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Unit 6 写作
本单元话题是天气，要求围绕这一话题写一篇关于天气情况及人们正在进行的活动的短文。合理使用天气形容词及句型，正确使用现在进行时来描述人们正在进行的活动。
Let’s think
How do we describe the weather that some people experience and their actions in that weather
Step 1
Step 2
Describe the weather type.
Describe people’s actions.
Word list
weather
stormy
sunny
cloudy
windy
snowy
…
rainy
Can you think of some words to describe the weather
foggy
--How’s the weather
--It’s __________.
actions
read a book
play basketball
go shopping
fly a kite
make a snowman
…
watch a movie
Can you think of some phrases to describe actions
审题立意
假如你是李明，你和家人正在海南度假。请你根据以下要点提示写一张明信片，寄给你的美国好友 Steve 。
要点：1. What ' s the weather like in Hainan
2. What are you and your family doing in Hainan
3. Are you having a good time
要求：1．内容须包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥；
2．条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
时态：以现在进行时为主
要点：天气，你和家人的活动，是否玩得开心
Dear Steve ,
How ' s your holiday going ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hainan is a really great place to visit . I hope that you can come and visit it with us some day,
Best wishes ,
Li Ming
谋篇布局
开篇点题
描述天气及正在做的事情
表达感受及期望
I ' m having a holiday with my family in Hainan .
It ' s sunny and hot today .
Right now , my family and I are .....
My mother is … My father is …
What is my brother doing He is ... And I ' m ...
Hainan is a really great place to visit .
I hope that you can ...
积句成篇
词汇储备
have a holiday 度假 have fun / have a good time 玩得高兴
some day 将来；有朝一日 stay in 待在家里；没有外出
play beach volleyball 打沙滩排球 fly kites 放风筝
take photos 拍照 feel like 感觉像
in high spirits 情绪高涨；兴高采烈 because of 因为
at the top 在顶部；在顶端 at the end 最后；在末尾
run after 追逐 write to 给……写信
句型荟萃
开头句
How ' s your holiday going ？你假期过得怎么样？
My family and I are having a holiday in …我和我的家人正在……度假。
I ' m here at / in ... with .…. at the moment .我此刻和……在……
中间句
It ' s rainy / foggy / sunny ... in Kunming / Wuhan.
It ' s raining / snowing heavily outside .外面正下着大雨／雪。
......am / is / are doing sth .……正在做某事。
Some people are … and some are …一些人在……还有一些人在……
Now / Right now … am / is / are having a great / goodtime.
We ' re glad to …我们很高兴……
结尾句
We are having great fun ．我们正玩得很开心。
It ' s a really great place to visit ．它真是一个游玩的好地方。
I hope that you can come and visit it with us some day .我希望有一天你能来和我们一起去那里游玩。
范文欣赏
Dear Steve ,
How ' s your holiday going I ' m having a holiday with my family in Hainan , the south of China .
It ' s sunny and hot today . Right now , my family and I are having a great time playing outside . My mother is sunbathing at the moment . She thinks it ' s exciting . My father is swimming in the sea . He says such hot weather is just right for swimming . What is my brother doing He is playing beach volleyball with other children . How happy he is ! And I ' m sitting under a big umbrella and writing to you .
名师点评
①用" having a holiday "和" in Hainan "点明进行的活动及活动地点。
②用" have a great time doing sth "表达自己和家人的感受。
③用" What is ... doing "巧妙地转换谈论对象。
④用 how 引导的感叹句与前文形成呼应，表达哥哥愉快的心情。
书面表达(20分)
假设你是李华，你要参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛。请根据所给提示，以“The four seasons in my hometown”为题写一篇演讲稿。
要点如下:
1.天气特征；2.从事的活动；3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The four seasons in my hometown
My hometown is in the north-east of China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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