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第7讲　续写热点话题　遇险救援
(2020·浙江7月卷改编)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears． We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada．
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous． Polar bears—like all wild animals—should be photographed from a safe distance． When I'm face to face with a polar bear，I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens． But sometimes，that is easier said than done． This was one of those times．
As Elli and I cooked dinner，a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，and smelled our garlic bread．
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence． He pulled and bit the wire． He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts．
Terrified，Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew． We yelled at the bear，hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air． Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off． Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子)．
I radioed the camp manager for help． He told me a helicopter was on its way，but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived． Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)，I took some pictures of the bear．
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment． The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray． The spray burns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them． So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence，sprayed him in the face． With an angry roar(吼叫)，the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
A few minutes later，the bear headed back to our camp．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
At that very moment，the helicopter arrived．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写当时让人战栗惊恐的画面，不失时机拍摄宝贵的北极熊照片，但北极熊向我们步步紧逼。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写看到直升机，我们感到绝处逢生的喜悦，用胡椒喷雾为逃生争取宝贵的时间，最终成功脱险。
A few minutes later，the bear headed back to our camp．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
At that very moment，the helicopter arrived．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
1．They both spent a minute catching their breaths and calmed themselves down．
他们两人都花了一分钟时间喘了口气，让自己冷静下来。
2．He began to shake off the snow，moved snow away with bare hands，and managed to pull himself out．
他开始抖落积雪，徒手把雪移开，并设法把自己拉了出来。
3．Gathering all his strength，carefully，bit by bit，Simpson climbed out of the snow hole．
辛普森用尽全身力气，一点一点地，小心翼翼地从雪洞里爬了出来。
4．He felt weak but otherwise fine．He was glad to be out of danger and reunited with his family．
他感到虚弱无力，但其他方面还好。他很高兴脱离了危险，与家人团聚了。
5．Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was from the jaws of the alligator．It was a narrow escape．
妈妈提醒我，我能从短吻鳄的口中逃脱是多么幸运。这是一次死里逃生。
6．Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation, which I would remember all my life．
我们的迷路给我的充满刺激的假期增添了一份特别的体验，我将终生难忘。
第7讲　续写热点话题　遇险救援
落笔华章
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp． Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle like shrillness．The noises turned Elli and me pale with horror．I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence．He roared repeatedly，shattering what was left of the silence．Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear．The animal's noises echoed all around us．We betrayed our feelings by huddling together，shivering with fear．After thoroughly scrutinizing the area，he trotted forward a few steps．
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived． My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved．Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time．But this time the bear became more alert．He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger，so we threw all the food we had．He then turned away and started devouring．As we were climbing the rope ladder，Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound．
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第7讲　续写热点话题　遇险救援
(2020·浙江7月卷改编)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal：to photograph polar bears．We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”—the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada．
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous．Polar bears—like all wild animals—should be photographed from a safe distance．When I'm face to face with a polar bear，I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens．But sometimes，that is easier said than done．This was one of those times．
As Elli and I cooked dinner，a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，and smelled our garlic bread．
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence．He pulled and bit the wire．He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts．
Terrified，Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew．We yelled at the bear，hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air．Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off．Not this polar bear though—he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子)．
I radioed the camp manager for help．He told me a helicopter was on its way，but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived．Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)，I took some pictures of the bear．
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment．The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray．The spray burns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them．So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence，sprayed him in the face．With an angry roar(吼叫)，the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes．
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
A few minutes later，the bear headed back to our camp．________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
At that very moment，the helicopter arrived．_________________
___________________________________________________________
Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，厘清篇章结构。
Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写当时让人战栗惊恐的画面，不失时机拍摄宝贵的北极熊照片，但北极熊向我们步步紧逼。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写看到直升机，我们感到绝处逢生的喜悦，用胡椒喷雾为逃生争取宝贵的时间，最终成功脱险。
A few minutes later，the bear headed back to our camp．________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
At that very moment，the helicopter arrived．_________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
A few minutes later， the bear headed back to our camp．Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness．The noises turned Elli and me pale with horror．I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence．He roared repeatedly，shattering what was left of the silence．Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear．The animal's noises echoed all around us．We betrayed our feelings by huddling together，shivering with fear．After thoroughly scrutinizing the area，he trotted forward a few steps．
At that very moment， the helicopter arrived．My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved．Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time．But this time the bear became more alert．He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger，so we threw all the food we had．He then turned away and started devouring．As we were climbing the rope ladder，Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound．
1．They both spent a minute catching their breaths and calmed themselves down．
他们两人都花了一分钟时间喘了口气，让自己冷静下来。
2．He began to shake off the snow，moved snow away with bare hands，and managed to pull himself out．
他开始抖落积雪，徒手把雪移开，并设法把自己拉了出来。
3．Gathering all his strength，carefully，bit by bit，Simpson climbed out of the snow hole．
辛普森用尽全身力气，一点一点地，小心翼翼地从雪洞里爬了出来。
4．He felt weak but otherwise fine．He was glad to be out of danger and reunited with his family．
他感到虚弱无力，但其他方面还好。他很高兴脱离了危险，与家人团聚了。
5．Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was from the jaws of the alligator．It was a narrow escape．
妈妈提醒我，我能从短吻鳄的口中逃脱是多么幸运。这是一次死里逃生。
6．Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation，which I would remember all my life．
我们的迷路给我的充满刺激的假期增添了一份特别的体验，我将终生难忘。
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