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Unit3 My School
Section B 2a-2b
Writing
Review
Peter wrote an e-mail to Flora. Do you remember what he writes about
Review
Peter’s new school is ______! There are many _______ _________. There is a large ______ ______, a classroom building and a ______ ______. His _________ place is the dining hall because there are _____ _____ ___ _____. He loves the ________ _____ there.
great
modern buildings
sports
field
dining
hall
favorite
many kinds of food
Chinese food
How about your school
Think about places in your plete the notes.
2a
Write a reply to Peter about your school.
2b
peterbrown@
Peter
XXX
the library, the sports field
the classroom building
the library
across from the classroom building
big and quiet
read books
Do you write about all the key points
2b
peterbrown@
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your email. Your school sounds fun! I’d like to tell you about my school. There are many interesting places there. They’re the library, the sports field and the classroom building. My favorite place is the library. It’s across from the classroom building. I love it because it’s big and quiet. I like to read books there.
Bye for now,
XXX
places in school
favorite place
position(where)
reason(why)
activity(what)
Let’s make it better!
Let’s read for structure.
Beginning
Body
Ending
Writing Tip 1
Have a clear structure.
Beginning
Body
Ending
There are many interesting places there. They’re the library, the sports field and the classroom building. My favorite place is the library. It’s across from the classroom building. I love it because it’s big and quiet. I like to read books there.
Thank you for your email. Your school sounds fun! I’d like to tell you about my school.
Tip 1 —— Have a Clear Structure
topic sentence
show thanks
favorite place
position(where)
reason(why)
activity(what)
places in school
Peter’s ending
Tip 1 —— Have a Clear Structure
How about your school
Your ending
I have a lot of fun at school. I love my school.
Our school is really nice. I think you will like it, too!
...
show
love
Beginning
Body
Ending
There are many interesting places there. They’re the library, the sports field and the classroom building. My favorite place is the library. It’s across from the classroom building. I love it because it’s big and quiet. I like to read books there.
Thank you for your email. Your school sounds fun! I’d like to tell you about my school.
Tip 1 —— Have a Clear Structure
topic sentence
show thanks
favorite place
position(where)
reason(why)
activity(what)
places in school
show love
I have a lot of fun at school. I love my school.
Let’s read for language.
How does Peter show his love for school
Writing Tip 2
Add beautiful words.
Let’s read for language.
position(where)
reason(why)
activity(what)
There’s …next to …
The …is …behind the …
across from / in front of / …
It’s my favorite place because there are …
All the students…together…
Every …, we …
Writing Tip 3
Use different expressions.
Polish your writing according to the checklist.
Checklist Items Self-assessment自评 Peer assessment互评
Structure Have a clear structure. Beginning: Show thanks and lead in the topic. Body: Use specific details to talk about school. Ending: Show love.
Writing Strategy Add beautiful words. Use different expressions.
Yes No
Yes No
I think this writing can get ______ .
It needs to improve(需要提高) in the part of __________.
Thank you!

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