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第9周　幸福与感动&告知信
续写语料积累9　情感描写　幸福与感动(15分钟)
头脑风暴
短语词块 a tender hug一个温柔的拥抱　give...a long loving hug给……一个长久的爱的拥抱　cup one’s face in one’s hands用手捧着某人的脸　never take one’s eyes off the wonderful sight of...目不转睛地看着……的奇妙景象　touched deeply/immensely被深深感动　heartfelt gratitude衷心的感谢　be filled with gratitude and joy充满感激和喜悦　move sb to tears in a flash某人突然感动得热泪盈眶　a warm upsurge in one’s heart一股暖烘烘的热潮涌上心头　from one’s bottom of heart发自内心地
1.She was overflowing with happiness.
她觉得幸福满满。
2．Tears of happiness flowed down her cheeks.
幸福的泪水顺着她的面颊流了下来。
3．Tears filling her eyes，she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
4．I express my great thanks for your kindness from my bottom of heart.
我从心底对你的好意表示非常感谢。
5．When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek，his eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
当妈妈亲吻宝贝的面颊时，宝贝的眼睛里闪烁着开心与甜蜜的光芒。
6．And the minute they met，they hugged together firmly as if they would never separate again.
他们一见面，就紧紧地拥抱在一起，好像永远不会再分开。
7．“Happy Mother’s Day！” the twins greeted her，with their eyes twinkling with excitement.
“母亲节快乐！”双胞胎向她致以问候，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
8．Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins，she sobbed，with delightful tears streaming down her face.
她沉浸在美味的早餐和她的双胞胎纯洁的爱当中，抽泣着，开心的眼泪从脸上流下来。
9．It was an event that happened in the school last year.But it is now still fresh in my mind and keeps me touched all the time.
那是去年发生在学校的一件事，却让我记忆犹新，至今令我感动不已。
即时演练
1．小女孩像一只快乐的小鸟一样扑向她爸爸。
2．金色的阳光在她的长发上飞舞(dance)，孩子们的笑声在空中飘荡(float)。
3．我感到一股暖流流遍全身。(流遍：surge through)
4．每当他想起去年冬天，他的眼睛就闪烁着喜悦的光芒。(闪烁着：twinkle with)
5．一天晚上，站在缀满宝石般的天空下，我发现自己对所有的艰辛心存感激。(艰辛：hardships)
应用文写作——告知信(30分钟)
告知信多是从个人角度出发，将对方想要了解的事情告诉对方，让对方知道。告知信通常分为两类：1.告知某人有某事将要发生；2.回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作结构如下：
头脑风暴
1．开头句
(1)It’s a pleasure for me to inform you of...
我很高兴地通知你……
(2)I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.我写信是想告诉你一些相关的细节。
(3)I can’t wait to share some relevant details with you.
我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(4)I am quite willing to inform you of some relevant details.我很愿意告诉你一些相关的细节。
(5)I’m so happy to know that...from your letter，so I’m writing to tell you some relevant details.我很高兴从你的信中得知……，所以我写信告诉你一些相关的细节。
(6)Having learned that...，I can’t wait to share some relevant details with you.得知……，我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(7)No sooner had I learned that...than I couldn’t wait to share some relevant details with you.我刚得知……就迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(8)I’m very glad/delighted/more than pleased to receive your email/letter，in which you expressed great interest in...I’m quite/perfectly willing to share with you some information about it.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件/信，在电子邮件/信中你表示对……很感兴趣。我很乐意和你分享一些有关它的信息。
2．中间句
(1)Some details regarding/concerning...are as follows.一些关于……的细节如下。
(2)．..will take place between...and...，so we’d better...……将在……和……之间进行，所以我们最好……
(3)A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in...，including...，which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you.将在……举办多种多样包括……在内的有意义的活动，这些活动一定会吸引像你一样的爱好者。
(4)．..is arranged to start from...，which will last...安排……从……开始，为期……
3．结尾句
(1)If you want to know more detailed information/anything else，please don’t hesitate to contact me/drop me a line.如果你想知道更多详细信息/其他事情，请尽管联系我/给我写信。
(2)I sincerely hope the information is beneficial to you./I sincerely hope you can benefit from the information.我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
(3)Please don’t hesitate to turn to me for help if you have any other questions.如果你还有其他的问题，请尽管向我求助，不要犹豫。
(4)If there is anything I can do for you，I would be more than delighted to offer my help/come to your assistance.如果有什么我能为你做的，我将非常乐意提供帮助/来帮助你。
典例展示
(2025·江苏南京六校联考)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom告诉你，他对我国的中秋节特别感兴趣，特写信向你咨询相关习俗，请你回复邮件介绍该节日。内容包括：
1．时间(农历8月15日)；2.习俗活动；3.意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文佳作
Dear Tom，
Glad to hear from you.Learning that you are interested in our Mid-Autumn Festival，I am writing to share something about it with you.(点明告知内容)
The Mid-Autumn Festival，[1]originating from our ancestors’ [2]worship of the moon，falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month，[3]when people believe the moon is at its brightest and fullest if the weather is fine.As a tradition，the whole family will usually get together to have a big dinner and then enjoy mooncakes gathering at the table in the beautiful moonlight.Sometimes，the elderly in the family will tell the myth of the moon—Chang’e Flying to the Moon—to the children.(具体介绍中秋节：时间、习俗和意义)
Hoping my introduction to the Mid-Autumn Festival will help you get some [4]insight into it.Looking forward to your reply.(希望和盼望)
Yours，
Li Hua
亮词美句：[1]起源于　[2]n.崇拜　[3]when引导的定语从句　[4]深刻理解
即时演练
(2025·湖北名校联盟联考)
假定你是李华，上周五你校组织了校园农场的丰收活动。请你给新西兰朋友Leo写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1．丰收场景；2.你的感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Leo，
I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday._________
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
答案精析
续写语料积累9
1．The little girl threw herself to her dad like a happy bird.
2．Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children’s laughter floated in the air.
3．I felt the warmth surging through me.
4．His eyes twinkled with pleasure every time he remembered last winter.
5．One evening，standing under the jeweled sky，I found myself thankful for all the hardships.
应用文写作　参考范文
Dear Leo，
I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday. It was such a delightful and memorable experience that I couldn’t wait to tell you about it.
At the sight of the farm filled with ripe vegetables and fruits like peppers，tomatoes and grapes，we found it hard to contain our excitement.After receiving some instructions from the teachers，we plunged into the harvesting activity.We bustled around，each with a basket in hand，carefully gathering the fruits of our labor.Personally，I collected a variety of vegetables such as carrots，tomatoes and peppers.I even cooked them for my families，though，honestly speaking，they were a bit overcooked.
This activity not only brought me the joy of harvest but also taught me the value of labor，making the efforts on the campus farm truly worthwhile.
Yours，
Li Hua(共21张PPT)
幸福与感动&告知信
第9周
短语词块 a tender hug一个温柔的拥抱　give...a long loving hug给……一个长久的爱的拥抱　cup one’s face in one’s hands用手捧着某人的脸　never take one’s eyes off the wonderful sight of...目不转睛地看着……的奇妙景象　touched deeply/immensely被深深感动　heartfelt gratitude衷心的感谢　be filled with gratitude and joy充满感激和喜悦　move sb to tears in a flash某人突然感动得热泪盈眶　a warm upsurge in one’s heart一股暖烘烘的热潮涌上心头　from one’s bottom of heart发自内心地
续写语料积累9
情感描写　幸福与感动(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.She was overflowing with happiness.
她觉得幸福满满。
2.Tears of happiness flowed down her cheeks.
幸福的泪水顺着她的面颊流了下来。
3.Tears filling her eyes，she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
4.I express my great thanks for your kindness from my bottom of heart.
我从心底对你的好意表示非常感谢。
5.When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek，his eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
当妈妈亲吻宝贝的面颊时，宝贝的眼睛里闪烁着开心与甜蜜的光芒。
6.And the minute they met，they hugged together firmly as if they would never separate again.他们一见面，就紧紧地拥抱在一起，好像永远不会再分开。
7.“Happy Mother’s Day！” the twins greeted her，with their eyes twinkling with excitement.“母亲节快乐！”双胞胎向她致以问候，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
8.Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins，she sobbed，with delightful tears streaming down her face.她沉浸在美味的早餐和她的双胞胎纯洁的爱当中，抽泣着，开心的眼泪从脸上流下来。
9.It was an event that happened in the school last year.But it is now still fresh in my mind and keeps me touched all the time.那是去年发生在学校的一件事，却让我记忆犹新，至今令我感动不已。
[即时演练]
1.小女孩像一只快乐的小鸟一样扑向她爸爸。
______________________________________________________________
2.金色的阳光在她的长发上飞舞(dance)，孩子们的笑声在空中飘荡(float)。
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
3.我感到一股暖流流遍全身。(流遍：surge through)
______________________________________________________________
The little girl threw herself to her dad like a happy bird.
Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children’s laughter floated in the air.
I felt the warmth surging through me.
4.每当他想起去年冬天，他的眼睛就闪烁着喜悦的光芒。(闪烁着：twinkle with)
______________________________________________________________
5.一天晚上，站在缀满宝石般的天空下，我发现自己对所有的艰辛心存感激。(艰辛：hardships)
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
His eyes twinkled with pleasure every time he remembered last winter.
One evening，standing under the jeweled sky，I found myself thankful for all the hardships.
应用文写作——告知信(30分钟)
告知信多是从个人角度出发，将对方想要了解的事情告诉对方，让对方知道。告知信通常分为两类：1.告知某人有某事将要发生；2.回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作结构如下：
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)It’s a pleasure for me to inform you of...
我很高兴地通知你……
(2)I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.我写信是想告诉你一些相关的细节。
(3)I can’t wait to share some relevant details with you.我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(4)I am quite willing to inform you of some relevant details.我很愿意告诉你一些相关的细节。
(5)I’m so happy to know that...from your letter，so I’m writing to tell you some relevant details.
我很高兴从你的信中得知……，所以我写信告诉你一些相关的细节。
(6)Having learned that...，I can’t wait to share some relevant details with you.得知……，我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(7)No sooner had I learned that...than I couldn’t wait to share some relevant details with you.
我刚得知……就迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(8)I’m very glad/delighted/more than pleased to receive your email/letter，in which you expressed great interest in...I’m quite/perfectly willing to share with you some information about it.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件/信，在电子邮件/信中你表示对……很感兴趣。我很乐意和你分享一些有关它的信息。
2.中间句
(1)Some details regarding/concerning...are as follows.一些关于……的细节如下。
(2)...will take place between...and...，so we’d better...……将在……和……之间进行，所以我们最好……
(3)A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in...，including...，which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you.将在……举办多种多样包括……在内的有意义的活动，这些活动一定会吸引像你一样的爱好者。
(4)...is arranged to start from...，which will last...安排……从……开始，为期……
3.结尾句
(1)If you want to know more detailed information/anything else，please don’t hesitate to contact me/drop me a line.如果你想知道更多详细信息/其他事情，请尽管联系我/给我写信。
(2)I sincerely hope the information is beneficial to you./I sincerely hope you can benefit from the information.我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
(3)Please don’t hesitate to turn to me for help if you have any other questions.如果你还有其他的问题，请尽管向我求助，不要犹豫。
(4)If there is anything I can do for you，I would be more than delighted to offer my help/come to your assistance.如果有什么我能为你做的，我将非常乐意提供帮助/来帮助你。
[典例展示]
(2025·江苏南京六校联考)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom告诉你，他对我国的中秋节特别感兴趣，特写信向你咨询相关习俗，请你回复邮件介绍该节日。内容包括：
1.时间(农历8月15日)；
2.习俗活动；
3.意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[范文佳作]
Dear Tom，
Glad to hear from you.Learning that you are interested in our Mid-Autumn Festival，I am writing to share something about it with you.(点明告知内容)
The Mid-Autumn Festival，[1]originating from our ancestors’ [2]worship of the moon，falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month，
[3]when people believe the moon is at its brightest and fullest if the weather is fine.As a tradition，the whole family will usually get together to have a big dinner and then enjoy mooncakes gathering at the table in the beautiful moonlight.Sometimes，the elderly in the family will tell the myth of the moon—Chang’e Flying to the Moon—to the children.(具体介绍中秋节：时间、习俗和意义)
Hoping my introduction to the Mid-Autumn Festival will help you get some [4]insight into it.Looking forward to your reply.(希望和盼望)
Yours，
Li Hua
亮词美句：[1]起源于　[2]n.崇拜　[3]when引导的定语从句　[4]深刻理解
[即时演练]
(2025·湖北名校联盟联考)
假定你是李华，上周五你校组织了校园农场的丰收活动。请你给新西兰朋友Leo写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1.丰收场景；
2.你的感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Leo，
I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday.________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Leo，
I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday. It was such a delightful and memorable experience that I couldn’t wait to tell you about it.
At the sight of the farm filled with ripe vegetables and fruits like peppers，tomatoes and grapes，we found it hard to contain our excitement.After receiving some instructions from the teachers，we plunged into the harvesting activity.We bustled around，each with a basket in hand，carefully gathering the fruits of our labor.Personally，
I collected a variety of vegetables such as carrots，tomatoes and peppers.I even cooked them for my families，though，honestly speaking，they were a bit overcooked.
This activity not only brought me the joy of harvest but also taught me the value of labor，making the efforts on the campus farm truly worthwhile.
Yours，
Li Hua

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