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备战2024-2025年七年级英语下期期末高频易错考点专练（仁爱版）
专题07 书面表达20篇（期末必刷）
1．假定你是李华，你校英文报正在进行以“My Last Weekend”为题的征文活动。请根据以下表格提示内容，向大家介绍你的周末活动。
时间 周六上午 周六下午 周日白天 周日晚上
活动 去图书馆看书 去参加好朋友的生日派对 和家人去公园、踢足球、放风筝 做作业、看电影
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于60词。
My Last Weekend
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2．学校里有各种不同的社团，它们不仅为同学们的业余生活提供乐趣，而且也有助于同学们的成长。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一下你参加过的社团，谈谈你参加这个社团的原因以及你的看法。
提示词语：basketball, practice, make friends
提示问题：●What club did you join
●Why did you join the club
●What do you think of the club
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3．亲近大自然，不仅能够放松身体，还能滋养精神。
某英文网站在开展以“亲近大自然”为主题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你亲近大自然的一次经历，内容包括此次经历发生的时间、地点、活动内容及感受。
提示词语：park, see, walk, take photos, wonderful
提示问题：When and where did you go
What did you do there How did you feel
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4．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
快乐的暑假将要开始了，你一定有很多计划和想法吧！假如你是李华，请以“My Summer Holiday”为题写一篇短文，介绍你暑假计划做哪些活动以及做这些活动的原因。
提示词语：summer holiday, do homework, read books, housework, travel
提示问题：·What are you going to do in your summer holiday
·Why do you want to do these things
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5．学校开展主题为“青春须作为，书香趁年华”的“年度之星”评选活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示内容，写一封英语推荐信，推荐七年级三班的女同学Helen参加评选，希望她能顺利入选。
1．基本情况（性别、班级）；
2．外貌特征（长发、圆脸、高个）；
3．性格（友好、活泼、乐于助人）；
4．爱好（运动、读书、弹钢琴）。
注意：
1．必须包含以下所给要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，内容充实；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；
3．词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：recommend 推荐
Dear Headmaster,
Hearing that you are going to choose the star of the year, I’d like to recommend Helen.
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Li Hua
6．“朋友像生命中的一束光，使我们的生活更丰富，更温暖。”一学年的时光即将结束，你一定拥有许多新朋友和老朋友。校园简报开辟“My best friend”专栏，鼓励大家积极投稿。假如你是Nick，请根据表格内容提示，以“My best friend”为题，向大家介绍你的好友Andy。
简介 姓名、年龄、外貌
兴趣爱好 喜欢阅读……，喜爱户外活动……(举例说明)
个人能力 学习能力强……，考虑周全……
品行事迹 ①善良(典型事例说明) ②……
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括表格提示的所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：80词左右。
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My best friend
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7．假如你是 Li Hua，请根据下表所提示的内容，写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Han Dong（七年级一班）为今年的最美学子（The Most Beautiful Student）。
Han Dong hobbies reading, playing football...
abilities clever, learn things quickly...
personality helpful, kind...
What he does (did) collect clothes... for ...
give his seat to..., a girl lost her way...
注意：
1 词数 80左右（信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入字数）；
2.参考要点，可进行补充和拓展；
3.文中不得透露校名、真实姓名、地址等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to recommend Han Dong to be The Most Beautiful Student.
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So, I think Han Dong is the best person to be The Most Beautiful Student. I hope that you will agree with me.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
8．假如你叫罗阳，看到宠物俱乐部(the Pet Club)正在招收新成员，很想参加。请根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一申请书，表达你的意愿并恳请俱乐部考虑和答复。
个人信息 罗阳，13岁，阳光中学七年级一班
品质 善良，乐于助人(上周，他把一个79岁的老人从大火中救出)
其他情况 1. 喜爱户外活动，如…… 2. 喜欢动物，经常刷宠物狗的毛，带它去公园散步； 3. 正在看一本有关如何照顾宠物的书。
注意：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear Sir,
I read your poster yesterday. I am writing to tell you I’d like to be a new member of your club. My name is Luo Yang.
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I will be very happy if I can become a new member of your club. You can call me on 0527-85436688.
Yours truly,
Luo Yang
9．学期快结束了，你打算如何度过一个有意义的暑假？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的文章，介绍一下你的暑假安排。
学习方面 认真完成作业为新学年做好准备：多读书、勤练字等；
公益活动 参加小区的“援助之手俱乐部”；
其他方面 参加户外活动；多做运动； 和父母一起旅游； ……（可自由发挥）
Project Hope 希望工程 do handwriting 练字
注意：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整流畅。
My plans for the summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming. Here are my plans for the summer holiday.
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10．生活中有很多的精彩片段，请以“A wonderful ________” 为题，并按以下要点和要求写一篇短文分享你的一次经历。
要点：
1. 请把标题补充完整，如party, picnic, trip, lesson等。
2. 做了什么事情？
3. 你的感受如何？
要求：
1. 包含所给信息，可适当发挥，不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 60词左右。
A wonderful ________
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11．假如你是李华，上周六你参观了南充市博物馆，并结交了一位新朋友。请你给英国朋友Mike写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容如图所示：
要求：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和所在学校；
(2)适当增加细节，使行文连贯，内容充实；
(3)注意结构完整，过渡自然；
(4)不少于80词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to tell you the experience I had last Saturday. I visited Nanchong Museum.
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Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
12．假设你是李华，你校英文俱乐部举办题为“My Good Habits”的征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文，向大家介绍自己的良好生活习惯。
要求：
1.短文必须包括图中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2.文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3.词数60字左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Good Habits
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua.
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13．古人云：“读万卷书，行万里路。”假如你是李华，本周你需要在英语角活动上向大家分享你的一次旅行经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要求：
1. 参考要点内容，并适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于 80 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My trip to__________
Last Saturday, I took a trip to
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14．假定你是李华，为鹏程学校的英文报通讯员。为帮助学生们提高人生规划能力，你校将举办一次“职业体验日”活动。现校英文报主编请你写一篇关于该活动的英文通知，内容包括：
1.活动时间和地点：下周五上午9:00—12:00；学校操场；
2.活动内容：
①不同职业活动展示；
②……（自行补充2条）；
3.欢迎本校师生积极参加。
注意：
1.词数为80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节；
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：职业career；体验experience；建议suggestion；专业人士professional
Notice
Do you have any idea about your future career
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15．假如你校近期评选了一批2024年“新时代好少年”，你的同班同学Tom获得了这项称号，请你根据下表提示内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍一下他。
外貌 个子高，有一点瘦，头发短黑，戴眼镜
爱好 爱运动，弹钢琴，阅读……
性格 友善，开朗，乐于助人……
学习情况 最喜欢历史。每天花很多时间阅读历史书籍；经常帮助我学习英语……
主要事迹 经常参加志愿者活动，上周他就去参观了农场并帮农民伯伯做了一些农活。
简单说说你能从他身上学到什么。
要求：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）书写工整，80词左右，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
参考词汇：outgoing开朗；helpful乐于助人
Dear teachers and friends,
I think it’s my pleasure to talk about the Good Boy—Tom in our class.
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16．初中的第一个学年里，你认真学习做人做事，在学习、运动、文娱、劳动、人际交往等方面都有收获。请你用英语写一篇短文，给学校英文周刊“My Voice”专栏投稿，分享你的成长与计划。
内容要点：
1. 你现在会做的两件事情（如学习、运动、文娱或劳动等方面）；
2. 你平时如何做这些事情；
3. 你未来提升自我的计划。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：improve(v.提高), speak English(说英语), play basketball(打篮球), wash dishes(洗碗)
My life in middle school is very interesting and wonderful. I can learn many things. Now, I can _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Peter想了解你校近期的外出活动。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他你们去了哪里，做了什么以及你的感受或收获。
提示词语：park, fly a kite, take photos, exciting/excited
提示问题：
1. When and where did you go
2. What did you do in the trip
3. How did you feel (感受) or what did you learn from it
Dear Peter,
I’d like to tell you something about the school trip last week.
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Do you have anything fun to share (分享) Looking forward to (期待) your reply (回复).
Yours,
Li Hua
18．周末时光总是快乐而短暂的。我们应该合理安排周末时间，完成学习任务的同时放松自己，以最好的状态迎接新的一周的学习生活。请以“A Happy Weekend”为题，叙述你上一个周末的活动及感受。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名, 校名统一用Guangming Middle School;
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分；
4. 抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。
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19．暑期即将来临，如何度过一个丰富多彩又有意义的假期呢？烟台广播发起 “北大清华研学游” 的活动，下面是活动的相关内容。请根据下面的提示，用英语描述一下此次研学活动。
研学地点： 北京 研学时长：5天 研学对象：8-18岁青少年
活动安排 1. 参观北京大学、清华大学；
2. 聆听教授精彩的课程；
3. 与学霸面对面，听他们分享学习经验和成长的故事；
4. 参观博物馆，了解中国历史和文化；
5. 游览圆明园，以史为鉴，奋发图强。
参考词汇：study tour 研学旅行 Peking University 北京大学 Tsinghua University 清华大学 professor 教授 top students 学霸 museum 博物馆 the Old Summer Palace 圆明园
要求:
1. 写作包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥；
2. 意思连贯、通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Join Our Study Tour!
Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity.
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20．为助力打造“书香校园”，学校英语社团将举办以“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动，请以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为标题，按照以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读的重要性。
提示：
1. Why is reading important
2. How many books/stories have you ever read
3. What’s your favorite book/story What’s it about
4. What have you learned from the book/story
要求：
1.书写规范，语句通顺，语法正确。
2.不少于70词。
3.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
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参考答案
1．One possible version:
My Last Weekend
Last weekend, I had a busy but enjoyable time. On Saturday morning, I went to the library near my home to read some books. I love reading because I can learn many new things from books and I spent a whole morning reading new books. In the afternoon, I went to my friend’s birthday party. We played games, ate cakes, and had a lot of fun.
On Sunday, I went to a park with my family. We played soccer and flew kites there. In the evening, I did my homework and watched a movie.
All in all, it was a tiring but colorful weekend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“上周末，我度过了忙碌但愉快的时光。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——活动时间、具体时间段所做的事情等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of fun许多乐趣
②all in all总之
③spend...doing sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①On Saturday morning, I went to the library near my home to read some books. (动词不定式作目的状语）
②I love reading because I can learn many new things from books and I spent a whole morning reading new books. (Because引导的原因状语从句)
2．例文
There are different clubs at our school. I am a member of the basketball club.
I joined the basketball club half a year ago. I joined this club because I wanted to improve my basketball skills. I go to the basketball club twice a week. I practice playing basketball with the other club members. Our basketball coach teaches us some useful basketball skills. Sometimes we watch basketball matches on TV together.
I love the basketball club. I learn a lot from the club. I also make some new friends in the club.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，介绍自己在学校参加过的社团；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”，介绍参加过的社团和参加社团的原因用一般过去时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总写，表明写作意图。（我们学校有不同的俱乐部。我是篮球俱乐部的会员。）引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，具体介绍参加篮球社团的时间，原因以及在篮球社团做了什么；
第三步，书写总结，结束全文。表达对篮球社团的喜爱以及在篮球社团里面的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be a member of 成为……会员，加入
②practice doing sth.练习做某事
③twice a week一周两次
④teach sb. sth.教某人……
[高分句型]
①There are different clubs at our school.（there be句型）
②I joined this club because I wanted to improve my basketball skills.（(because引导原因状语从句）
3．例文
Last Sunday, I went to Mangshan Forest Park with my parents. We had a good time there.
Mangshan Forest Park is one of the best parks in my hometown and it’s not far from my home. So we rode to the park and got there early in the morning. Walking in the forest and listening to the songs of birds made us feel relaxed. We even climbed to the top of the mountain and took lots of photos.
It’s great to get close to nature and I will always remember this wonderful trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍你去了哪里，以及时间，同伴；
第二步，介绍你在那里做了什么；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①had a good time玩得开心
②not far from离……不远
③the top of ……的顶部
[高分句型]
①It’s great to get close to nature and I will always remember this wonderful trip.（and并列句）
4．例文
Summer holiday is coming. I prefer to travel with my parents to relax myself completely after the long-time study. I’ll choose to go somewhere interesting so that I can see the beautiful scenery and sense the nature. As a saying goes, travel is a great source of real knowledge. During the journey, I can learn more about history, culture and so on. What’s more, I’ll meet many different kinds of people and communicate with them. Traveling is also a good way to bring the family closer. I’ll have more sweet memories with my parents. That’s why I will choose a meaningful trip during this summer vacation. Of course, I also have to preview some lessons because I want to get better grades. Finally, I also want to play some games with my friends to relax myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：介绍暑期打算做的事情并说明原因；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍暑期打算做的事情；
第二步，阐述原因。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on 等等
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③relax oneself 放松自我
[高分句型]
①I’ll choose to go somewhere interesting so that I can see the beautiful scenery and sense the nature.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②Of course, I also have to preview some lessons because I want to get better grades.（because引导的原因状语从句）
5．One Possible Version:
Dear Headmaster,
Hearing that you are going to choose the star of the year, I’d like to recommend Helen.
Helen is a beautiful girl. She comes from Class 3, Grade 7. She is very tall. She has a round face and long hair. She is very lively and kind. She is ready to help others. No matter who is in trouble, she will help. She loves sports and reading. And she is good at playing the piano.
We all hope Helen will become the Star of the Year successfully. If she gets the award, we will be very happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出要介绍的年度之星是Helen；
第二步，具体介绍Helen的个人信息，包括外貌、性格、爱好等；
第三步，最后表达自己的愿望并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① would like to想要
② be ready to准备
③ be good at擅长
[高分句型]
① No matter who is in trouble, she will help.（no matter who引导的让步状语从句）
② If she gets the award, we will be very happy.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文：
My best friend
Lin Tao is my good friend. He is 13 years old. He is tall and strong. He studies so hard that he does well in all subjects.
And he’s good at reading. We both like sports, so we often play basketball together. He also likes animals, because he thinks animals are very cute. He is always quick thinking and considerate of others.
He is also very friendly and kind. He often helps others. Last Saturday, he helped a little boy find his mother in a museum. We must learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最好的朋友的基本信息；
第二步，介绍他 (她) 的兴趣爱好和个人能力；
第三步，举例说明他 (她)善良的品行。
[亮点词汇]
①do well in擅长
②be good at擅长
③considerate体贴的
④learn from向……学习
[高分句型]
①He also likes animals, because he thinks animals are very cute. (because引导的原因状语从句)
7．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Han Dong to be The Most Beautiful Student.
Han Dong is a student in Class 1, Grade 7. He likes reading books because he wants to know more knowledge from the books. He is also good at playing football and he is a member of our school football team. He is very clever, and he can learn things quickly and use computers well. He thinks carefully. He often plans everything well. He is helpful too. He always collects clothes and books for poor children. He often gives his seat to the old on the bus. He is also kind. Last Sunday, a girl lost her way and cried in the street. Han Dong helped her find her mother.
So, I think Han Dong is the best person to be The Most Beautiful Student. I hope that you will agree with me.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，介绍Han Dong的爱好、能力、性格以及他做了什么；
第三步，总结全文，并表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长
②helpful 乐于助人的
③agree with sb. 赞同某人
[高分句型]
①He likes reading books because he wants to know more knowledge from the books.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②He is also good at playing football and he is a member of our school football team.（and连接的并列句）
8．例文
Dear Sir,
I read your poster yesterday. I am writing to tell you I’d like to be a new member of your club.
My name is Luo Yang. I am 13-year-old. I am a student in Class 1, Grade 7 of Yangguang Middle School. Last week, I saved a 79-year-old man from a fire. I’m willing to help others at any time. So I will be kind to animals, too.
I often take part in many outdoor activities, such as climbing, running. I love animals, I often brush my pet dog’s fur and walk it in the park. Now I am reading a book about how to look after pets.
I will be very happy if I can become a new member of your club. You can call me at 0527-85436688.
Yours truly,
Luo Yang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出申请加入宠物俱乐部的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从基本信息和各方面的优势来介绍自己的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达加入俱乐部的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②look after照顾
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Now I am reading a book about how to look after pets.（how引导的宾语从句）
②I will be very happy if I can become a new member of your club.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文：
My plans for the summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming. Here are my plans for the summer holiday.
Firstly, I will finish my homework carefully. Additionally, I’m going to read more and do handwriting diligently. In terms of contributing to society, I want to participate in my community’s “Helping Hands Club”. Through this club, I aim to help the elderly in a nursing home, go to the park to do cleaning activities or go to the Project Hope and donate money to the poor. Besides, I plan to develop an active lifestyle by participating in outdoor activities and sports. Furthermore, I’m looking forward to a family trip with my parents. Lastly, I will do some housework.
In conclusion, my summer will be more colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My plans for the summer holiday”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学习、公益以及其他方面来介绍暑假安排的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对多彩暑假生活的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of在……方面
②contribute to society为社会做贡献
③participate in参加……
④look forward to期待……
[高分句型]
①I aim to help the elderly in a nursing home, go to the park to do cleaning activities or go to the Project Hope and donate money to the poor.（动词不定式作宾语；动词不定式作目的状语）
②Besides, I plan to develop an active lifestyle by participating in outdoor activities and sports.（动名词作宾语）
10．例文
A wonderful birthday party Last Sunday was my 14th birthday. I had a great time with my family and friends. They had a wonderful party for me at home.In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. My mother went shopping and bought lots of food and drinks. My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. I liked them very much. At noon, we all sat around the birthday cake and I made a wish. Then we blew the candles out together. My friends sang the song Happy Birthday to me. My sister cooked delicious lunch for us.The party was wonderful and I was very happy. I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“上个周日是我的14岁生日”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——所做的事情、感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我从不会忘记它”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①went shopping去购物
②made a wish许愿
③blew the candles out吹蜡烛
[高分句型]
①My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. (such as用法）
②In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. (and并列句)
11．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to tell you the experience I had last Saturday. I visited Nanchong Museum. It was a cool day. My dad drove me there. We sang and laughed all the way. The docents told us more about history during the visit to the museum, and we all got a deeper understanding of our Chinese history and culture. However, we watched some educational movies, which helped us understand the changes in our country. Most importantly, I made a new friend. So I got a lot out of this visit. Not only did I learn nothing from books, I also relaxed myself. If there is a chance, I will visit again in the future.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：本文时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥；注意语法正确，行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍天气情况、交通方式；
第二步，介绍你的活动；
第三步，总结并抒发感情。
[亮点词汇]
①got a deeper understanding of 对……有了更深的理解
②help sb do sth帮某人做某事
③in the future在未来
④looking forward to doing sth期待做某事
[高分句型]
①However, we watched some educational movies, which helped us understand the changes in our country.（定语从句）
②If there is a chance, I will visit again in the future.（条件状语从句）
12．例文：
My Good Habits
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I have three good habits. First, I get up early every morning. Early to bed and early to rise makes a healthy man. Second, I eat healthy food. I like eating vegetables and fruit. Sometimes I eat fish and chicken, because I want to have a strong body. Third, I always take exercise. Exercise helps me have a good sleep, so I can study well in class.
I think these good habits are good for my study and health. I want to keep them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明有三个好习惯；
第二步，具体介绍自己的好习惯。依照提示信息的要点——早起，吃健康的食物，锻炼均要一一阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a strong body身体强壮
②have a good sleep睡个好觉
③study well学习好
[高分句型]
I think these good habits are good for my study and health.（宾语从句）
13．例文
My trip to a village
Last Saturday, I took a trip to a village near my home with my parents. The weather there was sunny and warm that day. It took us about an hour to drive there.
When we got there, my father and I flew kites at first. My mother took some beautiful pictures. After that, we picked some fresh fruit on the farm together. Then we had lunch in a small but clean restaurant. The food there was very delicious. In the afternoon, we went fishing for an hour. We didn’t go home until it was dark.
It was great fun to stay in the village and I was happy about this trip. I’m looking forward to travelling there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，讲述去农村的旅行经历；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It took us about an hour to drive there.（动词不定式作主语）
②When we got there, my father and I flew kites at first.（时间状语从句）
14．例文
Notice
Do you have any idea about your future career To help you make a good plan for your future career, our school will hold a “Career Experience Day” on the school playground from 9:00 to 12:00 next Friday morning.
There will be various activities during this event. First, you will learn about different jobs from many professionals such as doctors and firefighters. Moreover, the professionals will give advice on how to discover your interests and choose a career. Listen carefully and take notes, I believe it will help you get a lot. Of course, it’s a great chance for you to ask questions and get useful tips. Last but not least, you can also experience your favourite job by role-playing tasks and games.
We believe the “Career Experience Day” will be interesting and helpful for you and we hope to see you there!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍活动的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍活动内容；
第三步，呼吁大家参与并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①career职业
②various各种各样的
③firefighter消防队员
④give advice给出建议
⑤take notes记笔记
⑥last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
Listen carefully and take notes, I believe it will help you get a lot.(省略that的宾语从句)
15．例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I think it’s my pleasure to talk about the Good Boy—Tom in our class.
He is a little thin and very tall. He has short black hair. He likes sports and playing the piano. He likes reading, too. He is kind, outgoing and helpful. His favorite subject is history. He spends lots of time reading books about history. He often helps me with my English.
He often takes part in volunteer activities. Last week he visited the farm and helped the farmers to do some farm work.
I think Tom is a good boy. I want to learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍Tom的外貌、爱好、性格及学习情况；
第二步：介绍Tom的主要事迹；
第三步：阐述你能从他身上学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①spend lots of time doing sth花很多时间做某事
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③take part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①Last week he visited the farm and helped the farmers to do some farm work. (and连接并列句)
②I think Tom is a good boy. (省略that的宾语从句)
16．例文
My life in middle school is very interesting and wonderful. I can learn many things. Now, I can take the initiative to make study plans and help my parents do housework. I make a daily schedule and complete each of my tasks according to it. At the same time, I also use my spare time to help my parents do housework every day, such as sweeping the floor, emptying the garbage, washing the dishes and so on. In the future, I want to take up a hobby—playing basketball, because I want to relax myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你现在会做的两件事情；
第二步，介绍你平时如何做这些事情；
第三步，说明你未来提升自我的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take the initiative采取主动
②according to根据
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
In the future, I want to take up a hobby—playing basketball, because I want to relax myself.（原因状语从句）
17．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’d like to tell you something about the school trip last week. On Saturday morning, the weather was fine. After breakfast, I went to the park with my classmates. We flew kites in the park and took many photos. We also played some interesting games. In the afternoon, we also worked as volunteers to help clean the park. Although we were very tired that day, we were very happy and excited. I think we did something meaningful.
Do you have anything fun to share (分享) Looking forward to (期待) your reply (回复).
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍一次自己的外出活动，包括出行的时间、地点、做了什么以及自己的感受。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍去公园游玩的时间、进行的活动，并描述自己的感受；
第三步，询问对方的情况（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①play games 玩游戏
②something meaningful 有意义的事
[高分句型]
①Although we were very tired that day, we were very happy and excited. （although引导的让步状语从句）
②I think we did something meaningful. （省略that的宾语从句）
18．My weekend
I am a student in Guangming Middle School. I have more time to do what I like on weekends.
Last weekend, I finished my homework and went to the library to read some interesting books in the morning. After I came back home, I helped my parents with housework and learned to cook. I took exercise to build up my body in the afternoon. I played basketball with my friends. Then I watched an exciting football match with my parents in the evening.
I had a wonderful weekend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文用第一人称、一般过去时写作。书写时按照时间顺序有条不紊地介绍周末的活动，注意短语、语法的正确使用和单词拼写。适当使用连词提高文章的档次。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己。介绍自己是光明中学的一名学生，且现在周末有更多业余时间来放松自己；
第二步，具体阐述周末活动内容。按照“上午、下午、晚上”的顺序描述周末具体活动内容。
第三步，书写结语。总述自己度过了一个精彩的周末。
[亮点词汇]
①have time to do sth.有时间做某事
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③take exercise做运动
[高分句型]
①I have more time to do what I like on weekends.（what引导宾语从句）
②After I came back home, I helped my parents with housework and learned to cook.（after引导时间状语从句）
19．例文
Join Our Study Tour!
Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity.
Our study tour is for young students aged 8 to 18 and will be held in Beijing for 5 exciting days! You’ll get to visit the famous Peking University and Tsinghua University, where you can listen to brilliant professors teach amazing lessons. You’ll also meet top students who will share their stories of learning and growth.We have planned visits to museums to explore the rich history and culture of China. Plus, we’ll take a trip to the Old Summer Palace to learn from history and be inspired to work hard for a better future.
Come and join us for a holiday full of fun, learning, and adventure!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍研学活动内容;
②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意先补全开头，并结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全开头；
第二步，描述研学活动五天安排；
第三步，呼吁大家来参加研学活动。
[亮点词汇]
①exciting days 令人兴奋的日子
②brilliant professors 杰出的教授
③amazing lessons 惊人的课程
④rich history and culture 丰富的历史和文化
[高分句型]
①Our study tour is for young students aged 8 to 18 and will be held in Beijing for 5 exciting days! (一般将来时的被动语态）
② You'll also meet top students who will share their stories of learning and growth. (who引导的定语从句)
③ We have planned visits to museums to explore the rich history and culture of China. (动词不定式表目的)
20．例文
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading is important for everyone, because it can open a new world and people can learn a lot from the books. I have a great passion for reading and it has become part of my life. Every morning, I read newspapers for the latest news. I’m also fond of novels and magazines. Besides, book reviews provide me with different ideas on great books. When reading, I feel relaxed and pleased. It’s the best moment to get knowledge and pleasure in life. I have read more than 1000 books.
My favourite book is Yu Gong Moves the Mountains. It it a story about an old man wanted to remove the mountains. Everyone laughed at him, but he never gave up. At last, the God was moved by his spirit and sent two gods to help him. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
With a deep love for reading, I can’t wait to read more.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍阅读的好处；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢的一本书；
第三步，介绍从这本书中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be fond of喜欢
②provide sb with sth向某人提供某物
③more than超过
[高分句型]
①Reading is important for everyone, because it can open a new word and people can learn a lot from them.（because引导原因状语从句）

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