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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项牛津上海版
（试用本）（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules Around Us”. (以“我们身边的防火规则”为题写一篇至少含60个词的短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯。)
1. What should you do before you go into some public places
2. What will you do when you meet a fire
3. What do you think is the most important thing to do during a fire
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校每年组织远足活动 (如：春游和秋游等)，下周学校将举行“Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文和同学们分享。
1. What do you think of school trips 2. What did you do in one of your school trips 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的难忘之旅”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following points are only for reference:
When and where did you take the trip
What did you do there
Why was the trip unforgettable
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Write at least 60 words about the topic “China is calling”. (以“中国在召唤”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。)
中国这些年来发生了很多的变化，科技发展突飞猛进，人民的幸福指数也上升了。我们的国家发生了哪些改变呢？你的生活又发生了哪些改变呢？请结合自己的亲身经历写出你自己的感想吧。
1. What do you think of your motherland
2. What can tourists/you see in China
3. What can tourists/you do in China
(注意：1.短文中不得出现考试姓名/校名等个人信息，否则不与评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华，请你对英国朋友Jack 的邮件进行回复。词数不少于60个单词，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To: Li Hua@
Subject: See you soon!
Hi, Li Hua! Next month, I’ll be with you in Shanghai. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me Any interesting places worth visiting I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．In 50—100 words, write an article according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇50—100字的短文，标点符号不占格。)
你所在学校的校报正在开展征文活动，主题为“我心中的旅游胜地”。请写一篇短文，向同学们推荐一个你喜欢的旅游地 (travel destination)。文中应包括以下内容：
1. 旅游地的名称和位置；
2. 旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方；
3. 你为什么喜欢这个地方；
4. 给出一些旅行建议。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
今年暑假你校将组织一次游学夏令营（study tour summer camp），现有以下四种设想：
1. 博物馆之旅（a trip to the museum）
2. 科技之旅（a science and technology journey）
3. 地理之旅（a geography journey）
4. 艺术之旅（an art journey）
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，说明理由，并推荐一个目的地。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．Write at least 60 words about the topic “I at home and at school”. (以“在家和在学校的我”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
情景提示：在8B Unit 7的诗歌My dad at home and at work中，小作者向我们描述了一个在家和在工作中完全不同的爸爸的形象。你能不能向我们描述一下你在家和在学校不同的表现，并对自己的不同表现进行评价吗？
注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．Write at least 60 words on the topic(以“What am I ” “我是怎样的我”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
情景：14岁的我，在生活中，是一个幸福快乐的我；在学习中，是一个勤奋刻苦的我；在运动中，是一个团结合作的我；在交友中，是一份友好善良的我……请就任何一个角度分享我是怎样的我。
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The place I want to visit most” (以“我最想去的地方”为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。)
注意文中不能出现自己的姓名、校名及有关信息。
Questions for reference: 以下问题供参考
1. Which place do you want to visit most
2. Why do you want to visit it Give at least two reasons.
3. If you have a chance to visit it, what will you do there
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．Please write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite subject”. (以“我最喜欢的学科”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文)
Suggested questions:
1. What is your favourite subject
2. Why do you like this subject
3. What have you learned from this subject
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．每个人都有自己梦想的工作，你梦想的工作是什么呢？请根据提示，以“My Dream Job”为题，描述一下你梦想的工作。
要求：
1）词数80左右；
2）文章内容包含思维导图内容；
3）文中不能出现真实地名、人名、校名。
My Dream Job What do you want to be
Where are you going to work
How are you going to do
When are you going to start
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Use electricity safely”. （你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇 60—120 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a guide: （写作必须包含以下内容）
1. How do some people use electricity
2. Why should we use electricity safely
3. What’s your suggestion on using electricity safely
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜欢________”为题，可以是人，电影、书籍或是食物等，把你喜欢的美好事物分享给身边的人并说说你喜欢的理由，写不少于60个字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所钦佩的人是___________”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Gift to My Mother”, using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“给我妈妈的一件礼物”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词， 标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1）What are you going to give your mother
（2）When are you going to give it to her
（3）Is it special Why
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A different ________”（以“与众不同的 ________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：生活是多姿多彩的，在你心目中一定觉得许许多多的人或物与众不同。请你选择一样，向你的伙伴们介绍一下。要求先进行总体描述，再说说你认为其与众不同的理由。
The following questions are for reference only.
以下问题仅供参考。
Who/What do you want to introduce to your partners
What is he/she/it like
Why do you think he/she/it is different from others (Give at least 2 reasons.)
注意：
1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2.注意适当使用形容词。
3.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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18．Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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19．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”（请以“我最喜欢的城市”为题，写一篇不少于 60词的短文，内容切题，语句连贯，标点符号不占格）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Suggested questions：
1）Which city is your favourite city
2）What makes it your favourite city (Give at least 2 reasons)
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Fire Rules Around Us Fire rules are crucial for our safety. Before entering public places, we should locate the safety exits. When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. Cover our nose and mouth with a wet towel and walk bent-over to avoid smoke. During a fire, the most important thing is to ensure our safety; do not waste time taking personal items. By following these fire rules, we can protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述火灾的危险性，如火灾会烧毁森林、破坏建筑等，进而引出遵守消防守则的重要性；
第二步，详细说明在火灾发生时的具体做法，如如何报警、逃生等。
[亮点词汇]
①run away逃走
②first of all首先
③put out扑灭
[高分句型]
When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. (when引导的时间状语从句)
2．范文
Our trip to Xuhui campus Last week, we had a school trip to Xuhui campus.
We started on a sunny day in the morning. It took us two hours to drive there. When we got there, we were attracted by the landscape garden of Xuhui campus. Then we visited the history of Rongqiao middle school in the museum. We were deeply moved by the spirit of Rongqiao people. Finally, we tasted the delicious food of Xuhui canteen.
To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. In this way, we can gain more knowledge and have a better understanding of what we see. All in all, we had an interesting and meaningful school trip.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记述学校旅行经历的文章；
②时态：主要为一般过去时；
③提示：文章包含学校旅行的相关要点，介绍旅行去徐汇校区，描述旅行当天的行程，还给出让学校旅行更有意义的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍上周进行了一次去徐汇校区的学校旅行；
第二步，按时间顺序详细描述学校旅行当天的经历，包括出发时间、路上用时，到达后被校园景观吸引，参观学校历史博物馆，被荣桥人精神打动，以及品尝食堂美食等；
第三步，就如何让学校旅行更有意义提出自己的建议，旅行前对目的地做研究、旅行中做笔记，并强调这样做能带来的收获，最后总结此次旅行有趣且有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①attracted吸引
②moved感动
③gain获得
[高分句型]
①It took us two hours to drive there. (It takes sb some time to do句型)
②To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. (不定式作目的状语)
3．例文：
An unforgettable trip to Beijing
I took an unforgettable trip to Beijing last summer vacation. I visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the beauty and history of these places.
I also tried some delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck and Peking Noodles. The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.
What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends. We shared our experiences and had a lot of fun together.
This trip not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a lot of wonderful memories. I will never forget it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：介绍曾经去过的地方，分享个人的经历，避免语法错误，保持行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍一次难忘的旅行经历；
第二步，简要介绍去的地方、时间、交通方式、游玩的景点以及美食等；
第三步，总结全文，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②be amazed by对……感到惊讶
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
②What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends.（what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句）
4．例文
China is calling
China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth. It has become one of the largest modern and international contries in the world. With the development of the economy, you can see that transportation in China is becoming increasingly convenient, and high-speed trains can be seen everywhere. All Chinese welcome you to visit China.
If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong. It is called “Shopping Paradise” in China. You won’t feel bored if you walk in this city and many goods will attract. If you enjoy eating delicious food, don’t forget to visit Xi’an and Chongqing where a lot of local snacks will wait for you there.
I will always be in love with my motherland—China!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“中国在呼唤”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“你对祖国的看法、中国的变化、在中国旅游能做什么”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①modern现代的
②with the development of随着……的发展
③enjoy doing享受做某事
[高分句型]
①China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．例文
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Shanghai next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There are a lot of interesting places, and I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. First, we will play in Changfeng Park. We will take many photos with dolphins and seals. Then, we will visit Yu Garden. It is a traditional place. We will buy some small souvenirs. After that, we will travel to Oriental Pearl Tower. It is the highest building in Asia. Finally, we will take a walk at the magnificent Huang Pu River. I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；
第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍上海的一些有趣的地方；
第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么，以及表达期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as 也
②traditional 传统的
③souvenirs 纪念品
④take a walk 散步
⑤magnificent 壮丽的
⑥convenient 方便的
[高分句型]
①I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai.（省略that宾语从句）
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文
I would suggest France as a travel destination. France is located in Western Europe and is famous for its rich culture and history. The Eiffel Tower and the historic castles in the Loire Valley are must-see attractions. I love France because of its delicious food, friendly people, and beautiful scenery. When you visit France, make sure to learn some basic French. Also, try to visit both the cities and the countryside to get a full experience.
I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍旅游地的名称和位置；
第二步，介绍旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方；
第三步，具体阐述自己为什么喜欢这个地方；
第四步，最后给出一些旅行建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in位于
②because of因为
③make sure确保
④try to do sth努力做某事
[高分句型]
I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday.（宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
For the study tour summer camp held by our school, I’d like to recommend a trip to the museum. Generally speaking, museums stand for art, culture and history. While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. It is the best place for us to see exhibitions from the ancient.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题目分析写作要点完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏要点，并可适当发挥，要使用正确的时态和词汇，使语意通顺，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写明你最喜欢的一种设想；
第二步，写出你推荐这个设想的理由；
第三步，推荐一个目的地。
[亮点词汇]
① recommend 推荐
② generally speaking 通常来说
③ splendid 非常好的
④ exhibition 展览
[高分句型]
① While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. (not only...but also...引导的并列句)
② When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. (非限制性定语从句)
8．例文
I at home and at school
I like reading very much. I often take out a book and read it quietly when I have free tine at home. Reading makes me happy, because it not only brings me knowledge, but also opens my eyes. But when I am at school, I listen carefully in class, and after class I play with my classmates. My classmates think I am outgoing and easy to get on with. So I have lots of friends.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍自己在家和在学校不同的表现，并对自己的不同表现进行评价。注意表达正确、语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己在家的表现，并进行评价；
第二步：介绍自己在学校的表现，并进行评价；
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不仅……而且……
②get on with相处
③listen carefully认真听讲
[高分句型]
①I often take out a book and read it quietly when I have free tine at home.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Reading makes me happy, because it not only brings me knowledge, but also opens my eyes. (because引导原因状语从句)
9．例文
What am I
I have got lots of hobbies. What I like is to play basketball and draw pictures. But I like playing basketball the best. I usually play basketball with my friends after school. It depends on the weather. The reasons why I like playing basketball are that, basketball can bring me lots of fun. Furthermore, I play basketball in order to keep health. Moreover, I can make many friends when I play basketball. Finally, basketball can learn what is teamwork so that I know how to cooperate with my teammates.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍“我”；
第二步，具体介绍“我”在运动方面中是怎样的；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①depends on取决于
②in order to为了
③cooperate with与……合作
[高分句型]
①What I like is to play basketball and draw pictures.（what引导的主语从句）
②Finally, basketball can learn what is teamwork so that I know how to cooperate with my teammates.（what引导的宾语从句）
10．例文
The place I want to visit most
Summer holiday is coming. The place I want to visit most is Beijing.
As you know, Beijing is the capital of China and the 2008 Olympic Games was held there. Besides, there are many famous interesting places, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven and so on. I am excited to go to the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders of the world. I’m sure great changes must have taken place in Beijing.
If I have a chance to visit Beijing, I will climb the Great Wall first. I can’t wait.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示问题以“The place I want to visit most”为题进行写作，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，表达最想去的地方是哪里；
第二步，介绍想要去的原因；
第三步，表达如果有机会去参观，会在那里做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①the capital of……的首都
②and so on等等
③take place发生
[高分句型]
①I am excited to go to the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders of the world. (which引导定语从句)
②If I have a chance to visit Beijing, I will climb the Great Wall first. (if引导条件状语从句)
11．例文：
My favourite subject
My favorite subject is English. I like it very much because it is not only interesting but also useful. English is an international language spoken by people from all over the world. I can use English to communicate with the foreigners if I study it well. I think it is useful for me. By learning English, I know different culture and customs. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，包括对英语的喜爱，为什么喜欢，以及学习英语的目标。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确主题——我最喜欢的学科是英语；
第二步，具体阐述为什么喜欢英语，包括它的有趣性和实用性，以及英语作为国际语言的重要性；
第三步，表达通过学习英语了解不同的文化和习俗，以及学习英语的决心。
[亮点词汇]
① international language 国际语言
② communicate with 与……交流
③ culture and customs 文化和习俗
[高分句型]
① I like it very much because it is not only interesting but also useful. (because引导原因状语从句)
② I can use English to communicate with foreigners if I study it well. (if引导的条件状语从句)
12．例文：
My Dream Job
Everyone has his own dream job and each job has its meaning. I also have my dream job. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I think teachers are great. On the one hand, they teach their students much knowledge. On the other hand, they can learn something new from their students while teaching. What’s more, I think teachers can be forever young by teaching and playing with kids. So I think this job is meaningful.
To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education. I’m going to start when I graduate from university. I am going to work in Liupanshui, because it’s my hometown and I love it.
I am sure my dream will come true one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示描述理想的工作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍理想的工作是什么及原因；
第二步，介绍如何实现梦想；
第三步，表达去哪里工作及什么时候工作；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand ... on the other hand一方面……另一方面……
②come true实现
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I am going to work in Liupanshui, because it’s my hometown and I love it.（because引导原因状语从句）
13．例文
Use electricity safely
Using electricity safely is a very important topic in our daily lives.
First, ensure any electrical items are approved standard when purchasing and keep them correctly maintained. Second, unplug electrical items that are not in regular use and
ensure that you unplug and switch off electrical items when you are away from the house for any length of time . Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically
designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes. But when you use them, make sure not to get them wet and avoid plugging and unplugging with wet hands. The last, always turn
the electrics off at the mains if carrying out any electrical repairs and only attempt repairs if you know what you are doing.
We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电；安全用电的原因以及安全用电的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电，因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态，则可能会引发火灾，并浪费能源。”
[亮点词汇]
① switch off关上
② make sure not to do sth确保不做某事
[高分句型]
① Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表劝告）
② We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.（because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）
14．
My favorite person
My favorite person is my teacher, Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and thin with long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all know she is always ready to help others. In a word, I love Ms. Wang.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中喜欢的美好事物以及喜欢的理由的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最喜欢的人是王老师。
第二步，具体阐述喜欢王老师的理由。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“爱王老师”的想法，首尾呼应。
[亮点词汇]
① be strict with对……严格
② in a word总之
③ be always ready to help others乐于助人
④ in trouble处于困难中
[高分句型]
① We all know she is always ready to help others.（know后是省略了that的宾语从句）
② When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ But she is tall and thin with long straight hair.（with表伴随）
15．例文
The person I admire most
The most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. She is an ordinary woman—not very beautiful and a little heavy. But she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life. She always tells me “honesty is the best policy” and “no pain, no gain”. My mother loves me and tries to give me a comfortable environment to study and live in. She also understands me and treats me as a friend. From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind. I love my mother. Although she is ordinary, she is the person I admire most.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首句点题，说明最钦佩的人是妈妈；
第二步，具体阐述钦佩妈妈的原因；
第三步，最后讲述从妈妈身上学到的以及表达对妈妈喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①honesty is the best policy诚实为上策
②try to do sth尽量去做某事
③give sb sth给某人某物
[高分句型]
①Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life.（although引导让步状语从句）
②From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind.（with复合结构）
16．例文：
A Gift to My Mother
Mother’s Day is coming. I want to give my mother a surprise. I’ll buy a special gift for her. I know she likes listening to music. But she is too busy every day. She is busy working and taking care of her family, and she has no time to do what she likes. So I want to buy an MP4 for her with my lucky money. I hope she won’t be so tired. She can listen to music after work to relax herself. I think it’s the best gift for her.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍给妈妈的一件礼物。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明在即将来临的母亲节要送母亲一份礼物。
第二步，介绍要送的礼物及原因。
第三步，总结母亲一定会喜欢这个礼物的。
[亮点词汇]
①give my mother a surprise给母亲一个惊喜
②be busy doing忙于做某事
③take care of 照顾
[高分句型]
①She is busy working and taking care of her family（and并列了两个动名词作宾语）
②I hope she won’t be so tired.（省略that的宾语从句）
17．例文
A different teacher
There are many different people or things in my mind. But my English teacher Mr. Li is very different. He is very friendly to us and always answers our questions patiently.
I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8. He asked me to take part in running race. I told him that I didn’t run fast, so I couldn’t participate in it. The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first. After listening to his words, I tried my best to exercise after school. With his encouragement and my persistence, I gained the third prize. What’s more, he is like a friend to me. When I have some trouble, he will give me some useful advice.
I feel very happy to have such a good teacher.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据题干中的提示介绍一个与众不同的人或物，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表示对自己来说英语老师是与众不同的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述他是什么样子的以及为什么他是与众不同的；
第三步，书写结语。表达“很高兴有这样一位老师”。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好；
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first.（that引导的宾语从句以及if引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文：
The Hero in My Heart
Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart.
He was born in 1930 and died at the age of 91. Mr. Yuan spent nearly 60 years doing research on better rice in order to make people in the world have enough food. And he was successful! He was honored as Father of Hybrid Rice.
I think Mr. Yuan was a great man. He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him.
As a student, I have decided not to waste any food from now on. Also, I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. When I grow up, I’ll work hard for our country like him.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文话题已给出，介绍心目中的英雄，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题引出自己心目中的英雄；
第二步，详细介绍其基本情况并介绍他都做了什么事；
第三步，写你为什么崇拜他；
第四步，写你从他身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁
②in order to为了
③be honored as被授予
④study harder更努力地学习
[高分句型]
①I think Mr.Yuan was a great man.（宾语从句）
②He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
③I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. （so that引导的目的状语从句）
19．参考范文：
My favourite city
My favourite city is Dalian. It’s in the northeast of China. Now the population of Dalian is more than six million. Dalian is on the coast and it’s especially famous for its sea food. Of course, Dalian is a good place to have a holiday. There, the weather is fine. It’s not hot in summer and not cold in winter. And it has got many interesting places, such as Laohutan Ocean Park, Bangchui Island and Dalian Modern Museum.
Dalian is a beautiful city, and I like it best.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍我最喜欢的城市。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我最喜欢的城市是什么，以及什么让它成为你最喜欢的城市；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
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