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第3讲　续写热点话题　团队合作
(2022·浙江1月卷改编)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Dr． Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with． Above all，I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match． As fate(命运) would have it，Dr． Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid．
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself． He looked at me as though I weren't there． I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course． He wasn't mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone．
Needless to say, I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse．
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假说), set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings． Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students．
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project，I was uneasy． Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades — the exact opposite of me． I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out． I decided to stick to it no matter what．
After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers． I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我和队友定期碰面推进项目、相互磨合的情景，主要通过叙述和心理描写展现搭档在推进项目中的表现、我对此的反应、两人关系的发展情况。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写在得知队友生病后，我的反应、我对待项目的态度、为了最终完成项目我做了哪些努力等。尾句可以升华主题：我们意识到了团队合作的重要性。
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
1．From then on，we began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time．
从那时起，我们开始作为一个优秀团队进行工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。
2．Uncontrollably，a wave of guilt washed over me as I heard the bad news．
当我听到这个坏消息时，我感到一阵无法控制的悔恨。
3．At the same time，all of them laughed with excitement，and the laughter echoed in the room．
与此同时，他们都兴奋地大笑了起来，笑声回荡在房间里。
4．The miracle is this: the more we share，the more we have．
这就是奇迹：我们分享的越多，我们拥有的就越多。
5．But for their common efforts，they couldn't have received so much in their project．
要不是他们的共同努力，他们就不可能在这个项目上取得如此大的成就。
6．The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned project．
这整个经历提醒我，团队合作是我们成功地完成这项指定任务的关键。
第3讲　续写热点话题　团队合作
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We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans． As he was a fiercely competitive fellow，he took charge of the project totally，leaving me doing nothing but simply following his steps and instructions．Though unwilling，I did my part but did it in a blind way．As the project progressed，I seemed to get the trick，which built up my confidence and made my teammate slightly relieved．At this point，we started to really work as a team．
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease． Immediately，I hurried to the hospital，where I learned that he had to be hospitalized for quite a while．Seeing the worry and weakness written on his face，I assured him that I would carry on with our project．With all my heart put into the project，I did the analysis accurately and presented our findings reasonably．Eventually，our hard work paid off and Dr．Henderson was very satisfied with our wonderful findings．From this project，we both learned that one person can go fast，but a group of people can travel far．
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第3讲　续写热点话题　团队合作
(2022·浙江1月卷改编)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Dr．Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class，I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with．Above all，I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently
had a personality to match．As fate(命运) would have it，Dr．Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid．
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself．He looked at me as though I weren't there．I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course．He wasn't mean or abusive；he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone．
Needless to say，I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off，but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse．
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假说)，set up an experiment to test the hypothesis，do the statistical analysis and present the findings．Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students．
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project，I was uneasy．Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades — the exact opposite of me．I actually wanted to drop the class at one point，but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out．I decided to stick to it no matter what．
After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers．I wasn't sure what it meant exactly，but at least we had a topic．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans．_____________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease．___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我和队友定期碰面推进项目、相互磨合的情景，主要通过叙述和心理描写展现搭档在推进项目中的表现、我对此的反应、两人关系的发展情况。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写在得知队友生病后，我的反应、我对待项目的态度、为了最终完成项目我做了哪些努力等。尾句可以升华主题：我们意识到了团队合作的重要性。
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans．_____________
___________________________________________________________
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease．___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans．As he was a fiercely competitive fellow，he took charge of the project totally，leaving me doing nothing but simply following his steps and instructions．Though unwilling，I did my part but did it in a blind way．As the project progressed，I seemed to get the trick，which built up my confidence and made my teammate slightly relieved．At this point，we started to really work as a team．
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease．Immediately，I hurried to the hospital，where I learned that he had to be hospitalized for quite a while．Seeing the worry and weakness written on his face，I assured him that I would carry on with our project．With all my heart put into the project，I did the analysis accurately and presented our findings reasonably．Eventually，our hard work paid off and Dr．Henderson was very satisfied with our wonderful findings．From this project，we both learned that one person can go fast，but a group of people can travel far．
1．From then on，we began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time．
从那时起，我们开始作为一个优秀团队进行工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。
2．Uncontrollably，a wave of guilt washed over me as I heard the bad news．
当我听到这个坏消息时，我感到一阵无法控制的悔恨。
3．At the same time，all of them laughed with excitement，and the laughter echoed in the room．
与此同时，他们都兴奋地大笑了起来，笑声回荡在房间里。
4．The miracle is this：the more we share，the more we have．
这就是奇迹：我们分享的越多，我们拥有的就越多。
5．But for their common efforts，they couldn't have received so much in their project．
要不是他们的共同努力，他们就不可能在这个项目上取得如此大的成就。
6．The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned project．
这整个经历提醒我，团队合作是我们成功地完成这项指定任务的关键。
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