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(共21张PPT)
Unit 1 This is me
写作指导
如何写与悦纳自我、个人成长相关的文章
本单元以“认识自我”为话题，主要围绕接纳自我、探
索自我、挑战自我等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉
及以下几个方面：
1.从外貌、性格、好恶、能力等多个维度介绍自己；
2.分享接纳自我、挑战自我的成长经历；
3.讲述他人成功克服挑战的经历。
写作时，人称多用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一
般过去时、一般现在时或现在完成时为主。
进入初中一年多了，你已经从一个青葱懵懂的小学
生变成了一个青春活力的初中生。回首往昔，你不禁感
叹自己的巨大变化。请结合自身实际，介绍你各方面的
变化来见证自己的成长。
要求：（1）短文须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数100左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词
数）。
How time flies! Now I have already been a student of Grade 8.______________________________________
审主题：自我成长
审体裁：说明文
审人称：第一人称、第三人称
审时态：现在完成时、一般现在时
审要点：外貌、性格、兴趣爱好、学习习惯、成长变化
词 汇 外貌 long/short/straight hair长发/短发/直发
big/small/round eyes大/小/圆眼睛
round/oval/square face圆脸/鹅蛋脸/方脸
tall/short高的/矮的
of medium height/build中等身高/身材
fat/thin/slim肥胖的/瘦的/苗条的
词 汇 性格 kind/friendly友好的 outgoing外向的
confident自信的 brave勇敢的 patient有耐心的 shy害羞的 lazy懒惰的 helpful乐于助人的
funny有趣的 hard-working勤奋的
honest诚实的 generous慷慨的
词 汇 爱好 running/swimming/cycling/singing/dancing跑步/
游泳/骑自行车/唱歌/跳舞
play basketball/football/tennis打篮球/踢足球/打
网球 listen to music听音乐
play the piano/guitar/violin弹钢琴/弹吉他/拉小
提琴 read books/novels读书/看小说
词 汇 学习 习惯 take notes记笔记 review regularly定期复习
make a schedule制订计划 ask questions问问题 listen carefully in class上课认真听
keep a diary记日记 do exercises做练习
preview lessons before class课前预习
句 子 开头句
There have been many changes in me in the past...
在过去的……里，我发生了很多变化。
Looking back on the past, I have grown and
changed a lot.回顾过去，我成长了很多，也改变了
很多。
句 子 中间句
Although I used to be shy/lazy/..., now I’m
confident/hard-working/...尽管我以前很害羞/懒/……，但现在我很自信/勤奋/……
Reading broadens my horizons and has made me
more knowledgeable.阅读拓宽了我的视野，让我变得
更博学。
句 子 Sports keep me fit and have given me the strength
and confidence to face challenges.运动使我保持健
康，并给了我面对挑战的力量和信心。
As for..., I start/begin to...至于……，我开始……
I’ve learnt/discovered/realised that...我学会了/发现了/
意识到了……
句 子 结尾句
These changes are a sign of my growth.这些变化是
我成长的表现。
I believe I will become even better as long as I
work hard.我相信，只要努力，我一定会变得更好。
In the future, I will...将来，我会……
佳作展示
How time flies! Now I have already been a student
of Grade 8. ①There have been many changes in me
and I’d like to share some of them.
②In personality, although I used to be shy, now
I’m confident. And I’ve grown taller and stronger.
教材原句：Although I only replied “thank you”, it turned sunny in my heart.（教材P5）
My interests now include reading and sports.③Reading
broadens my horizons and has made me more
knowledgeable. Meanwhile, sports keep me fit and have
given me the strength and confidence to face challenges.
④As for learning habits, I have started to make detailed
plans and review regularly. I have also begun to help
my parents do some housework.
These changes are a sign of my growth.⑤I believe I will become even better as long as I work hard.
教材原句：Nothing is impossible as long as you try and stick to it.（教材P13）
名师点评
本篇习作结构清晰，内容完整，涵盖所有要点且进
行了适当补充。
①运用there be结构的现在完成时及would like to do sth.
结构，点明话题并引出下文。
②运用although引导的让步状语从句，说明了“我”在性格
方面的变化。
③运用短语broaden one’s horizons及“make sb.+adj.”结构，
表明了阅读这一爱好对“我”的影响。
④运用as for及start to do sth.结构，说明了“我”在学习习
惯方面的变化。
⑤运用as long as引导的条件状语从句，表达了“我”对未
来的期待和决心。

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