写作周周练 第5周 愤怒与生气&道歉信 课件(共19张)+学案 --2026届高考英语一轮复习北师大版

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第5周 愤怒与生气&道歉信
续写语料积累5 情感描写 愤怒与生气(15分钟)
头脑风暴
短语词块 feel/get angry/annoyed感到生气 storm out of/into/off 怒气冲冲地跑出/闯进/跑走 be seized by anger/annoyance怒火中烧 be angry/annoyed/cross with sb生某人的气 blow one’s top暴跳如雷 eyes burning with anger满眼怒火 flush with anger气得脸通红 feel a burst of anger/rage勃然大怒 lose one’s temper发脾气 boil with rage怒火中烧 be filled with fury/anger满腔怒火 explode with anger大发雷霆 face twists in anger气得面目扭曲 fly into a rage勃然大怒 hit the ceiling勃然大怒 mask one’s anger with a smile用微笑来掩饰某人的愤怒 be shaking/trembling/speechless with rage气愤得发抖/战栗/说不出话来
1.A blaze of anger flashed across his face.
他顿时面露怒色。
2.Boiling with rage,he shook his fist at me.
他怒火中烧,对我挥舞拳头。
3.He ran out of the room in a burst of anger.
他怒气冲冲地跑出了房间。
4.She let out a cry of anger,her eyes glaring at her son.她怒吼了一声,眼睛怒视着儿子。
5.He stormed out of the room,slamming the door furiously.
他怒气冲冲地冲出房间,狠狠地摔门而去。
6.Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano.她的回答激怒了他,他像火山一样爆发了。
7.His eyes were shining with anger and his voice trembled with anger.他的双眼闪着愤怒的光芒,他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
8.He was tongue-tied with anger.His hands trembled and he shouted for half a day.
他气得张口结舌,两手颤抖,大喊大叫了半天。
即时演练
1.他气得浑身发抖。
2.当他听到这个谣言时,他几乎压制不住怒火。
3.Tom最近的行为总能让Smith老师怒不可遏。
4.她满腔怒火,一个字也说不出来。(用过去分词短语作状语)
5.得知儿子和另一个男孩打架,他气得直跺脚。(用现在分词短语作状语)
应用文写作——道歉信(30分钟)
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下,为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下:
头脑风暴
1.开头句
(1)I am writing to apologize/say sorry for...
我写这封信是为……向你致歉。
(2)I am really sorry but I have no choice but to...我真的很抱歉,但我别无选择,只能……
(3)I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did,but please believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……
(4)I apologize sincerely for what I said that day.I didn’t mean to hurt you.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
(5)I am writing to express/convey my sincere apologies to you.
我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意。
2.中间句
(1)I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.为此我感到非常抱歉,想让你知道实情。
(2)The reason why I fail to...is that...
我未能……的原因是……
(3)I am not able to...due to the fact that...
我不能……是由于……
(4)It’s because of...that I...
正是因为……我才……
(5)Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning
无论如何,我真诚地希望我们可以为……再定一个时间。请问你这个星期天上午有空吗?
3.结尾句
(1)Once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience I caused.对于我造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
(2)I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by me/my carelessness.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.
再次为我/我的粗心带来的不便或麻烦表示歉意,我承诺这样的事情不会再发生。
(3)I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.
我真心希望你能理解我的处境/站在我的立场考虑,并接受我的道歉。
典例展示
(2021·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
范文佳作
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well.I’m writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to join you this weekend [1]as planned.(表达歉意)
Unfortunately,I’ve encountered an unexpected family matter due to my grandfather falling ill,which requires my immediate presence at home.I hope you can understand the situation.(说明原因,请求谅解) As an [2]alternative,I suggest that we [3]reschedule our outing to the following weekend.This way,I’ll be able to [4]fulfill my commitments and ensure we have a more enjoyable time together without any [5]distractions.(提出建议并给出理由)
I value our friendship and would really appreciate your understanding.Looking forward to your response,and once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.(再次道歉,希望得到谅解)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]省略句结构 [2]n.可供选择的事物,替代物 [3]vt.重新安排 [4]履行我的承诺
[5]n.使人分心的事物
即时演练
(2025·河北邢台名校联考)
假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给担任评委的外教Mr Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Johnson,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
答案精析
续写语料积累5
1.He trembled with anger from head to toe.
2.He could hardly restrain/contain his anger when he heard this rumor.
3.Tom’s recent behavior would always make Mr Smith boil with anger/rage.
4.Filled with fury/anger,she was unable to utter a single word.
5.Knowing (that) his son got into a fight with another boy,he stamped his foot in anger.
应用文写作 参考范文
Dear Mr Johnson,
With utter sincerity,I’m writing to extend my apology for the postponement of the English Drama Performance Competition,which otherwise would be held next Friday.
Out of our expectations,a lecture of vital importance will fall on next Friday,which unavoidably conflicts with our initial arrangement,making many competitors unavailable for the contest.Therefore,the contest has to be put off to next Sunday afternoon.Would it be convenient for you
I apologize again for any inconvenience it may bring to you and your understanding will be highly appreciated.Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours,
Li Hua(共19张PPT)
愤怒与生气&道歉信
第5周
短语词块 feel/get angry/annoyed感到生气 storm out of/into/off 怒气冲冲地跑出/闯进/跑走 be seized by anger/annoyance怒火中烧 be angry/annoyed
/cross with sb生某人的气 blow one’s top暴跳如雷 eyes burning with anger满眼怒火 flush with anger气得脸通红 feel a burst of anger/rage勃然大怒 lose one’s temper发脾气 boil with rage怒火中烧 be filled with fury/anger满腔怒火 explode with anger大发雷霆 face twists in anger气得面目扭曲 fly into a rage勃然大怒 hit the ceiling勃然大怒 mask one’s anger with a smile用微笑来掩饰某人的愤怒 be shaking
/trembling/speechless with rage气愤得发抖/战栗/说不出话来
续写语料积累5
情感描写 愤怒与生气(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.A blaze of anger flashed across his face.
他顿时面露怒色。
2.Boiling with rage,he shook his fist at me.
他怒火中烧,对我挥舞拳头。
3.He ran out of the room in a burst of anger.
他怒气冲冲地跑出了房间。
4.She let out a cry of anger,her eyes glaring at her son.她怒吼了一声,眼睛怒视着儿子。
5.He stormed out of the room,slamming the door furiously.他怒气冲冲地冲出房间,狠狠地摔门而去。
6.Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano.她的回答激怒了他,他像火山一样爆发了。
7.His eyes were shining with anger and his voice trembled with anger.他的双眼闪着愤怒的光芒,他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
8.He was tongue-tied with anger.His hands trembled and he shouted for half a day.
他气得张口结舌,两手颤抖,大喊大叫了半天。
[即时演练]
1.他气得浑身发抖。
______________________________________________________________
2.当他听到这个谣言时,他几乎压制不住怒火。
______________________________________________________________
3.Tom最近的行为总能让Smith老师怒不可遏。
______________________________________________________________
4.她满腔怒火,一个字也说不出来。(用过去分词短语作状语)
______________________________________________________________
He trembled with anger from head to toe.
He could hardly restrain/contain his anger when he heard this rumor.
Tom’s recent behavior would always make Mr Smith boil with anger/rage.
Filled with fury/anger,she was unable to utter a single word.
5.得知儿子和另一个男孩打架,他气得直跺脚。(用现在分词短语作状语)
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Knowing (that) his son got into a fight with another boy,he stamped his foot in anger.
应用文写作——道歉信(30分钟)
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下,为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I am writing to apologize/say sorry for...
我写这封信是为……向你致歉。
(2)I am really sorry but I have no choice but to...我真的很抱歉,但我别无选择,只能……
(3)I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did,but please believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……
(4)I apologize sincerely for what I said that day.I didn’t mean to hurt you.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
(5)I am writing to express/convey my sincere apologies to you.我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意。
2.中间句
(1)I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
为此我感到非常抱歉,想让你知道实情。
(2)The reason why I fail to...is that...
我未能……的原因是……
(3)I am not able to...due to the fact that...
我不能……是由于……
(4)It’s because of...that I...
正是因为……我才……
(5)Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning?无论如何,我真诚地希望我们可以为……再定一个时间。请问你这个星期天上午有空吗?
3.结尾句
(1)Once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience I caused.对于我造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
(2)I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by me/my carelessness.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.
再次为我/我的粗心带来的不便或麻烦表示歉意,我承诺这样的事情不会再发生。
(3)I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.
我真心希望你能理解我的处境/站在我的立场考虑,并接受我的道歉。
[典例展示]
(2021·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[范文佳作]
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well.I’m writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to join you this weekend [1]as planned.(表达歉意)
Unfortunately,I’ve encountered an unexpected family matter due to my grandfather falling ill,which requires my immediate presence at home.I hope you can understand the situation.(说明原因,请求谅解) As an [2]alternative,I suggest that we [3]reschedule our outing to the following weekend.This way,I’ll be able to [4]fulfill my commitments and ensure we have a more enjoyable time together without any [5]distractions.(提出建议并给出理由)
I value our friendship and would really appreciate your understanding.Looking forward to your response,and once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.(再次道歉,希望得到谅解)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]省略句结构 [2]n.可供选择的事物,替代物 [3]vt.重新安排 [4]履行我的承诺 [5]n.使人分心的事物
[即时演练]
(2025·河北邢台名校联考)
假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给担任评委的外教Mr Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Johnson,
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mr Johnson,
With utter sincerity,I’m writing to extend my apology for the postponement of the English Drama Performance Competition,which otherwise would be held next Friday.
Out of our expectations,a lecture of vital importance will fall on next Friday,which unavoidably conflicts with our initial arrangement,making many competitors unavailable for the contest.Therefore,the contest has to be put off to next Sunday afternoon.Would it be convenient for you
I apologize again for any inconvenience it may bring to you and your understanding will be highly appreciated.Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours,
Li Hua

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