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【期末专项训练】易错精选：写作题-2024-2025学年英语七年级下册人教版（2024）
1．假如你是李华，Cindy是你新认识的笔友，她最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，用英语给她回一封电子邮件。
写作要点：
1. 你最喜欢的动物以及原因；
2. 你的校规及你的感受；
3. 你的日常运动习惯和饮食习惯。
写作要求:
1. 应包括所有要点内容，可做适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，卷面干净整洁。
Dear Cindy,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是李辉，将参加学校社团组织以“My favorite animal”为主题的社团活动，请你以此为题用英文写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1. 简单介绍自己最喜欢的动物及原因；
2. 列举2-3种这种动物为人类做的事；
3. 表达观点和期待。
注意：
(1). 词数：80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2). 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3). 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和班级。
Dear students,
I am Li Hui. Different people like different animals.
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Thanks for your listening.
3．假如你是学校英语社团负责人，在第一次社团活动时，你需要向社团成员说明社团的规章制度。请根据以下提示和要求，写一篇不少于40词的英语短文，介绍这些规章制度。
要点：
1. 每周有两到三次社团活动 (activities)；
2. 不能迟到；
3. 在社团里必须说英语。
要求：
1. 须包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；表述通顺；简洁得体；
2. 短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to our first meeting. Let me tell you some rules of our club.
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I hope we can have a good time in the club.
4．假如你叫林涛，是七年级的一位学生，在刚结束的校运动会上你被评为“运动之星(sports star)”，请结合你的实际情况，根据以下要点，以“What makes me a sports star”为题，写一篇100词左右的小短文，和同学们分享一下你的运动习惯和生活习惯。(开头已给出，不计入词总数)
要点：
1.运动方面：最喜爱的运动项目，运动时间等；
2.饮食方面：食物选择，最喜爱的食物，饮食规律等；
3.生活方面：……
What makes me a sports star
It’s my honor (荣幸)to be one of the sports stars at this sports meeting in our school.
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5．假如你学校的校刊Teen Talk栏目正在举办以“How do you stay healthy ”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下要点信息用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要点提示：
1.日常作息；
2.饮食习惯；
3.运动习惯。
写作要求：
1.语言表达准确，语句通顺；
2.词数不少于70。
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share my habits for staying healthy.
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So let’s stay healthy and strong together!
6．假如今天是星期六，是个阳光明媚的日子，你和家人都在家中度过。请你以“What are my family doing ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
·what you and your family are doing at the moment
·your favorite family activity and the reason
·your feelings about family time
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
What are my family doing
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7．假如你是李华，你正在为太原文旅创作短视频脚本，你想为这座历史悠久的城市拍摄哪些画面呢？漫步迎泽公园，捕捉晨练者踏歌而行；移步汾河之畔，可见垂钓者静守一杆悠然；骑行者追封掠影而过，野餐家庭铺展美食共享温馨……请选择一个时间点，描述一下当时的天气，人们的活动与感受。
太原的鲜活与诗意，正在你的笔下慢慢展开。
1. What time is it now and how’s the weather in Taiyuan
2. What are people doing and how do they feel
3. What do you think of Taiyuan
要求：
1. 内容包括以上所有要点，可适当补充，语句通顺，行文连贯。
2. 词数不少于60词。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。
4. 开头结尾已给出。
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8．古人云：“读万卷书，行万里路。”假如你是李华，请和大家分享你的一次旅行经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要点:
1. Where did you go
2. Who did you go with
3. How was the weather
4. What did you do
5. How did you feel
要求：
1.参考要点内容，并适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My trip to ________
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9．你听过《狐狸和葡萄》的故事吗？请根据下面的图片和提示词，跟大家分享这个故事。
写作要求：
（1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：70词左右；
（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
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10．英语老师布置了作业：拍摄一个英语短视频，主题是“江滩徒步的美好时光”。假设你是李欣，请你以“Wonderful Time on Riverside Beach”为题，根据以下内容提示，用英语从此刻的天气、同学们的活动和江滩上其他人的活动写一篇英语短视频脚本。
内容提示：
What’s the weather like now
What are your classmates and you doing now
What else are people doing at the Riverside Park
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数80词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Wonderful Time on Riverside Beach
Hello everyone! It’s 2:30 p.m. now. We are at the Riverside Beach. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
《【期末专项训练】易错精选：写作题-2024-2025学年英语七年级下册人教版（2024）》参考答案
1．Dear Cindy,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
Now let me tell yousomething about myself. My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and friendly. There are many rules in our school. For example, we can’t be late for school. I think the school rules are good for us, so we should follow them. I have good living habits. I exercise every day by jogging for 20 minutes. I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day. I never eat junk food. I wash my handsbe fore meals. I take a shower and change my clothes every day.
What about you I’d love to hear your stories, too. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍你最喜欢的动物以及原因、你的校规及你的感受、你的日常运动习惯和饮食习惯等；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②be late for迟到
③be good for有益于……
④look forward to盼望……
[高分句型]
①My favorite animals are pandas, because they are very cute and friendly. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think the school rules are good for us, so we should follow them. (并列句)
2．例文
My Favorite Animal
I am Li Hui. Different people like different animals.
For me, dogs are my favorite animal. The reasons why I love them are as follows. I think dogs are the cutest animals in the world. Dogs are helpful. They can do a lot of things for us. They can warn people when danger is near by barking. They keep people safe. Dogs are not only helpful, but also lovely and friendly. You can play with them when you are free. You can also share your thoughts with them. And when you are sad, they can make you happy. They help us relax. Animals are our friends. We can’t live without them. It’s our responsibility to protect animals. Let’s take action now.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出作者最喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍作者喜欢该动物的原因；
第三步，介绍该动物为人类做的事情并呼吁大家保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sb. adj. 使某人保持……
②share sb. with sth. 与某人分享某物
③help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①The reasons why I love them are as follows. (主语从句)
②I think dogs are the cutest animals in the world. (省略that的宾语从句；形容词最高级)
③They can warn people when danger is near by barking. (when引导时间状语从句）
④It’s our responsibility to protect animals. (it作形式主语；不定式作真正的主语)
3．例文
Welcome to our first meeting. Let me tell you some rules of our club.
We have activities two or three times a week. Don’t be late for the club activities. We must speak English in the club. It’s important for us to practice speaking English more. Practice makes perfect. After the activities, we must keep the classroom clean and tidy.
I hope we can have a good time in the club.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍英语社团的规章制度，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍社团的规章制度；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be late for迟到
②have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to practice speaking English more. (it固定句型)
②I hope we can have a good time in the club. (宾语从句)
4．
What makes me a sports star
It’s my honor (荣幸)to be one of the sports stars at this sports meeting in our school. Here are my secrets to success.
First, I love sports. My favorite sport is basketball, which helps me build team spirit and stay fit. I play basketball every day for at least an hour.
Second, I eat healthily. I prefer fresh vegetables and fruits to junk food. My favorite food is milk, which provide me with energy. I eat regularly and avoid overeating.
Third, l have a balanced life. I get enough sleep every night and wake up early. I keep exercising every day, even on rainy days. This makes me energetic and ready for school.
These habits make me a sports star. I hope they can help you too!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容介绍自己的健康心得，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，感谢可以获得分享的机会；
第二步，详细介绍自己的饮食习惯和运动习惯；
第三步，总结自己的心得分享，希望对大家是有帮助的。
[亮点词汇]
① one of the sports stars 运动之星之一
② at least an hour 至少一个小时
③ provide me with energy 给我提供能量
[高分句型]
① My favorite sport is basketball, which helps me build team spirit and stay fit.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
② I get enough sleep every night and wake up early.（and连接的并列句）
5．例文
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share my habits for staying healthy.
First, I get up early around 6:30 and go to bed before 9:30. It makes me full of energy. Second, as the old saying goes, “You are what you eat.” Every day, I have healthy food like meat, vegetables and fruit to keep strong. Third, sport plays an important part in my daily life. I love playing basketball and I play it three or four times a week.
All in all, keeping good habits really helps make my body and mind healthy. So let’s stay healthy and strong together!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用给定开头句引入主题；
第二步，从“日常作息、饮食习惯和运动习惯”等方面介绍如何保持健康；
第三步，总结健康生活方式的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①full of energy精力充沛
②play an important part扮演重要角色
③stay healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
All in all, keeping good habits really helps make my body and mind healthy.（动名词作主语）
6．例文：
What are my family doing
It’s a sunny Saturday, and my family and I are having a great time at home.
My father is in the living room. He’s watching a documentary about nature on TV, his eyes full of interest. My mother is in the kitchen, baking a cake. The sweet smell fills the whole house. I’m sitting on the balcony, reading a science-fiction book, lost in the amazing plots.
My favorite family activity is playing board games together in the evening. It’s a time when we can all laugh, compete and cooperate. We share jokes and stories during the game, which makes our relationship closer.
Family time is invaluable. It gives me a sense of belonging and makes me feel loved. I really enjoy these moments with my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，描述了周六一家人在家的活动情况。
②时态：主要时态为 “现在进行时”。
③提示：描述此刻家人正在做的事、最喜欢的家庭活动及原因和对家庭时光的感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明时间是阳光明媚的周六，一家人在家过得很愉快。
第二步，中间分别描述父亲、母亲和 “我” 此刻正在进行的活动，接着介绍最喜欢的家庭活动是晚上一起玩桌游以及原因。
第三步，结尾表达家庭时光很宝贵，自己很享受和家人在一起的时刻。
[亮点词汇]
①documentary 纪录片
②invaluable 非常宝贵的；极有价值的
③a sense of belonging 归属感
④lost in 沉浸于；迷失在
[高分句型]
①He’s watching a documentary about nature on TV, his eyes full of interest.（运用独立主格结构“his eyes full of interest”。）
②We share jokes and stories during the game, which makes our relationship closer.（运用了“which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．例文
It’s eight o’clock on Sunday morning. The weather is sunny.
I am walking in Yingze Park. There are many people in the park. They all feel relaxed and comfortable. Some people are doing morning exercise. Some people are playing the erhu. Some people are dancing. Some people are playing basketball. Some people are running. Some people are playing ping-pong.
I like Taiyuan very much. I think it is both beautiful and suitable for living.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍太原的时间和天气；
第二步，描述人们的活动与感受；
第三步，介绍自己对太原的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①both...and...既……又……
②be suitable for适合
[高分句型]
I think Taiyuan is both beautiful and suitable for living.(宾语从句)
8．例文
My trip to Beijing
Last Saturday, I took a trip to Beijing with my parents. It was a fine day. We flew to our lovely city happily.
First of all, we visited Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall. My parents told me some stories about them. Then we visited Beihai Park. It was great to learn a lot of history. After that, we went shopping in the shop and bought some gifts for my friends. But my favorite thing was to eat Beijing Duck. It is the most delicious duck.
This experience is so interesting and unforgettable that I want to visit it again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，讲述去北京的旅行经历，主要从人员、天气、活动等方面展开详细叙述；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②go shopping购物
③buy sth for sb为某人买某物
[高分句型]
①It was great to learn a lot of history. （It作形式主语）
②This experience is so interesting and unforgettable that I want to visit it again.（so... that...结构）
9．One possible version:
One hot summer day, there was a fox. He was hungry and thirsty when he saw some grapes. The grapes looked so delicious that he wanted to eat them very much. So he jumped and jumped. But the grapes were high, and he couldn’t reach any. Finally, he had to give up and said to himself, “What a fool I am! I am sure that the grapes are just sour.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片和提示词完成写作内容，注意增加细节使故事情节饱满。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍故事发生的时间和主人公狐狸；
第二步，介绍故事情节：狐狸想吃高处的葡萄却够不着，最终放弃并说“葡萄是酸的”。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do想要做某事；
②give up放弃；
③said to himself自言自语。
[高分句型]
①He was hungry and thirsty when he saw some grapes. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②The grapes looked so delicious that he wanted to eat them very much. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
③I am sure that the grapes are just sour. (宾语从句)
10．例文
Wonderful Time on Riverside Beach
Hello everyone! It’s 2:30 p.m. now. We are at the Riverside Beach. The weather is sunny and warm. My classmates and I are walking and talking happily. Some are taking photos, and others are picking up shells by the river.
At the Riverside Park, many people are enjoying their time too. Some are flying kites, and some are riding bikes. A few families are having picnics on the grass.
We all love this beautiful place. It’s a wonderful day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“现在进行时”；
③提示：围绕在河边海滩和公园的活动，描述当下场景中人物的行为及环境氛围。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代时间、地点及天气，描述我和同学在海滩的活动；
第二步，扩展至河边公园的场景，介绍不同人群的活动；
第三步，表达对环境的喜爱，总结这是美好的一天。
[亮点词汇]
①sunny and warm晴朗温暖
②pick up shells捡贝壳
③have picnics野餐
④wonderful美好的
[高分句型]
①My classmates and I are walking and talking happily. (现在进行时结构)
②Some are taking photos, and others are picking up shells by the river. (some...others...)
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