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2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期末复习专项北师大版（2024）（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．请根据以下要点提示，写一篇关于你最喜欢的动物——大熊猫的短文。
要点：
1.大熊猫是中国的象征之一，黑白相间，看起来很可爱；
2.它们生活在中国四川、陕西等地的森林和山区；
3.它们喜欢吃竹子，每天花很多时间吃东西；
4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure)，友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护它们。
要求：
1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3.词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world
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2．假如你是李华，你正在为太原文旅创作短视频脚本，你想为这座历史悠久的城市拍摄哪些画面呢？漫步迎泽公园，捕捉晨练者踏歌而行；移步汾河之畔，可见垂钓者静守一杆悠然；骑行者追封掠影而过，野餐家庭铺展美食共享温馨……请选择一个时间点，描述一下当时的天气，人们的活动与感受。
太原的鲜活与诗意，正在你的笔下慢慢展开。
1. What time is it now and how’s the weather in Taiyuan
2. What are people doing and how do they feel
3. What do you think of Taiyuan
要求：
1. 内容包括以上所有要点，可适当补充，语句通顺，行文连贯。
2. 词数不少于60词。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。
4. 开头结尾已给出。
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3．假如你是李华，你准备参加学校英语角举办的“家乡美”征文大赛。请您根据以下写作要点和写作要求，以“My hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
写作要点：
1) 你的家乡在哪？
2) 你家乡四季的天气如何？
3) 每个季节你喜欢做什么？
写作要求：
1) 短文须包含以上所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；
3) 词数60左右。
My hometown
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4．上个月，你所在的社区举办了“邻里创意日”（Neighbourhood Creativity Day），号召大家用简单的材料为社区做一件有创意的事。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文分享你的经历。
提示：1. When was the Neighbourhood Creativity Day
2. What did you make for your neighbourhood
3. Who did you give it to or what did you do with it in the neighbourhood
4. How did you and your neighbours feel about it
注意：1. 必须涵盖以上提示的所有内容，可适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名：
3. 词数70词左右。
My Neighbourhood Creativity Day
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5．英语老师布置了作业：拍摄一个英语短视频，主题是“江滩徒步的美好时光”。假设你是李欣，请你以“Wonderful Time on Riverside Beach”为题，根据以下内容提示，用英语从此刻的天气、同学们的活动和江滩上其他人的活动写一篇英语短视频脚本。
内容提示：
What’s the weather like now
What are your classmates and you doing now
What else are people doing at the Riverside Park
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数80词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Wonderful Time on Riverside Beach
Hello everyone! It’s 2:30 p.m. now. We are at the Riverside Beach.
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6．假如你是阳光社区的志愿者李蕾，上周日你在社区内做了一些事情。请你根据表格提示，以“My Day as a Volunteer”为题用英语写一篇短文介绍活动情况并表达感悟。
提示词语：reusable bag环保袋，recycle v. 循环利用，separate v. 分离
Time Activities
In the morning tell an old lady the directions to go to the market
At noon advise shoppers to use reusable bags
In the afternoon clean up the park, pick up bottles, separate waste
写作要求：
1.文中须包含表格内的要点提示，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右（题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Day as a Volunteer
Hello! I’m Li Lei, a volunteer. Last Sunday I helped in our community.
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7．假如今天是星期六，是个阳光明媚的日子，你和家人都在家中度过。请你以“What are my family doing ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
·what you and your family are doing at the moment
·your favorite family activity and the reason
·your feelings about family time
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
What are my family doing
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8．假如你是李华，你的好友Peter想了解你校的外出活动。请你用英语写一封邮件，告诉他你们去了哪里，做了什么以及你的感受或收获。
提示词语：park, fly kites, take photos, exciting
提示问题：●Where did you go
●What did you do during the trip
●How did you feel about the trip
Dear Peter,
I’d like to tell you something about the school trip last week.
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　　Do you have anything funny to share Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
　　今天是周六，你和你的父母正在阳光农场。请你用英语描述一下你们一家在农场里所做的事情。
提示词语：fresh, busy, farming, pick, ride
提示问题：
What’s the weather like today
What are you doing
How do you feel
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10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
在我们的日常生活中，养成健康的饮食习惯是非常重要的。某英文网站正在开展以“健康饮食”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的饮食习惯，你对于健康饮食的看法以及养成健康饮食习惯的方法。
提示词语：vegetables, meat, drink, different, junk food
提示问题：
What do you think of healthy eating
What do you usually eat Why
How can we have a healthy eating habit
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11．学校的英文报刊正以“My living habits”为题征文。假如你是李华，请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇短文投稿，介绍一下自己的生活习惯及其对自己的影响。
内容提示：
1. 饮食习惯 (如均衡饮食、从不吃快餐)；
2. 运动习惯 (如喜欢的运动及运动频率)；
3. 作息习惯 (如早睡早起)。
要求：
1. 文中必须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 70词左右。
My living habits
My name is Li Hua. I have some good living habits.
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12．Write at least 60 words according to the title “________ added spice to my life”.
我们的生活因为很多美好的事物而多姿多彩。请以“________让我的生活有滋有味！”为题，结合自己的经历，写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格；照抄阅读语篇不得分。
请在答题纸上将标题写完整，文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。
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13．拥有健康的身体对于我们而言非常重要。假设你是李华，下周你们学校准备举办主题为“How to keep healthy”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿呼吁同学们健康生活。
1. 拥有良好的饮食习惯。（一日吃三餐很重要。多吃水果和蔬菜，不要吃太多甜食和快餐食品等）
2. 坚持运动。（描述自己最喜欢的运动，以及运动的好处等）
3. 早起早睡，不要熬夜。（每天九点钟睡觉，七点起床。好的睡眠可以帮助我们专注学习等）
要求：1. 包括所有提示内容，内容充实；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 80字左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Key phrases:
l. 坚持做某事：keep doing sth, 2. 熬夜：stay up,
2. 早起早睡：go to bed early and get up early
How to keep healthy
Hi, I’m Li Hua. It’s very important for us to have a healthy body. Today, I want to tell you something about how to keep healthy.
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14．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
你们学校将举办“Small Steps, Big changes（小行动，大改变）”的英文征文比赛。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文，从饮食、体育锻炼等方面分享你为完善自我（improve myself）都做了哪些事，以及这样做的原因。提示词语：eating habits, sports, work hard, healthy
提示问题：
1.What do you do to improve yourself
2. Why do you do so
Small daily actions can make a big difference to our life.
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15．公众健康日 (7月7日)，旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高， 健康越来越受到重视。你们准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容， 准备一篇题为“How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life”的演讲稿。
How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life
身体健康 1. 健康饮食；2. 适当锻炼；3. 充足睡眠。
希望 …… (至少一点)
注意事项：
1. 文章需包含表格中内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life
Hi, my dear classmates,
Now we must focus on our health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
16．假如你上周参加了学校的运动会，在长跑比赛中发生了一件使你难忘的事情。在运动会总结会上，你讲述了事情的经过并表达了自己的感受。请你根据以下提示，用英文写一篇发言稿。
1. 一开始紧张，感到不舒服；
2. 跑步时胃痛，摔倒在地；
3. 同学加油，老师鼓励，不放弃；
4. 最后冲过终点线，尽管没有获奖，但为自己感到骄傲；
5. 表达自己的感受。
要求：(1) 词数：70词左右；
(2) 短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：不舒服的awful
Hello, everyone,
I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week.
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That’s all. Thank you!
17．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学周健的感人故事。
(1) 周健的长发留了两年多。
(2) 人们常常在背后议论他的长发，有时候还会嘲笑他。不过他从来不觉得丢脸。
(3) 上周，周健去了一家理发店。理发师剪短了他的头发，并把头发给他。
(4) 周健把头发寄给了市儿童医院。
(5) 周健帮助了患癌儿童。他的头发足够做二顶假发。
(6) 你认为……
提示词：the City Children’s Hospital市儿童医院
要求：
(1) 词数：80词左右。
(2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．一群来自英国的交换生想要参观你的家乡无锡，你将作为他们本次行程的导游。请以“A Travel Guide to My Hometown”为题，写一篇90词左右的英文短文。要点如下：
General information Where is it What’s it like
Places to visit What are the places of interest to visit What can visitors see or do there How can people get there How long does it take
Local folk art Are there any kinds of folk art What’s special about the local folk art What’s the cultural value of it
Hello, everyone! Welcome to my hometown Wuxi
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19．假设你是Tom，五一假期期间你想邀请你的朋友David和你一起参加你们社区的志愿者活动。根据下列信息，用英语写一封邀请信。
社区介绍 社区的环境—鸟语花香；社区的人……
地理位置 在灵山的北部，离六峰湖公园 (the Liufeng Lake Park) 约500米，从你家骑自行车10分钟可以到达。
志愿活动 辅导学生作业……（至少3项活动）
要求：
1、短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3、词数80字左右；
4、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear David,
May Day is coming. There will be a helping hands activity at our community centre during the holiday.
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Yours,
Tom
20．假如你是复兴，参加一次国际夏令营，在一次“健康生活伴我一生”活动上要求每个人分享一下自己的生活习惯。请根据以下关键词结合所学知识完成写作任务。
always never three times a week make my bed clean and tidy eating
vegetables on time junk food(垃圾食品) health meals keep healthy
要求：
1.关键词已给出，可以适当增加细节，词数大约80字左右。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等。
3.开头已给出，请续写即可。
Hello I’m FuXing from China, I am 13 years old. Let me share my living habits with you.
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Pandas are one of China’s symbols, with their cute black-and-white fur. They mainly live in the forests and mountains of Sichuan and Shaanxi.
Pandas love eating bamboo and spend most of their day eating. They are China’s national treasure and a symbol of friendship. Sadly, there are only about 2,000 pandas left in the world, so we must protect them. I hope these lovely animals can live happily forever!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题目要求介绍了大熊猫的特征、栖息地、习性及保护现状，以第一人称表达个人情感；
[写作步骤]
第一步：通过对比引出最喜爱的大熊猫；
第二步：分三点说明大熊猫特征（外貌、栖息地、饮食）；
第三步：强调保护意义并表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
① black-and-white fur 黑白相间的皮毛
② national treasure 国宝
③ symbol of friendship 友谊的象征
[高分句型]
I hope these lovely animals can live happily forever!（宾语从句）
2．例文
It’s eight o’clock on Sunday morning. The weather is sunny.
I am walking in Yingze Park. There are many people in the park. They all feel relaxed and comfortable. Some people are doing morning exercise. Some people are playing the erhu. Some people are dancing. Some people are playing basketball. Some people are running. Some people are playing ping-pong.
I like Taiyuan very much. I think it is both beautiful and suitable for living.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍太原的时间和天气；
第二步，描述人们的活动与感受；
第三步，介绍自己对太原的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①both...and...既……又……
②be suitable for适合
[高分句型]
I think Taiyuan is both beautiful and suitable for living.(宾语从句)
3．例文
My hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city in the south of China.
In spring, it’s warm and sunny. I like flying kites in the park. Summer is hot, and I often go swimming in the river. Autumn brings cool days, and I enjoy taking a walk in the countryside to admire the golden leaves. Winter is mild, and I love making snowmen when it snows.
I really love my hometown.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本次征文大赛题材为描述家乡的记叙文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时，用于描述家乡四季天气及个人喜好等一般事实；
③提示：考生需涵盖写作要点中家乡位置、四季天气、各季节喜好活动等内容，可适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图：开篇点明家乡位置，引出对家乡的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容：按季节顺序，依次描述家乡四季天气，以及在每个季节喜欢进行的活动 。例如春天温暖晴朗，喜欢在公园放风筝；夏天炎热，常去河里游泳；秋天凉爽，享受在乡间漫步赏叶；冬天温和，下雪时爱堆雪人；
③第三步，书写结语：结尾表达对家乡的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of在……南部
②fly kites放风筝
③go swimming去游泳
④take a walk散步
⑤make snowmen堆雪人
[高分句型]
①In spring, it’s warm and sunny. I like flying kites in the park. (使用like doing sth.句型，自然描述季节天气和喜好活动)
②Winter is mild, and I love making snowmen when it snows.(时间状语从句)
4．范文
My Neighbourhood Creativity Day
Last month, our community held the Neighbourhood Creativity Day on a sunny Sunday. I decided to make a “community story wall” using old wooden boards and colorful paints. First, I collected funny stories and photos from my neighbors, then painted them on the boards. Finally, I set up the wall near the community garden. Neighbors loved gathering around to read the stories and share laughter. An elderly lady even said it made the community feel like a warm family.
Seeing everyone smile, I felt proud that my small creation brought us closer together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：严格覆盖题目要求的所有要点，并通过“收集故事”、“花园布置”等细节拓展内容，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明“上个月社区在周日举办创意日”；
第二步，详述说明制作“社区故事墙”的材料、步骤，并交代物品的用途；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①collect...from从……收集
②set up搭建、布置
③bringt us closer together让我们更亲近
[高分句型]
①I decided to make a “community story wall” using old wooden boards and colorful paints.（现在分词作方式状语）
②Neighbors loved gathering around to read the stories and share laughter.（动词不定式作目的状语）
③Seeing everyone smile, I felt proud that my small creation brought us closer together.（that引导宾语从句）
5．例文
Wonderful Time on Riverside Beach
Hello everyone! It’s 2:30 p.m. now. We are at the Riverside Beach. The weather is sunny and warm. My classmates and I are walking and talking happily. Some are taking photos, and others are picking up shells by the river.
At the Riverside Park, many people are enjoying their time too. Some are flying kites, and some are riding bikes. A few families are having picnics on the grass.
We all love this beautiful place. It’s a wonderful day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“现在进行时”；
③提示：围绕在河边海滩和公园的活动，描述当下场景中人物的行为及环境氛围。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代时间、地点及天气，描述我和同学在海滩的活动；
第二步，扩展至河边公园的场景，介绍不同人群的活动；
第三步，表达对环境的喜爱，总结这是美好的一天。
[亮点词汇]
①sunny and warm晴朗温暖
②pick up shells捡贝壳
③have picnics野餐
④wonderful美好的
[高分句型]
①My classmates and I are walking and talking happily. (现在进行时结构)
②Some are taking photos, and others are picking up shells by the river. (some...others...)
6．例文
My Day as a Volunteer
Hello! I’m Li Lei, a volunteer. Last Sunday I helped in our community. In the morning, I told an old lady the directions to go to the market. She thanked me a lot. At noon, I found some shoppers didn’t use the reusable bags, so I advised them to use the reusable bags. They all accepted my advice. In the afternoon, I cleaned up the park and picked up the bottles. I also helped to separate the waste. I was busy but very happy. I think it’s meaningful to do some voluntary work. It can help others and make our community better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，紧接开头继续写作；
第二步，根据表格提示讲述在社区内做的一些事情；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the directions to方向
②go to the market去市场
③pick up拿起
④clean up清理
[高分句型]
①I found some shoppers didn’t use the reusable bags, so I advised them to use the reusable bags.（so引导的句子）
②I think it’s meaningful to do some voluntary work.（宾语从句）
7．例文：
What are my family doing
It’s a sunny Saturday, and my family and I are having a great time at home.
My father is in the living room. He’s watching a documentary about nature on TV, his eyes full of interest. My mother is in the kitchen, baking a cake. The sweet smell fills the whole house. I’m sitting on the balcony, reading a science-fiction book, lost in the amazing plots.
My favorite family activity is playing board games together in the evening. It’s a time when we can all laugh, compete and cooperate. We share jokes and stories during the game, which makes our relationship closer.
Family time is invaluable. It gives me a sense of belonging and makes me feel loved. I really enjoy these moments with my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，描述了周六一家人在家的活动情况。
②时态：主要时态为 “现在进行时”。
③提示：描述此刻家人正在做的事、最喜欢的家庭活动及原因和对家庭时光的感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明时间是阳光明媚的周六，一家人在家过得很愉快。
第二步，中间分别描述父亲、母亲和 “我” 此刻正在进行的活动，接着介绍最喜欢的家庭活动是晚上一起玩桌游以及原因。
第三步，结尾表达家庭时光很宝贵，自己很享受和家人在一起的时刻。
[亮点词汇]
①documentary 纪录片
②invaluable 非常宝贵的；极有价值的
③a sense of belonging 归属感
④lost in 沉浸于；迷失在
[高分句型]
①He’s watching a documentary about nature on TV, his eyes full of interest.（运用独立主格结构“his eyes full of interest”。）
②We share jokes and stories during the game, which makes our relationship closer.（运用了“which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
8．例文
Dear Peter,
I’d like to tell you something about the school trip last week. We went to Star Park, which is famous for its long history and nice views.
We went to the park by bus and we had some interesting activities. After arriving there, the guide told us about the history of the park. Then she taught us how to make a kite. It was a little windy, just right for flying kites. We had great fun and took a lot of wonderful photos.
　　In my opinion, the trip was exciting and meaningful. I not only learned how to make kites but also shared a great moment with my classmates. I enjoyed it very much.
Do you have anything funny to share Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己上周的学校旅行；
第二步，具体介绍在学校旅行中参加的活动及感受；
第三步，书写结语，期待来信。
[亮点词汇]
①fly kites放风筝
②took photos照相
③in my opinion在我看来
④not only...but also...不但……而且……
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We went to Star Park, which is famous for its long history and nice views. (定语从句)
9．例文：
It is Saturday today. It is sunny and cool. I am on Sunshine Farm with my parents. The air here is fresh. Many farmers are busy with their work. My father is talking about farming with the farmers. My mother is picking strawberries. I’m practicing riding a horse. It’s the first time that I’ve ridden a horse. I’m a little nervous but excited.
What an exciting day it is! I feel happy and excited. I hope to come here again next time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；
③提示：按照材料所给内容完成写作，注意时态切换，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍天气情况；
第二步，描述一家人在农场所做的事情；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with sth.忙于某事
②practice doing sth.练习做某事
③talk about谈论
[高分句型]
①It’s the first time that I’ve ridden a horse. （“It’s the first time that...” 句型）
②What an exciting day it is! （感叹句）
10．例文
I think healthy eating is very important because it helps us stay strong and energetic. For breakfast, I usually eat eggs and drink milk. For lunch and dinner, I eat different kinds of food like vegetables, meat, and rice. I like vegetables because they have vitamins, and I eat meat for protein.
To have a healthy eating habit, we should eat balanced meals and avoid too much junk food like chips or soda. Drinking enough water is also important. We must eat on time and not skip meals.
Let’s choose healthy food and say no to bad eating habits!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：需包含三个提示问题的回答，合理运用提示词语，注意饮食建议的实用性。
[写作步骤]
第一步：提出健康饮食的重要性；
第二步：描述个人日常饮食习惯及原因；
第三步：给出养成健康饮食习惯的具体建议；
第四步：总结呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
① stay strong and energetic 保持强壮和精力充沛
② balanced meals 均衡的饮食
③ avoid too much 避免过量
④ say no to 对……说不
[高分句型]
I think healthy eating is very important because it helps us stay strong and energetic.（because引导原因状语从句）
11．范文：
My living habits
My name is Li Hua. I have some good living habits.
I really love eating healthy food. I often eat vegetables and fruit. They taste good and are good for my body. I never eat junk food because it’s bad for my health. I love playing sports, too. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. It’s fun and makes me strong. And I always sleep and get up early. I sleep eight hours every night because I think enough sleep is good for our health. I also know that enough sleep helps me study better.
I believe my habits are nice. What about yours
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意按内容提示写，需涵盖饮食习惯、运动习惯、作息习惯等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出自己的良好生活习惯；
第二步，分别从饮食习惯 (爱吃健康食物、不吃垃圾食品)、运动习惯 (常和朋友打篮球)、作息习惯 (早睡早起、保证八小时睡眠) 几方面进行阐述，并说明这些习惯对自己的积极影响；
第三步，书写结语，表达对自己生活习惯的认可，并询问读者的生活习惯。
[亮点词汇]
① be good for 对……有益
② play basketball 打篮球
③ get up 起床
④ enough sleep 充足的睡眠
[高分句型]
① I never eat junk food because it’s bad for my health. (含有原因状语从句的复合句)
② I sleep eight hours every night because I think enough sleep is good for our health. (含有原因状语从句和宾语从句的复合句)
12．例文：
Reading added spice to my life
Reading makes my life colorful. Every day after school, I spend half an hour reading books. Last month I read The Little Prince. The story taught me to value friendship. When I feel lonely, reading cheers me up. I also share interesting stories with my classmates. Through books, I can visit different countries and meet various characters. Reading is like adding spices to my life. It makes ordinary days special!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，穿插一般过去时描述具体事件；
③提示：需结合自身经历，突出所选事物如何丰富生活，避免空洞描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步：补全标题并点题。直接表明“阅读”让生活多彩，呼应标题；
第二步：具体阐述。通过日常习惯(每日阅读)、具体事例(《小王子》的启示)、情感体验(驱散孤独)、社交分享(与同学互动)和想象拓展(书中世界)多角度展开；
第三步：升华主题。用比喻总结阅读的作用，强调其改变生活的力量。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer sb. up 使某人振作
②value friendship 珍视友谊
③through books 通过书籍
④various characters 多样的人物
⑤ordinary days 平凡的日子
[高分句型]
①The story taught me to value friendship. (动词不定式作宾语补足语)
②When I feel lonely, reading cheers me up. (when引导时间状语从句)
13．例文
How to keep healthy
Hi, I’m Li Hua. It’s very important for us to have a healthy body. Today, I want to tell you something about how to keep healthy. I think we should have some good habits which are good for a good body and mind.
First, healthy eating habits can help me to keep fit. It is important to have three meals. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat too many sweets or too much fast food. Second, we should keep on doing exercise, too. I like playing badminton after school. It keeps me fit and makes me strong. Third, We should go to bed early and get up early. Don’t stay up. I sleep for 10 hours every day. It is easy to focus on work and studies when I have a good sleep.
All in all, health is important for us. Let us have good habits together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，给出健康生活的几点建议；
第三步，总结健康的重要性并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit保持健康
②too much太多
[高分句型]
①It is easy to focus on work and studies when I have a good sleep.（时间状语从句）
②It is important to have three meals. （it固定句型）
14．例文
Small daily actions can make a big difference to our life. I do various things to improve myself. First, I keep a balanced diet. I try to have a glass of milk every day and eat less junk food. Second, taking exercise is another way for me to keep healthy. I engage in regular physical activities such as running, swimming, and playing basketball. These sports not only keep me fit but also help me relieve stress and focus better on my studies.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，总述为完善自己做了很多事；
第二步，具体阐述自己在饮食方面的改变；
第三步，具体阐述自己在运动方面的改变。
[亮点词汇]
①a balanced diet均衡饮食
②try to do sth努力做某事
③engage in参与
[高分句型]
①Second, taking exercise is another way for me to keep healthy.（动名词短语作主语）
15．范文
How to live a healthy and happy lifeHi, my dear classmates,
Now we must focus on our health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day.
I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕学生如何过上健康快乐的生活展开论述，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言简洁明了。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出问题，明确指出学生要关注自身健康，引出如何过上健康快乐生活的话题；
第二步，从饮食、运动和睡眠三个方面详细阐述保持身体健康的方法，给出具体可行的建议；
第三步，表达期望，希望大家拥有健康身心，过上健康快乐生活，结尾简洁有力。
[亮点词汇]
①focus on关注
②proper适当的
③meanwhile同时
[高分句型]
Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. (not only…but also…引导的倒装句)
16．例文
Hello, everyone,
I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week.
At first, I felt nervous and awful before the long-distance race. During the race, I had a stomachache and fell down. But my classmates cheered for me, and my teacher encouraged me not to give up. With their support, I stood up and kept running. Finally, I crossed the finish line. Though I didn’t win a prize, I felt proud of myself.
This experience taught me that perseverance and kindness are more important than winning.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，另起一段；
第二步：详细介绍自己参加长跑比赛的经过；
第三步：介绍自己的感受并承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①cheered for me为我欢呼
②give up放弃
③With their support在他们的支持下
[高分句型]
①Though I didn’t win a prize, I felt proud of myself. (Though引导的让步状语从句)
②This experience taught me that perseverance and kindness are more important than winning. (that引导的宾语从句)
17．例文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Zhou Jian.
Zhou Jian kept his long hair for over two years, even though many people gossiped or laughed at him. He never felt ashamed. Last week, he finally went to a barber. After cutting his hair, the barber gave it to him. Surprisingly, Zhou mailed his hair to the City Children’s Hospital to help cancer patients. His donation could make two wigs!
I think his act teaches us that true kindness often requires courage. Instead of judging appearances, we should appreciate people’s hearts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，另起一段；
第二步：详细介绍周建的感人事迹；
第三步：介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①even though尽管
②laughed at him嘲笑他
③Instead of代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①Zhou Jian kept his long hair for over two years, even though many people gossiped or laughed at him. (even though引导的让步状语从句)
②I think his act teaches us that true kindness often requires courage. (that引导的宾语从句)
18．范文：
A Travel Guide to My Hometown
Hello, everyone! Welcome to my hometown Wuxi. It is a city in Jiangsu Province, in the east of China. It is a city by the Taihu Lake.
Among the places of interest in Wuxi, Yuantouzhu is well worth visiting. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there. You can also row a boat on the Taihu Lake to enjoy the nice view. Usually, it takes about an hour to get there by bus from the city centre.
In Wuxi, we have a traditional craft called Huishan Clay Figurines. They are made by hand and have simple shapes and bright colours. Huishan clay figures are a symbol of the spirit of Chinese craftspeople.
I hope you enjoy your trip to Wuxi and have a wonderful time here!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇宣传家乡旅游的材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，需根据问题提示回答家乡特点、著名旅游景点、当地民间艺术等，注意适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡地理位置特点；
第二步，介绍家乡著名旅游景点；
第三步，介绍一种当地民间艺术；
第四步，呼吁人们来家乡旅游。
[亮点词汇]
① well worth visiting 值得参观的
② traditional craft 传统工艺
③ symbol 标志
④ wonderful 精彩的
[高分句型]
① Usually, it takes about an hour to get there by bus from the city centre. （It takes some time to do sth. 句型）
② I hope you enjoy your trip to Wuxi and have a wonderful time here!（宾语从句）
19．例文：
Dear David,
May Day is coming. There will be a helping hands activity at our community centre during the holiday.
Our community, located in the north of Lingshan Mountain, is surrounded by singing birds and fragrant flowers. People here are friendly and helpful. It’s only 500 meters from Liufeng Lake Park, just a 10-minute bike ride from your home.
There are many things we can do to help people. We will help the students with their homework. we can help the old people clean their house and do some shopping for them. Some parents are busy working, we can help them look after their baby.
I hope you will join in this helping hands activity.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要求”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述要做的志愿活动；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望David参与志愿活动”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be surrounded by被……所包围
②help sb with在某方面帮助某人
③look after照顾
④join in加入
[高分句型]
①Our community, located in the north of Lingshan Mountain, is surrounded by singing birds and fragrant flowers.（过去分词作后置定语）
②I hope you will join in this helping hands activity.(宾语从句)
20． Hello I’m Fu Xing from China, I am 13 years old. Let me share my living habits with you. I always make my bed after getting up to keep my room clean and tidy. I do morning exercises three times a week, like running and jumping rope. When it comes to eating, I never choose junk food. Instead, I enjoy fresh vegetables and healthy meals prepared by my mom. Eating on time is also important to me. These habits help me stay energetic and keep healthy. Remember, small daily actions can make big differences!
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，介绍自己；
第二步，根据提示词，介绍自己的日常生活习惯；
第三步，书写结语，强调健康的重要性。
【亮点词汇】①do morning exercise晨练
②energetic有活力的
③make big differences产生重大影响
【高分句型】①Eating on time is also important to me.（动名词作主语）
②Remember, small daily actions can make big differences!（祈使句）
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