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(共13张PPT)
Unit 2 School life
写作提优练
【写作导引】
本单元以“学校生活”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①校园设施与环境；② 介绍学习与活动；③就如何改善学校生活提出建议。
【写作任务】
假设你是某国际学校的学生会成员李华，发现学校图书馆存在以下问题：
1.开放时间较短，无法满足学生课后需求； 2. 科技类书籍陈旧；3. 缺少安静学习区。
请以学生会名义给王校长写一封9 0 词左右的建议信。
【精彩范文】
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on how to improve our school library.
First, I would like to suggest keeping 1 the library open longer. If it stays open until 6:30 p.m. , more students can study or borrow books after school. 3 Second, I think it will be a good idea to add new books. 4
Many books in the library are old, especially in science and technology. Buying newer books and popular storybooks would make students more interested in reading. Moreover, I have a suggestion for creating a quiet area. A special quiet space would help students who need to pay attention to 2 their homework or exams. 5
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. These changes can make our library more helpful and fun. Thank you for reading my ideas!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点词块
1 suggest doing 建议做……
2 pay attention to 专心于
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3 含if 引导的条件状语从句
4 含省略that 的宾语从句
5 含who 引导的定语从句
跟踪演练
假设你是一名八年级学生张伟，请根据下面提示给张校长写一封建议信，针对学校生活的多个方面提出改进建议，词数不少于90。
要点： 1. 早晨到校时间过早（7:30 开始上课，学生疲惫）；2. 食堂饭菜质量不佳（部分菜品不美味、不健康）；3. 图书馆藏书不足（缺乏有趣的新书）；4. 体育设施有限（如仅有1 个篮球场）。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
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Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am writing to make some suggestions to improve our school life. I hope these ideas can help make our school a better place for everyone.
First, I think the time when school starts is too early. Many students feel tired because classes begin at 7:30 a.m. If school starts at 8:00 a.m., we can get enough sleep and study better.
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Second, the food in the dining hall needs to be better. Some dishes are not tasty or healthy. Adding more fruits, vegetables, and different kinds of meals would make students happier and healthier.
Also, our library needs more books. Many students enjoy reading, but there are not enough interesting books. If the library buys new books every month, more students will visit and learn new things.
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Finally, I suggest adding more sports facilities. For example, our school has only one basketball court. Building more courts or buying equipment like jump ropes and balls can help students exercise and stay active.
I hope you will consider these suggestions. Thank you for your time and hard work!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei

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