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2024-2025学年八年级下期期末考点大串讲（人教版）
专题11 书面表达（15篇）
同步作文（5篇）
1．在我们的成长过程中，有很多耳熟能详的童话或寓言故事，请你根据下面的图片，以“Sima Guang Hit the Tank（缸）”为题写一篇英文文章。词数不少于80。
提示词：害怕的frightened/scared；哭cry；办法idea/way；石头stone；挽救save；聪明的clever；突然suddenly

Sima Guang Hit the Tank
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【答案】
Sima Guang Hit the Tank
Once upon a time, there was a little kid called Sima Guang. One day, he was playing games with his friends in the garden. There was a tank full of water here. Suddenly, a child fell into the tank. Everyone was frightened. Some children cried and ran for help. However, Sima Guang thought of a good idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. The tank was broken and the child was saved. What a clever and brave boy Sima Guang was!
From the story, we know that we should try to find a good way to work out problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于看图作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章标题已经给出，按照图片所示的故事内容讲述故事，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇讲述故事发生的时间和人物；
第二步，按照图片所示的内容按故事发展的顺序详细讲述“司马光砸缸”这个故事；
第三步，抒发故事带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①once upon a time从前
②fall into掉入，掉进
③find a good way to do sth找到做某事的方法
④work out problems解决问题
[高分句型]
①Once upon a time, there was a little kid called Sima Guang.（过去分词短语作后置定语）
②There was a tank full of water here.（形容词短语作后置定语）
③What a clever and brave boy Sima Guang was!（what引导的感叹句）
2．请根据下列提示写一篇80个词左右,题为“Saving the Animals”的英语短文。提示:
1).人类活动:乱砍滥伐树木和猎杀动物。
2).导致的后果:动物生存环境越来越差,动物也越来越少,有的甚至濒临灭绝。
3).请你提出至少两条合理化的建议。
提示词:稀有的rare
Saving the Animals
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【答案】 Saving the Animals
As time goes by，there are fewer and fewer forests.The reason is that people cut too many trees down and hunt too many animals.As a result，the animals are becoming fewer and few，too.Some animals are even dying out.So we should do something to stop these activities of human beings which are destroying the earth.In my opinion，we should protect the forests and save the animals.First，the government should make laws to forbid people to cut down freely or to hunt the animals.Anybody who breaks the law should be punished.Second，we should make people realize the importance of protecting the animals.To save the animals means to save the earth and save ourselves.
【详解】这是一篇关于保护野生动物的短文。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
3．假如你是李明，你的美国笔友戴夫(Dave)来信向你询问你所喜欢的人。你非常喜欢作家韩寒，请根据下面的信息，向你的笔友写封回信介绍一下你喜欢的作家。信的开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
韩寒
出生年月和地点 1982年9月23日，上海
爱好 写作、踢足球和跑步
成就 1998年荣获全国新概念作文大赛一等奖，1999年开始写小说，他在年轻人中很受欢迎。
参考词汇：新概念作文大赛New Concept Composition Contest；小说novel
要求：1.语言通顺，流畅；2.70词左右。
Dear Dave，
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Yours，
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Dave，
Thank you for your letter.I am writing to tell you something about the person I like.I like Han Han very much.He is a writer.He was born on September 23，1982 in Shanghai.He likes writing，playing soccer and running.He won first prize in the National New Concept Composition Contest in 1998.He began to write novels in 1999.He is very popular with young people.I hope he can write more great books.
Yours，
Li Ming
【详解】介绍韩寒平时的情况，句子用一般现在时，句子的主语用第三人称单数，介绍他曾经的获奖情况，句子应该用一般过去时，所写的句子要符合英语语法，不要遗漏要点，要用自己熟悉的单词及句型。
点睛：1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。确立以什么做中心，文章分为几段，各段分别表达哪些要点，用哪 些语句来支撑各段落的主题句。
2)考虑好写多少句子，搜索记忆中哪些词汇和句型适用于这个语言环境。
3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯。行文连贯是指要点之间的连接词语或过渡语句运用得当，使得作文不是一句句孤立的汉译英；因此行文时多用关联词、引导词，把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来，达到起承转合，运用自如的目的，从而获取高分。
4．假如你是Li Ming，去年夏天去了海南旅游。请你根据要点和所给句型描述一下你去过的海南岛，词数80左右。
1. 参考词汇: the second largest island, hot, water sports, scuba diving (潜水)
2. 参考句型: Have you ever tried/seen/been...
If you..., you will/can....
You should... (walk along the beaches)
One great thing about...is... (try sweet fruit)
I have been to Hainan Island
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【答案】
I Have Been to Hainan Island
I had never been to Hainan Island before, so I decided to go there last summer.
Have you ever been to Hainan Island It is the second largest island in China. It’s a beautiful place. If you go there, you should walk along the beaches. The weather in Hainan is very hot, so people like doing many water sports, such as scuba diving, fishing, swimming, surfing and boating. One great thing about Hainan is that you can try many kinds of sweet fruits there.
If you go to Hainan, I’m sure you will enjoy yourself, and have a great time there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意根据参考词汇和参考句型描述一下你去过的海南岛，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我以前从未去过海南岛，所以去年夏天我决定去那里。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍海南岛的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“如果你去海南，我相信你会玩得很开心，在那里玩得很愉快。”
[亮点词汇]
① like doing sth喜欢做某事
② many kinds of许多
[高分句型]
①If you go there, you should walk along the beaches. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②The weather in Hainan is very hot, so people like doing many water sports, such as scuba diving, fishing, swimming, surfing and boating.（so连接表因果关系的并列句；such as表示“例如”）
5．从小到大，你一定收到了很多玩具吧？你最喜欢的玩具是哪一件呢？请描述一件你最喜欢的玩具，根据以下提示用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1. What is your favourite toy
2. How long have you had it
3. Why do you like it
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
One of my favorite toys is________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
One of my favorite toys is a brown-white bear. I have had it for two years.
Two years ago, my father got a new job in another city so I had to go to a new school. I felt sad because I didn’t want to part with my classmates. One of my best friends named Mona gave the toy bear to me. She said although we couldn’t be together, the toy bear could stay with me instead of her. Her words and the lovely toy bear made me feel better.
Whenever I miss my friends, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示介绍自己最喜欢的玩具，写作时注意整体内容紧凑，语句连贯，符合逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出自己最喜欢的玩具；
第二步，具体进行介绍并说明喜欢它的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①part with与……分开
②instead of代替
③stay with留在
[高分句型]
①I felt sad because I didn’t want to part with my classmates.（because引导原因状语从句）
②She said although we couldn’t be together, the toy bear could stay with me instead of her.（although引导让步状语从句）
期中真题（10篇）
1．每个人都经历过童年，小时候的一些瞬间总是令人难以忘怀，那段无忧无虑、快乐无比的日子在我们的记忆中也将永不褪色 请根据提示以My childhood memory为题写一篇英语短文，向大家讲述你童年发生的故事。
写作提示：
1. When did it happen
2. What was your memory
写作要求：
1.内容包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整；
3. 80词左右。
My childhood memory
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【答案】
My childhood memory
Like many children, I had a happy childhood under the care and love of my parents. My mother took me to the kindergarten and home every day. I thought mother was so kind and healthy that she would never get sick.
But one day, my father went to the kindergarten to get me back. I asked, “Why doesn’t my mother come ” “She is sick, and she is in hospital,” said Father. I felt sad and frightened. Then I began to cry. “Don’t cry, or your mother would worry. You should be a good child.” I seemed to understand my mother was too tired. I made up my mind I would look after my mother from then on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，结合写作提示的两个问题，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，概括的介绍自己童年是快乐的，介绍我认为童年快乐的原因；
第二步，详细介绍我妈妈生病的经历；
第三步，总结妈妈生病对我的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① under the care and love 在照顾和关爱下
② never get sick 从不生病
③ from then on 从那时起
[高分句型]
①I made up my mind I would look after my mother from then on.（宾语从句）
2．生活中不只有眼前的试卷和作业，还有诗和远方。暑假快到了，你们校刊的英文栏目正在征集“The place I want to go most”稿件，请你投稿吧！
写作内容：
1.你最想去的地方是哪里；
2.你为什么想去这个地方；
3.你打算在那里做些什么。
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；
2.词数要求90左右。
The place I want to go most
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【答案】
The place I want to go most
There are so many wonderful places to have a holiday. This time, the place I want to go most is Sanya.
As we all know, Sanya is a good place to relax ourselves. It has beautiful sea and clean beaches. The weather there makes people comfortable. Another reason I want to go there is Sanya’s hotels. Most of the hotels have wonderful condition and service. I really want to have a try.
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. I’ll also taste seafood and try something new. I think a day is not enough for me, and Sanya is really the place where I want to go most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当发挥，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最想去的地方是三亚；
第二步，介绍为什么想去三亚；
第三步，介绍打算在三亚做些什么；
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②have a try试一试
③try something new尝试一些新的东西
[高分句型]
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. (if引导条件状语从句)
3．假设你是李辉，世界自然基金会(WWF) 邀请你下个月参加由该基金会举办的演讲活动，请你准备一篇英文演讲来介绍中国的大熊猫 (The Giant Panda)。
内容包括：
1.体貌，栖息地；
2.饮食习惯；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Li Hui._______________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Li Hui. It is an honor to stand before you today to talk about one of China’s most beloved treasures—the Giant Panda.
They have black and white fur, and live in the mountains of Sichuan, Shaanxi, and Gansu provinces in China. They feed on bamboo. Sometimes, they may eat small animals or eggs, but bamboo remains their favorite food.
In my opinion, the Giant Panda is a symbol of peace. We should protect them. Protecting these lovely animals can keep the balance of our ecosystem.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中大熊猫的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你准备一篇英文演讲来介绍中国的大熊猫 (The Giant Panda)”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“体貌、饮食习惯、你的感受等”几个方面重点介绍大熊猫的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on以……为食；
②in one’s opinion依某人来看；
③a symbol of……的象征；
④keep the balance of保持……的平衡。
[高分句型]
①It is an honor to stand before you today to talk about one of China’s most beloved treasures—the Giant Panda. (“It is an honor to do sth”句型)
②Protecting these lovely animals can keep the balance of our ecosystem. (动名词作主语)
4．假如你是李华，你的好友康康想了解武夷山国家公园，请你根据表格提示，向他做一个简单介绍。
Wuyishan National Park
one of China’s national reserves (保护区)
Location northwest of Fujian
Climate cool, cold, rain a lot, wet
Plants a lot of tall trees, over 2466 kinds
Animals about 475 kinds, snakes, birds...
Benefits (好处) give us food, wood and medicine ……
要求：1.包含以上要点；
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
3.条理清晰，80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Kangkang,
Knowing that you are interested in Wuyishan National Park. Let me tell you something about it. _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Kangkang,
Knowing that you are interested in Wuyishan National Park. Let me tell you something about it. Wuyishan National Park is one of China’s national reserves. It is in the northwest of Fujian. It’s cool in summer but cold in winter. It rains a lot, so the ground is always wet. The park is home to many tall trees, with over 2,466 different kinds of plants. There are also about 475 kinds of animals, including snakes and birds and so on. The park gives us food, wood, medicine and many useful things.
Wuyishan National Park is a beautiful place. Let’s enjoy the beauty of it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③ 提示：根据表格内容，简洁地介绍武夷山的地理位置、气候、植物、动物及其带来的益处。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头简单介绍要谈论的主题——武夷山国家公园。
第二步，按照表格提示，依次描述武夷山的位置、气候、植物和动物。
第三步，简要总结武夷山对人类的益处。
第四步，结尾时表达对武夷山的喜爱，并强调其自然美。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②national reserve 国家保护区
③in winter 在冬季
④and so on 等等
⑤rain a lot 下很多雨
[高分句型]
① Let me tell you something about it. (祈使句)
② There are also about 475 kinds of animals, including snakes and birds and so on. (There be句型)
5．书籍使人聪慧，使人进步。学校将于暑期开展“浸润书香·阅读悦己”的读书活动．假如你是李华，请你根据下列图示，写一篇关于阅读的演讲稿，谈一谈你对阅读的感受以及你的阅读习惯，并为同学们推荐一本你最喜欢的书。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua, Today, I’m glad to share my ideas about reading with you._____________________
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m glad to share my ideas about reading with you.
Reading is always a wonderful time. First of all, it is a good way to relax after a busy day. Moreover, reading can improve our knowledge. I have read many books since I was little. I usually read for half an hour before going to bed on weekdays. At the weekend, I spend more time reading. I used to read books in the library, but now I like reading e-books online. My favourite book is The Treasure Island because the story gives me a lot of confidence.
In a word, reading opens up a whole new world to me. I dream of writing my own stories some day.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出演讲主题；
第二步，具体介绍自己对于阅读的看法，自己的阅读习惯和阅读计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①My favourite book is The Treasure Island because the story gives me a lot of confidence. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②In a word, reading opens up a whole new world to me. (动名词作主语)
6．本学期就要结束了，回首一学期的点点滴滴，相信每个人都有印象深刻的经历，或许是你自己读过的一本有趣的书，或许是你和家长或同学的相处，或许是你的一次志愿者活动，也或许是老师对你的循循教导……，无论是什么样的经历，都有助于我们的成长。请根据以下的提示和要求写一篇英语短文。
提示：1.简单说明有助于你成长的一次经历是什么；
2.具体描述你的这次经历的详细过程；
3.通过这次经历你学到了什么，谈谈你的观点。
要求：1.词数不少于70词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.书写工整、规范。
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
How time flies! This is the end of the term.__________________________________________
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【答案】
How time flies! This is the end of the term. During the term, the thing to remember for me is that I worked as a volunteer at the old people’ home.
On a Sunday morning, I went to the old people’s home in our town with my classmates by bike. We helped the old people to clean the room and wash the clothes. Some students sang and danced for them. Some students played chess with them. I talked with them and they told me stories. At last we cooked a big dinner for them with the things we bought.
I was tired, but I learned a lot from this experience. I knew the old were lonely and we should care about them more. I knew the old were rich in the experiences and they could teach us a lot. I realized I should take up some hobbies to improve myself. All in all, the experience made a big difference to me.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“这一学期中有助于成长的经历”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论自己有助于成长的经历是什么，详细过程以及从中学到了什么，即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
2.写作指导：本文写作应该使用第一人称。时态应用一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山，简述这一学期中难忘的事；第二部分根据要求展开，详述事件的过程，要具体；第三部分总结全文，表达感受，感情升华，阐述从这件事中学到了什么。
7．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam想知道你是否喜欢音乐，喜欢哪种音乐。请你根据以下提示，给Sum写一封信，介绍你最喜欢的音乐。
提示：
1. 你非常喜欢音乐，尤其喜欢古典音乐，并且你经常去听音乐会；
2. 当你空闲和学习疲乏的时候，音乐能帮你减轻（relieve）压力；
3. 你经常去音乐俱乐部练习唱歌，并希望某天能参加歌唱比赛。
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。
Dear Sam,
You want to know whether I love music or not. ______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sam,
You want to know whether I love music or not. I love music very much, especially classical music. I often go to the concert. I like singing songs and can sing very well. When I am free or tired, MP3 becomes my good friend. It relieves my stress. I often go to the singing club to practice my singing. I hope one day I can take part in the singing competition. What about you Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己是否喜欢音乐；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢什么音乐，音乐的作用以及自己在音乐方面的希望；
第三步，最后是表达希望对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
① go to the concert去听音乐会
② sing songs唱歌
③ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① When I am free or tired, MP3 becomes my good friend.（When引导时间状语从句）
② I hope one day I can take part in the singing competition.（hope后为省略了that的宾语从句）
8．阅读，是一种奇妙的旅行，点滴之间滋养你、改变你。读好书，可以培养不屈品格，可以拥有不服输的精神。你班本周组织了以“分享经典书籍”为题的主题班会。请你写一篇发言稿，分享自己的阅读体验。
内容包括：
the book you have read
what it is mainly about
what you have learned from it
要求：
1. 词数不少于 80 词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】
I have finished reading the novel Robinson Crusoe written by Daniel Defoe. This is the third time I’ve read it and it is one of my favorite books.
This book tells a story about Robinson who liked adventure and had been to a lot of places around the world. While he traveled to South Africa by ship, he met a storm and was lost in an island. Although scared, he managed to live on the island alone for 28 years. He never stopped looking for a way out. At last, he successfully sent the SOS signal and was saved to England.
The book has taught me a lot. No matter how hard and dangerous life is, we must keep on living with a strong mind and will. The story also teaches me to learn to live by ourselves.
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，简单介绍你最喜欢的书；
第二步，介绍书的主要内容；
第三步，你的收获。
【亮点词汇】① manage to do sth设法做成某事
② look for寻找
③ keep on doing sth继续做某事
【高分句型】①This book tells a story about Robinson who liked adventures and had been to a lot of places around the world（who引导的定语从句）
②While he traveled to South Africa by ship, he met a storm and was lost in an island.（时间状语从句）
③No matter how hard and dangerous life is, we must keep on living with a strong mind and will.（让步状语从句）
9．生活中一定有许多事会让你感受到幸福和快乐，如阅读、音乐、运动等。请以“______________ makes me happy”为题，补全题目并根据要求写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 你是怎样喜欢上这件事的；
2. 这件事给你带来什么影响。
要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语意连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80左右。
____________ makes me happy
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【答案】
Reading makes me happy
I like reading very much and reading always makes me happy.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was not good at Chinese. I didn’t get good grades in Chinese exams. That made me very worried. One day, my Chinese teacher, Mr. Wang asked me to go to his office after school. He told me some ways to learn Chinese well. He said the best way was reading. After that, I began reading all kinds of books and magazines. Reading made me happy. It also helped me become better at Chinese.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、补全标题，介绍让自己感受到幸福和快乐的是什么事情；
第二步、讲述自己是怎样喜欢上这件事的；
第三步、介绍这件事给自己带来什么影响。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
③all kinds of各种各样的
④help sb. do sth.帮某人做某事
[高分句型]
When I was in Grade Seven, I was not good at Chinese.(when引导时间状语从句)
10．阅读是我们手中握有的最神奇的钥匙，不仅能带领我们走进科学的殿堂、文学的花园、历史的长廊，更是一扇通向广阔世界的窗。让我们在方寸之间心游万仞，思接千载。请你以“Reading makes me ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你的阅读经历并谈谈你在阅读中的收获或阅读给你带来的改变。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 80个；
3. 文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Reading makes me ________
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【答案】
Reading makes me happy
What is fun in the world Different people have different opinions. For me, I think reading is fun. Let me tell you why.
First, I began to read cartoons and fairytales when I was five years old. I found reading these books could make me read myself easily. And I opened my eyes. I knew something about the world. Second, when I grew older, reading made me understand others. I always put myself into others’ shoes when I was reading. In my daily life, when I got on with others, maybe there was misunderstanding, but I could solve it. Then I was relaxed.
In a word, reading has made my life more beautiful. So I think reading is fun.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；回忆过去时，要写得具体；同时要把阅读对自己的影响体现出来。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用形容词补全标题后，开头段要表明写作内容。说明阅读是你怎样；
第二步，回顾过去经历细节，并表明阅读对自己的影响；
第三步，总结并进行情感升华。表明阅读塑造了自己并让自己快乐生活。
[亮点词汇]
①put myself into others’ shoes站在别人的角度思考
②get on with...和某人相处
③In a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①I found reading these books could make me read myself easily.（省略了that的宾语从句）
②...when I got on with others, maybe there was misunderstanding...（when引导的时间状语从句）
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专题11 书面表达（15篇）
同步作文（5篇）
1．在我们的成长过程中，有很多耳熟能详的童话或寓言故事，请你根据下面的图片，以“Sima Guang Hit the Tank（缸）”为题写一篇英文文章。词数不少于80。
提示词：害怕的frightened/scared；哭cry；办法idea/way；石头stone；挽救save；聪明的clever；突然suddenly

Sima Guang Hit the Tank
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2．请根据下列提示写一篇80个词左右,题为“Saving the Animals”的英语短文。提示:
1).人类活动:乱砍滥伐树木和猎杀动物。
2).导致的后果:动物生存环境越来越差,动物也越来越少,有的甚至濒临灭绝。
3).请你提出至少两条合理化的建议。
提示词:稀有的rare
Saving the Animals
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3．假如你是李明，你的美国笔友戴夫(Dave)来信向你询问你所喜欢的人。你非常喜欢作家韩寒，请根据下面的信息，向你的笔友写封回信介绍一下你喜欢的作家。信的开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
韩寒
出生年月和地点 1982年9月23日，上海
爱好 写作、踢足球和跑步
成就 1998年荣获全国新概念作文大赛一等奖，1999年开始写小说，他在年轻人中很受欢迎。
参考词汇：新概念作文大赛New Concept Composition Contest；小说novel
要求：1.语言通顺，流畅；2.70词左右。
Dear Dave，
________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Ming
4．假如你是Li Ming，去年夏天去了海南旅游。请你根据要点和所给句型描述一下你去过的海南岛，词数80左右。
1. 参考词汇: the second largest island, hot, water sports, scuba diving (潜水)
2. 参考句型: Have you ever tried/seen/been...
If you..., you will/can....
You should... (walk along the beaches)
One great thing about...is... (try sweet fruit)
I have been to Hainan Island
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5．从小到大，你一定收到了很多玩具吧？你最喜欢的玩具是哪一件呢？请描述一件你最喜欢的玩具，根据以下提示用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1. What is your favourite toy
2. How long have you had it
3. Why do you like it
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
One of my favorite toys is________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
期中真题（10篇）
1．每个人都经历过童年，小时候的一些瞬间总是令人难以忘怀，那段无忧无虑、快乐无比的日子在我们的记忆中也将永不褪色 请根据提示以My childhood memory为题写一篇英语短文，向大家讲述你童年发生的故事。
写作提示：
1. When did it happen
2. What was your memory
写作要求：
1.内容包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整；
3. 80词左右。
My childhood memory
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2．生活中不只有眼前的试卷和作业，还有诗和远方。暑假快到了，你们校刊的英文栏目正在征集“The place I want to go most”稿件，请你投稿吧！
写作内容：
1.你最想去的地方是哪里；
2.你为什么想去这个地方；
3.你打算在那里做些什么。
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；
2.词数要求90左右。
The place I want to go most
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3．假设你是李辉，世界自然基金会(WWF) 邀请你下个月参加由该基金会举办的演讲活动，请你准备一篇英文演讲来介绍中国的大熊猫 (The Giant Panda)。
内容包括：
1.体貌，栖息地；
2.饮食习惯；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Li Hui._______________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是李华，你的好友康康想了解武夷山国家公园，请你根据表格提示，向他做一个简单介绍。
Wuyishan National Park
one of China’s national reserves (保护区)
Location northwest of Fujian
Climate cool, cold, rain a lot, wet
Plants a lot of tall trees, over 2466 kinds
Animals about 475 kinds, snakes, birds...
Benefits (好处) give us food, wood and medicine ……
要求：1.包含以上要点；
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
3.条理清晰，80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Kangkang,
Knowing that you are interested in Wuyishan National Park. Let me tell you something about it. _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．书籍使人聪慧，使人进步。学校将于暑期开展“浸润书香·阅读悦己”的读书活动．假如你是李华，请你根据下列图示，写一篇关于阅读的演讲稿，谈一谈你对阅读的感受以及你的阅读习惯，并为同学们推荐一本你最喜欢的书。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua, Today, I’m glad to share my ideas about reading with you._____________________
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Thanks for your listening!
6．本学期就要结束了，回首一学期的点点滴滴，相信每个人都有印象深刻的经历，或许是你自己读过的一本有趣的书，或许是你和家长或同学的相处，或许是你的一次志愿者活动，也或许是老师对你的循循教导……，无论是什么样的经历，都有助于我们的成长。请根据以下的提示和要求写一篇英语短文。
提示：1.简单说明有助于你成长的一次经历是什么；
2.具体描述你的这次经历的详细过程；
3.通过这次经历你学到了什么，谈谈你的观点。
要求：1.词数不少于70词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.书写工整、规范。
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
How time flies! This is the end of the term.__________________________________________
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7．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Sam想知道你是否喜欢音乐，喜欢哪种音乐。请你根据以下提示，给Sum写一封信，介绍你最喜欢的音乐。
提示：
1. 你非常喜欢音乐，尤其喜欢古典音乐，并且你经常去听音乐会；
2. 当你空闲和学习疲乏的时候，音乐能帮你减轻（relieve）压力；
3. 你经常去音乐俱乐部练习唱歌，并希望某天能参加歌唱比赛。
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。
Dear Sam,
You want to know whether I love music or not. ______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．阅读，是一种奇妙的旅行，点滴之间滋养你、改变你。读好书，可以培养不屈品格，可以拥有不服输的精神。你班本周组织了以“分享经典书籍”为题的主题班会。请你写一篇发言稿，分享自己的阅读体验。
内容包括：
the book you have read
what it is mainly about
what you have learned from it
要求：
1. 词数不少于 80 词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．生活中一定有许多事会让你感受到幸福和快乐，如阅读、音乐、运动等。请以“______________ makes me happy”为题，补全题目并根据要求写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 你是怎样喜欢上这件事的；
2. 这件事给你带来什么影响。
要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语意连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80左右。
____________ makes me happy
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．阅读是我们手中握有的最神奇的钥匙，不仅能带领我们走进科学的殿堂、文学的花园、历史的长廊，更是一扇通向广阔世界的窗。让我们在方寸之间心游万仞，思接千载。请你以“Reading makes me ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你的阅读经历并谈谈你在阅读中的收获或阅读给你带来的改变。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 80个；
3. 文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Reading makes me ________
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