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第1讲　活动报道&征文投稿
(1)活动报道是记叙文的一种，特点是以事实为依据，交代活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者，叙述活动过程并对活动进行评价。具体写作结构如下：
(2)征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，以议论文和记叙文居多，具体写作结构如下：
(2024.1·浙江卷改编)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括：
1．介绍这项运动；
2．说明推荐理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．阐述问题：
①Nowadays, students are fond of staying indoors, hesitant to exercise．
2．推荐一项运动：
② I'd like to recommend a simple exercise—long rope jumping．
3．推荐的理由：
③It's easy to learn and doesn't waste too much time．
④It is an ideal workout between classes．
⑤This activity is fun and exciting for students of all ages．
⑥It improves our physical well-being．
⑦It also fosters a sense of teamwork．
(二)逻辑关联
这项运动适合课间开展：
⑧Long rope jumping is an excellent choice for students who want to stay fit while enjoying themselves．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格①③⑥句中的加黑词汇)
1．hesitant→ ____________
2．waste→____________
3．improves→________________
(二)高级句式
1．用非谓语动词合并词汇升格后的③句和④句
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2．用not only...but also合并词汇升格后的⑥句和⑦句
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(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(一)活动报道
1．开头句：活动的时间、地点和目的
(1)...(日期)witnessed a(n)...(活动名称)held in...(地点)，which was aimed at...(目的)
(2)...(日期)，as scheduled，our school held...(活动名称)themed...(活动主题)，which was aimed at...(目的)
(3)In order to do .../Aiming to do .../Aimed at doing .../With the aim of doing ...，we held...last week．为了……，我们上周举办了……
2．主体句：活动的过程及内容
(1)At the beginning of the activity...and then...活动开始时……然后……
(2)Under the circumstances，I found it...to...在这种情况下，我发现做……很……
(3)Then，...drew/caught/attracted my attention．然后，……引起了我的注意。
(4)What came into my sight was...我看到的是……
(5)This activity includes three parts．Firstly，...After that，...Finally，...本次活动包括三个部分。首先，……之后，……最后，……
3．结尾句：活动的影响和意义
(1)We had a better understanding of...through the activity．通过这次活动，我们更好地了解到……
(2)This activity turned out to be a great success．Not only did it...but also it...这次活动是一个巨大的成功，它不仅……而且……
(3)All in all，we can benefit a great deal from...I really hope...总而言之，我们可以从……中获益良多。我真的希望……
(二)征文投稿
1．开头句
(1)Recently we did a survey about whether...or not．最近，我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
(2)Learning that you are collecting articles about ..., as a senior high school student, I want to share my ideas of this topic．听说你们正在征集关于……的文章，作为一名高中生，我想表达我对这一话题的一些看法。
(3)I'm writing to cast light on the issue of ...我写这篇文章的目的是就……问题做出阐释。
2．主体句
(1)It has been...years since...was founded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood．自从……成立以来已经有……年了，它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
(2)At present our city is carrying out a campaign，the content of which is...目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容是……
(3)The findings worried me a lot．这些发现让我很担心。
(4)Moreover，as is known to all，...is a waste of time．而且，众所周知，……是浪费时间。
3．结尾句
(1)I do expect...can have a promising future．我真的希望……能有一个光明的未来。
(2)As far as I am concerned，students should do more...so that they can develop their...skills．在我看来，学生们应该多做……来发展他们的……技能。
(3)As I have stated above, this issue is of huge significance, so we cannot afford to ignore it．正如以上我所陈述的那样，这个问题意义重大，因此我们不能忽视它。
第1讲　活动报道&征文投稿
写作指导
(一)高级词汇
1．unwilling/reluctant　2．take up　3．enhances/promotes/fosters
(二)高级句式
1．It's easy to learn and doesn't take up too much time，making it an ideal workout between classes．2．Not only does it enhance our physical well being，but it also fosters a sense of teamwork．
落笔华章
Stand Up and Exercise，Everybody!
Nowadays，students are fond of staying indoors，unwilling to exercise．So I'd like to recommend a simple exercise—long rope jumping．
Long rope jumping offers unparalleled benefits．It's easy to learn and doesn't take up too much time，making it an ideal workout between classes．Moreover，this activity is fun and exciting for students of all ages．Not only does it enhance our physical well being，but it also fosters a sense of teamwork．
From my perspective，long rope jumping is an excellent choice for students who want to stay fit while enjoying themselves．So，waste no more time in starting exercising．You are bound to fall in love with it!
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写作专题突破
应用文写作
类型二　非书信体应用文
第1讲　活动报道&征文投稿
(1)活动报道是记叙文的一种，特点是以事实为依据，交代活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者，叙述活动过程并对活动进行评价。具体写作结构如下：
(2)征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，以议论文和记叙文居多，具体写作结构如下：
(2024.1·浙江卷改编)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括：
1．介绍这项运动；
2．说明推荐理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．阐述问题：
①Nowadays，students are fond of staying indoors，hesitant to exercise．
2．推荐一项运动：
② I'd like to recommend a simple exercise—long rope jumping．
3．推荐的理由：
③It's easy to learn and doesn't waste too much time．
④It is an ideal workout between classes．
⑤This activity is fun and exciting for students of all ages．
⑥It improves our physical well-being．
⑦It also fosters a sense of teamwork．
(二)逻辑关联
这项运动适合课间开展：
⑧Long rope jumping is an excellent choice for students who want to stay fit while enjoying themselves．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格①③⑥句中的加黑词汇)
1．hesitant→ _____________________
2．waste→______
3．improves→____________________________
unwilling/reluctant
take up
enhances/promotes/fosters
(二)高级句式
1．用非谓语动词合并词汇升格后的③句和④句
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．用not only...but also合并词汇升格后的⑥句和⑦句
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's easy to learn and doesn't take up too much time， making it an ideal workout between classes．
Not only does it enhance our physical well-being， but it also fosters a sense of teamwork．
(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
Stand Up and Exercise，Everybody!
Nowadays，students are fond of staying indoors，unwilling to exercise．So I'd like to recommend a simple exercise—long rope jumping．
Long rope jumping offers unparalleled benefits．It's easy to learn and doesn't take up too much time，making it an ideal workout between classes．Moreover，this activity is fun and exciting for students of all ages．Not only does it enhance our physical well-being，but it also fosters a sense of teamwork．
From my perspective，long rope jumping is an excellent choice for students who want to stay fit while enjoying themselves．So，waste no more time in starting exercising．You are bound to fall in love with it!
(一)活动报道
1．开头句：活动的时间、地点和目的
(1)...(日期)witnessed a(n)...(活动名称)held in...(地点)，which was aimed at...(目的)
(2)...(日期)，as scheduled，our school held...(活动名称)themed...(活动主题)，which was aimed at...(目的)
(3)In order to do .../Aiming to do .../Aimed at doing .../With the aim of doing ...，we held...last week．为了……，我们上周举办了……
2．主体句：活动的过程及内容
(1)At the beginning of the activity...and then...活动开始时……然后……
(2)Under the circumstances，I found it...to...在这种情况下，我发现做……很……
(3)Then，...drew/caught/attracted my attention．然后，……引起了我的注意。
(4)What came into my sight was...我看到的是……
(5)This activity includes three parts．Firstly，...After that，...Finally，...本次活动包括三个部分。首先，……之后，……最后，……
3．结尾句：活动的影响和意义
(1)We had a better understanding of...through the activity．通过这次活动，我们更好地了解到……
(2)This activity turned out to be a great success．Not only did it...but also it...这次活动是一个巨大的成功，它不仅……而且……
(3)All in all，we can benefit a great deal from...I really hope...总而言之，我们可以从……中获益良多。我真的希望……
(二)征文投稿
1．开头句
(1)Recently we did a survey about whether...or not．最近，我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
(2)Learning that you are collecting articles about ...，as a senior high school student，I want to share my ideas of this topic．听说你们正在征集关于……的文章，作为一名高中生，我想表达我对这一话题的一些看法。
(3)I'm writing to cast light on the issue of ...我写这篇文章的目的是就……问题做出阐释。
2．主体句
(1)It has been...years since...was founded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood．自从……成立以来已经有……年了，它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
(2)At present our city is carrying out a campaign，the content of which is...目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容是……
(3)The findings worried me a lot．这些发现让我很担心。
(4)Moreover，as is known to all，...is a waste of time．而且，众所周知，……是浪费时间。
3．结尾句
(1)I do expect...can have a promising future．我真的希望……能有一个光明的未来。
(2)As far as I am concerned，students should do more...so that they can develop their...skills．在我看来，学生们应该多做……来发展他们的……技能。
(3)As I have stated above，this issue is of huge significance，so we cannot afford to ignore it．正如以上我所陈述的那样，这个问题意义重大，因此我们不能忽视它。
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