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第19周　读后续写主题练4　遇险脱困
遇险脱困是读后续写中非常重要的一类故事，它并不只出现在“人与自然”主题语境中，在“人与社会”主题语境下，也会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初当事人遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到救助者想办法救援，再到最后当事人获救的宽慰和感激，涉及一系列的表达。
在往年高考真题中，就曾经考过多次：2016年浙江卷：夫妻吵架，森林迷路；2017年浙江卷：骑车旅行，中途遇狼；2018年浙江卷：农场度假，骑马迷路；2020年浙江卷：给北极熊拍照时遇险。
“遇险类”读后续写解题技巧：
1．总的原则：最终一定脱险。
2．三个鲜明的阶段：
第一阶段：遭遇险境；
第二阶段：出现转机；
第三阶段：脱离危险。
高分句式
一、雪山脱险类
1．Exhausted as we were，we didn’t stop.Gritting our teeth，we kept digging the trench.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来，我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。
2．Inch by inch，we dug the snow out.After what seemed a century，we made it.
我们一点一点地把雪挖出来，在经历了似乎一个世纪之后(夸张手法)，我们终于成功了。
二、冰上救援类
He pushed the branch toward me.I grabbed immediately and was dragged out of the icy water by Harry.What a narrow escape!
他把树枝推向我。我立刻抓住它，被哈利从冰冷的水中拖了出来。真是死里逃生！
三、困洞营救类
1．No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings.Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands，pulling him out without reserve.(动作链)
我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个男人就开始扫视周围的环境，然后慢慢向洞口走去，伸手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。
2．Slowly and cautiously，moving forward，we held our hands tightly in order not to be seperated.
慢慢且小心翼翼地往前走，我们紧紧地握着手，不让彼此分开。
四、动物描写类
1．It exposed its sharp teeth，glaring at us as it ran forward.它露出锋利的牙齿，向前跑时怒视着我们。
2．It seemed that his mouth was full of blood，his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open.
他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张得很大。
五、自救他救类
1．I shouted for help at the top of my voice，but in vain.我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但都是徒劳。
2．Eyes fixed on the beast，he pulled out the sausages in his backpack，aimed at the furry giant and threw them straight to it，hoping the flavor would attract it.他目不转睛地盯着那只野兽，掏出背包里的香肠，对准这个毛茸茸的庞然大物，直接扔给它，希望香味能够吸引它的注意力。
3．I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray.
我鼓起勇气，试图用胡椒喷雾把他吓跑。
4．I took out a metal bar from the car at once and started a fight with the wolf.
我立刻从车里拿出一根金属棒，开始与狼搏斗。
5．The wolf jumped up，and rushed towards one of them，but was beaten back.Seeing that he couldn’t win，the wolf ran away down the hill.
狼跳了起来，冲向其中一只，但被击退了。狼看到自己赢不了，就跑下山去了。
6．Terrified by the noises of the helicopter and the shot，the bear was startled to leap into the bush and galloped toward the forest like an arrow.
这只熊被直升机的噪声和枪声吓了一跳，吓得跳进了灌木丛，像箭一样冲向森林。
六、情感描写类
1．Seeing this，she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her.当她看到这一幕时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且贯穿全身。
2．When she saw the beast，so terrified was she that her throat tightened and her knees weakened.
当她看到这只野兽的时候，她是如此害怕以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
3．Extremely frightened，I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating.非常害怕，我发现我的身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。
4．To my delight，we managed to dig out the trench and took these horses down the mountain with the help of others.令我欣喜的是，在别人的帮助下，我们成功挖好了沟槽，把这些马带到山下。
5．I breathed a sigh of relief，throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.(动作双连链)我如释重负地松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地抱住了他。
6．Smiling in relief，I felt a rush of gratitude welling up in my heart.
我如释重负地笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩之情。
7．With tears filling his eyes，Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情。
8．With tears of appreciation rolling down his cheeks，Peter said thankfully，“You have saved me today.I couldn’t thank you enough.”
感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下，彼得感激地说：“今天你救了我，我对你感激不尽。”
遇险脱困主题升华
1．What a narrow escape! It turns out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.真是九死一生啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都有出路。
2．Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.
直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。
3．Never should we give up our hope whatever setbacks we are faced with.
无论遇到什么挫折我们绝不该放弃希望。
4．This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour，because after every night there is a day.
这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。
5．“Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” these words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation.
“耐心点！救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。
典例展示
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day，the students streamed out of the classrooms.It was another boring day after school.I dragged my feet home as I sighed.Yet another uneventful day，I thought.Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse.The lift lobby(电梯间) of my flat was old and dirty.The walls，which were painted white，had been dirtied over many years.I reached my flat’s lobby，and pressed the lift button and went in.Just then，Mrs Lim，my elderly neighbour，hobbled(蹒跚) in.I held the lift door open，flashing a friendly smile，and politely greeted her.I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons.She thanked me for being so polite，then we were silent for the rest of the ride.
The lift fell down increasingly fast.There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower.My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat.Unfortunately，the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor.I pressed the buttons hard several times，but it was of no help.The lights on the buttons had gone out.It soon dawned on me that we were trapped.An icy fear crept up my spine.Mrs Lim was hysterical(歇斯底里的)．
“We will never get out！” she cried with her face pale.It had become a colourless mask.I had no time to lose.I pressed the bell in the lift immediately.The sound was surely deafening，but what other choice did I have Mrs Lim burst into tears.I tried my very best to comfort her，telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely.Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing，and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Several minutes passed，but no help came.__________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door.____
________________________________________________________________________________
范文佳作
Several minutes passed，but no help came.[1]Time seemed to freeze and every minute felt like a century. However，with my help，Mrs Lim managed to breathe smoothly and gradually controlled her emotions.In despair，I dialed 911 once again with my trembling fingers.And we were reassured that emergency responders were rushing towards us.Knowing a rescue team was on the way，[2]I felt a heavy load taken off our mind.Holding her hands tightly，I comforted/consoled Mrs Lim constantly，believing that we would [3]definitely get out.However，we could do nothing but wait for professional aid patiently and silently in the lift car.
Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard firefighters on the other side of the lift door.[4]Thrilled and hopeful，I banged the lift door [5]like crazy and screamed as loud as possible in order to attract their attention.And it worked! Mrs Lim sounded weaker than before，[6]about which I was really concerned.Fortunately，the experienced and professional rescue experts solved the life-or-death crisis and we were released from the lift car.Given Mrs Lim’s terrible condition，she was rushed to hospital immediately.[7]Having conveyed my sincere gratitude for what they did for us，I went back to my flat，feeling blessed with these caring guardian angels always around us.
亮词美句：[1]比喻句　[2]暗喻用法　[3]adv.肯定地，当然　[4]形容词作状语　[5]疯狂地　
[6]“介词＋关系词”引导的定语从句　[7]现在分词短语作状语
即时演练
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One sunny Saturday morning，I got ready for a hike with my classmates.I was so excited about it since it was my first time to go hiking.I ate a light breakfast—just a few slices of bread and an egg.After that I grabbed my backpack and hurriedly ran out of my house and then met my classmates at the school gate.At that time I didn’t think that there would be a terrible disaster ahead.
The jungle that we are going to was far from our area.Its name was Salymbia Jungle.The drive was 3 hours long but it was not a dull ride as we were all eager about the hike and we had each other’s company.We appointed a guide and his name was Thomas.He said that he had hiked in the Salymbia Jungle lots of times，and he was familiar with the pathways.When we arrived，Thomas allowed us to begin.There were a wide variety of plants which I had never seen before.The smell of the jungle was so earthy.All of us were amazed by the beauty of the scenery and the sound of the creatures.
After a while we were walking and then I looked at my wrist to check the time but then I realized my watch had fallen off.Then I walked back without telling anyone.I did not worry about getting lost since there were other persons behind and I thought I would have been able to catch up with my classmates.I went back searching the pathway and I lost track of time and lost sight of my classmates.I immediately realized that I was alone.
After I realized I was lost，the first thing I did was to check my phone to see how far away I was from my companions.However，I was having no luck because there was no network in my phone，which made my phone practically useless.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The sky started to become darker._________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
As I was falling asleep，I heard a human voice.______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
答案精析
参考范文
The sky started to become darker.I didn’t know what to do，so I called out to my classmates but there was no reply.I looked for a way but none of the scenes seemed familiar.I walked for a few more minutes，hoping to meet other people behind，but once again it didn’t work.I was scared，hungry and helpless.Still，I know it is no use being anxious.I needed to keep calm.I decided to stay where I was，saving my energy until the rescue team arrived.
As I was falling asleep，I heard a human voice.I doubted my ears but then I heard someone else.I screamed，“Help！” There was a note of excitement in my voice.They were rescuers who had come searching for me because my classmates reported my loss.They took me back to the bus.The moment I saw my classmates，I couldn’t control my tears in my eyes.They kept asking if I was hurt and what had happened.When they learned I was safe，they were relieved.What an unforgettable experience!(共29张PPT)
读后续写主题练4　遇险脱困
第19周
遇险脱困是读后续写中非常重要的一类故事，它并不只出现在“人与自然”主题语境中，在“人与社会”主题语境下，也会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初当事人遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到救助者想办法救援，再到最后当事人获救的宽慰和感激，涉及一系列的表达。
在往年高考真题中，就曾经考过多次：2016年浙江卷：夫妻吵架，森林迷路；2017年浙江卷：骑车旅行，中途遇狼；2018年浙江卷：农场度假，骑马迷路；2020年浙江卷：给北极熊拍照时遇险。
“遇险类”读后续写解题技巧：
1.总的原则：最终一定脱险。
2.三个鲜明的阶段：
第一阶段：遭遇险境；
第二阶段：出现转机；
第三阶段：脱离危险。
[高分句式]
一、雪山脱险类
1.Exhausted as we were，we didn’t stop.Gritting our teeth，we kept digging the trench.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来，我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。
2.Inch by inch，we dug the snow out.After what seemed a century，we made it.
我们一点一点地把雪挖出来，在经历了似乎一个世纪之后(夸张手法)，我们终于成功了。
二、冰上救援类
He pushed the branch toward me.I grabbed immediately and was dragged out of the icy water by Harry.What a narrow escape!
他把树枝推向我。我立刻抓住它，被哈利从冰冷的水中拖了出来。真是死里逃生！
三、困洞营救类
1.No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings.Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands，pulling him out without reserve.(动作链)
我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个男人就开始扫视周围的环境，然后慢慢向洞口走去，伸手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。
2.Slowly and cautiously，moving forward，we held our hands tightly in order not to be seperated.
慢慢且小心翼翼地往前走，我们紧紧地握着手，不让彼此分开。
四、动物描写类
1.It exposed its sharp teeth，glaring at us as it ran forward.它露出锋利的牙齿，向前跑时怒视着我们。
2.It seemed that his mouth was full of blood，his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open.他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张得很大。
五、自救他救类
1.I shouted for help at the top of my voice，but in vain.
我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但都是徒劳。
2.Eyes fixed on the beast，he pulled out the sausages in his backpack，aimed at the furry giant and threw them straight to it，hoping the flavor would attract it.他目不转睛地盯着那只野兽，掏出背包里的香肠，对准这个毛茸茸的庞然大物，直接扔给它，希望香味能够吸引它的注意力。
3.I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray.
我鼓起勇气，试图用胡椒喷雾把他吓跑。
4.I took out a metal bar from the car at once and started a fight with the wolf.
我立刻从车里拿出一根金属棒，开始与狼搏斗。
5.The wolf jumped up，and rushed towards one of them，but was beaten back.Seeing that he couldn’t win，the wolf ran away down the hill.
狼跳了起来，冲向其中一只，但被击退了。狼看到自己赢不了，就跑下山去了。
6.Terrified by the noises of the helicopter and the shot，the bear was startled to leap into the bush and galloped toward the forest like an arrow.
这只熊被直升机的噪声和枪声吓了一跳，吓得跳进了灌木丛，像箭一样冲向森林。
六、情感描写类
1.Seeing this，she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her.当她看到这一幕时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且贯穿全身。
2.When she saw the beast，so terrified was she that her throat tightened and her knees weakened.
当她看到这只野兽的时候，她是如此害怕以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
3.Extremely frightened，I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating.非常害怕，我发现我的身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。
4.To my delight，we managed to dig out the trench and took these horses down the mountain with the help of others.令我欣喜的是，在别人的帮助下，我们成功挖好了沟槽，把这些马带到山下。
5.I breathed a sigh of relief，throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.(动作双连链)我如释重负地松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地抱住了他。
6.Smiling in relief，I felt a rush of gratitude welling up in my heart.
我如释重负地笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩之情。
7.With tears filling his eyes，Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情。
8.With tears of appreciation rolling down his cheeks，Peter said thankfully，“You have saved me today.I couldn’t thank you enough.”
感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下，彼得感激地说：“今天你救了我，我对你感激不尽。”
[遇险脱困主题升华]
1.What a narrow escape! It turns out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.真是九死一生啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都有出路。
2.Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。
3.Never should we give up our hope whatever setbacks we are faced with.
无论遇到什么挫折我们绝不该放弃希望。
4.This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour，because after every night there is a day.这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。
5.“Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” these words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation.
“耐心点！救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。
[典例展示]
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day，the students streamed out of the classrooms.It was another boring day after school.I dragged my feet home as I sighed.Yet another uneventful day，I thought.Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse.The lift lobby(电梯间) of my flat was old and dirty.The walls，which were painted white，had been dirtied over many years.I reached my flat’s lobby，and pressed the lift button and went in.Just then，
Mrs Lim，my elderly neighbour，hobbled(蹒跚) in.I held the lift door open，flashing a friendly smile，and politely greeted her.I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons.She thanked me for being so polite，then we were silent for the rest of the ride.
The lift fell down increasingly fast.There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower.My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat.Unfortunately，the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor.I pressed the buttons hard several times，but it was of no help.The lights on the buttons had gone out.It soon dawned on me that we were trapped.An icy fear crept up my spine.Mrs Lim was hysterical(歇斯底里的).
“We will never get out！” she cried with her face pale.It had become a colourless mask.I had no time to lose.I pressed the bell in the lift immediately.The sound was surely deafening，but what other choice did I have Mrs Lim burst into tears.I tried my very best to comfort her，telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely.Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing，and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Several minutes passed，but no help came.______________________
_______________________________________________________________
Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door._________________________________________
[范文佳作]
Several minutes passed，but no help came.[1]Time seemed to freeze and every minute felt like a century. However，with my help，Mrs Lim managed to breathe smoothly and gradually controlled her emotions.In despair，I dialed 911 once again with my trembling fingers.And we were reassured that emergency responders were rushing towards us.Knowing a rescue team was on the way，[2]I felt a heavy load taken off our mind.Holding her hands tightly，I comforted/consoled Mrs Lim constantly，believing that we would [3]definitely get out.However，we could do nothing but wait for professional aid patiently and silently in the lift car.
Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard firefighters on the other side of the lift door.[4]Thrilled and hopeful，I banged the lift door [5]like crazy and screamed as loud as possible in order to attract their attention.And it worked! Mrs Lim sounded weaker than before，[6]about which I was really concerned.Fortunately，the experienced and professional rescue experts solved the life-or-death crisis and we were released from the lift car.Given Mrs Lim’s terrible condition，she was rushed to hospital immediately.[7]Having conveyed my sincere gratitude for what they did for us，I went back to my flat，feeling blessed with these caring guardian angels always around us.
亮词美句：[1]比喻句　[2]暗喻用法　[3]adv.肯定地，当然　[4]形容词作状语　[5]疯狂地　[6]“介词＋关系词”引导的定语从句　[7]现在分词短语作状语
[即时演练]
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One sunny Saturday morning，I got ready for a hike with my classmates.I was so excited about it since it was my first time to go hiking.I ate a light breakfast—just a few slices of bread and an egg.After that I grabbed my backpack and hurriedly ran out of my house and then met my classmates at the school gate.At that time I didn’t think that there would be a terrible disaster ahead.
The jungle that we are going to was far from our area.Its name was Salymbia Jungle.The drive was 3 hours long but it was not a dull ride as we were all eager about the hike and we had each other’s company.We appointed a guide and his name was Thomas.He said that he had hiked in the Salymbia Jungle lots of times，and he was familiar with the pathways.When we arrived，Thomas allowed us to begin.There were a wide variety of plants which I had never seen before.The smell of the jungle was so earthy.All of us were amazed by the beauty of the scenery and the sound of the creatures.
After a while we were walking and then I looked at my wrist to check the time but then I realized my watch had fallen off.Then I walked back without telling anyone.I did not worry about getting lost since there were other persons behind and I thought I would have been able to catch up with my classmates.I went back searching the pathway and I lost track of time and lost sight of my classmates.I immediately realized that I was alone.
After I realized I was lost，the first thing I did was to check my phone to see how far away I was from my companions.However，I was having no luck because there was no network in my phone，which made my phone practically useless.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The sky started to become darker.______________________________
_______________________________________________________________
As I was falling asleep，I heard a human voice.__________________
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The sky started to become darker.I didn’t know what to do，so I called out to my classmates but there was no reply.I looked for a way but none of the scenes seemed familiar.I walked for a few more minutes，hoping to meet other people behind，but once again it didn’t work.I was scared，hungry and helpless.Still，I know it is no use being anxious.I needed to keep calm.I decided to stay where I was，saving my energy until the rescue team arrived.
As I was falling asleep，I heard a human voice.I doubted my ears but then I heard someone else.I screamed，“Help！” There was a note of excitement in my voice.They were rescuers who had come searching for me because my classmates reported my loss.They took me back to the bus.The moment I saw my classmates，I couldn’t control my tears in my eyes.They kept asking if I was hurt and what had happened.When they learned I was safe，they were relieved.What an unforgettable experience!

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