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2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期末复习专项沪教版（五四学制）（2024）（期末考点培优）专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是阳光社区的志愿者李蕾，上周日你在社区内做了一些事情。请你根据表格提示，以“My Day as a Volunteer”为题用英语写一篇短文介绍活动情况并表达感悟。
提示词语：reusable bag环保袋，recycle v. 循环利用，separate v. 分离
Time Activities
In the morning tell an old lady the directions to go to the market
At noon advise shoppers to use reusable bags
In the afternoon clean up the park, pick up bottles, separate waste
写作要求：
1.文中须包含表格内的要点提示，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Day as a Volunteer
Hello! I’m Li Lei, a volunteer. Last Sunday I helped in our community.
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2．为了保护水资源，联合国将每年3月22日定为世界水日（World Water Day）。学校在这天将举办相关活动号召同学们节约用水，每个班级召开了一次“节约用水，从你我做起”的主题班会，假如你叫康康，你打算做个关于如何节约用水的演讲。请以“How to Save Water”为题，根据以下的提示内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容提示：
1. 水对人类、植物和动物都很重要；
2. 介绍如何节约用水（至少三条建议）；
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water.
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3．水是生命之源，每个人的日常生活都离不开水，节约用水人人有责。本期班会主题是“如何节约用水”，你将代表你们小组发言，请根据图片信息提示，以“How to Save Water”为题，写一份英语发言稿。
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所给的图片信息提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数70个左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Water is important in our daily life.
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Let’s save water from now on.
4．假如你是李辉，你的学校将要举办一场以保护树木为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿参赛。
要点：
1.简述树木的重要性；
2.如何保护树木；
3.号召更多人参与保护树木。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am glad to be here to give a speech.
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Thank you for your listening!
5．假如你是李辉，将参加学校社团组织以“My favorite animal”为主题的社团活动，请你以此为题用英文写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1. 简单介绍自己最喜欢的动物及原因；
2. 列举2-3种这种动物为人类做的事；
3. 表达观点和期待。
注意：
(1). 词数：80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2). 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3). 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和班级。
Dear students,
I am Li Hui. Different people like different animals.
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Thanks for your listening.
6．2025年是国家的体重管理元年。作为自己健康的第一责任人，我们该如何保持健康呢？请根据以下提示，结合饮食、运动和其他方面，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：(1)80词左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名。
Keep healthy Healthy eating habits three meals a day; always have vegetables and fruit; hardly ever....
Sport habits play badminton three times a week with my friends full of energy make new friends
Sleep habits drink milk before going to bed get up early go to bed early be easy to focus on studies
How to keep healthy
We are so busy with our study today, but it is also important for us to keep healthy.
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7．假设你是校园环保社的社长，请你写一篇以“Join Me to Protect Our Planet! ”为题目的倡议书，号召同学们保护树木和水资源。内容包括：
1. 树木和水对人类和地球的重要性；
2. 当前面临的环境问题（如乱砍滥伐、水污染、……）；
3. 提出4个具体的保护建议（如节约用纸、循环用水、……）；
4. 号召：……。
要求：80-100词，语言简洁有力，具有号召性。
Join Me to Protect Our Planet!
Dear classmates,
As the leader of the Eco-Club, I'm calling everyone to protect our trees and water!
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8．你的老师 Miss Lin 要求你们以小组为单位写一篇主题为保护动植物的倡议性文章，以下是你们小组成员的观点，请根据以下表格要点提示，适当发挥完成作文。
Protect Man’s Best Friends
Jim 动物帮助我们做很多事，比如帮助盲人；
Anna 植物清新空气，使生活更便利；
你的观点 动物（请补充至少一个点） 植物（请补充至少一个点）
你们的倡议 倡议 1：停止砍伐树木 倡议 2：请补充至少一个点
注意：作文必须包括表格所有信息；词数：70 词左右；不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Protect Man’s Best Friends
Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives.
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9．3月21日是 “国际森林日”，你校举办了以“保护树木”为主题的一系列校园活动。假如你是李华，请你作为学生代表，用英文写一篇演讲稿，向全校师生分享此次活动，并号召同学们保护树木。
要点提示：
1.活动时间、目的；
2.活动内容：听讲座； …… (至少补充1个活动);
3.你的感受。
参考词汇：讲座 lecture
要求：
1 . 80词左右；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
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Thank you!
10．李华参加学校“Protecting trees for a greener Guangzhou”的英语征文活动，介绍美丽广州以及树木的重要性，并倡导保护树木。请根据以下表格提示，帮助李华完成这份稿件。
注意：
1.作文内容必须包含表格中提示的所有信息，按要求适当补充拓展。
2.请用不少于70词的英文单词完成你所需要写的部分，已经给出的内容不算入总词数。
3.请在答卷规定范围内写作，超出范围的内容无效。
4.作文中不可透露自己的真实姓名和学校。
Introduction of Guangzhou ① the capital city of Guangdong ② colorful flowers ③ full of trees
Importance (重要性) of Trees ④ make... beautiful ⑤ be home to ⑥ take in… ⑦produce...
Ways to protect trees ⑧ tell others the importance of trees ⑨请补充至少一点
Protecting trees for a greener Guangzhou
Guangzhou, known as the Flower City in the south of China, is becoming greener and more beautiful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．深圳是一座著名的旅游城市。但旅游业的发展也带来了一些环境问题。假如你是李华，你所在的学校英语校报进行征文比赛。请你以“Green tourism in Shenzhen”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇文章介绍深圳的旅游以及在旅行中如何保护环境，最后呼吁大家共同保护深圳的环境。
要点：
1. 地理位置：位于中国的南部；
2. 特色景点及活动：①去锦绣中华感受传统文化；
②……
③……
3. 游客如何在旅游时保护环境：①不要乱扔垃圾；
②……
4. 呼吁大家共同保护深圳环境。
参考词汇：Splendid China锦绣中华
要求：
1. 标点正确，书面整洁；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚，行文连贯；
4. 80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Green tourism in Shenzhen
Shenzhen is famous for its tourism in China.
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12．《中国日报》正在开展“中国最宜居城市”评选活动，假如你是 David，你想推荐你的家乡无锡。
我的家乡 位置 江苏东部、距省会南京约200 公里
环境 青山绿水、空气新鲜、鸟语花香
人们 1.友好互助，多种技能，……（自拟一例） 2.健康生活，热爱自然，……（自拟一例）
民间艺术 紫砂壶：由一种陶土制成，……
我的感受 ……
注意：
1.表达中必须包含所给的要点，省略部分请自拟内容作答。
2.词数80左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实姓名。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to recommend my hometown Wuxi City for China’s Most Livable City Award.
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I think Wuxi City should get the award. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours faithfully,
David
13．4月22日是国际地球日，你校英语周举办以“绿色卫士”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华，你准备参加此次演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，谈谈树木在深圳这座城市中发挥的重要作用，号召同学们在享受绿意的同时也要保护树木。
要求：
1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： guardian 卫士
Dear judges and classmates,
I am Li Hua. Today, I stand before you to discuss the important role of trees in Shenzhen and our duty to protect these natural treasures.
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Thank you!
14．请根据提示以“How to be a greener person ”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示：greener person（环保者）
写作要求：
1. 购物时不用塑料袋；
2. 出行时采用步行或骑自行车；
3. 爱护环境，节约用水；
4. 多植树等。
5. 可适当发挥，文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校。
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15．假设你是李明，上周末你班同学参加了一次敬老院的公益活动。请你根据下列活动要点写一篇英语报道，在英语课上做一个daily report。
时间 星期天早上8:30
地点 校门口集合，前往敬老院 (the old people’s home)
交通方式 公共汽车
活动 1. 赠送老人们礼物 2. 打扫卫生，整理房间 3. 唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天，给老人们带去快乐。
个人看法 至少两条
要求：词数80-100，开头已给出。
参考词汇：gather集合 tidy up整理 chat聊天 meaningful有意义的
We paid a visit to the old people’s home last weekend.
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16．假设你是Tom，五一假期期间你想邀请你的朋友David和你一起参加你们社区的志愿者活动。根据下列信息，用英语写一封邀请信。
社区介绍 社区的环境—鸟语花香；社区的人……
地理位置 在灵山的北部，离六峰湖公园 (the Liufeng Lake Park) 约500米，从你家骑自行车10分钟可以到达。
志愿活动 辅导学生作业……（至少3项活动）
要求：
1、短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3、词数80字左右；
4、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear David,
May Day is coming. There will be a helping hands activity at our community centre during the holiday.
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Yours,
Tom
17．假如你班英语课上正在进行题为“Water and Us”的小组讨论。请根据下列你们组讨论的内容要点，将讨论结果整理成正式发言稿，并代表你们组在班级进行汇报。
内容要点：
1. Why is water very important to us
2. Why do we need to save water
3. How can we save water at home and outside the home
写作要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
（2）词数100左右。标题及短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I am very glad to share our group’s ideas with you.
As we all know, water is very important to us.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
18．你的学校正在进行“绿美校园”（Greener Campus）创建活动，假如你是学生会主席李华，希望同学们为此作出自己的贡献。请你根据以下提示，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。
提示：
1.目的：创建美丽校园，养成爱护环境的习惯。
2.措施：①植树种花；②节约水电；③...（请自行补充一点）
3.呼吁大家共同参与。
要求：
1.词数为80词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名以及学校名称；
4.倡议书开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：develop a habit of...养成……的习惯
Dear Friends,
The Greener Campus activity is here for us to join in!
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The Student Union
19．世界地球日即将来临，为增加学生的环保知识，提升保护树木的意识，学校环保社团正在举行“保护树木，爱护地球”为主题的英文演讲比赛活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点，完成一篇演讲稿，号召大家一起行动起来，保护树木。
The importance (重要性) of trees 1. clean the air 2.（请自行补充1-2点）
The problem cut down lots of trees
Ways to protect trees 1. Plant more trees 2.（请自行补充1-2点）
要求：
1. 70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥：
3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范：
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. I am glad to speak here today. I would like to talk about protecting trees and helping the Earth.
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20．联合国在1971年确定了“3.21世界森林日”，1972年确定了“6.5世界环境日”，1993年确定了“3.22世界水日”。诸多环保节日不断提醒着我们要将环保意识根植于心，付诸于行。近期，学校正在评选 “环保小卫士”，请你以My Green Life为题，结合以下内容，写一篇短文参与此次评选活动，介绍自己如何在日常生活中节约能源和保护环境。词数80词左右。
内容提示：
Save water take quick showers, reuse water, …
Protect forests plant trees, not waste paper
others not litter, …
要求：1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名及校名。
My Green Life
The earth is our home. As a middle school student, I always try my best to live a green life to protect the earth.
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My Day as a Volunteer
Hello! I’m Li Lei, a volunteer. Last Sunday I helped in our community. In the morning, I told an old lady the directions to go to the market. She thanked me a lot. At noon, I found some shoppers didn’t use the reusable bags, so I advised them to use the reusable bags. They all accepted my advice. In the afternoon, I cleaned up the park and picked up the bottles. I also helped to separate the waste. I was busy but very happy. I think it’s meaningful to do some voluntary work. It can help others and make our community better.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，紧接开头继续写作；
第二步，根据表格提示讲述在社区内做的一些事情；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the directions to方向
②go to the market去市场
③pick up拿起
④clean up清理
[高分句型]
①I found some shoppers didn’t use the reusable bags, so I advised them to use the reusable bags.（so引导的句子）
②I think it’s meaningful to do some voluntary work.（宾语从句）
2．例文
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water. Water is so important for us and we should save water.
Animals, plants and people all need water. If there is no water, we can’t live. So what should we do to save water First, we should turn off the tap after we use the water. Second, we should take a shower but not a bath. Third, we can reuse water, such as using the water from washing vegetables to water the flowers.
Water is so valuable for us. Let’s save every drop of water!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作主题；
第二步，说明水的重要性；
第三步，提出节约用水的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off the tap 关掉水龙头
②take a shower 淋浴
③reuse water 重复利用水
[高分句型]
①If there is no water, we can’t live. （if引导条件状语从句）
②First, we should turn off the tap after we use the water.（after引导时间状语从句）
3．例文
How to Save Water
Water is important in our daily life. However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.
First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands. It’s a waste of water. Second, remember to turn off the tap after using it. A small action can make a big difference. Third, don’t throw away water bottles with water in them. We can collect the water for later use. Last but not least, we can reuse rainwater to water flowers. It’s a good way to save water.
Let’s save water from now on.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，围绕“如何节约用水”展开；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于阐述日常节约用水的做法；
③提示：需根据图片信息提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要围绕节约用水的方法展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明水在日常生活中的重要性，引出节约用水的必要性；
第二步，依次阐述具体的节约用水方法，对应图片信息；
第三步，结尾呼吁大家从现在开始节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
① water shortage 水资源短缺
②turn off 关闭
③throw away 扔掉
④last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.（so连接因果并列句）
②First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．One possible version
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am glad to be here to give a speech.
Trees are very important to us. They give us oxygen, clean the air, and provide homes for animals. They also stop soil from washing away and make our world beautiful. To protect trees, we should stop cutting them down freely. We can recycle paper, use both sides of it, and plant more trees. Never waste paper, like throwing away notebooks with blank pages. Let’s work together to protect trees! Small actions can make a big difference. Tell your friends and family that they should join us. Remember, saving trees means saving our future!
Thank you for your listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头礼貌性问候；
第二步，具体阐述树木的重要性、如何保护树木并号召大家参与保护树木；
第三步，感谢聆听，礼貌结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②recycle paper回收纸
③work together共同努力
[高分句型]
①To protect trees, we should stop cutting them down freely.（不定式作目的状语）
②Tell your friends and family that they should join us.（祈使句+宾语从句）
5．例文
My Favorite Animal
I am Li Hui. Different people like different animals.
For me, dogs are my favorite animal. The reasons why I love them are as follows. I think dogs are the cutest animals in the world. Dogs are helpful. They can do a lot of things for us. They can warn people when danger is near by barking. They keep people safe. Dogs are not only helpful, but also lovely and friendly. You can play with them when you are free. You can also share your thoughts with them. And when you are sad, they can make you happy. They help us relax. Animals are our friends. We can’t live without them. It’s our responsibility to protect animals. Let’s take action now.
Thanks for your listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出作者最喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍作者喜欢该动物的原因；
第三步，介绍该动物为人类做的事情并呼吁大家保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sb. adj. 使某人保持……
②share sb. with sth. 与某人分享某物
③help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①The reasons why I love them are as follows. (主语从句)
②I think dogs are the cutest animals in the world. (省略that的宾语从句；形容词最高级)
③They can warn people when danger is near by barking. (when引导时间状语从句）
④It’s our responsibility to protect animals. (it作形式主语；不定式作真正的主语)
6．例文
How to Keep Healthy
We are so busy with our study today, but it is also important for us to keep healthy.
First, we should develop healthy eating habits. Eating three meals a day is necessary. We should always have vegetables and fruit, and hardly ever eat junk food. Drinking enough water is also important. Second, doing sports helps us stay strong. I play badminton with my friends three times a week. It keeps me full of energy and helps me make new friends. Finally, good sleep habits matter. I drink milk before going to bed and always go to bed early. Getting up early makes it easy to focus on studies.
By following these steps, we can stay healthy and happy!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：全文使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，强调健康重要性；
第二步：从饮食、运动、睡眠三个维度具体说明；
第三步：总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① develop healthy habits 培养健康习惯
② stay strong 保持强壮
③ focus on studies 专注学习
[高分句型]
Eating three meals a day is necessary.（动名词短语作主语）
7．例文
Let’s Protect Our Trees and Water! Dear classmates,
As the leader of the Eco-Club, I’m calling everyone to protect our trees and water! Trees clean the air and give us oxygen, while water is the source of life. However, many trees are being cut down, and rivers are polluted by waste.
Here’s how we can help: First, save paper to protect forests. Then, turn off taps and reuse water wisely. Besides, join tree-planting activities. Finally, never litter near rivers or lakes.
Remember, small actions matter! If we all do our part, we can make Earth greener and cleaner. Start today!
【解析】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书，旨在号召同学们保护树木和水资源；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时，描述客观事实和提出建议；
③提示：写作需涵盖树木和水的重要性、面临的环境问题、具体保护建议以及号召内容，注意语言简洁且具有号召力。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开篇点明身份，发出保护树木和水资源的号召，阐述树木和水对人类及地球的重要性；
第二步，指出当前存在的如乱砍滥伐、水污染等环境问题，提出具体的保护建议，如节约用纸、循环用水、参加植树活动、不向河湖乱扔垃圾等；
第三步，结尾再次强调个人行动的重要性，号召大家从现在开始行动起来。
【亮点词汇】
①the source of life生命之源
②save paper节约用纸
③reuse water循环用水
【高分句型】
①However, many trees are being cut down, and rivers are polluted by waste.（使用被动语态）
②If we all do our part, we can make Earth greener and cleaner.（条件状语从句）
8．例文
Protect Man’s Best Friends
Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives.
Jim thinks animals do many things for us, such as helping blind people. Anna believes that plants can make the air clean and fresh. And they make our lives more convenient. As for me, animals are so lovely that they always make us happy and plants provide us with food as well.
It is important for us to protect our best friends. It’s time to take action. First, stop cutting down trees. Second, don’t throw rubbish everywhere to keep the environment clean. Let’s work together to protect them.
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格要点提示”中的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明动植物是人类最好的朋友；
第二步，具体阐述各自关于保护动植物的观点；
第三步，提出呼吁行动，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②convenient方便的
③provide...with...为……提供……
[高分句型]
①Jim thinks animals do many things for us, such as helping blind people. (省略that的宾语从句)
②As for me, animals are so lovely that they always make us happy and plants provide us with food as well. (so... that引导的结果状语从句)
9．例文：
Dear teachers and fellow students,
March 21st is International Forest Day. To raise our awareness of tree-protection, our school held a series of activities.
First, we attended a lecture given by a forestry expert. He shared amazing facts about the importance of trees, like how they produce oxygen and provide habitats for wildlife. Then, we participated in a poster-making competition. We designed vivid posters with slogans to call on everyone to protect trees.
These activities were really eye-opening. Trees are crucial to our earth. Let’s take action and contribute to protecting our green friends. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写一下本次活动的时间和目的。
第二步，再写一下活动的具体内容。
第三步，最后呼吁大家保护树木。
[亮点词汇]
①a series of 一系列
②call on 呼吁
③take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①To raise our awareness of tree-protection, our school held a series of activities.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②Let’s take action and contribute to protecting our green friends.（祈使句）
10．例文
Protecting trees for a greener Guangzhou
Guangzhou, known as the Flower City in the south of China, is becoming greener and more beautiful. As the capital of Guangdong, it is famous for colorful flowers and green trees all year round. Trees make our city look like a huge garden. They are home to birds and other animals, creating a lively environment. More importantly, trees take in harmful gases and produce fresh air for us. To protect these green friends, we should tell people how important trees are. Planting new trees every spring is also a good idea.
Let’s start from small things: never carve on tree trunks and reuse paper to save trees. If everyone takes action, our city will be even greener!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍美丽的广州；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍树木的重要性；
第三步，给出保护树木的建议并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以……而闻名
②all year round全年
[高分句型]
①To protect these green friends, we should tell people how important trees are.（不定式作目的状语）
②If everyone takes action, our city will be even greener!（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文
Green tourism in Shenzhen
Shenzhen is famous for its tourism in China. Located in the south of China, it attracts millions of visitors every year. There are many wonderful places to explore. For example, you can visit Splendid China to experience traditional culture. You can also enjoy the beautiful beaches in Dameisha or take a walk in the Mangrove Nature Reserve. However, tourism causes some environmental problems. To protect Shenzhen, tourists should follow these rules: First, do not litter. Second, use public transport instead of private cars. Third, avoid damaging plants in parks.
Let’s work together to keep Shenzhen green and clean!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍深圳的地理位置；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍深圳的特色景点及活动，给出环保建议；
第三步，呼吁大家共同保护深圳环境并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of在……的南边
②for example例如
[高分句型]
①There are many wonderful places to explore.（there be型）
②Let’s work together to keep Shenzhen green and clean!（祈使句）
12．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend my hometown Wuxi City for China’s Most Livable City Award.
Wuxi is in the east of Jiangsu. It is about 200 kilometres from the capital city Nanjing. With many trees, lakes and green hills, the air is fresh here. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. People here are all friendly and helpful. They have different skills and often help others with all kinds of problems. They live a healthy life. They take more exercise and watch less TV. To protect the nature, they usually go out on foot or by bike.
Wuxi is famous for its Zisha Teapot. It is made from zisha clay. The teapot is made by hand and takes a long time to make.
We enjoy our life here. It is really a wonderful place to live.
I think Wuxi City should get the award. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours faithfully,
David
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍家乡的位置、环境、人们以及民间艺术等方面的具体详情。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth帮助某人（做）某事
②all kinds of各种各样的……
③live a healthy life过健康的生活
④be famous for因为……而出名
[高分句型]
①Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. (并列谓语)
②To protect the nature, they usually go out on foot or by bike. (动词不定式做目的状语)
13．例文
Dear judges and classmates,
I am Li Hua. Today, I stand before you to discuss the important role of trees in Shenzhen and our duty to protect these natural treasures.
Trees are very important in Shenzhen. They can make the air clean. When it rains, they can stop the water from running away. Many birds and small animals live in the trees. They are their homes. We can see green trees everywhere in Shenzhen. They make our city beautiful. We enjoy the nice things that trees give us. So we should protect them. Don’t cut them down. Let’s be green guardians!
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要交代演讲目的；
第二步，介绍树木在深圳这座城市中发挥的重要作用；
第三步，召同学们在享受绿意的同时也要保护树木。
[亮点词汇]
①stop…from doing sth.阻止……做某事
②run away流走
③cut…down砍到
[高分句型]
We enjoy the nice things that trees give us. (that引导的定语从句)
14．例文：
How to be a greener person
As we all know, it’s important to be a greener person. We can do many things to be a greener person.
First, when we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag instead of plastic bags. Second, we should walk to school or take a bus instead of taking a car. Third, don’t litter. Put the waste into the bin. We should save every drop of water. Turn off the tap each time after using water. Finally, plant more trees. Trees can keep the air clean and fresh.
If we all do our part in daily life, we are sure to find many ways to be a greener person.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，说明成为环保者的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述环保可以从哪些事做起；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②put into把……放入
③turn off关掉
④be sure to一定
[高分句型]
①As we all know, it’s important to be a greener person. (it作形式主语的句型)
②First, when we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag instead of plastic bags. (when引导的时间状语从句)
15．例文：
We paid a visit to the old people’s home last weekend. At 8:30 on Sunday morning, all my classmates gathered at the school gate. Then we went to the old people’s home by bus. When we arrived, we gave the old people our carefully-prepared gifts first. After that, we started to help them clean the rooms and tidy up their things. To make them happy, some of us sang songs, some danced, and others told interesting stories or chatted with them. The old people smiled brightly, and they seemed very excited. I think this activity is really meaningful. On one hand, it makes the old people feel less lonely and brings warmth to them. On the other hand, it teaches us to care about others and understand the importance of respecting the elderly. I hope we can have more such activities in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇活动报道，以记叙文的形式详细记录了班级同学前往敬老院开展公益活动的过程。
②时态：全文以一般过去时为主，用于描述上周末已发生的活动过程；在表达个人看法时使用一般现在时。
③提示：严格遵循题目要求，涵盖所有要点，合理运用参考词汇，语言流畅，层次分明，无语法和拼写错误，字数符合规定。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首句直接引出报道主题，简洁明了，接着说明集合时间、地点和交通方式，为后续活动描述做好铺垫。
第二步，详细叙述活动过程，按照活动先后顺序，依次描述到达敬老院后赠送礼物、打扫卫生整理房间，以及通过唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天等方式给老人带去快乐的过程。
第三步，从两个方面阐述个人对活动的看法，分别强调活动对老人和参与者的积极意义，最后做总结，表达对未来此类活动的期待，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①gathered集合
②carefully-prepared精心准备的
③brightly灿烂地
[高分句型]
①To make them happy, some of us sang songs, some danced, and others told interesting stories or chatted with them.（使用some...some...others...并列结构）
②On one hand, it makes the old people feel less lonely and brings warmth to them. On the other hand, it teaches us to care about others and understand the importance of respecting the elderly.（采用“On one hand...On the other hand...”的对比结构）
16．例文：
Dear David,
May Day is coming. There will be a helping hands activity at our community centre during the holiday.
Our community, located in the north of Lingshan Mountain, is surrounded by singing birds and fragrant flowers. People here are friendly and helpful. It’s only 500 meters from Liufeng Lake Park, just a 10-minute bike ride from your home.
There are many things we can do to help people. We will help the students with their homework. we can help the old people clean their house and do some shopping for them. Some parents are busy working, we can help them look after their baby.
I hope you will join in this helping hands activity.
Yours,
Tom
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要求”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述要做的志愿活动；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望David参与志愿活动”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be surrounded by被……所包围
②help sb with在某方面帮助某人
③look after照顾
④join in加入
[高分句型]
①Our community, located in the north of Lingshan Mountain, is surrounded by singing birds and fragrant flowers.（过去分词作后置定语）
②I hope you will join in this helping hands activity.(宾语从句)
17．例文
Dear classmates,
I am very glad to share our group’s ideas with you.
As we all know, water is very important to us. First, we need water to drink, cook, and wash every day. Without water, plants and animals cannot survive, and our environment would be in danger. Second, we must save water because fresh water is limited on Earth. Pollution and population growth make clean water even rarer. Finally, we can save water by turning off taps when not in use, fixing leaks quickly, and reusing water, like watering plants with leftover water. Outside, we should avoid wasting water in public places and remind others to protect this precious resource.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍水的重要性，为什么要节约用水以及如何节约用水；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be in danger 处于危险中
②turning off taps 关闭水龙头
③in public places 在公共场所
④remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Second, we must save water because fresh water is limited on Earth.（原因状语从句）
②Finally, we can save water by turning off taps when not in use, fixing leaks quickly, and reusing water, like watering plants with leftover water.（动名词作宾语）
18．例文
Dear Friends,
The Greener Campus activity is here for us to join in! What it aims to do is to create a beautiful campus and help us develop a habit of protecting the environment. How can we contribute to the Greener Campus As students, we can start from the little things around us. First of all, we can plant more trees and flowers in school and care for them. Secondly, we can do something to save energy in our daily life, such as saving water and electricity. Besides, we can’t throw away rubbish here and there. Let us take action for building the Greener Campus! Come on!
The Student Union
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明倡议的主题是“绿美校园”；
第二步，阐述创建绿美校园的具体措施；
第三步，呼吁大家参与创建绿美校园。
[亮点词汇]
①develop a habit of...养成……的习惯
②first of all首先
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①What it aims to do is to create a beautiful campus and help us develop a habit of protecting the environment.（what引导的主语从句）
19．例文：
Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. I am glad to speak here today. I would like to talk about protecting trees and helping the Earth.
Trees are crucial because they clean the air, making it fresh for us to breathe. Also, they provide habitats for countless animals and prevent soil erosion. However, many trees are being cut down.
To protect trees, we can plant more trees. Besides, we should recycle paper to reduce the need for cutting trees. And we must stop illegal logging. Let’s take action now to protect our trees and the Earth.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明演讲主题是关于保护树木和帮助地球。
第二步，具体阐述。先从树木对环境和生物的多方面益处进行阐述，强调树木的不可或缺性；再指出树木被砍伐的现状，引发听众对问题的关注；接着详细说明保护树木的具体行动，使听众清楚了解可以采取的措施。
第三步，书写结语。以呼吁的方式，鼓励大家立刻行动起来。
［亮点词汇］
①provide...for...为……提供……
②cut down砍伐
③take action采取行动
［高分句型］
Trees are crucial because they clean the air, making it fresh for us to breathe.（because引导原因状语从句）
20．例文：
My Green Life
The earth is our home. As a middle school student, I always try my best to live a green life to protect the earth.
To save water, I take quick showers and reuse water for plants. For forests, I plant trees every spring and use both sides of paper. I always carry a reusable shopping bag and never use plastic bags. At school, I remind classmates to turn off lights and pick up litter. Even small actions like walking to school help protect our environment.
Let’s work together to make our planet greener!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍自己在日常生活中保护环境的形为，注意包含提示中的内容；
第三步，书写结尾，呼吁大家一起行动。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off 关闭
②pick up 捡起
[高分句型]
①I always carry a reusable shopping bag and never use plastic bags.（并列句）
②Let’s work together to make our planet greener!（祈使句）
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