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备战2024-2025年七年级英语下期期末高频易错考点专练（人教版）
专题10 书面表达20篇
1．假如你是李辉，将参加学校社团组织以“My favorite animal”为主题的社团活动，请你以此为题用英文写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1. 简单介绍自己最喜欢的动物及原因；
2. 列举2-3种这种动物为人类做的事；
3. 表达观点和期待。
注意：
(1). 词数：80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2). 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3). 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和班级。
Dear students,
I am Li Hui. Different people like different animals.
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Thanks for your listening.
2．动物是人类的朋友，它们和我们互相帮助、互相依靠、和谐共生，构成了这个五彩斑斓的世界。你最喜欢什么动物？作为中学生，你认为我们可以为保护动物做些什么？请你结合以下信息写一篇短文，介绍自己最喜欢的动物，并提出一至两条保护动物的建议。
要求：
1.词数不少于50词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3.请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
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3．假设你是李华，学校校报英文栏目正在征集同学们的班规以及对班规的遵守情况，请根据以下思维导图的提示完成一篇英语短文向校报投稿。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数60左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many rules in my class.
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4．五一劳动节“May Day”即将来临，一位名叫Jack的交换生将在假期来到成都，并住在你家。假设你是李华，请根据图片信息写一封信，简单介绍一下你自己和你的生活方式，及家庭规则。以便Jack能了解你，从而更快适应这里的生活。
要求：1. 内容须包括提示的所有信息，适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等个人信息；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Jack,
May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
5．假如你叫林涛，是七年级的一位学生，在刚结束的校运动会上你被评为“运动之星(sports star)”，请结合你的实际情况，根据以下要点，以“What makes me a sports star”为题，写一篇100词左右的小短文，和同学们分享一下你的运动习惯和生活习惯。(开头已给出，不计入词总数)
要点：
1.运动方面：最喜爱的运动项目，运动时间等；
2.饮食方面：食物选择，最喜爱的食物，饮食规律等；
3.生活方面：……
What makes me a sports star
It’s my honor (荣幸)to be one of the sports stars at this sports meeting in our school.
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6．请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的班级和姓名。
某校英文网站正在开展以“运动”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的运动，并结合自己的一次运动经历谈谈你的收获。
提示词语：do sports, basketball, fun, healthy, happiness
提示问题：
1. What sport do you like best
Please describe an experience you had in this sport.
2. What did you learn from it
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7．创文明城市，你我都是主角。假如你是李华，你被学校评为“文明风尚好少年”。请你根据以下提示，向同学们介绍你的文明行为，树立文明典范，号召大家践行文明规范，共创文明西安。
内容：
1. 你的爱好和特长；
2. 你的健康生活方式（如饮食、运动）；
3. 你在校遵守的文明规则。
要求：
1. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 书写工整、规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. It’s my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
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8．“国家喊你减肥了”近期, 国家卫健委宣布, 将持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动。同学们, 你的生活习惯健康吗 你喜欢吃什么食物 你喜欢什么运动 请你根据以下提示内容, 以“My habits”为题, 写一篇英语短文。
要点包括:
1. What’s your eating habit
2. What’s your favorite sport and how often do you play it
3. What do you think of good habits
要求:
1, 必须包含提示中所给的内容, 并进行相应拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于60词。
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9．你校英语俱乐部正在举办“校园健康之星”评选活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一封自荐信，参加评选活动，介绍自己的健康生活方式及其益处。
提示词语：exercise, vegetable, fit, energy
提示问题：① What are your healthy living habits
② How are they good for you
要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, and I’d like to share my living habits with you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
10．学校英文报刊公众号正在举办“Healthy Life Week”帖子征集活动，请你以“How I Keep Healthy”为题，从健康饮食（Healthy Eating）、体育锻炼（Exercise）两个方面，写一篇英语短文投稿分享你的健康生活经验。
要求：
1.完整体现表格内容
2.80-120词。开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不出现自己的真实姓名与所在学校名称。
参考信息：
Healthy Eating Reason
eat less (更少) fast food a lot of fat, oil, salt and sugar
have three meals a day work or study better
eat more fruit and vegetables balanced meals
Exercise
jog full of energy
use an exercise app show my progress
swim good exercise for my body
How I Keep Healthy
Health is important for us middle school students.
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Dr Know
11．假设你们的社区正在举办“健康家庭”的评比活动。请你以“Our Healthy Life”为话题写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。请谈谈你的家人是如何保持健康的，并呼吁大家养成健康的生活习惯。
写作要求：
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 语篇完整、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现个人真实信息；
4. 70词左右(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Our Healthy Life Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you something about my family’s healthy life._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．假设你是李华，3月22日是世界水日，你们学校将开展节水主题活动，你将作为代表发言，带领同学们认识水的重要性，呼吁同学们保护每一滴水，请以此作一篇发言稿。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含图表所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. As we all know, water is important to us.
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Every drop of water counts! What are you waiting for Let’s take actions from now on.
13．假如你是Li Hua，你的父母为你的周末生活制定了一些规则。在表彰大会上，你作为优秀学生代表，向同学们分享你的周末是怎样度过的。以下是你的周末日常安排，请你根据表格内容，写一份演讲稿，不少于70词，开头、结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Saturday morning 必须8:00前起床，吃完早饭后必须看书 周末必须： 1. 打两次篮球 2. 一天跑步一次
afternoon 锻炼身体
Sunday morning 必须先做作业，不能使用手机
evening 9:00上床睡觉
Hi, Everyone! My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to share my weekend life here!
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Thanks for listening!
14．Mike和朋友们正在不同的地方度假。假如你是Mike，请根据下面的表格写一篇英语短文描述你和朋友们正在做的事情。
Who Where Weather Activities
Mike Harbin cold, snowy skate, make a snowman
Mike’s friends Hainan warm, sunny swim, play beach volleyball
写作要求：
(1) 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 词数：70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Hello! My name is Mike.
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15．新情境 旅行让我们身心放松，和家人旅行还可以增进亲人间的感情。今天是6月15 日，你和家人一起参观了开心农场(Happy Farm)。请根据以下图示写一篇日记，记录你的农场之旅。
写作要求：（1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Sunday, 15th June
Today I went to Happy Farm with my family.
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16．古人云：“读万卷书，行万里路。”假如你是李华，请和大家分享你的一次旅行经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要点:
1. Where did you go
2. Who did you go with
3. How was the weather
4. What did you do
5. How did you feel
要求：
1.参考要点内容，并适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My trip to ________
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17．假如今天英语口语课的主题是“My favorite story”，请你根据下面的提示，以“My favorite story”为题写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事，在课上和大家分享。
内容提示：
1. What is your favorite story
2. What is it about
3. What can you learn from it
要求：
1.必须包括所有内容提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名；
3.书写工整、规范，词数70左右（文章标题已给出，不计入总词数）。
My favorite story
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18．假如你是Li Hua，最近收到了外国好友Lisa的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复她的邮件，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua. How is everything going I’m very interested in your school life in China. Please tell me about it. What’s your favourite subject Who is your best friend What do you usually do after school I hope that I can visit China and study in your school some day. I’m looking forward to your reply (回复). Write to me soon. Yours, Lisa
注意：（1）回复邮件中须回答所有问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Lisa,
Everything goes well. Let me tell you something about my school life.
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Best wishes! Hope to see you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
19．健康饮食与学生生活息息相关。请根据所提供的信息与提示词，以“How to Be Healthy”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容要点：
1.吃健康食品，如鱼；喝健康饮品，如牛奶。
2.不吃不健康的食品，如汉堡包；不喝不健康的饮品，如可乐。
3.每天做运动，如踢足球、打篮球等。
提示词：such as例如；first第一；second第二；third第三；finally最后。
写作要求：
1.短文必须陈述以上三个方面的内容；
2.所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），词数不少于60词；
3.短文中不得出现真空的姓名、校名和地名；
4.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
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20．假如你是李磊，你的新笔友Alice最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据下面的图示内容，给她回一封电子邮件。
要求：（1）短文必须包括所给图示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（）3文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）不少于60词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m really happy to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Lei
参考答案
1．例文
My Favorite Animal
I am Li Hui. Different people like different animals.
For me, dogs are my favorite animal. The reasons why I love them are as follows. I think dogs are the cutest animals in the world. Dogs are helpful. They can do a lot of things for us. They can warn people when danger is near by barking. They keep people safe. Dogs are not only helpful, but also lovely and friendly. You can play with them when you are free. You can also share your thoughts with them. And when you are sad, they can make you happy. They help us relax. Animals are our friends. We can’t live without them. It’s our responsibility to protect animals. Let’s take action now.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出作者最喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍作者喜欢该动物的原因；
第三步，介绍该动物为人类做的事情并呼吁大家保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sb. adj. 使某人保持……
②share sb. with sth. 与某人分享某物
③help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①The reasons why I love them are as follows. (主语从句)
②I think dogs are the cutest animals in the world. (省略that的宾语从句；形容词最高级)
③They can warn people when danger is near by barking. (when引导时间状语从句）
④It’s our responsibility to protect animals. (it作形式主语；不定式作真正的主语)
2．One possible version:
As we all know, animals play an important part in our life. Among all the animals, my favorite is the panda.
I love pandas because they are cute and smart. They are black and white with a round face. They can do many things, such as climbing trees and standing on their black legs. To help them, we should do something meaningful. We should plant more trees to make them live better. Also, it is important to tell more people to join us.
All in all, animals are our friends. Let’s try our best to protect them!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍喜欢的动物外貌、喜欢的理由以及如何保护动物；
第三步，发出倡议，呼吁保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important part扮演重要角色
②such as比如
③tell sb to do sth告诉某人做某事
[高分句型]
①To help them, we should do something meaningful.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②Also, it is important to tell more people to join us.（It固定句型）
3．例文
There are many rules in my class.
First, we should arrive at school on time. We can’t be late for class. Second, we have to be good with classmates and always be ready to give a helping hand. Third, we must wear school uniform on school days.
I always follow our class rules. In my opinion, they are strict but helpful to us. That’s because they can help us become a polite and useful person. They can also help us have good habits in our study and life. I think that everyone should follow the school rules.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“班规”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“班规内容、是否遵守、对班规的想法”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②in my opinion在我看来
③habit习惯
[高分句型]
①That’s because they can help us become a polite and useful person.（because引导的表语从句）
②I think that everyone should follow the school rules.（that引导的宾语从句）
4．[范文]
Dear Jack,
May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu. Let me tell you something about myself and my family.
My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are cute. I usually play basketball with my friends. I play it three times a week. It is relaxing.
As for eating habits, I eat fruits and vegetables every day. Because they are good for my health. I hardly have junk food. I also go to bed and get up early.
In my family, we must treat others with respect. Everyone needs to do housework, like cleaning the room.
I hope you can have fun with us in Chengdu. I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借由五一旅行的话题来引出自我介绍和家庭规则介绍。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——个人信息和家庭规则等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“祝我们在成都玩的愉快”的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有益
②look forward to doing期待着做
[高分句型]
①I hope you can have fun with us in Chengdu. (宾语从句)
5．
What makes me a sports star
It’s my honor (荣幸)to be one of the sports stars at this sports meeting in our school. Here are my secrets to success.
First, I love sports. My favorite sport is basketball, which helps me build team spirit and stay fit. I play basketball every day for at least an hour.
Second, I eat healthily. I prefer fresh vegetables and fruits to junk food. My favorite food is milk, which provide me with energy. I eat regularly and avoid overeating.
Third, l have a balanced life. I get enough sleep every night and wake up early. I keep exercising every day, even on rainy days. This makes me energetic and ready for school.
These habits make me a sports star. I hope they can help you too!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容介绍自己的健康心得，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，感谢可以获得分享的机会；
第二步，详细介绍自己的饮食习惯和运动习惯；
第三步，总结自己的心得分享，希望对大家是有帮助的。
[亮点词汇]
① one of the sports stars 运动之星之一
② at least an hour 至少一个小时
③ provide me with energy 给我提供能量
[高分句型]
① My favorite sport is basketball, which helps me build team spirit and stay fit.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
② I get enough sleep every night and wake up early.（and连接的并列句）
6．例文
My favourite sport is basketball. Last month, I joined a school basketball match. At first, I was nervous and missed several shots. But my teammates encouraged me and we worked together. Finally, we won the game! From this experience, I learned that teamwork is very important. Doing sports not only keeps me healthy but also brings me happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体介绍某次比赛经历；
第二步，介绍自己从这次经历中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①at first首先
②work together共同合作
③keep sb healthy使某人保持健康
[高分句型]
①From this experience, I learned that teamwork is very important. (that引导的宾语从句)
②Doing sports not only keeps me healthy but also brings me happiness. (动名词短语作主语)
7．例文
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. It’s my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o’clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的爱好和特长；
第二步，具体从饮食，运动，出行等方面阐述自己的健康生活方式；
第三步，最后介绍在校遵守的文明规则。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②get up起床
[高分句型]
At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. (because引导的原因状语从句)
8．例文：
My habits Health is very important to everyone. I have healthy habits.
I like sports. My favorite sport is running and I run every day at school. In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well.
As for eating habits, I eat fruit and vegetables with every meal because they can make me healthy. I don’t drink soft drinks because they have a lot of sugar and are bad for me.
I think we should have good habits because they are helpful for us to keep strong and happy. What’s more, they are also very important to our body and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明健康重要性，引入 “我的习惯” 主题；
第二步，分别阐述喜爱的运动及频率、饮食习惯及原因；
第三步，总结全文，强调好习惯对身心的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②in one’s opinion在某人看来
③a lot of许多
④be important to对……重要
[高分句型]
In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well. (because引导的原因状语从句)
9．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, and I’d like to share my living habits with you.
I exercise every day, like running and playing basketball. This helps me stay fit and gives me more energy to study. I also eat lots of vegetables and fruits, which keep me healthy. Besides, I go to bed early and sleep well. These habits make me feel strong and happy every day. I believe they are the keys to a healthy life!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示词语和提示问题进行写作，考生应注意补充要点，使句意通顺，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，引出主题；
第二步：介绍自己的饮食习惯和运动情况；
第三步：介绍这些好习惯带来的益处。
[亮点词汇]
①stay fit保持健康
②eat lots of vegetables and fruits多吃蔬菜和水果
③the keys to a healthy life健康生活的关键
[高分句型]
①I also eat lots of vegetables and fruits, which keep me healthy. (which引导定语从句)
②I believe they are the keys to a healthy life!(省略that的宾语从句)
10．例文
How I Keep Healthy
Health is important for us middle school students. Here’s how I keep healthy.
First, I focus on healthy eating. I eat less fast food because it has a lot of fat, oil, salt, and sugar, which are bad for my body. Instead, I have three meals a day regularly. This helps me work and study better. I also eat more fruits and vegetables to make sure my meals are balanced. For exercise, I jog every morning. It makes me feel full of energy. To track my progress, I use an exercise app. It shows how much I improve every week. Besides, I go swimming twice a month. It’s good exercise for my whole body.
By doing these things, I stay healthy and happy!
Dr Know
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，从健康饮食和锻炼两方面分享健康生活经验；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①focus on 专注于
②are bad for 对……不好
③make sure 确保
④full of energy 充满精力
[高分句型]
①First, I focus on healthy eating. I eat less fast food because it has a lot of fat, oil, salt, and sugar, which are bad for my body.（原因状语从句和定语从句）
②It shows how much I improve every week.（宾语从句）
11．例文
Our Healthy Life
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you something about my family’s healthy life.
We have really healthy eating habits. My mum likes making healthy meals for us. We have different kinds of vegetables, meat and fruit for each meal. We never have fast food, and we seldom have sweet things because they can cause many health problems.
My family all love sports. We always exercise for 20 minutes every morning. On weekends, my father often plays basketball with me. After dinner, we usually take a walk together.
Healthy living habits are very important for us. I hope everyone can stay healthy.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己和家人的饮食习惯；
第二步，介绍自己和家人的运动习惯；
第三步，呼吁大家要养成良好的生活习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②take a walk散步
③stay healthy 保持健康
[高分句型]
We never have fast food, and we seldom have sweet things because they can cause many health problems.(because引导的原因状语从句)
12．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. As we all know, water is important to us. In our life, we use water for drinking, cooking, washing, cleaning and watering flowers. But there’s little water on the earth, so we should save water.
To help save water, we can do many things at home. For example, wash as many clothes as possible at a time. Reuse water from washing to clean rooms. Don’t take long showers. Don’t keep water running while brushing teeth. As students, we can save water at school as well. Make a poster about saving water. Turn off the tap after using water. Collect rainwater to clean classrooms.
Every drop of water counts! What are you waiting for Let’s take actions from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍日常生活中水的使用；
第二步，介绍如何节约用水；
[亮点词汇]
①as...as possible尽可能……
②while brushing teeth刷牙时
③as well也
[高分句型]
①To help save water, we can do many things at home. (不定式表目的)
②But there’s little water on the earth, so we should save water. (so引导结果状语从句)
13．例文
Hi, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to share my weekend life here!
On Saturday morning, I have to get up before 8:00 and then I must read books for half an hour after breakfast. In the afternoon, I have to do exercises for an hour. On Sunday morning, I must do my homework, and I can’t use my mobile phone. In the evening, I must go to bed at 9:00. At weekends. I must play basketball twice a week and run once a day.
I think I have a good and healthy weekend life.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中周末必须做的事，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己周六和周日上午、下午或晚上必须做的事，以及每周末必须做的事；
第二步，书写结余，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①mobile phone手机
②at weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①I think I have a good and healthy weekend life.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
14．例文
Hello! My name is Mike. My family and I are having a great time visiting Harbin. The weather is cold and snowy. We’re wearing hats and warm clothes. I am so happy to see the white world. My father and I are skating. My mother is making a snowman. We are having fun. My friends are in Hainan now. It’s warm and sunny there. They are having a good time on the beach. Some are swimming in the sea, and some are playing beach volleyball. How happy they are!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：现在进行时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍自己和父母度假的城市，天气和活动。
第二步，再介绍朋友们度假的城市，天气和活动。
[亮点词汇]
①make a snowman堆雪人
②have a good time玩的开心
③in the sea在海里
[高分句型]
①How happy they are!（感叹句）
②I am so happy to see the white world.（动词不定式作原因状语）
15．One possible version:
Sunday, 15th June
Today I went to Happy Farm with my family. It was so much fun! It was sunny, and we took the bus to the farm. It was only 20 kilometres from my home to the farm and it took us 30 minutes to get there.
On the farm, we did many interesting things. The farmer showed us around, and I took a lot of great photos. Then I rode a horse and it was so exciting. The strawberries were good. I picked some and took them home. I was very happy.
All in all, it was an exciting day.
【详解】[总体介绍]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体概述今天做了什么，天气如何、交通方式；
第二步，阐述自己具体做了什么；
第三步，阐述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb around带某人参观
②ride a horse骑马
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
①The farmer showed us around, and I took a lot of great photos.（and连接并列句）
16．例文
My trip to Beijing
Last Saturday, I took a trip to Beijing with my parents. It was a fine day. We flew to our lovely city happily.
First of all, we visited Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall. My parents told me some stories about them. Then we visited Beihai Park. It was great to learn a lot of history. After that, we went shopping in the shop and bought some gifts for my friends. But my favorite thing was to eat Beijing Duck. It is the most delicious duck.
This experience is so interesting and unforgettable that I want to visit it again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，讲述去北京的旅行经历，主要从人员、天气、活动等方面展开详细叙述；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②go shopping购物
③buy sth for sb为某人买某物
[高分句型]
①It was great to learn a lot of history. （It作形式主语）
②This experience is so interesting and unforgettable that I want to visit it again.（so... that...结构）
17．例文
My favorite story
My favorite story is The Fox and the Crow.
The fox wanted to get the meat in the crow’s mouth. So he said a lot of beautiful words to the crow. The crow was so happy that he opened his mouth to sing a song. But as soon as he opened his mouth, the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got it.
I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds me that we should never believe the person who wants to cheat us.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的故事的名字；
第二步，简述这个故事的内容；
第三步，介绍自己从这个故事中获得的启示。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of许多
② as soon as一……就……
[高分句型]
① The crow was so happy that he opened his mouth to sing a song.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
② But as soon as he opened his mouth, the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got it.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
③ It reminds me that we should never believe the person who wants to cheat us.（that引导的宾语从句；who引导的定语从句）
18．例文
Dear Lisa,
Everything goes well. Let me tell you something about my school life.
We have six classes a day and our first class begins at 8:00 a.m. Our last class is over at 5:00 p.m. After that, we can go to the playground to play sports. My favorite subject is history, because our history teacher often teaches us a lot of interesting stories about Chinese history. And I think they are meaningful. Li Ming is my best friend. He is friendly to me, and he always helps me when I have problems. After school, we usually play basketball together. It makes us healthy and relaxed. I really enjoy my school life.
Best wishes! Hope to see you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要根据邮件内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先问候对方，点明写作目的；
第二步，具体介绍自己的学校生活，包括最喜欢的科目、最好的朋友、放学后的活动等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达祝愿以及期待对方来中国参观。
[亮点词汇]
①play sports 进行体育运动
②meaningful 有意义的
③be friendly to sb. 对某人友好
④healthy and relaxed 健康且放松
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is history, because our history teacher often teaches us a lot of interesting stories about Chinese history. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②He is friendly to me, and he always helps me when I have problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
19．例文
How to Be Healthy
It’s important to stay healthy. How can we stay healthy
First, eat healthy food such as fish and rice. They are good for us. Second, don’t eat hamburgers or ice cream. They are unhealthy. Third, drink milk and juice, They are healthy drinks. Finally, don’t drink cola or coffee. They are not healthy. Doing sports is helpful, too. You can play football or basketball. If so, you will be healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点明主题 “保持健康很重要”，引出下文保持健康的方法。
第二步，从饮食方面，分别列举健康食物和不健康食物，给出饮食建议；接着从运动方面，提出可以进行的运动项目，强调运动对健康的帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康
②such as例如
③be good for对……有益
[高分句型]
①It’s important to stay healthy.（it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式to stay healthy ）
②If so, you will be healthy.（if引导条件状语从句 ）
20．例文
Dear Alice,
I’m really happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about myself.
First, my favourite animals are pandas because they are so cute and lovely. They have round bodies and like to eat bamboo. Second, I get up early every day and do exercise three times a week to keep fit. Third, there are some rules in my family. For example, I must finish my homework on time and help with housework. Last, I can’t stay up late or play computer games during school nights.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：“一般现在时”；
③提示：首句已给出，写作时需涵盖图示中的四个要点：喜欢的动物、生活习惯、家庭规则、其他规则，考生可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头问候，表达收到邮件的喜悦，并引出自我介绍；
第二步，分段描述四个要点，注意逻辑连接词First，Second，Third，Last的使用；
第三步，结尾表达期待回信，保持礼貌。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit保持健康
②on time准时
③stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①First, my favourite animals are pandas because they are so cute and lovely.（复合句）
②Third, there are some rules in my family. （There be句型）

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