资源简介

第4讲　续写热点话题　亲情友情
(2021·新课标Ⅰ卷)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day． How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed． They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge． They had watched their mother in the kitchen． There was nothing to it． Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do．
The big day came at last． The alarm rang at 6 a.m． The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen． They decided to boil the porridge first． They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast． Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk． Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture． Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan． Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread． The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds． Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread． This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely．
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake． The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire． Jenna panicked． Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly． But the stove was a mess now． Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge． But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain． Jenna made him put his hand in cold water． Then she caught the smell of burning． Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段主要描述在爸爸的帮助下，早餐做成功了。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述双胞胎的母亲节祝福以及妈妈看到早餐时的反应。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
1．The greatest gift of life is friendship，and I have received it．
生命中最棒的礼物是友谊，我已收获了它。
2．At that moment，she realized that it was the warmth and company of her family that enabled her to go through this difficult time．
在那一刻，她意识到，是家人的温暖和陪伴让她度过了这段艰难的时光。
3．Deeply moved by all his son did，the father could say nothing but to hug him tightly，tears welling up．
被儿子所做的一切深深地感动了，父亲说不出话来，只是紧紧地拥抱着儿子，泪水夺眶而出。
4．I was sure that there was something glorious shining in her eyes．I got to know it was the light of love．
我确信她眼中有光芒的东西在闪耀，我了解到那是爱的光辉。
5．I do know that no life is permanent．No matter where she is，I will cherish our friendship and miss her forever．
我的确知道没有生命是永恒的。无论她在哪里，我都会珍惜我们的友谊，永远想念她。
6．After that，our friendship became closer and I was more like a friend than a teacher to them．
从那以后，我们的关系变得更紧密，我对他们来说更像是朋友而不是老师。
第4讲　续写热点话题　亲情友情
落笔华章
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared． Seeing the mess in the kitchen，he immediately understood what had happened，but he wasn't upset．Instead，he applied some medicine to Jeff's hand，and then set out to help them clean up the mess，throwing away the burnt toast．Next，they began to make breakfast，and by now the twins looked cheerful．Before long，the porridge was ready．Their father instructed them to fry the rest of the bread．Soon，the breakfast was ready．
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up． Opening her eyes，she couldn't believe what she had seen．Before she could ask any question，their father turned up and told his wife about how the twins had made preparations to give her the surprise breakfast，and what troubles they had gone through when making the porridge and toast．Disbelief gave way to excitement and pride．Hugging them in her arms，she said，“Thank you，children．It's such an unforgettable Mother's Day for me．”
1 / 4(共15张PPT)
第三部分　
写作专题突破
读后续写
第二节　热点突破
第4讲　续写热点话题　亲情友情
(2021·新课标Ⅰ卷)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day．How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed．They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge．They had watched their mother in the kitchen．There was nothing to it．Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do．
The big day came at last．The alarm rang at 6 a．m．The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen．They decided to boil the porridge first．They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast．Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk．Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture．Next，Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan．Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread．The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds．Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread．This time，she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely．
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake．The next minute，the porridge boiled over and put out the fire．Jenna panicked．Thankfully，Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly．But the stove was a mess now．Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge．But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain．Jenna made him put his hand in cold water．Then she caught the smell of burning．Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment，their father appeared．_________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．_______________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段主要描述在爸爸的帮助下，早餐做成功了。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述双胞胎的母亲节祝福以及妈妈看到早餐时的反应。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment，their father appeared．_________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．_______________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment， their father appeared．Seeing the mess in the kitchen，he immediately understood what had happened，but he wasn't upset．Instead，he applied some medicine to Jeff's hand，and then set out to help them clean up the mess，throwing away the burnt toast．Next，they began to make breakfast，and by now the twins looked cheerful．Before long，the porridge was ready．Their father instructed them to fry the rest of the bread．Soon，the breakfast was ready．
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．Opening her eyes，she couldn't believe what she had seen．Before she could ask any question，their father turned up and told his wife about how the twins had made preparations to give her the surprise breakfast，and what troubles they had gone through when making the porridge and toast．Disbelief gave way to excitement and pride．Hugging them in her arms，she said，“Thank you，children．
It's such an unforgettable Mother's Day for me．”
1．The greatest gift of life is friendship，and I have received it．
生命中最棒的礼物是友谊，我已收获了它。
2．At that moment，she realized that it was the warmth and company of her family that enabled her to go through this difficult time．
在那一刻，她意识到，是家人的温暖和陪伴让她度过了这段艰难的时光。
3．Deeply moved by all his son did，the father could say nothing but to hug him tightly，tears welling up．
被儿子所做的一切深深地感动了，父亲说不出话来，只是紧紧地拥抱着儿子，泪水夺眶而出。
4．I was sure that there was something glorious shining in her eyes．I got to know it was the light of love．
我确信她眼中有光芒的东西在闪耀，我了解到那是爱的光辉。
5．I do know that no life is permanent．No matter where she is，I will cherish our friendship and miss her forever．
我的确知道没有生命是永恒的。无论她在哪里，我都会珍惜我们的友谊，永远想念她。
6．After that，our friendship became closer and I was more like a friend than a teacher to them．
从那以后，我们的关系变得更紧密，我对他们来说更像是朋友而不是老师。
谢 谢！

展开更多......

收起↑