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第1周　喜悦与兴奋 & 建议信
续写语料积累1　情感描写　喜悦与兴奋(15分钟)
头脑风暴
短语词块 be delighted by/at对……感到高兴　over the moon欣喜若狂　beam with pleasure笑逐颜开brighten sb’s heart使某人心情愉快　jump/leap/dance with joy高兴地跳起来/跳起舞来　light up露出喜色　in high spirits精神高涨　be wild with joy欣喜若狂　feelings run high情绪很激动　grin from ear to ear笑得合不拢嘴　give sb a smile莞尔一笑　wear a bright smile面带微笑　smile brightly笑得灿烂　roar with laughter哈哈大笑　burst into hearty laughter尽情欢笑　laugh heartily开怀大笑　burst out laughing　放声大笑　flush with excitement激动得满脸通红　feel a surge of excitement感到一阵激动　twinkle with excitement激动得两眼发亮　feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy　感到很高兴　be overcome with happiness/delight/joy高兴无比　one’s heart beats/pounds wildly某人心脏怦怦直跳　couldn’t contain one’s excitement无法抑制自己的兴奋　a sparkle of excitement in one’s eyes眼里闪耀着激动的光芒
1.His face lit up with pleasure.他面露喜色。
2．She was in cheerful spirits and grinned from ear to ear.她兴高采烈，笑得合不拢嘴。
3．When she got the news of her winning first prize，her heart was pounding with wild joy.
当她得知自己获得一等奖的消息时，她高兴得心怦怦直跳。
4．On the way to the hospital，John burst into laughter suddenly，which made Tom confused.
在去医院的路上，约翰突然大笑了起来，这把汤姆弄糊涂了。
5．I slowly pulled my paper out of my drawer and held it up.The entire class exploded with laughter.我慢慢地把试卷从抽屉中拿出并举起。全班同学哄堂大笑。
6．She felt a surge of excitement run through her.
她感到一阵激动传遍全身。
7．A wide excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her.她兴奋得不能自已。
8．A look of excitement crossed/flashed across/spread across her face.她脸上露出激动的表情。
即时演练
1．听到这个消息，他兴奋得跳上跳下。
2．她两眼发亮，激动得心怦怦跳。
3．我抑制不住喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了房子。
4．她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
5．看到直升机，简高兴得眉开眼笑。
应用文写作——建议信(30分钟)
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，一定要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力，并注意要礼貌当先。具体写作结构如下：
头脑风暴
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice on/about how to...
我写信就如何……给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice on/about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
(4)I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...我很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
(5)For some further improvement，I’d like to share the following suggestions.
为了进一步改进，我想分享以下建议。
(6)Here are some tips/suggestions to help you.
这里有对你有帮助的一些建议。
(7)I think you can make it if you follow the following advice/the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
2．中间句
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s best to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...；for another...
一方面……，另一方面……
(6)If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3．结尾句
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy/delighted to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
(4)I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your...will become even more...我真的希望我的建议能被采纳，你的……会变得更加……
典例展示
(2023·新课标Ⅰ)
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．说明问题；2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
范文佳作
Dear Ryan，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I am writing to express my thoughts on your plan to randomly [1]pair up students for oral practice.(自我介绍，表明写信目的)
Personally，though fair，random pairing may not necessarily [2]serve its intended purposes.In particular，when both students lack fluency，they might [3]struggle to find motivation and fail to [4]reach the desired goals.(说明随机分组的问题)Hence，I [5]propose an alternative approach：grouping students with varying levels of fluency.Pairing more fluent speakers with those who are less fluent could create a better learning environment.Alternatively，[6]if practicable，allowing students to choose their own partners would be even better as it can enhance their shared learning experience more efficiently.(提出建议并说明理由)
I would greatly appreciate your understanding and consideration of my suggestions.(希望采纳建议)
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
亮词美句：[1](使两人)结组工作　[2]达到预期目的　[3]费力(做)　[4]达到预期目标　[5]提出一种备选方法　[6]是省略句结构，意为“如果可行的话”
即时演练
(2025·河南安阳多校联考)
假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请你给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件，内容如下：
1．你对该杂志的看法；
2．提出你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
答案精析
续写语料积累1
1．Hearing the news，he jumped up and down with excitement.
2．Her eyes were shining and her heart was pounding with excitement.
3．I couldn’t contain my joy and jumped into the house.
4．She wore a shining smile on her face.
5．At the sight of the helicopter，Jane beamed with wild joy.
应用文写作　参考范文
Dear Editor，
I’m Li Hua，your regular reader.Your magazine is truly wonderful，as it provides various valuable learning materials and interesting articles，and helps me a lot with my English study.For some further improvement，I’d like to share the following suggestions.
Personally，it would get better to cover some extended reading related to our textbooks，which will surely assist us to be better equipped for our English studies.What is equally necessary is to set up a column sharing study experience from top students and add an interactive section to help us communicate more efficiently.
I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your magazine will become even more popular.
Yours，
Li Hua(共20张PPT)
喜悦与兴奋&建议信
第1周
短语词块 be delighted by/at对……感到高兴　over the moon欣喜若狂　beam with pleasure笑逐颜开brighten sb’s heart使某人心情愉快　jump/leap/dance with joy高兴地跳起来/跳起舞来　light up露出喜色　in high spirits精神高涨　be wild with joy欣喜若狂　feelings run high情绪很激动　grin from ear to ear笑得合不拢嘴　give sb a smile莞尔一笑　wear a bright smile面带微笑　smile brightly笑得灿烂　roar with laughter哈哈大笑　
续写语料积累1
情感描写　喜悦与兴奋(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
短语词块 burst into hearty laughter尽情欢笑　laugh heartily开怀大笑　burst out laughing　放声大笑　flush with excitement激动得满脸通红　feel a surge of excitement感到一阵激动　twinkle with excitement激动得两眼发亮　feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy　感到很高兴　be overcome with happiness/delight/joy高兴无比　one’s heart beats/pounds wildly某人心脏怦怦直跳　couldn’t contain one’s excitement无法抑制自己的兴奋　a sparkle of excitement in one’s eyes眼里闪耀着激动的光芒
1.His face lit up with pleasure.他面露喜色。
2.She was in cheerful spirits and grinned from ear to ear.她兴高采烈，笑得合不拢嘴。
3.When she got the news of her winning first prize，her heart was pounding with wild joy.
当她得知自己获得一等奖的消息时，她高兴得心怦怦直跳。
4.On the way to the hospital，John burst into laughter suddenly，which made Tom confused.在去医院的路上，约翰突然大笑了起来，这把汤姆弄糊涂了。
5.I slowly pulled my paper out of my drawer and held it up.The entire class exploded with laughter.
我慢慢地把试卷从抽屉中拿出并举起。全班同学哄堂大笑。
6.She felt a surge of excitement run through her.
她感到一阵激动传遍全身。
7.A wide excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her.她兴奋得不能自已。
8.A look of excitement crossed/flashed across/spread across her face.她脸上露出激动的表情。
[即时演练]
1.听到这个消息，他兴奋得跳上跳下。
______________________________________________________________
2.她两眼发亮，激动得心怦怦跳。
______________________________________________________________
3.我抑制不住喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了房子。
______________________________________________________________
4.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
______________________________________________________________
5.看到直升机，简高兴得眉开眼笑。
______________________________________________________________
Hearing the news，he jumped up and down with excitement.
Her eyes were shining and her heart was pounding with excitement.
I couldn’t contain my joy and jumped into the house.
She wore a shining smile on her face.
At the sight of the helicopter，Jane beamed with wild joy.
应用文写作——建议信(30分钟)
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，一定要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力，并注意要礼貌当先。具体写作结构如下：
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice on/about how to...
我写信就如何……给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice on/about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
(4)I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
我很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
(5)For some further improvement，I’d like to share the following suggestions.
为了进一步改进，我想分享以下建议。
(6)Here are some tips/suggestions to help you.
这里有对你有帮助的一些建议。
(7)I think you can make it if you follow the following advice/the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
2.中间句
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s best to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...；for another...一方面……，另一方面……
(6)If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3.结尾句
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy/delighted to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
(4)I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your...will become even more...我真的希望我的建议能被采纳，你的……会变得更加……
[典例展示]
(2023·新课标Ⅰ)
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.说明问题；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
[范文佳作]
Dear Ryan，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I am writing to express my thoughts on your plan to randomly [1]pair up students for oral practice.(自我介绍，表明写信目的)
Personally，though fair，random pairing may not necessarily [2]serve its intended purposes.In particular，when both students lack fluency，they might [3]struggle to find motivation and fail to [4]reach the desired goals.(说明随机分组的问题)Hence，I [5]propose an alternative approach：grouping students with varying levels of fluency.
Pairing more fluent speakers with those who are less fluent could create a better learning environment.Alternatively，[6]if practicable，allowing students to choose their own partners would be even better as it can enhance their shared learning experience more efficiently.(提出建议并说明理由)
I would greatly appreciate your understanding and consideration of my suggestions.(希望采纳建议)
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
亮词美句：[1](使两人)结组工作　[2]达到预期目的　[3]费力(做)　[4]达到预期目标　[5]提出一种备选方法　[6]是省略句结构，意为“如果可行的话”
[即时演练]
(2025·河南安阳多校联考)
假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请你给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件，内容如下：
1.你对该杂志的看法；
2.提出你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor，
______________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Editor，
I’m Li Hua，your regular reader.Your magazine is truly wonderful，as it provides various valuable learning materials and interesting articles，and helps me a lot with my English study.For some further improvement，I’d like to share the following suggestions.
Personally，it would get better to cover some extended reading related to our textbooks，which will surely assist us to be better equipped for our English studies.What is equally necessary is to set up a column sharing study experience from top students and add an interactive section to help us communicate more efficiently.
I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your magazine will become even more popular.
Yours，
Li Hua

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