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2024-2025学年六年级英语下学小升初高频考点培优
(陕西专版)专题25 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．书面表达。
假如你是Linda，你们学校准备举行以“Keep Healthy”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文，作为参赛稿。
参考词汇：healthy food, eat many fruits and vegetables, be good for, play sports, …
要求：条理清楚，语句通顺，书写工整；最少写5个句子。
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That’s all. Thank you!
2．书面表达。
假如你是Mike, 即将成为一名初中生，请你从以下表格里选取内容，向新同学用英文作自我介绍。
Name Age Go to school Like to… Favourite food Favourite subjec
Mike 12 By bus Play ping-pong Fish and noodles Math
要求：(1) 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。(2) 不少于五句话。
(注：文中姓名统一使用Mike，以上选项中姓名和年龄必须使用，其他选项选用。)
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3．书面表达。
假如你是Li Hua，请向大家介绍一位你最熟悉的人(你的老师，你的朋友，你的家人……)包括他/她的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好及梦想等，题目自拟。
要求：（1）. 语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 不少于六句话。
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4．书面表达。
健康是人们最宝贵的财富，只有拥有了健康，我们才能够享受生活的美好。假如你是苏南，你是一个健康且强壮的男孩。请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下你的健康生活吧！
提示:（1）. When do you get up in the morning
（2）. How many hours do you sleep every day
（3）. What food do you often eat for lunch
（4）. What’s your favourite sport
（5）. How often do you play sports
要求：（1）.根据提示问题写作，可适当发挥；
（2）.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）.词数：不少于50词。
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5．书面表达。
同学们，你们即将小学毕业，并将要跨进中学的大门。在小学六年的生活和成长历程中，你一定有很多难忘的事情。请你用英语写篇小短文描述一件难忘的事情。
要求：（1）.语言流畅，表达准确；
（2）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
（3）.不少于5句话。
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6．书面表达。
假如你是Amy，即将小学毕业进入初中学习，请根据下面的信息向新老师和同学介绍一下自己吧！
年龄：12岁 爱好：读故事、弹琵琶 会：游泳、武术 周末：经常打扫房间 上学方式：步行 理想：成为一名警察
要求: （1）. 所写内容须包含表格中的信息，可适当发挥；
（2）. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
（3）. 不少于六句话。
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7．写作乐园。
假如你是夏雪，你的学校和10年前相比发生了很多变化。请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇英文小短文，介绍一下你的学校这些年发生的变化。
提示：
Ten years ago Now
small, no dining hall, no computer, no school bus, no grass big, very beautiful, a dining hall, use the Internet, two school buses, nice grass
要求：(1) 根据所给信息可以适当发挥；
(2) 正确使用时态，语句通顺，表达清楚、准确；
(3) 不少于8句话。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) 。
Hello, I am Xia Xue. These years, my school has many changes.
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8．过去的假期令人难忘，请以“Last summer holiday”或“Last weekend”为题目，用英语描述上个暑假或周末。
要求：（1）.语句通畅、意思连贯、书写规范。
（2）.表达准确，不少于5句话。
（3）.为阅卷公平，禁止出现自己的真实学校名称及姓名，可用“×”代替。
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9．亲爱的同学们，小学生活即将结束。哪位老师给你留下了深刻的印象呢？请你根据下面的提示内容，以“My Favorite Teacher” 为题，写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的老师。
提示：（1）. 任教学科。（2）. 性格外貌。 （3）. 个人爱好等。
要求：（1）. 参考提示信息，可适当扩展。
（2）. 书写规范，语句通顺。
（3）. 不少于五句话 (开头已给出，但不计入总句数)。
My Favorite Teacher
Hello, everyone. I will tell you something about my favorite teacher.
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10．书面表达。
运动是一切生命的源泉。假如你是李华，上周你们学校举办了一年一度的运动会。请你根据下面提示问题写篇短文，描述一下那次运动会的概况吧！
提示：（1）. When did you have the school sports meeting
（2）. What was the weather like at that time
（3）. What sport did you take part in
（4）. How did you feel at the sports meeting
要求：（1）．根据提示问题写作，可适当发挥；
（2）．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
（3）．不少于6句话。
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11．书面表达。
同学们，愉快的国庆假期已经结束，在这个假期里你都做了些什么事情呢？请以“A happy National Day”为题，写一篇小短文。
要求：（1）、请使用always, often, sometimes，never等单词。
（2）、最少写5个句子，语句通顺，标点符号正确。
（3）、字迹工整，大小写规范。
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12．书面表达。
同学们，丰富多彩的暑假生活即将开始，你们准备好了吗？请以“My Summer Holiday Plan”为题，写一写你假期的计划或打算。
要求：（1）、最少写5个句子，时态正确，语句通顺。
（2）、字迹工整，大小写规范。
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13．Do you like sports What’s your favourite sport How often do you play sports Please write it down.
要求：（1）、最少写5个句子，语句通顺，标点符号正确。
（2）、字迹工整，大小写规范。
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14．假如你是Jenny,明天你将参加一场圣诞聚会。请你根据下列提示内容写篇短文，描述一下你明天的计划吧！
提示：（1）. 穿上最喜欢的衣服、带上礼物去参加聚会；
（2）. 聚会上你们将一起唱歌、玩游戏等；
（3）. 你认为明天的聚会将会很棒。
参考词汇：Christmas party, tomorrow, put on, bring, sing songs, think…
要求：（1）. 根据提示内容写作，可适当发挥；
（2）. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
（3）. 不少于六句话。
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15．同学们，一年有几个季节呢？每个季节的气候特征是什么样的？每个季节你穿什么衣服，你又会做些什么事情呢？请以“Seasons”为题写一篇短文。
要求：（1）、最少写5个句子，语句通顺，标点符号正确。
（2）、字迹工整，大小写规范。
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16．不知不觉间，小学六年的时间悄然而过。假如你是张鹏，你所在的学校与六年前相比也有了不少变化。请你根据下列提示内容写篇短文，描述一下你们学校的变化吧！
提示：（1） 学校空间更大了，教室更多了；
（2）. 之前没有草坪，现在有一块漂亮的草坪；
（3）. 之前只能在操场上做运动，现在还可以去体育馆。
要求：（1）. 所写内容须包含提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
（3）. 不少于六句话。
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17．随着十四运的临近，全民运动在中国蔚然兴起。假如你是陈洁，作为一名小学生，你也积极参与体育运动之中。请你根据下面表格中的内容写篇短文，描述一下你昨天的运动情况吧！
时间 昨天早上 昨天下午
地点
活动
要求：（1）. 所写内容须包含表格信息，可适当发挥；
（2）. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
（3）. 不少于六句话。
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18．假如你叫李华，下面内容是有关你的朋友Amy以前和现在的一些信息，请你根据其中的内容写一写她的变化吧！
要求：（1）. 所写内容须包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
（2）. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
93. 不少于六句话。
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19．假如你是李悦，请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文介绍一下自己的父母的职业、工作地点、出行方式及爱好。
Father Job: worker Work place: factory Ways to go to work: by bus Hobbies: playing basketball; doing kung fu Mother Job: doctor Work place: hospital Ways to go to work: by subway Hobbies: watching TV; doing word puzzles
要求：（1）. 根据提示，可适当发挥；（2） 语句通顺，意思连贯；（3）. 不少于五句话。
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20．由于新冠肺炎的爆发，我们不得不待在家里，我们的城市也不得不按下了暂停键。因此，保持健康对我们显得尤为重要。在寒冷的天气里，我们应该怎么做才能保持健康呢？请你根据所给信息以“What Should We Do to Keep Healthy ”为题写篇短文，和大家分享一下你的建议吧！
要求：（1）. 根据所给信息写作，可适当发挥。
（2）. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
（2）. 不少于六句话。
What Should We Do to Keep Healthy
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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参考答案与试题解析
1．例文：
Health is very important for us. To keep healthy, we should eat many fruits and vegetables. We should drink milk every day. It is good for us. And we should play sports at least three times a week. We should go to bed early and sleep nine hours every night.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称以“Kepp Healthy”为题写如何保持健康，内容包括健康生活、运动等。注意文章为一般现在时，并且保证一定次数的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：important重要的，eat many fruits and vegetables吃很多的蔬菜和水果，be good for对……有好处，three times a week一周三次，play sports做运动
参考句型：Health is…；We should…；It is…
2．范文：
Hello! My name is Mike. I’m 12 years old. I go to school by bus. I like to play ping-pong. I often play ping-pong with my friends on Saturdays. My favorite food is fish and noodles. I like math best. It’s my favorite subject.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写一篇自我介绍。可以写一写自己姓名、年龄、出行方式、喜欢的食物及科目等。注意文章为一般现在时态，句子数量要符合要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：by bus 乘公交车，play ping-pong 打乒乓球，fish 鱼肉，noodles 面条，math 数学
参考句型：I’m… ；I like to… ；My favourite…
3．范文：
I’m Li Hua. Amy is my friend. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She is a student. She likes playing the piano. She wants to be a pianist in the future.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求假如自己是Li Hua，向大家介绍一位自己最喜欢的人(你的老师，你的朋友，你的家人……)。然后再阐述他/她的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好及梦想等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：twelve12，thin瘦的，student学生，play the piano弹钢琴，pianist钢琴家，in the future未来
参考句型：I’m …； She is …；She likes …； She wants to be …
4．范文：
My name is Su Nan. I am a healthy and strong boy. I usually get up at six o’clock in the morning and I usually go to bed at nine o’clock every night. I sleep about nine hours a day. I often eat vegetables and fish for lunch. My favourite sport is basketball. I play sports every day.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的健康生活。阐述什么时候起床，每天睡几个小时，午饭经常吃什么食物，最喜欢的运动是什么以及多久做一次运动等。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：healthy健康的，strong强壮的，vegetables蔬菜，basketball篮球
参考句型：I usually…；I often…；My favourite sport is…
5．范文：
I will leave my primary school this summer. I remember lots of wonderful moments. Last week, we had a goodbye party in our classroom. We decorated our classroom. We sang songs. We said goodbye to each other. We made dumplings together. We were very sad but we had a great time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称，回顾小学六年的生活并写一件难忘的事情。注意文章时态为一般将来时和一般过去时并符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考单词：primary school小学，remember记得，wonderful moments精彩瞬间，decorated装饰，each other互相，together一起
参加句型：I will leave…；Last week, we had…；We decorated…；We sang…；We said…；We made…
6．范文：
Hello! My name is Amy. I am twelve years old. I like reading stories and playing the pipa. I can swim and do some kung fu. On weekends, I often clean my room. My home is not far from school, so I go to school on foot. I have a dream. I want to be a policewoman when I grow up.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题要求用第一人称介绍自己，包括外貌性格，兴趣爱好，个人能力以及梦想等。时态为一般现在时，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
2.参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：twelve years old十二岁，reading stories读故事，playing the pipa弹琵琶，swim游泳，do some kung fu练武术，clean my room打扫房间，far from远离，on foot步行，want to be想成为，grow up长大
参考句型：I am…；I like…；I can…；On weekends, I…；I want to be…when…
7．范文：
Hello, I am Xia Xue. These years, my school has many changes. Ten years ago, my school was small. There was no dining hall, computer or school bus. There was no grass in my school. Now, my school is very big. It is very beautiful. There is a dining hall in my school. Students can use the Internet. There are two school buses. There is nice grass.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍学校和十年前相比的变化。具体阐述十年前后现在学校分别发生了怎样的变化。注意文章为一般过去时和一般现在时并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：small小的，dining hall餐厅，computer电脑，school bus校车，grass草，big大的，beautiful漂亮的，use the Internet使用因特网
参考句型：my school was…；There was…；my school is…；There is…；There are…
8．范文：
Last summer holiday
Last summer holiday I went to Sanya with my family. I was very happy. We went there by plane. The weather was so warm in Sanya. We took lots of pictures. We went swimming and went fishing. And I bought some gifts for my friends. We were very happy!
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求以“Last summer holiday”或“Last weekend”为题目，用英语描述上个暑假或周末。范文选用Last summer holiday为题。注意文章为一般过去时态，并符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：my family我的家人，happy高兴的，by plane乘飞机，warm温暖的，take pictures拍照，go swimming去游泳，go fishing去钓鱼。
参考句型：I went to...；The weather was...；I bought...；We were...
9．范文：
My Favorite Teacher
Hello, everyone. I will tell you something about my favorite teacher. My favorite teacher is Miss Li. She is very beautiful. She has two big eyes. Her hair is very long. Miss Li teaches us English. She is very friendly. And we learn English well. She likes singing and reading books. Sometimes she sings some English songs. I like her very much.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的老师，包括他(她)的任教学科，性格外貌和个人爱好。注意文章主要用一般现在时，并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇： big eyes大眼睛，hair头发，friendly友好的，sing唱，read books读书，very much非常
参考句型：He(She) is...；He(She) has...；He(She) likes...
10．范文：
Last week our school held its annual school sports meeting. The weather was sunny and not too hot. I participated in the running event because I like running and I am also good at it. The race was very exciting and everyone was cheering for their teammates. I felt very motivated and happy to be part of the competition. Overall, it was a great day and I am looking forward to the next sports meeting.
【解析】1.题干解读：题干要求假如你是李华，并描述一下运动会的概况，注意句子时态是一般过去时，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，不少于6句话。
2.参考词汇及参考句型
参考词汇：Last week上周，held举行，participated参加，felt感觉，great伟大的
参考句型：The weather was...；I participated in...；I felt...
11．范文：
A happy National Day
I had a happy National Day. During the holiday, I always did my homework at home in the morning. In the afternoon, I often played basketball with my friends. Sometimes, I went to the park with my parents. In the evening, I often read books and talked with my family. I never played computer games.
【解析】该题目要求以“A happy National Day”为题，写一篇小短文。介绍自己在这个假期里你都做了些什么事情。时态是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，使用always, often, sometimes，never等单词，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：always总是，一直，often经常，sometimes有时，never从不，do homework写作业，play basketball打篮球，read books读书，play computer games玩电脑游戏
参考句型：I always...；I often...；I never played...；
12．范文：
My Summer Holiday Plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going to read books with my brother. I am going to clean my room every day. I am going to take a trip with my mother. I am going to row a boat on the lake. I am going to take many beautiful pictures.
【解析】题干解读：该题干要求以My Summer Holiday Plan为题，写一写你假期的计划或打算。注意文章为一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：read books看书，clean my room打扫我的房间，take a trip去旅行，row a boat划小船，take many beautiful pictures拍许多漂亮的照片
参考句型：I am going to…
13．参考范文：
I like sports very much. I like ping-pong, football and swimming. But my favourite sport is ping-pong, because I think it is fun and easy. It can make my body strong and healthy. I often play ping-pong with my dad in the morning. After class, I also play ping-pong with my friend. We have fun together.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写自己的最喜欢的运动。根据提示句可知可以写自己喜欢的运动，最喜欢什么以及原因，在哪里做运动，以及和谁一起做运动。注意文章为一般现在时态，最少写5个句子，语句通顺，标点符号正确。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考单词/词组：football足球，because因为，strong强壮的，healthy健康的，have fun玩得开心，
参考句型：I like…because…； It can make…；I often...； We…together
14．例文
There will be a Christmas party tomorrow. I am going to put on my favourite clothes and bring some gifts to the party. We are going to sing Christmas songs and play games together. And we will eat many nice food. Then we will give our friends gifts. I think the party will be fun.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目是假如你是Jenny，明天你将参加一场圣诞聚会。写一写你明天的计划。可以从以下几方面写：你将穿上最喜欢的衣服、带上礼物去参加聚会；聚会上你们将一起唱歌、玩游戏等；你认为明天的聚会将会很棒。时态是一般将来时。要求：根据提示内容写作，可适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；不少于六句话。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：Christmas party圣诞节派对，tomorrow明天，put on穿上，bring带来，sing songs唱歌，play games玩游戏，think认为
参考句型：There will be…；I am going to…；I will…
15．范文：
Seasons
As we know, there are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter.
Spring is the best season of the year. It’s from March to May. The weather gets warmer and the days get longer. Everything wakes up, the trees turn green and flowers come out. Summer is from June to August. It’s a very hot season. It often rains and the corns grow fast. We will have a summer holiday and go swimming. Golden autumn is a harvest time. It’s from September to November. The days get shorter and the nights get longer. Winter is from December to February the next year. It’s the coldest season of the year. It often snows and we can play with snows or go skating.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求写出一年中的四个季节，包括气候特征，穿衣和做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：season季节，winter冬天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，spring春天，warmer更暖和的，longer更长的，hot炎热的，summer holiday暑假，harvest收获，shorter更短，coldest最冷的，play with玩
参考句型：There are four seasons in …； Spring is …；It’s …；I often …；Summer is …；Autumn is …；Winter is …
16．范文：
I’m Zhang Peng. I’m a Grade Six student in primary school. In six years, our school has changed a lot. Now our school has a big space and many new classrooms. There was no lawn in the school before. Now there is a beautiful lawn. We can play sports in the gym now, but in the past we could only play on the playground. I love this beautiful school.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求短文内容包含提示内容，以张鹏视角描述所在学校与六年前相比的变化。包括学校空间，教室，草坪和操场的变化，注意文章为一般过去时和一般现在时相结合，单词数量要符合要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词： in primary school在小学，changed改变，a big space大空间，many new classrooms许多新教室，a beautiful lawn一个漂亮的草坪，gym体育馆，playground操场
参考句型：I’m...；Now our school has...； There was no...；Now there is...；We can...；I love...；
17．范文：
I’m Chenjie. I played sports yesterday. In the morning, I went to the park. I went there by bike. That’s good exercise. I went to the gym in the afternoon. I played basketball with my friends. I had a lot of fun.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格中的内容写篇短文，描述一下昨天的运动情况！包括早上喝下午的地点和对应的活动。注意文章主要为一般过去时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：play sports做运动，by bike骑自行车，exercise锻炼，gym体育馆，play basketball打篮球，have fun玩得开心
参考句型：I’m…；I…yesterday；In the morning/afternoon, I…；That’s...
18．范文：
Amy is my friend. She’s different now. She was 1.4 meters tall before. Now she is 1.6 meters tall. Before she had long hair. Now, she has short hair. Before she was shy. Now, she is active. Before, she didn’t like sports. Now, she likes playing badminton and ice-skating. Before, she couldn’t dance. Now, she can dance well.
【解析】1.题干分析：该题目要求根据所给内容，写一写朋友Amy的今昔变化。根据所给信息，可以写Amy在身高，外貌，性格，兴趣爱好，个人能力几方面的变化。注意文章用一般过去时态和一般现在时态，句子数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型
参考词汇：long hair长发；short hair短发；shy害羞的；active积极的；didn’t like sports不喜欢运动；play badminton打羽毛球；like ice-skating喜欢滑冰；couldn’t dance不会跳舞；can dance well能跳得很好
参考句型：Before, she was...；Now, she is...；Before, she had...；Now, she has...；Before she didn’t like...；Now, she likes...；Before, she couldn’t...；Now, she can...
19．范文：
My name is Li Yue. My father is a worker. He works in a factory. He often goes to work by bus. My father likes playing basketball and doing kung fu. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. She always goes to work by subway. My mother likes watching TV and doing word puzzles.
【解析】1. 题目解读：该题要求以第三人称描写自己的父母，包括职业、工作地点、出行方式及爱好。时态为一般现在时，注意语句通顺，结构合理。不少于五句话。
2.参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：worker工人，doctor医生，by bus乘公共汽车，by subway乘地铁，go to work去上班，playing basketball打篮球，doing kung fu练功夫，watching TV看电视，doing word puzzles猜字谜
参考句型：My name is…；My father is…；He goes to work…；He likes…；My mother is…；She goes to work…；My mother likes...
20．范文：
What Should We Do to Keep Healthy
The weather gets cold. What should we do to keep healthy, then First, we should wear warm clothes. Second, we should eat healthy food. Third, we should wash our hands and do more exercise. Then, we should have a good sleep. Also, we should always keep happy. I hope all of us can be healthy.
【解析】1.题干分析：该题目要求以“What Should We Do to Keep Healthy ”为题写篇短文，谈一谈对保持健康的建议。提示给出5个保持健康的好方法，要将提示内容表达完整，再适当发挥，句子数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型
参考词汇：wear warm clothes穿保暖的衣服；eat healthy food吃健康的食物；wash hands洗手；do more exercise多锻炼；have a good sleep保持良好睡眠；keep happy保持好心情
参考句型：First / Second / Third, we should...；Then, we should...；Also, we should...；I hope...
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