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第5讲　续写热点话题　热心助人
(2022·浙江6月卷改编)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I needed to do something in my community(社区)in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school．Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen，so I did，too．It seemed like a good thing to do．
I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need，but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner．We began preparing the food，from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat．Much still needed to be done before dinner was served，but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering．It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner．
As the line of people came toward me，I got a little scared．I'd come face to face with the homeless: How should I act How would they treat me Would they hate me for having more than they did While some of the people looked very friendly，some of them looked so dangerous．I didn't have too much time to worry about it．I was assigned (分配)to serve the salad with the lady next to me．She smiled at me and said if I needed help，she'd be right there，which I found quite comforting．
I had never seen so many people wanting food．They were of all ages and nationalities．Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty．Some looked like they had totally given up on life，while others seemed to be making the best of the situation，smiling and joking．Some were better off than others，but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat．It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and that the only food they got came from a soup kitchen．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
As they came in my direction，I put on my brightest and happiest smile．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我如何为无家可归的人分发食物，过程是令人满意的，但也会出现小的困难。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我对这次社区服务的感悟，最后可以进行适当的升华。
As they came in my direction，I put on my brightest and happiest smile．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
1．With winds blowing harder，the fire went out of control．
随着风越刮越猛，火失去了控制。
2．A thick burning smell filled the air．When Tom opened the front door of his flat to check，a thick cloud of smoke greeted him．
空气中弥漫着浓浓的烧焦的气味。当汤姆打开他公寓的前门查看时，一股浓烟迎面扑来。
3．He dived into the water．In a few seconds，he was next to the struggling girl．
他跳入水中。几秒钟后，他就到了那个苦苦挣扎的女孩旁边。
4．The water was up to her lap，but Mary was very strong and she struggled through the waves with me on her back．
水涨到了她的大腿处，但玛丽非常坚强，她背着我穿过海浪艰难前行。
5．Someone came and pulled both kids away from the water．The little girl lay on the ground, frightened to cry．
有人来把两个孩子从水里拉了出来。那个小女孩躺在地上，吓得哭了出来。
6．No matter how cold the winter was，all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth．
无论冬天多么寒冷，他们现在能感受到的都是无比的温暖。
第5讲　续写热点话题　热心助人
落笔华章
As they came in my direction，I put on my brightest and happiest smile．But seeing so many homeless hungry people swarming endlessly，even the most brilliant smile couldn't conceal the fear and panic in my heart．As if noticing my emotion，the lady smilingly came over and patiently told me that I should first make these people queue up and then hand out salad one by one．Thankfully，I nodded and immediately sprang into action．Then things went smoothly．Even those who looked very dangerous surprisingly followed my instructions．They even said “Thank you”to me while receiving the food，looking so friendly．The previous feelings of worry and scare had already melted away．
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way．Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who seemed to be dangerous and unamiable，but also I extended a helping hand to those who wanted food．I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy；therefore，we should always be grateful for what life blessed us with．However，we did have the power to share our happiness with others，that is，spreading love．Love is everything，like the clear moon hanging high in the sky，spreading its mild moonlight selflessly to everyone．
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第5讲　续写热点话题　热心助人
(2022·浙江6月卷改编)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I needed to do something in my community(社区)in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school．Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen，so I did，too．It seemed like a good thing to do．
I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need，but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner．We began preparing the food，from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat．Much still needed to be done before dinner was served，but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering．It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner．
As the line of people came toward me，I got a little scared．I'd come face to face with the homeless：How should I act How would they treat me Would they hate me for having more than they did While some of the people looked very friendly，some of them looked so dangerous．I didn't have too much time to worry about it．I was assigned (分配)to serve the salad with the lady next to me．She smiled at me and said if I needed help，she'd be right there，which I found quite comforting．
I had never seen so many people wanting food．They were of all ages and nationalities．Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty．Some looked like they had totally given up on life，while others seemed to be making the best of the situation，smiling and joking．Some were better off than others，but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat．It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and that the only food they got came from a soup kitchen．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
As they came in my direction，I put on my brightest and happiest smile．____________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way．_____________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我如何为无家可归的人分发食物，过程是令人满意的，但也会出现小的困难。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我对这次社区服务的感悟，最后可以进行适当的升华。
As they came in my direction，I put on my brightest and happiest smile．____________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way．_____________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
As they came in my direction，I put on my brightest and happiest smile．But seeing so many homeless hungry people swarming endlessly，even the most brilliant smile couldn't conceal the fear and panic in my heart．As if noticing my emotion，the lady smilingly came over and patiently told me that I should first make these people queue up and then hand out salad one by one．Thankfully，I nodded and immediately sprang into action．Then things went smoothly．Even those who looked very dangerous surprisingly followed my instructions．They even said “Thank you” to me while receiving the food，looking so friendly．The previous feelings of worry and scare had already melted away．
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way．Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who seemed to be dangerous and unamiable，but also I extended a helping hand to those who wanted food．I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy；therefore，we should always be grateful for what life blessed us with．However，we did have the power to share our happiness with others，that is，spreading love．Love is everything，like the clear moon hanging high in the sky，spreading its mild moonlight selflessly to everyone．
1．With winds blowing harder，the fire went out of control．
随着风越刮越猛，火失去了控制。
2．A thick burning smell filled the air．When Tom opened the front door of his flat to check，a thick cloud of smoke greeted him．
空气中弥漫着浓浓的烧焦的气味。当汤姆打开他公寓的前门查看时，一股浓烟迎面扑来。
3．He dived into the water．In a few seconds，he was next to the struggling girl．
他跳入水中。几秒钟后，他就到了那个苦苦挣扎的女孩旁边。
4．The water was up to her lap，but Mary was very strong and she struggled through the waves with me on her back．
水涨到了她的大腿处，但玛丽非常坚强，她背着我穿过海浪艰难前行。
5．Someone came and pulled both kids away from the water．The little girl lay on the ground，frightened to cry．
有人来把两个孩子从水里拉了出来。那个小女孩躺在地上，吓得哭了出来。
6．No matter how cold the winter was，all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth．
无论冬天多么寒冷，他们现在能感受到的都是无比的温暖。
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