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【精准提分】2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末真题+名校真题分类汇编
07 书面表达【湖北专用】
一、书面表达
1．（2024八下·仙桃期末） 研究表明从小爱做家务的孩子长大更容易成功。你校英语社团发起了"A helper of my family"主题演讲活动。请根据以下要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你曾经做的一次家务劳动及感悟。
要点：（1）What housework do you often do （2）When and how did you do it （3）What have you learned from it
注意：（1）短文须包含提示所有要点，并适当发挥。（2）短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。（3）词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Helper of My Family
I am a good helper of my family.
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2．（2024八下·阳新期末） 你学校的英文月刊发起了以 My Favorite Thing 为题的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文。
Notice Can you share with us your favorite childhood memory Think about your favorite thing from childhood which you still have. For example, it can be a toy, a book and so on. English Monthly
要求：(1)你的征文包含物品简介、喜欢的原因及感人之处；(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；(3)词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Thing
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3．（2024八下·广水期末）假如你是李明,现就读于育英中学，你校就"青少年的亲子关系"这一话题开展英语征文活动。请你根据以下要点和要求,以"How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents "为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。
要点提示:
1. 亲子关系问题(在家规矩太多;父母总拿你和其他孩子比较……);
2. 你目前的感受(忙碌的;焦虑的……);
3. 保持良好亲子关系的方法(和父母交谈;主动分担家务……)
写作要求
1. 词数80左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2. 根据要点提示,可以适当发挥
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇: have a bright future 拥有光明的未来 ; in order to 为了
How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents
Nowadays, many students can't get on well with their parents. And this is a really common problem. I want to share my opinions about it with you.
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4．（2024八下·湖北期末）为助力打造"书香校园"，你们学校将举办以"热爱阅读"为主题的征文活动。请以"Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life"为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己的阅读情况以及阅读给你带来的变化。
内容要点如下：1. 养成良好阅读习惯，每天花时间阅读；2. 上初中以来，已看完大约30本书；3. 每周去阅读俱乐部两次，和朋友分享读书心得；4. 通过阅读，体验从未见过或做过的事情；5. 补充一两点个人看法。
注意：1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2. 词数：80左右；3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；4. 标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：habit n. 习惯 spend v. 花费 book review读书心得
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man.
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5．（2024八下·东西湖期末）你校新来的外教Tony想向你了解武汉及武汉学生的学习和生活情况。请你根据以下问题提示，用英文向他做详细介绍。
内容提示：
1. How long have you lived in Wuhan
2. What do you know about Wuhan
3. As students in Wuhan, what do you most like to do in your daily life
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数：100 左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
There is a beautiful city by the Yangtze River. Its name is Wuhan.
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6．（2024八下·嘉鱼期末） 我们每个人都会在学校度过一生中较快乐的时光，然而意外总是在我们不注意的时候来临，所以校园安全至关重要！为响应"创建安全校园"的活动，请你以张康的名义写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报刊投稿，分享你的所见所感，内容包括：1. 你是如何看待校园安全的？2. 你看到或亲身经历的一次校园内发生意外的事件（起因、经过和结果）。3. 对于如何预防校园意外事故的发生提出你的见解。（至少 2 条）
注意：1.不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：go up and down stairs 上下楼梯 run after 追逐
School days should be a happy time in our life. But it can also be dangerous if we're not careful enough.
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I hope all students will be safe and study happily at school!
7．（2024八下·武昌期末） 读书使入明智，读书使人聪慧。读书可以滋养心灵，让心灵放松。最近，你校英语报社正在组织一次主题为"Reading, a Good Habit"的英语征文活动，请根据以下内容提示写一篇英文短文进行投稿。
How often do you read books
What kind of books do you like to read Introduce a book you have read.
Why is reading important
Something more about the topic.
注意事项：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
Reading, a Good Habit
Reading is a good habit.
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8．（2024八下·谷城期末）Sunday Mail杂志在线邀请同学们参与"读书伴我们成长"的话题讨论，请以"I enjoy reading"为题，根据栏目提示要求，写篇短文投稿。
Reading plays an important role in our life.Why do you like reading？Which book have you read before？What's it about？ What can you learn from it？
要求：
1）短文内容须涵盖所有的提示问题；问题1和4至少写两个点；
2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
3）词数80词左右。
I enjoy reading
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9．（2024八下·谷城期末）任务一：Sunday Mail杂志在线邀请同学们参与"在家承担力所能及的家务"的话题讨论，假如你是魏华，请根据栏目提示要求，给Sunday Mail写一封信。
As a member of the family，we live in one house with our parents，we should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy.We do what we can do.Who does the housework in your home？What chores do you often do to help your parents？Do you think children should do chores at home？Why or why not？
要求：
1）书信内容须涵盖所有的提示问题；问题2和4至少写三点；
2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
3）词数80词左右。
Dear Sir，
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Yours truly
10．（2024八下·江汉期末）假如你是一所国际学校的学生，学校将举办主题为"Reading Makes Us __________ "的读书分享活动。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语从你读书的频率，你最爱读的书以及读书的原因等方面完成一篇短文。
内容提示：
How often do you read books
What's your favorite book about
Why should people read books often
Something more about reading.
注意：文中不得透露真实的个人信息；词数100左右；标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Makes Us▲
As the saying goes, reading makes a full man.
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答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
A Helper of My Family
I am a good helper of my family. I often do some cleaning for my parents.
Last Friday, seeing my parents were tired out after a busy day, I really wanted to do something for them. The next morning, I got up early to clean the windows, sweep the floor. I noticed that my father's desk was in a mess, so I tidied it up. At last, I took out the rubbish. Everything was in order after I finished the work. Though I was tired, I was still happy. Looking at my parents' smiling faces, I was proud of my behavior!
Everyone should do something for their families, which can not only help develop a good habit, but also make our family members happy.
本文是一篇命题作文：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 第一步，写出自己为家里做的事情和做家务的时间。第二步，写出在家做家务的感悟等。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇in a mess 乱七八糟，be proud of 为……骄傲，develop a good habit 养成好习惯。高分句型I noticed that my father's desk was in a mess, so I tidied it up.（宾语从句）。Though I was tired, I was still happy.（让步状语从句）。
2．My favorite thing from childhood is a teddy bear. I've had it since I was three. My grandma gave it to me.
I like it so much because it's so soft and cute. It's special to me because it accompanied me through many nights. I think it's like a friend.
This teddy bear has given me many memories. I remember when I was sad, I would hug it tightly and feel better.
本文是一篇材料作文；：时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时；写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。第一步，开门见山，写出自己儿童时期最喜欢的物品；第二步，简单介绍自己童年时期最喜欢的物品；第三步，具体描述喜欢的原因和感人之处。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
文章应围绕"最喜欢的东西"展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，各部分内容之间过渡自然，逻辑连贯。 建议使用亮点词汇since... 自从……；share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物。高分句型I like it so much because it's so soft and cute. (because引导的原因状语从句)；I remember when I was sad, I would hug it tightly and feel better. (宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)。
3．One possible version:
I have many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night, They always compare me with other children. I don't think my parents quite understand me.Now I am busy every day and feel nervous. Sometimes l don't want to talk. However,I try my best to understand them.Although they don't allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, study hard and talk to them as friends, Also, I tell them my troubles and share housework with them.
本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生以李明的身份写一篇题为 "How to Keep a Good
Relationship with Parents "的英语短文向英语征文活动投稿 。写作背景：李明的学校开展了主题为"青少年的亲子关系"的英语征文活动 。内容包括：1. 引出亲子关系存在问题的话题；2. 阐述我目前的感受与想法；3. 说明我做出的努力与改变。注意：1. 时态为一般现在时；2. 注意不要遗漏写作要点，可适当拓展，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范流畅，逻辑正确，层次分明；4. 不能使用真实的名称；5. 写作词数为80个左右。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：1. 高分句子： I don't think my parents quite understand me.（运用了省略了that引导的宾语从句）；Although they don't allow me to make my own decisions and give me
too much pressure,I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a
bright future.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句，that引导的宾语从句以及because引导的表语从句）；In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, study hard and talk to them as
friends.（运用了in order to do做目的状语）。2. 亮点词汇： allow sb to do sth 允许某人做某事； compare...with 与.......比较； make decisions做决定；in order to do sth为了做某事； keep a
good relationship with与......保持良好的关系； share sth with sb与某人分享某物。
4．One possible version:
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. I am fond of reading and it has become part of my life. I have developed a good reading habit and spend some time reading every day. Since I went to the middle school, I have read about 30 books. Besides, I go to a reading club twice a week to share the book review with friends. It's the best moment to get knowledge and pleasure in life. What's more, reading opens my eyes and feeds our minds. Through reading, I can experience what I haven't seen or done before. With a deep love for reading, I can't wait to read more.
这是一篇命题作文，主要介绍热爱阅读。时态是现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时，首先介绍阅读的重要性和喜欢阅读；然后具体介绍自己的阅读情况和阅读带来的变化；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be fond of；develop a good reading habit；spend+时间+doing sth.；read books；share...with...；get knowledge and pleasure；in life；what's more；can't wait to dowant to do；plan to do；like doing等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如动名词做主语Reading makes a full man.；现在完成时I am fond of reading and it has become part of my life.I have developed a good reading habit and spend some time reading every day.；状语从句Since I went to the middle school,I have read about 30 books.；最高级It's the best moment to get knowledge and pleasure in life.；动名词做主语What's more, reading opens my eyes and feeds our minds.；比较级With a deep love for reading, I can't wait to read more.等。连词since、besides、what's more、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．One possible version:
Dear Tony,
There is a beautiful city by the Yangtze river. Its name is Wuhan. I love Wuhan because it's my lovely hometown. I have lived here since I was born.
Wuhan plays an important part in Central China. It is well-known for its long history, friendly people, famous landmarks, delicious foods and top universities. You can read some famous poems on the tower and take a walk along the beautiful East Lake. It is also a dream city for foodies. You can try different kinds of foods.
As students in Wuhan, besides studies and exercises, we like colorful activities in or out of school most. The more we go into Wuhan, the more we get to love her.
Hope you'll have a good time in Wuhan.
这是一则材料作文。按照所给的提示内容写一篇短文，向外教Tony介绍武汉及武汉学生的学习和生活情况。短文要包含对材料问题的回复，包括你在武汉住了多久了？你对武汉了解多少？作为武汉的学生，你在日常生活中最喜欢做什么？和更多有关武汉的内容。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单数，写作过程中注意上下文的过渡性和连贯性，行文要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇作文简洁而温馨地介绍了武汉这座城市以及作为武汉学生的生活体验，整体而言，内容连贯，表达清晰。以"There is a beautiful city by the Yangtze river. Its name is Wuhan."开头，直接引入主题，同时用"beautiful"一词奠定了全文的基调。"I love Wuhan because it's my lovely hometown."这句话表达了作者对武汉的深厚感情，使文章更加生动和真实。文章从武汉的地理位置、历史、人文、美食和教育等多个方面进行了介绍，展现了武汉的多元魅力。通过"As students in Wuhan, besides studies and exercises, we like colorful activities in or out of school most."这句话，展现了武汉学生丰富多彩的课余生活。"Hope you'll have a good time in Wuhan."以一句温馨的祝福结尾，既表达了对Tony的友好，也体现了作者的热情好客。
6．One possible version:
Possible version
School days should be a happy time in our life. But it can also be dangerous if we're notcareful enough.But we study at school most of the time so school safety is very important.
One day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. As a result, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.
In my opinion, students should follow the safety rules in school. For example, don't push or crowd when we go up and down stairs. We'd better walk on the right when going down. On the other hand, teachers had better keep an eye on the students and stop them from running in the classroom. What's more, schools need to have lessons on safety education.
I hope all students will be safe and study happily at school!
本题是一篇材料作文写作，要求考生以张康的身份写一篇关于安全校园的英语短文向学校英文报刊投稿 。写作背景：校园安全对于学校的发展和师生的生活与工作而言至关重要。内容包括：1. 说明校园安全的重要性；2. 讲述自己遇到的校园安全问题；3. 阐述自己对校园安全的看法及建议。注意：1. 时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；2. 注意不要遗漏写作要点，详略得当，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达流畅，逻辑正确，层次分明；4. 不能使用真实的名称；5. 写作词数为80个左右。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：1. 高分句子：For example, don't push or crowd when we go up and down
stairs. （运用了祈使句以及when引导的时间状语从句）；On the other hand, teachers had better
keep an eye on the students and stop them from running in the classroom. （运用了and连接的并列句）。2. 亮点词汇： run after 追逐； fall down跌倒； As a result 结果； In my opinion 就我而言； for example例如； go up and down stairs 上下楼梯；had better do sth 最好做某事； on the other hand另一方面； keep an eye on 留心......； stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事； What's more 而且。
7．One possible version:
Reading, a Good Habit
Reading is a good habit. I read books almost every day. I always find time before going to bed or when I am free. I read different kinds of books, but what I like most is adventure stories. One book I have really enjoyed is Harry Potter by J. K. Rowling. It's a magical story about friendship, bravery and facing challenges. In my opinion, reading is very important because it's a good way to relax ourselves and reduce stress. We can take pleasure in reading. What's more, books enrich our life and feed our mind. Since reading can benefit us a lot, let's start reading now!
本文是一篇命题作文；介绍阅读是好习惯。以"一般现在时"为主；内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息要点，适当增加细节，使行文连贯。第一步，承接已给出的开头，介绍自己的阅读习惯；第二步，介绍自己喜欢的书籍类型，并简单介绍其中一本已读过的书；第三步，阐述认为阅读很重要的原因，呼吁大家一起阅读。
文章围绕"每天读书，读不同类型的书"展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。各部分内容之间过渡自然，逻辑连贯。 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，使用亮点词汇go to bed 睡觉；different kinds of 不同种类的； in my opinion 在我看来；what's more 此外。高分句型 I always read books before going to bed or when I am free. (when引导时间状语从句)； In my opinion, reading is very important because it's a good way to relax ourselves and reduce stress. (动名词作主语，because引导原因状语从句)。
8．I enjoy reading
I love reading because it opens up a world of knowledge and imagination.Another reason I enjoy reading is that it's a peaceful escape from the noise of daily life，allowing me to relax.One book that has left a deep impression on me is "The Alchemist" by Paulo Coelho.It's a story about Santiago，a boy who starts a journey to achieve his Personal Legend，discovering the true treasures of life along the way.
The book teaches me that it's important to follow one's dreams and that the world can help those who work hard.The book also inspires me to keep studying towards my goals，even when the future seems uncertain or difficult.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以"I enjoy reading"为题，根据栏目提示要求，写篇短文参与"读书伴我们成长"的话题投稿 。写作内容包括阅读的原因、书籍推荐和收获。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对阅读的原因、书籍推荐和收获三个方面进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+形容词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式和that引导的定语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的 leave a deep impression on sb.给某人留下深刻印象，inspire sb. to do sth.鼓舞某人做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
9．Dear Sir，
My mother does the housework in my family.When I have time，I will help her，too.I usually help her take out the rubbish，sweep the floor and wash the dishes.I think we should help our parents with housework.First of all，they work and cook for us every day，they are very hard.Secondly，by doing housework，we can also learn some life skills.We can also develop our hands﹣on skills.Of course，it can also help us improve our relationship with our parents.So I think we should help our parents with housework.Do you agree with me？I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly
Wei Hua
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据栏目提示要求，给Sunday Mail写一封信， 参与"在家承担力所能及的家务"的话题讨论。写作内容包括家里做家务的人，自己能做的家务，以及对家务的看法等。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对家里做家务的人，自己能做的家务，以及对家务的看法等进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的 .When I have time，I will help her，too. when引导的时间状语从句和 So I think we should help our parents with housework. 为I think+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，agree with sb.同意某人， look forward to doing sth.期待做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
10．One possible version:
Reading Makes Us Wise
As the saying goes, reading makes a full man. I've known the importance of reading since I was young, and I develop a habit of reading almost every day. I think reading is a good way to relax and learn something new. Among all the books I've read, The Little Prince is one of my favorites. It tells a story of a little prince, who travels far and meets different people on the way. I've learned a lot about life and love through his journey. People should spend more time on reading because it inspires us to think and create. Moreover, reading makes it possible for us to understand different cultures and values. We can live and grow with each new book. So pick up a book and start reading today!
这是一篇材料作文，要求用英语介绍自己的阅读习惯，自己最喜欢的一本书以及读书的原因等。本文的时态是一般现在时为主。注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，比如介绍阅读给人们带来的好处，例如激励人们思考和创造、理解不同的文化等并突出写作要点。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这是一篇不错的短文，根据所给内容的提示将各个要点逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。亮点词汇①the importance of…的重要性；②develop a habit of养成一个的习惯；③a good way to一个做…的好方法；④spend time on doing sth花费时间做某事；⑤inspire 激励；⑥pick up 拾起；高分句型①I think reading is a good way to relax and learn something new. (省略that的宾语从句)；②it tells a story of a little prince, who travels far and meets different people on the way. (who引导的定语从句)；③People should spend more time on reading because it inspires us to think and create. (because引导原因状语从句)。

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