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Unit 7 A Day to Remember
谈论学校旅行
本单元的话题是“学校旅行”，要求能描述学校旅行期间所发生的事情及个人感受。写作时，首先要注意正确使用一般过去时；其次要注意使用正确的人称；最后要注意交代事情发生的时间、经过、个人感受和所学到的东西等
Friday, 30 May
Today we went on … great fun!
In the morning, we explored ... with my hands.
One thing I … really a day to remember.
How many parts can Sam’s diary be
divided into
Date
Beginning
Body
Ending
4 parts
Today we went on a school trip to a farm!
It was tiring but great fun!
What are the main points of each part
Beginning
= What did he do
+ Where did he go
+ How did he feel
Body
=
When
+
What did he see
+
What did he do
+
What did he learn
+
How did he feel
In the morning, we explored the farm.
There were large tents with ...
The farmer told us about …
I was very interested because …
Then we got straight ...
The work … get it right.
Slowly, we filled …
In the afternoon, the farmer taught us …
Finally, we watered …
Plants need … working with my hands.
One thing I learnt …
It made me think of the saying …
My mum … they were fresh and delicious!
They certainly taste … work for them!
Today was really a day to remember.
Ending
= What did he learn
+ How did he feel
How do we write a diary about school trip
Beginning
Body
Ending
School
trip
Where did you go
How did you feel
When was the activity
What did you do/ see
What did you learn
How did you feel
What did you learn
How did you feel
审题立意
假如你是李华，上周日你们班组织了一次学校旅行。请你用英文写一篇日记，记录一下此次的学校旅行。日记内容包括旅行地点、所见所闻、个人感受以及所学到的东西等。
要求：
1.日记必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使内容通顺、完整；
2.70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Sunday,25 May
Our class went on a school trip to a farm last Sunday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：以一般过去时为主
谋篇布局
开门见山
具体介绍所见所闻
个人感受和学到的东西
Our class went on a school trip to...
At the start,we...
Then we...
In the afternoon, we learnt how to...
I felt....
I learnt a lot about......
I used to...but now....
积句成篇
词汇储备
meet up with 和······碰头 go on a school trip 参加学校旅行
visit a science museum 参观科学博物馆 used to 过去常常（做）
turn...into...将······变成······ pick strawberries 摘草莓
take photos 拍照 interested in 对······感兴趣
go to an exhibition 去看展览 talk to robots和机器人说话
agree with 赞成；同意 from...to...从······到······
water the plants 给植物浇水 not...at all 一点也不；完全不
句型荟萃
开头句：
Our class went on a school trip to ....我们班学校旅行去了.....
I had a(n) amazing/good/bad/terrible day today.
我今天度过了很棒/美好/不好/糟糕的一天。
中间句：
It was sunny／rainy／cloudy／windy...
天气晴朗／下雨／多云／多风······
We learnt a lot about... 我们了解了很多关于······（的知识）。
We saw／visited／explored... 我们看见／参观／探索了······
We had fun／had a great time... 我们······玩得很开心。
结尾句：
We felt tired but happy. 我们感到很累，但很高兴。
What a（n）（...）day！ 多么······的一天啊！
It was a really tiring but exciting/interesting/...trip.
这是一次虽然累人但是令人兴奋的／有趣的／······旅行。
Today was really a day to remember. 今天真是值得纪念的一天。
名言警句：
You reap what you sow.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
Every grain comes from hard work.粒粒皆辛苦。
It is better to travel 10,000 miles than to read 10,000 books.
读万卷书不如行万里路。
范文欣赏
Sunday, 25 May
Our class went on a school trip to a farm last Sunday. It was a really tiring but interesting trip.
At the start, we explored the farm. There were a large number of fruits and vegetables. Then we picked strawberries and watered the plants. In the afternoon,We learnt how to cut branches and leaves from plants. Although the work seemed easy, it needed so much work !
I felt tired but happy today. I learned a lot about farming. I used to think it was easy to do farming,but now I realize it is so hard.We should remember the saying: “ every grain comes from hard work.”
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