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【期末专项训练】易错精选题：写作题-2024-2025学年英语八年级下册人教版
1．暑期将至，学校英语俱乐部针对学生社会实践推出很多活动。请在下表中选择2～3项你喜欢的活动（也可自拟活动项目），用英语写一篇短文表明你的选择意向及理由，发表在学校微信公众平台的英语栏目中。
Practical Activities
□learn to do housework □help in the city museum
□clean up the city park □have a book sale
□visit sick kids in hospital □…
要求：（1）短文中必须包括所选择的活动项目，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80～100词。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
During this coming summer vacation, I am going to take part in these activities.
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2．本学期即将结束，请根据以下提示，对你在本学期所做过的有意义或者有趣的事情做一个总结。
提示：
（1）Have you read some interesting books
（2）Have you been to somewhere interesting
（3）Have you ever been a volunteer
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
（2）必须包含三个要点，可适当发挥。
（3）词数 80 词左右。
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3．上周一，学校组织学生去白浪山茶场（the Bailangshan Tea Field）开展研学旅行，深受学生的喜爱。请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍本次研学活动。
活动内容：
（1）学习采茶、制茶和茶艺；
（2）观察动、植物，亲近自然；
（3）唱歌跳舞，朗诵诗歌；
（4）观看了电影，了解一些中国的茶文化。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
词语提示：手工by hand，知识knowledge，诗poem，参加take part in
Last Monday, our school organized students to the Bailangshan Tea Field to carry out a study trip. ___________________________________
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4．假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的美国笔友Mike写一封信，向他介绍我们的祖国。
提示：
（1）中国是亚洲最大的国家，和美国差不多大；
（2）中国有世界上最多的人口，人们友好勤劳；
（3）长江是世界第三长的河流，中国有著名的万里长城；
（4）中国有超过5000年的悠久历史，比美国历史长多了；
（5）中国有世界最高山峰……
提示词汇：
as…as…population, friendly, hard-working, The Yangtze River, the third longest, famous, the Great Wall, more than, long history, Qomolangma
要求：
（1）词数：80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不加入总词数）；
（2）恰当运用比较级和最高级；
（3）书信需包括上面所有提示点，可适当发挥。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．“世上无难事，只怕有心人”。我们在学习或生活中都会遇到一些困难或挫折，但是只要怀有积极的心态去面对它们，就一定能够守得云开见月明。某英语报正在开展以“Never be afraid of difficulties”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇文章投稿参加这次活动。
写作要点：
（1）简要说说你对学习生活中遇到挫折困难的看法；
（2）详述一次你难忘的克服困难的经历；
（3）简述你这次经历的感受及你的打算。
注意事项：
（1）90词左右；
（2）行文应连贯流畅；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
Never be afraid of difficulties
In our life, everybody may sometimes need to face different kinds of problems.
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6．“如果信仰有颜色，那一定是中国红！”在2022年女足亚洲杯决赛中，中国女足在开场连续失利的情况下，仍不言弃，最终逆转夺冠！女足的精神时刻鼓励着我们，在我们的成长历程中，也一定会有遇到困难并克服困难的难忘经历。请根据以下写作提示，写一篇短文。
要点如下：
1. 谈谈成长中坚韧不拔，逆流而上的重要性。
2. 详细叙述你曾经的一次经历及感受。
3. 呼吁青少年在生活中要发扬拼搏精神，开创美好未来。
写作要求： 1. 字数：90词左右；2. 用到给的所有提示，可适当增加情节，逻辑通顺，连贯。
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7．想一想你现在仍然有的儿时最喜欢的东西。比如，它可能是一本书。请以“A thing from my childhood”为题，写一篇英语短文。
1. 要点: 1) What’s the thing How long have you had it
2) How did you get it
3) Why is it important for you
2. 要求: 1) 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
2) 词数80左右。
A thing from my childhood
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8．在八年级学习生活即将结束，你校将举行一次征文活动，请同学们谈一谈一年以来自己在各个方面的变化。假定你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。稿件内容包括：
(1)重点阐述在业余生活、文明礼仪、爱心表现等方面的改变；
(2)简单说说对未来的展望或感想。
注意：(1)词数： 80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
(4)短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. In the past one year, I have changed a lot.
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《【期末专项训练】易错精选题：写作题-2024-2025学年英语八年级下册人教版》参考答案
1．例文1
During this coming summer vacation, I am going to take part in these activities.
I’d like to learn to do housework first. Now we teenagers spend too much time on our homework so that we don’t have time to do housework. Also, we need to do something to help our parents and learn how to look after ourselves. Second, I will volunteer to clean up the city park. I’ll pick up rubbish around the park and ask people not to litter anywhere. In addition, I will tell them the importance of keeping our city clean and tidy.
I’m sure I will get a lot of social experience through the summer practical program.（98 words）
例文2
I will be busy during the coming summer vacation because I plan to take part in some practical activities.
Firstly, I would like to visit the kids in hospital. As sick kids are unhappy and lonely, I will help to look after them and cheer them up. Besides, I will volunteer to help in the city museum. In this way, I can not only learn more knowledge, but also make new friends. Lastly, I will have a book sale to raise money for the people in need.
All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文；
第二步，根据提示材料，分别从想要学习做家务，志愿帮助公园做清洁活动等方面介绍；
第三步，总结上文，确信通过这次暑假实践活动会增长很多社会经验。
[亮点词汇]
①spend too much time on sth. 在某事上花费过多时间
②volunteer to do sth. 志愿做某事
③In addition 另外
④the importance of doing sth. 做某事的重要性
[高分句型]
①Now we teenagers spend too much time on our homework so that we don’t have time to do housework. （so that引导结果状语从句）
②I’m sure I will get a lot of social experience through the summer practical program.（宾语从句）
2．例文
How time flies! This is the end of the term.
At the beginning of the year, I made a lot of plans. Some were completed but some were not completed. I have also read a lot of books so far, which made me learn a lot. As a volunteer, I went to the community or street to help people in need. Because of the epidemic, I had planned to visit some interesting places, but I didn’t go. Although I didn’t go, I was very happy. Because I think staying at home now is also to make a contribution to epidemic prevention.
I look forward to continuing to work on the unfinished plan in the second half of the year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：按照题目提示要点完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏要求，使用正确的时态和连接词，使文章通顺，语句连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读过的有趣的书；
第二步，介绍参观过的有趣的地方；
第三步，介绍做志愿者的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①in need 在困境中
②epidemic 流行病
③make a contribution to 对……做出贡献
④continue to do sth. 继续去做某事
[高分句型]
①I have also read a lot of books so far, which made me learn a lot. (which引导定语从句)
②Although I didn’t go, I was very happy.（although引导让步状语从句)
3．例文
Last Monday, our school organized students to the Bailang Mountain tea field to carry out a study trip. There the scenery is beautiful. First of all, we learned to pick tea and make tea, and also learned the tea art. Then we watched animals and plants,and got close to nature. We watched a movie to learn about Chinese tea culture. Finally,the students sang and danced and read many poems. We had a great time.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we will be able to have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态主要是“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题目的活动内容提示完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏内容要点，使用正确的时间，适当使用连接词，使文章通顺，句子流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据活动内容提示描述研学旅行；
第二步，陈述个人感悟和对感觉旅行的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out 执行，实话
②get close to 亲近，离……近
③Chinese tea culture 中国茶文化
④have chances to do sth. 有机会做某事
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we will be able to have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities. (句型it is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.)
4．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China.
China is the biggest country in Asia. It is almost as big as the US. China has the biggest population in the world. The people here are friendly and hard-working. The Yangtze River is the third longest river in the world. China is also famous for the Great Wall. China is more than 5000 years old. It has a much longer history than the US. China has the highest mountain in the world and its name is Qomolangma.
I love China very much. Welcome to China and play with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封书信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己将介绍中国；
第二步，从面积、人口、历史、河流、山峰等方面具体介绍中国；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②be famous for以……而闻名
③as big as和……一样大
[高分句型]
①Welcome to China and play with me.(祈使句；and连接并列成分)
5．例文
Never be afraid of difficulties
In our life, everybody may sometimes need to face different kinds of problems. I think that everyone may face difficulties in learning. However, we shouldn’t give up easily.
Once I could hardly follow my teachers in class and I made many mistakes in my homework and tests. I really felt sad. Now whenever I meet difficulties, I’ll try hard to overcome them instead of giving up. Sometimes I look up in reference books or search the Internet, sometimes I turn to my teachers or classmates. With hard work, I have done much better in my studies.
Nothing is too difficult if we put our hearts into it. Whatever difficulty we meet, there’s always a way for us to deal with it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态主要是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏要点，正确使用时态和连接词，使行文连贯流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈对学习生活中遇到挫折困难的看法；
第二步，讲述一次难忘的克服困难的经历；
第三步，简述对经历的感受，谈谈个人的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①face difficulties 面对困难
②give up 放弃
③make mistake 犯错
④instead of 代替
⑤reference books 参考书籍
⑥overcome 克服
[高分句型]
①I think that everyone may face difficulties in learning. (宾语从句)
②Now whenever I meet difficulties, I’ll try hard to overcome them instead of giving up. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
6．例文
I still remember that unforgettable experience. When I was twelve years old, there was a sports meeting in my school. And I was asked to take part in the high jump competition. I was afraid because I had never jumped. But my dad told me “Don’t worry, I will help you.” Then he started to train me. At the beginning, I couldn’t skip the pole of 1.1m. I was so disappointed that I wanted to give up. At that time, my dad said, “Don’t give up!” So I tried my best again, then I skipped the pole. And at the competition, I got the gold medal. Now, whenever I meet a problem or get into trouble, no matter how hard the situation is, I never stop my step. Because I have a faith in my mind that sunshine comes after the storm.
Let us carry forward the spirit of struggle in life and create a better future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料介绍自己遇到困难并克服困难的难忘经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述自己自己遇到困难并克服困难的难忘经历。
第二步，谈谈成长中坚韧不拔，逆流而上的重要性。
第三步，呼吁青少年在生活中要发扬拼搏精神，开创美好未来。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② so…that 如此……以至于
③ carry forward 发扬
[高分句型]
① When I was twelve years old, there was a sports meeting in my school（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Then he started to train me（动词不定式作宾语）
7．例文：
A thing from my childhood
It is a pen that I have had from my childhood. I have had it for seven years.
I never forgot the day when I picked 50 yuan up on the playground, but I didn’t give it to my teacher. Later, Mom knew the thing and ordered me to hand it in. Two days later, it was my eighth birthday. My mother bought a pen for me and told me to write my own story well with it.
The pen is with me and reminds me to do right things.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一过去时和现在完成时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你小时候的一件东西的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山点明要写的东西是什么，拥有它多长时间了；
第二步，具体阐述得到这个东西的过程，要具体，突出重点；
第三步，书写结语，表明东西为什么对于自己来说很重要，升华情感。
[亮点词汇]
① give it to sb.把它给某人
② order sb. to do sth.命令某人做某事
③ buy sth. for sb.为某人买某物
④ do right things做正确的事
[高分句型]
①I never forgot the day when I picked 50 yuan up on the playground (含有when引导的定语从句)
② I have had it for seven years.(for+时间段与延续性动词连用)
8．
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. In the past one year, I have changed a lot.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computers games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. Second, I sometimes shouted loudly in public places. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus. Third, I didn’t know how to care about others in the past. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. Meanwhile, I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示内容，介绍自己一年以来在各个方面的变化，同时还需要介绍自己的对未来的展望或感想。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述在业余生活、文明礼仪、爱心表现等方面的改变；
第二步，介绍对未来的展望或感想。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing花费时间做
②help do sth帮助做某事
③care about关心
[高分句型]
①Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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