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（吉林专用）专题09 书面表达15篇 2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末名校真题分类汇编（含答案解析）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．（24-25八年级下·吉林长春·期中）成长路上，你一定曾经遇见过很多人，也曾经历过很多事。这些人或事或多或少的对你产生过影响，让你发生一些改变，这些变化往往会有助于你的成长。请以“________ made a big difference to me”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 简要介绍使你发生改变的事件。
2. 论述该事件中你的感悟或收获。
3. 书写工整，条理清晰，表达准确，不少于80词。
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2．（24-25八年级下·吉林·期中）假如你是Jack，你的朋友Tom来信告诉你他很担心考试，而他的父母希望他把所有的时间都用在学习上，不允许他做其他的事情，他很不开心。请你根据以下内容提示，在回信中给他一些建议，帮助他振作起来。
提示：(1)与父母交流自己的感受；
(2)做一些放松心情的事；
(3)合理规划学习时间。
要求：(1)包含所给提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)80—90词，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a big problem.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Jack
3．（24-25八年级下·吉林·期中）良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents ”为题写一篇英语短文。
写作提示：
（1）主动交流：每天花些时间，与父母谈谈老师、同学和学校的事；
（2）创造机会：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做饭、逛商店等；
（3）讨论问题：遇事多与父母讨论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题。
写作要求：
（1）短文必须包括以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，词数：90词左右；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
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4．（24-25八年级下·吉林·期中）礼物是心意的载体，承载着爱与关怀的每一份惊喜。本周你班的英语课将围绕“我最喜欢的礼物”这一话题进行交流。请根据下列要求写一篇英语短文，为英语课的交流活动做准备。
要求：
1. 介绍你最喜欢的礼物，你和它之间的故事以及你喜欢它的原因；
2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My Favorite Gift
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5．（24-25八年级下·吉林·期中）假如你是李华, 你在一个英语演讲比赛中取得了优异的成绩。你的英语老师邀请你在课堂上分享你提高英语口语的经验和方法。请你根据以下要点和要求, 写一篇不少于40词的发言稿。
要点：1.每天学习新单词；
2.大声朗读练习发音；
3.每天用英语和自己对话
要求:要点齐全；表述通顺；简介得体。
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6．（23-24八年级下·吉林四平·期末）家务是生活的一部分。作为一名家庭成员，分担家务是一种责任，也是一种幸福。请以“An experience of doing housework”为题，并根据要点和要求，写一篇英语短文，叙述一次你做家务的经历，并谈谈你的体会。
要点：
1. 你这次做家务的原因；
2. 你做家务的过程；
3. 你的心得和感受。
要求：词数90左右。
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7．（24-25八年级下·吉林白城·阶段练习）作为一名中学生，你的学习生活一定非常忙碌。在你的课余生活，你喜欢做些什么呢？ 你想利用课余生活做志愿者帮助他人，还是参加课后培训班，精进学业呢？请以 “How I Spend My Free Time” 为题，并根据以下写作提示，谈谈你的课余生活。
写作提示：
(1) 做出你的选择；
(2) 陈述至少三点理由；
(3) 描写一项你喜欢的其他课余活动。
写作要求：
(1) 内容包括以上所有提示信息，可适当拓展；
(2) 语句通顺，条理清晰，90词左右。作文的标题及开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How I Spend My Free Time
I am now a student in Grade 8. I spend a number of time studying. So in my free time, I’d love to do something meaningful. I want to be a volunteer and help others.
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8．（23-24八年级下·吉林白城·期中）每个人都可能得到过社会的帮助，我们应该懂得感恩与回报。学校计划在6月25日组织一次“走进社区，做一天志愿者（Going into the community and being a volunteer for one day）”活动。
请根据所给信息，以“One-day Voluntary Work”为题写一篇短文谈谈你们的活动安排。
活动安排如下：
1.活动地点：光明社区（Guangming Community）；
2.集合时间：上午8:30；
3.集合地点：学校门口，一起乘公共汽车前往；
4.活动内容：帮助清洁工打扫街道；捐赠物资（如生活必需品：daily necessity）；给老人们表演节目，带来欢乐。
注意事项：
1.80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文章须包含所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥；行文连贯，条理清晰。
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we will learn to give our love to everyone and society through this activity.
9．（23-24八年级下·吉林·期中）最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，家庭关系紧张是一个普遍的社会问题。针对此现象，某中学英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛、作为一名初中生，你很可能也遇到过相同的问题，你是如何看待和解决这个问题的呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。
写作要点提示：
1. 你在家和父母的关系如何
2. 结合你的经历，谈谈你是如何改善与父母的关系的，给出具体的建议，例如：
（1）理解与尊重父母（如倾听，有礼貌表达想法)
（2）多与父母交流（如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼）
（3）……
写作要求：短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译。
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10．（23-24八年级下·吉林·期中）你的好朋友Tom生病了，没来上学。请给他写一封简短的建议信，向他表示憋问并根据提示告诉他如何恢复并保持身体健康，提示信息可以不全部使用，也可以自己发挥，词数不少于40词。
提示：1.去医院看医生。2.按时服药。3.好好休息。4. 多吃水果和蔬菜。5.多喝水。
Dear Tom,
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Yumei
11．（23-24八年级下·吉林·期中）你上个周末是怎么度过的？请根据提示以“My Busy Weekend”为题写一篇短文。运用过去进行时，告诉大家上周六你在不同的时间段做的事情。
提示：
1. 六点半起床吃早饭；
2. 下午两点写作业；
3. 下午四点半拜访祖父母。
要求：词数80～90。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Busy Weekend
Last Saturday was my busiest day of the week.
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12．（23-24八年级下·吉林·期末）如今，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，如熊猫、鲸鱼、大象等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“Protect Endangered Animals”为题，根据以下内容要点，选择一种濒危动物，写一篇英语演讲稿，在开学初的“英语节”活动中和大家分享。
内容包括：1. 介绍该濒危动物的外形等基本情况及其生存现状；
2. 列举其濒危的原因，至少两点；
3. 提出具体保护措施，至少两点。
写作要求：1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
2. 词数在80词左右，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 书写规范，卷面整洁；
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（23-24八年级下·吉林松原·期末）假设你是 Linda，请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，介绍一下你家乡的变化。
内容包括：
1. 这些年来，我的家乡发生了很大变化；
2. 我的家乡过去是一个安静的小城。道路又窄又脏，到处是垃圾。人们住在又小又旧的房子里。人们只能靠步行或骑自行车出行；
3. 后来，政府采取措施改善了这种情况。现在街道宽阔干净，两边绿树成荫。人们出行靠公交车或出租车。许多家庭甚至有了私家车。
4. 我认为……（此处请用 1-2 句话适当发挥）
提示词：narrow 窄的；take action 采取行动；improve 改善
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所有要点；
2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语句通顺，字迹工整，时态正确 ；
4. 词数在80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in My Hometown
There have been great changes in my hometown over the years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．（23-24八年级下·吉林长春·期末）学校即将开展“一器一物，遇见旧时光”英语故事分享会。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文介绍一件对你而言有意义的物品，讲讲你和它之间的故事，并说明你认为它有意义的理由。(文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名）
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15．（23-24八年级下·吉林长春·期末）假如你是 Alice，你得知2024长春马拉松(Marathon)组委会正在招聘志愿者。请根据下面要点和要求，用英语写一封不少于40词的申请信。
要点：
1. 擅长英语；
2. 热爱运动；
3. 乐于助人。
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear Sir /Madam,
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Yours truly,
Alice
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《（吉林专用）专题09 书面表达15篇 2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末名校真题分类汇编（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．例文
The volleyball match made a big difference to me
Last term, our school held a volleyball match. I was really afraid of joining it because I was not good at volleyball and feared failure. But my friends encouraged me to give it a try. During the training, I faced many difficulties. The coach taught me patiently, and my teammates always supported me. I practiced hard day by day. Finally, we won the match. This experience made me realize that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. Challenges can help us grow stronger. It also taught me the importance of teamwork. It truly made a big difference to me.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，需介绍使自己发生改变的事件，并论述该事件中的感悟或收获，不能遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，引出使自己发生改变的事件（学校举办排球比赛，自己起初害怕参加）；
第二步，叙述事件经过（在朋友鼓励下参加，训练中克服困难，最终获胜）；
第三步，阐述事件带来的感悟（要勇敢走出舒适区，挑战能让人成长，团队合作很重要）。
[亮点词汇]
① be afraid of 害怕
② give it a try 试一试
③ step out of 走出
[高分句型]
① I was really afraid of joining it because I was not good at volleyball and feared failure.（because引导原因状语从句）
② This experience made me realize that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone.（that引导宾语从句，作realize的宾语）
2．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a big problem. As for your trouble,here are my suggestions.
First, you should communicate with your parents and tell them your feelings. I believe that they can understand you. Second, in order to relax yourself, you can take some exercise and listen to some relaxing music. Last, why not make a more reasonable timetable to study And you should remember that God helps those who help themselves. Therefore, you need work harder for your dream. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Jack
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给朋友一些建议，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容详细给出自己的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……沟通
②in order to为了
[高分句型]
①I believe that they can understand you. (that引导的宾语从句)
②And you should remember that God helps those who help themselves. (that引导的宾语从句，who引导的定语从句)
3．例文
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
For teenagers, it’s important to get on well with our parents.
Firstly, we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We’ll improve our relationship with them in this way. Thirdly, we’d better discuss our problems with them. They will help us find better ways to solve them.
It’s not easy to get on well with our parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明与父母和睦相处很重要；
第二步，具体阐述如何和父母友好相处；
第三步，说明与父母和睦相处不易，要学会理解父母。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with sb.和某人和睦相处
②improve改善
③had better do sth.最好做某事
④understanding善解人意的
[高分句型]
①For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school.（that引导的定语从句）
4．例文
My Favorite Gift I have received many gifts in my life, but the one that stands out most is a hand-made notebook from my best friend.
It was my birthday last year. I had been feeling down because of a quarrel with my parents. My friend knew my mood and decided to cheer me up. She made a beautiful notebook with a cover decorated with colorful stickers. Inside, she wrote a heartfelt note, telling me how much she valued our friendship and wished me a happy birthday.
The notebook is more than a gift. It’s a symbol of our precious friendship. Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of the warmth and support she has given me. It’s truly the best gift I’ve ever received.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，介绍自己最喜欢的一件礼物；
第二步、介绍自己和它之间的故事；
第三步、介绍自己喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①stand out脱颖而出
②because of因为
③more than不只是
[高分句型]
①Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of the warmth and support she has given me.(whenever引导的时间状语从句；省略关系词的定语从句)
5．例文：
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share my ways to improve oral English. First, I learn new words every day, which helps me express myself better. Second, I read aloud to practice pronunciation. This makes my speaking clearer. Third, I talk to myself in English daily. It boosts my confidence and fluency. That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，需涵盖提高英语口语的具体经验和方法，包括每天学习新单词、大声朗读练习发音、每天用英语和自己对话，考生需确保要点齐全，表述通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明发言意图。简要提及自己在英语演讲比赛中取得的成绩，并引出要分享的提高英语口语的经验和方法；
第二步，具体阐述内容。按照要点，分别详细阐述每天学习新单词、大声朗读练习发音以及每天用英语和自己对话这些方法；
第三步，结语表达希望对大家有帮助等。
[亮点词汇]
①express oneself 表达自己
②boost one’s confidence 增强某人的信心
③daily每日的
[高分句型]
①I learn new words every day, which helps me express myself better. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．例文
An experience of doing housework
It’s meaningful for everyone to do some housework. Last Sunday was Mother’s Day, so I decided to do some housework to show my love to mom.
I got up early to prepare breakfast for my parents. I cooked three eggs, one for each of us. My parents enjoyed the meal happily, though I found one of the eggs was broken and another seemed not to be OK. Then I washed our clothes. With the help of the washing machine, I finished the whole washing task by myself.
In my opinion, doing housework made me very tired, but I felt happy and proud of myself, and I came to understand my parents’ deep love for me. I love doing housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这次做家务的原因；
第二步，介绍做家务的过程；
第三步，介绍心得和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①do some housework做家务
②prepare breakfast for准备早餐
③proud of 自豪的
④love doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday was Mother’s Day, so I decided to do some housework to show my love to mom.（so引导的句子）
②My parents enjoyed the meal happily, though I found one of the eggs was broken and another seemed not to be OK.（让步状语从句）
③In my opinion, doing housework made me very tired, but I felt happy and proud of myself, and I came to understand my parents’ deep love for me.（并列句）
7．One possible version:
How I Spend My Free Time
I am now a student in Grade 8. I spend a number of time studying. So in my free time, I’d love to do something meaningful. I want to be a volunteer and help others.
First of all, we can put into practice what we have learnt before. For example, when we are asked by a foreigner about the way to some place, we could practice our English. It’s a good chance to improve our ability. What’s more, we could make a lot of friends while we are volunteering. As the saying goes, “At home one relies on one’s parents and outside on one’s friends.” So it is never a bad thing to have more friends. Last but not least, helping people who are in need is a good way to make you feel happy. We will get much feeling of satisfaction.
Besides volunteering, I think reading is also a good way to relax. Recently, my favorite book is Harry Potter: It’s very interesting. All in all, we should do something meaningful in our free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。介绍自己在空闲时间做一些有意义的事情；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍你的选择、至少三点理由、描述一项你喜欢的其他课余活动。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①put into practice投入练习
②What’s more而且
③all in all总计
[高分句型]
①Last but not least, helping people who are in need is a good way to make you feel happy. (定语从句）
②Besides volunteering, I think reading is also a good way to relax. (宾语从句)
8．例文
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us. Our school plans to organize an activity called “Going into the community and being a volunteer for one day”. This activity will be held in Guangming Community. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m. on June 25th. And then, we will go there by bus.
Firstly, we will help cleaners sweep the streets to make sure the community is tidy and beautiful. Secondly, we will give away daily necessities to the people in need. What’s more, we will sing and dance for the old to make them happy.
I think such volunteer activities will make our life more meaningful.I hope we will learn to give our love to everyone and society through this activity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为 “一般将来时”；
③提示：注意时态，且需包含全部题目所给的志愿活动的相关信息，包括活动名称、地点、集合时间和地点、交通方式，以及具体的志愿活动内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动背景和基本信息，包括活动名称、地点、集合时间和地点、交通方式；
第二步，具体阐述志愿活动的内容，如帮助清洁工清扫街道、给有需要的人分发生活用品、为老人表演节目；
第三步，表达自己对志愿活动的看法，认为这种活动让生活更有意义，并希望通过活动学会关爱他人和社会。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure确保
②give away分发
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
I think such volunteer activities will make our life more meaningful.（宾语从句）
9．例文
How to Get on Well with Our Parents As a middle school student, I used to argue with my parents over small things, like homework or screen time. But now, our relationship is much better. Here is some of my advice.
We should understand and respect our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us. We are supposed to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, we’d better be in a polite way. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we’d better help them do some things. We should share everything with our parents. Our parents are like our best friends. They are proud when we do something well and they try their best to help us when we have trouble. We love each other.
Let’s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍自己在家和父母的关系如何，引出话题；
第二步、结合自己的经历，给出改善与父母的关系的建议；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
③try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①When we are free, we’d better help them do some things. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10．
例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are ill and can’t come to school. I really hope you’ll get better soon.
First, you should go to the hospital and see a doctor. The doctor can give you the right treatment. Then, make sure to take the medicine on time as the doctor tells you.
Besides, having a good rest is very important. You’d better sleep for at least eight hours a day. Also, you need to eat more fruits and vegetables. They are full of vitamins which can help you recover. And don’t forget to drink plenty of water. It can keep you hydrated.
I believe you’ll be back to school and full of energy soon.
Yumei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为建议信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：向生病的朋友表示慰问，并给出恢复和保持身体健康的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表达对朋友生病的遗憾和希望其早日康复的祝愿。
第二步，中间具体给出恢复并保持健康的建议，如看医生、按时服药、好好休息、多吃蔬果、多喝水等。
第三步，结尾表达相信朋友很快能返校且充满活力。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure确保；务必
②plenty of大量的；充足的
[高分句型]
①They are full of vitamins which can help you recover.（“which”引导的定语从句）
11．例文
My Busy Weekend
Last Saturday was my busiest day of the week. At 6:30 am, I was getting up and having breakfast. In the morning, I was helping my mother clean the house. At 2:00 pm, I was doing my homework because I wanted to finish it early. Later, at 4:30 pm, I was visiting my grandparents. We were chatting happily, and they were telling me interesting stories. In the evening, I was watching a movie with my family. It was a tiring but meaningful day! I really enjoyed my weekend, even though I was busy all day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“过去进行时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己上周六在不同的时间段做的事情；
第二步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②want to do sth.想要做某事
③in the evening在晚上
[高分句型]
①I was doing my homework because I wanted to finish it early. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I really enjoyed my weekend, even though I was busy all day. (even though引导的让步状语从句)
12．例文
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. I want to talk something about endangered animals—pandas.
Pandas live in Sichuan, China. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely. But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍濒危动物的基本情况、生存现状以及濒危的原因，比如繁殖困难、食物短缺等；
第三步，给出保护它们的具体的建议，比如建设自然公园等。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on以……为食
②be in danger处于危险之中
③set up建立
④so that以便于
⑤raise money筹钱
[高分句型]
①We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②It is also a good idea to raise money for them. (it作形式主语句型)
③I hope there will be more pandas in the world. (省略that的宾语从句)
13．例文
Changes in My Hometown
There have been great changes in my hometown over the years.
My hometown used to be a quiet small town. The roads were narrow and dirty. There was rubbish everywhere. People lived in small old houses. People travelled around on foot or by bike.
Later the government realized the problems and actively took action to improve the situation. Now the streets are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. People travel around by bus or taxi. Many families even have their own cars.
I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. I hope you can visit it some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述自己的家乡发生了很大的变化。
第二步，写家乡以前的样貌。
第三步，写家乡后来发生的一些变化。
第四步，写自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②on foot or by bike步行或骑自行车
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. (宾语从句)
14．参考例文：
The most meaningful thing is a nice watch for me. The watch is yellow, just like a lovely cat. That is the kind I like best.
It has special meaning to me. My grandfather bought it for me as a present on my tenth birthday. It has always been with me. Whatever I do, wherever I go, I take it with me. It is very useful. It works all day and all night and it never feels tired. It tells me exact time and tells me what I should do at different time of the day. With its help, I try to make use of the time instead of wasting the time. It still works very well.
I regard it as my best friend. I think I will take good care of it. Because it always reminds me of the love from my grandfather.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍一件对你而言有意义的物品；
第二步，再具体介绍你和它之间的故事；
第三步，书写结束语，表达这件物品对自己的重要意义及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①make use of 使用
②instead of 而不是
③regard...as 把……视为
④take good care of 爱护
⑤remind sb of 使某人想起
[高分句型]
①It tells me exact time and tells me what I should do at different time of the day.（what引导的宾语从句）
②I think I will take good care of it.（省略that宾语从句）
15．参考例文：
Dear Sir /Madam,
My name is Alice. I would like to work as a volunteer for the the Marathon.
I’m a 14-year-old girl from middle school in Changchun, where the Marathon will be held. I am good at English. My spoken English is quite good. As a result, I can communicate with foreigners fluently. I’m an outgoing girl and I am always ready to help others. What’s more, I’m especially fond of sports. I know more about the Marathon. I think I am suitable to be a volunteer in the Games. If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍自己并表明写信目的；
第二步，介绍自己的优势，例如擅长英语、热爱运动和乐于助人；
第三步，书写结束语，表达希望得到回复的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result 因此
②communicate with 与……沟通
③be ready to do 乐意做某事
④be fond of 喜欢
⑤try one’s best to do sth 尽某人最大的努力做某事
⑥provide sth for sb 为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①I’m a 14-year-old girl from middle school in Changchun, where the Marathon will be held.（where引导的定语从句）
②If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.（if引导的条件状语从句）
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