句；
2.80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Taking part in outdoor activities is really wonderful.
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12．暑假来临之际，学校拟举办征文活动，以鼓励学生亲近自然，乐享户外。请以“Outdoor fun”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你所经历的记忆深刻的户外活动。包含所有要点，词数80左右。
1. When and where did you go
2. What activities did you do
3. How did you feel
Outdoor fun
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13．假如你是一名中学生，现在是户外活动时间，你和你们班的很多同学都在操场上进行一些户外活动，请根据以下要点和要求，以“Our Outdoor Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：1. 你和同学们正在进行哪些户外活动？
2. 进行户外活动的意义。
要求: 1. 文章应包含提示的所有内容, 可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息；
3. 词数80左右。
Our Outdoor Activities
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14．请参考下面几个问题, 写几句话，推荐一项你最爱的户外活动。Questions: 1. What’s your favourite outdoor activity
2. What can you learn from this outdoor activity
3. What’s the reason for your recommendation
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15．假如你是李华，你的英语笔友Tom想了解你的暑假社会实践活动，请结合下面表格内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
Social Practice Plan
What Why
●outdoor activities ●life skills (技能) ●a trip to Yunnan ●keep fit (健康) ●look after ... ●weather, food ...
参考词汇：do chores 做家务
注意：
1. 必须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名，校名；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

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