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备战2024-2025年七年级英语下期期末高频易错考点专练（牛津译林版）
专题10 书面表达20篇
1．本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据下面要点写一篇短文，向社团投稿。
要点：
1. What outdoor activity do you like
2. Why do you like it
3. How do you arrange (安排) this activity (when, where, what to do…)
要求：
1. 短文应包括上述所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数90左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
2．假如你是阳光中学的七年级学生李海，收到了英国朋友Sam的邮件。请仔细阅读邮件内容，并用英语回信。
To: Li Hai
From: Sam
Subject: Know about your hometown and your home
Dear Li Hai, Thanks for inviting me to your home. I’m really interested in your hometown and your home. Would you please tell me more What is your hometown like What can we do there Where is your home And I also want to know something about your favourite room. What do you do there Do yo like your community Why I hope you will write back to me soon. Yours, Sam
注意事项：
1.邮件须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数在70词左右 ，邮件首尾已给出 ，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to get your e-mail.
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I am looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
3．你的学校将举办一个“传统文化故事节”，而你将代表班级参加其中的讲故事比赛。请以“My favourite fantasy story”为题，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，介绍一个你喜欢的奇幻故事。演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Title
Plot
What you learn
My favourite fantasy story
Today I’d like to introduce my favourite fantasy story to all of you.
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4．假如你叫李华，你们班正在进行题为“My Favourite Book”的读书分享活动。你最喜欢的书是两年前父亲送你的《西游记》（Journey to the West）。请你根据下面提示内容，写一篇发言稿在课堂上分享。
提示：
(1) How did you get the book
(2) Who is your favourite character What’s he like
(3) What can you learn from the book
要求：
（1）发言稿需包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右。 (开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to share my favourite book, Journey to the West.
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That’s all. Thanks for your attention!
5．创文明城市，你我都是主角。假如你是李华，你被学校评为“文明风尚好少年”。请你根据以下提示，向同学们介绍你的文明行为，树立文明典范，号召大家践行文明规范，共创文明西安。
内容：
1. 你的爱好和特长；
2. 你的健康生活方式（如饮食、运动）；
3. 你在校遵守的文明规则。
要求：
1. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 书写工整、规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. It’s my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
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6．“国家喊你减肥了”近期, 国家卫健委宣布, 将持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动。同学们, 你的生活习惯健康吗 你喜欢吃什么食物 你喜欢什么运动 请你根据以下提示内容, 以“My habits”为题, 写一篇英语短文。
要点包括:
1. What’s your eating habit
2. What’s your favorite sport and how often do you play it
3. What do you think of good habits
要求:
1, 必须包含提示中所给的内容, 并进行相应拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于60词。
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7．2025年是国家的体重管理元年。作为自己健康的第一责任人，我们该如何保持健康呢？请根据以下提示，结合饮食、运动和其他方面，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：(1)80词左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名。
Keep healthy Healthy eating habits three meals a day; always have vegetables and fruit; hardly ever....
Sport habits play badminton three times a week with my friends full of energy make new friends
Sleep habits drink milk before going to bed get up early go to bed early be easy to focus on studies
How to keep healthy
We are so busy with our study today, but it is also important for us to keep healthy. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．七彩云南欢迎世界各地的朋友。假如你是一位导游，请选择或自拟两个你印象深刻的景点，向外国朋友介绍美丽的云南。包含所有要点，80词左右。
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9． 你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动，主题是介绍我国的自然旅游胜地。请你以“Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem”为题，写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。文章需要包括以下要点：
概况 ·位于中国山东省中部·大约1,545米高 ·中国五岳之一
美景 ·高高的悬崖、古老的松树和云海·“旭日东升”和“晚霞夕照”尤其著名
游览 ·可以探索历史遗迹·有通往山顶的台阶和小路，以及缆车服务
参考词汇：the Five Sacred Mountains五岳；cliff 悬崖；Sunset Glow晚霞夕照；historical site历史遗迹
要求：
1.短文包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥。
2.词数：80左右。
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem
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10．假设你叫李华，请以 “An Introduction to Giant Pandas”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍大熊猫。
特征 生活习性 保护措施 生存现状
黑白相间 可爱、友善 主要居住在中国四川省的森林里 以竹子为主食 保护天然林 保护野生动植物 建立大熊猫国家公园 数量增加 栖息地质量提高
要求:
1.文章必须包括上面表格中的全部要点,可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数80左右。
参考词汇：野生的wild　国家公园national park　栖息地habitat
An Introduction to Giant Pandas
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11．宠物是人类的好朋友。学校的英语俱乐部正在举行“Pet Week”征文活动，假如你是刘涛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的宠物。
My favourite pet Looks, hobbies…
Interesting activities between you.
Feelings or hopes.
要求：
1. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Pet
Hello, guys. I’m Liu Tao from Class 1, Grade 7. I’d like to introduce my favourite pet. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．大象是人类的朋友。请你根据以下信息提示，对大象进行介绍并适当发挥。
内容包括：（1）介绍大象的居住地、外形特征、生活习性等；
（2）呼吁大家关爱大象，帮助它们过上安全的生活。
注意：（1）词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数：
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Elephants are our friends. They are kind animals.
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13．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸、捏面人儿等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时，传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。在众多的中国传统艺术中，有什么是你特别钟爱的吗？请以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1.你最喜欢的中国传统艺术是什么；
2.简单介绍该传统艺术，并指出你喜欢它的原因；
3.你的期望。
注意：
1.包含以上信息，可适当进行发挥。
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何真实的个人信息。
3.不少于 80词，已给出部分不计入总词数。
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is
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14．在中国悠久的历史长河中，诞生了许多光彩夺目、博大精深的文化艺术形式，如书法、国画、剪纸、陶艺等。请选择一种你最喜欢的中国传统文化艺术形式，根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文来介绍它。
para 1 What is it What do you know about it
para 2 What’s special about it
para 3 How do you feel when doing it / What’s the cultural value of it
My favourite Chinese art form
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15．假如你是李华，你的社区本周末将开展中华传统民间艺术展示活动，你的英国网友Peter也想来参加，作为一名社区活动策划人，请你写一封邮件让他提前了解一下你的家乡、社区和中华传统民间艺术形式。
邮件内容必须包含：
1. 你的家乡与你们家的基本情况；
2. 介绍你所在的社区和一件你为了建设美好社区所做的事；
3. 本次社区活动中，请介绍一项你最喜爱的中华传统民间手工艺。
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。
Dear Peter,
I’m really excited to tell you something about my hometown, community and the Chinese handicraft I love most.
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．今年暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家中学生Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。
注意事项：
（1）短文应包括所给要点内容，可适当拓展使文章充实连贯；
（2）词数 70 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中考生不得提及所在学校及姓名；
（4）相关词汇：长隆野生动物园 Chimelong Safari Park，省份 Province，广州塔 Canton Tower。
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from
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17．“月是故乡明，心安是归途”，家乡总让人魂牵梦绕。无锡作为2025年春晚的分会场，可谓是备受关注和赞誉。假设你是Liu Fang，五一假期你的英国友人Jenny要来你家乡无锡游玩，请你用英语给她发一封电子邮件介绍你的家乡，要点如下：
Welcome to my hometown History Location 1. over 2000 years 2. in Jiangsu 3. 2 hours from Shanghai by car
Environment 1. Taihu lake 2. clean, beautiful 3. places of interest
Activities 1. parks 2. museum 3. food
Feelings ...
注意：
1. 80词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁；
3. 包含所提供的所有图表信息，并作适当发挥；
4. 省略号处发挥1—2个句子。
Dear Jenny,
I’m so glad you’re coming to Wuxi for the May Day holiday.
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I am so excited that I can’t wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
18．古人云：“读万卷书，行万里路。”假如你是李华，请和大家分享你的一次旅行经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要点:
1. Where did you go
2. Who did you go with
3. How was the weather
4. What did you do
5. How did you feel
要求：
1.参考要点内容，并适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My trip to ________
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19．根据下表提示， 以“My dream community”为题写一篇短文， 词数80左右。
要求：1.内容必须包括表格中的要点， 可适当发挥；
2．条理清楚、语句连贯。
概述 社区很大， 居民不多
设施 花园、运动场(playground)、游泳池……
邻居 善良， 友好；一些邻居是志愿者， 他们有一技之长， 帮人们解决问题；帮老人购物、打扫房屋；帮孩子们学习……
其他 我打算为社区做点事(至少一点)
My dream community
My dream community is very big,
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20．假如一家报社正在举行题目为“My Dream Home”的征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。要求必须包括所有要点提示，并作适当发挥；词数80左右；不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
My Dream Home
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参考答案
1．例文：
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like going on a trip to the countryside with my classmates. I can not only enjoy fresh air but also take exercise. It’s good for us to learn about nature.
To make the trip more interesting, I’d like to share my suggestions. Firstly, I hope to go to the East Farm because it’s not far. Secondly, we can do some farm work. We can talk with the farmers to know about different plants. After that, for lunch, maybe we can cook and eat the vegetables on the farm. Finally, we can make friends with the children in the countryside. I’m sure we will have a good time there.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，说明理由。
第三步，描写具体的活动安排。
[亮点词汇]
①go on a trip去旅行
②not only … but also …不仅……而且……
③be good for有益于
④make friends with和……交朋友
⑤have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①I like going on a trip to the countryside with my classmates. I can not only enjoy fresh air but also take exercise. (not only … but also …句型)
②I hope to go to the East Farm because it’s not far. (because引导原因状语从句)
2．范文
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to get your e-mail.
My hometown is Jiangyin. It’s a beautiful city. I can visit many places of interest there like Zhongshan Park. I live in the north of Jiangyin. I like my bedroom best because I can do many things I like there, such as reading books, playing games and so on. I also like my community. There are many trees and flowers in it. The people there are also friendly.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据邮件内容，用英语回信，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“很开心收到你的邮件”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，从“景点、地理位置以及那里的人们”等方面来介绍自己的家乡；
第三步，书写结语。表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②so on等等
③looking forward to doing sth.期待做某事
[高分句型]
①I like my bedroom best because I can do many things I like there, such as reading books, playing games and so on. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②There are many trees and flowers in it. (There be句型)
3．例文
My favourite fantasy story
Today I’d like to introduce my favourite fantasy story to all of you. The story is called “The Magic Paintbrush”. It tells about a poor boy named Ma Liang who receives a magical paintbrush. Whatever he draws with it becomes real. He uses it to help villagers by painting food, tools, and even rain during droughts. However, a greedy emperor tries to steal the brush. Ma Liang cleverly outsmarts him by drawing a storm that sinks the emperor’s ship.
From this story, I learn that kindness and wisdom are more powerful than greed. We should use our talents to help others, not for selfish purposes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍自己最喜欢的故事是什么；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍故事情节；
第三步，分享自己的收获并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①tell about讲述
②try to do sth尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①It tells about a poor boy named Ma Liang who receives a magical paintbrush.（定语从句）
②From this story, I learn that kindness and wisdom are more powerful than greed.（宾语从句）
4．例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to share my favourite book, Journey to the West. My father bought it for me as a gift at the beginning of my junior high school.The Monkey King is my favourite character in the traditional Chinese book. He is not an ordinary monkey. In fact, he sometimes doesn’t even look like a monkey! He keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up.
After reading this book, I learned to try my best to reach my goal although sometimes it is really difficult. I also learned the importance of teamwork.
That’s all. Thanks for your attention!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己怎么得到这本书的，最喜欢的角色等信息；
第三步，分享自己从书中学到了什么，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①at the beginning of在开始
②in fact事实上
[高分句型]
①After reading this book, I learned to try my best to reach my goal although sometimes it is really difficult.（让步状语从句）
5．例文
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. It’s my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o’clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的爱好和特长；
第二步，具体从饮食，运动，出行等方面阐述自己的健康生活方式；
第三步，最后介绍在校遵守的文明规则。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②get up起床
[高分句型]
At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. (because引导的原因状语从句)
6．例文：
My habits Health is very important to everyone. I have healthy habits.
I like sports. My favorite sport is running and I run every day at school. In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well.
As for eating habits, I eat fruit and vegetables with every meal because they can make me healthy. I don’t drink soft drinks because they have a lot of sugar and are bad for me.
I think we should have good habits because they are helpful for us to keep strong and happy. What’s more, they are also very important to our body and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明健康重要性，引入 “我的习惯” 主题；
第二步，分别阐述喜爱的运动及频率、饮食习惯及原因；
第三步，总结全文，强调好习惯对身心的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②in one’s opinion在某人看来
③a lot of许多
④be important to对……重要
[高分句型]
In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well. (because引导的原因状语从句)
7．例文
How to Keep Healthy
We are so busy with our study today, but it is also important for us to keep healthy.
First, we should develop healthy eating habits. Eating three meals a day is necessary. We should always have vegetables and fruit, and hardly ever eat junk food. Drinking enough water is also important. Second, doing sports helps us stay strong. I play badminton with my friends three times a week. It keeps me full of energy and helps me make new friends. Finally, good sleep habits matter. I drink milk before going to bed and always go to bed early. Getting up early makes it easy to focus on studies.
By following these steps, we can stay healthy and happy!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：全文使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，强调健康重要性；
第二步：从饮食、运动、睡眠三个维度具体说明；
第三步：总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① develop healthy habits 培养健康习惯
② stay strong 保持强壮
③ focus on studies 专注学习
[高分句型]
Eating three meals a day is necessary.（动名词短语作主语）
8．例文
Yunnan Province is full of beautiful places. It has some of the most beautiful places on our earth. Among them, I will share two with you.
Yulong Snow Mountain is 5,596 metres high. It looks like a silver Chinese dragon in the sun. The top of it is covered with snow almost all year round. There are speical lakes too. They are fantastic.
Lugu Lake lies high up in the mountains. It is quiet and beautiful as well. It is like a pearl shining among the mountains. People like to go there and have a boat ride.
Welcome to Yunnan! You will be interested in its beautiful views.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍云南的美丽；
第二步，具体介绍两个印象深刻的景点；
第三步，总结全文，并表达对游客的欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②be covered with被……覆盖
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
People like to go there and have a boat ride. (并列句)
9．例文
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province, China. It is about 1,545 metres high. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views, such as high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. The “Sunrise from the East” and “Sunset Glow” are among the most famous views.
Visitors can visit historical sites. They can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car up and down.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍泰山的地理位置；
第二步，介绍泰山的美景；
第三步，介绍泰山的游览方式。
[亮点词汇]
①in the middle of在……中间
②high cliffs悬崖
③the sea of clouds云海
④Sunrise from the East旭日东升
⑤Sunset Glow晚霞夕照
[高分句型]
①They can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car up and down.（并列句）
10．例文
An Introduction to Giant Pandas
Giant pandas are our national treasure. They have black and white fur. They are kind and look very lovely. Many people around the world like pandas very much. Pandas mainly live in the forests of Sichuan Province. They live on a special kind of bamboo.
Our country does many things to protect pandas. For example, people take action to protect natural forests, wild animals and plants. People also build Giant Panda National Park to help pandas live happily. Now there are more pandas and their habitat is becoming better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意按内容提示写，可适当添加细节， 并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍大熊猫的特征和生活习性；
第二步，介绍保护大熊猫的措施；
第三步，介绍大熊猫的生存现状。
[亮点词汇]
①live on以吃……为主
②for example例如
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①Now there are more pandas and their habitat is becoming better.（there be句型）
11．例文
My Favourite Pet
Hello, guys. I’m Liu Tao from Class 1, Grade 7. I’d like to introduce my favourite pet.
My favourite pet is a dog and his name is Coco. He is a fox dog from Europe. He is three years old this year. He is very beautiful and has golden hair. He likes sleeping. He usually sleeps for five hours a day. There are many interesting activities between us. For example, we go for a walk and go shopping together. He likes to run and play when we are in the park. He is a part of my family. He’s my friend and my brother, so I love him. I hope he can be there with me forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者最喜欢的宠物；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述该宠物的基本情况及作者与该宠物之间有趣的活动；
第三步，书写结语。总结作者与该宠物之间的感情及对它的期许。
[亮点词汇]
①be from 来自
②like doing sth. 喜欢做某事
③go for a walk 散步
[高分句型]
①My favourite pet is a dog and his name is Coco. (并列句)
②He likes to run and play when we are in the park. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③He’s my friend and my brother, so I love him. (so引导的结果状语从句)
④I hope he can be there with me forever. (省略that的宾语从句)
12．例文
Elephants are our friends. They are kind animals.
They live in Asia and Africa. There are many kinds of elephants. In Yunnan of our country, there are also many elephants. Elephants like living with the family.
They are huge and we look so short near them. They have big ears, long trunks and strong legs. They eat plants and some fruit. They usually eat and drink with their trunks. They like water and are good at swimming. They are friendly. They can help people carry heavy things.
We should care for them and help them live a safe life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①体材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，首先根据所给信息进行写作，其次适当补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：在第二段和第三段根据所给信息介绍大象的居住地、外形特征以及生活习性；
第二步：在第四段呼吁大家关爱大象，以帮助它们过上安全的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②be good at doing sth擅长做某事
③help (sb) (to) do sth帮助 (某人) 做某事
④care for关心，照顾，喜欢
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of elephants. (there be句型)
②They are huge and we look so short near them. (并列句)
13．例文：
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is paper cutting. It’s a kind of folk art in China, with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut different pictures of people, animals or plants with knives or scissors on red paper.
I’ve been practicing paper cutting for more than five years. It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it. Firstly, it’s a perfect way to train me to be patient and careful. Secondly, paper cutting works are great presents for my family and friends on special occasions.
Paper cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people should be proud of. And I want to spread it to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的传统艺术是什么；
第二步，介绍喜欢这种传统艺术的原因；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②fell in love with爱上
③be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
It’s such a wonderful art form that I fell in love with it the first time I came across it.（It固定句型）
14．例文
My favourite Chinese art form
I love calligraphy, the art of writing beautifully. With brushes and ink, people create words that look like paintings. It’s not just writing; it’s an art form.
There are many styles of calligraphy. Some are slow and neat, and others are fast and flowing. I like to try them all. It’s fun to see how the ink moves on the paper.
Practising calligraphy makes me feel calm and peaceful. It’s like thinking with my hands. I enjoy learning this old Chinese art and want to keep doing it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，选择一种自己最喜欢的中国传统文化艺术形式以及介绍自己对其的了解；
第二步，介绍它的独特性；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①like to do sth.喜欢做某事
②feel calm感到平静
③enjoy doing sth.享受做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s fun to see how the ink moves on the paper.(宾语从句)
15．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m really excited to tell you something about my hometown, community and the Chinese handicraft I love most.
I live in a small but beautiful city in southern China. My family has been here for generations, and we love sharing our culture with others. Our community is friendly and active. Last month, I organized a neighborhood cleanup to make our streets cleaner and greener.
At this weekend’s activity, you’ll see many traditional arts, but my favorite is paper-cutting. Artists use scissors to cut delicate patterns from red paper, symbolizing good luck. It’s amazing to watch!
Hope you can come and experience it yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封邮件，属于应用文写作；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：需包含三个要点（家乡家庭情况、社区介绍及贡献、最喜爱的传统手工艺），注意语言简洁连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的家乡与你们家的基本情况；
第二步，介绍你所在的社区和一件你为了建设美好社区所做的事；
第三步，介绍一项你最喜爱的中华传统民间手工艺。
[亮点词汇]
① for generations 几代人
② traditional arts 传统艺术
③ paper-cutting 剪纸
[高分句型]
My family has been here for generations, and we love sharing our culture with others. （并列句）
16．范文
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from Guangzhou, Guangdong Province, China. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province with a long history. It is famous for its flowers and delicious food.
There are plenty of famous places of interest here. Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. Secondly, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. Thirdly, there is also Chimelong Safari Park. It is one of the biggest nature parks in China and is home to about 20,000 animals, including giant pandas and Chinese white tigers. The people here are also very friendly and kind.
Guangzhou has something for everyone. If you come to Guangzhou, you will be sure to like it. Welcome to my hometown as a guest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图并总体介绍广州；
第二步，介绍广州的旅游景点；
第三步，介绍自己对广州的评价及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①capital省会
②be famous for…因……而出名
③places of interest名胜古迹
④fresh清新的
[高分句型]
①For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. (where引导非限制性定语从句)
②Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. (if引导条件状语从句)
17．例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m so glad you’re coming to Wuxi for the May Day holiday. Let me tell you something about my hometown.
Wuxi has a history of over 2,000 years and is located in Jiangsu Province. It’s only two hours away from Shanghai by car, so transportation is convenient.
Wuxi is famous for Taihu Lake, which makes the city clean and beautiful. There are many places of interest, like Lingshan Grand Buddha. You can visit parks, explore museums such as Wuxi Museum, and try local food.
I love Wuxi because it’s both modern and peaceful. I’m sure you’ll enjoy its culture and natural beauty.
I am so excited that I can’t wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要写1—2个关于你的感受的句子，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍你的家乡无锡；
第二步，从“历史、地理位置、环境、可做的活动”等方面介绍无锡；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient便利的
②be famous for因……而闻名
③places of interest名胜古迹
④peaceful平静的
[高分句型]
①Wuxi is famous for Taihu Lake, which makes the city clean and beautiful.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②I love Wuxi because it’s both modern and peaceful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
18．例文
My trip to Beijing
Last Saturday, I took a trip to Beijing with my parents. It was a fine day. We flew to our lovely city happily.
First of all, we visited Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall. My parents told me some stories about them. Then we visited Beihai Park. It was great to learn a lot of history. After that, we went shopping in the shop and bought some gifts for my friends. But my favorite thing was to eat Beijing Duck. It is the most delicious duck.
This experience is so interesting and unforgettable that I want to visit it again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，讲述去北京的旅行经历，主要从人员、天气、活动等方面展开详细叙述；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②go shopping购物
③buy sth for sb为某人买某物
[高分句型]
①It was great to learn a lot of history. （It作形式主语）
②This experience is so interesting and unforgettable that I want to visit it again.（so... that...结构）
19．例文
My dream community
My dream community is very big, but there aren’t many people living there. There is a big garden, a swimming pool and some playgrounds in the community. We can have a good time playing there.
All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems, they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their study, they will give them a helping hand.
I will do some things for my neighbourhood. If my neighbour is not good at English, I will help her with her English after school. My neighbourhood will be a good place to live.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，介绍自己梦想中的社区，不能遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍你梦想中的社区；
第二步，具体阐述社区的设施以及邻居；
第三步，最后表达你打算为社区做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time doing做某事很开心
②do some shopping购物
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
If children have problems with their study, they will give them a helping hand.（if引导的条件状语从句）
20．例文
My Dream Home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city centre, so I need take a bus or drive there.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a home cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. We often help each other.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据思维导图，描述梦想家园的位置、环境、内部设施、邻居以及交通方式等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述梦想家园的位置和环境；
第二步，介绍家园的内部设施及邻居等；
第三步，总结并表达对家园的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①at the foot of a hill在山脚下
②house cinema家庭影院
③friendly and helpful友好且乐于助人
[高分句型]
①There are many trees and flowers around it.（there be句型）
②I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful.（and连接并列句）

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