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2025中考英语复习专题英语作文练习
个人信息是一个综合性的主题，涉及个人背景、兴趣爱好、学习经历、未来规划等多个方面。通过准确、有条理地介绍个人信息，学生可以提升语言组织能力、自我表达能力，并增强跨文化交流意识。同时，学会保护隐私信息也是现代社会中重要的素养之一。
个人信息类文章多以说明文（如自我介绍、个人简历）、记叙文（如成长故事、难忘经历）以及应用文（如书信、邮件、日记）为主。介绍的内容包括：
基本信息：姓名、年龄、学校、家庭等；
兴趣爱好：运动、音乐、阅读、旅行等；
学习经历：学科特长、获奖情况、学习习惯等；
未来规划：理想职业、短期目标、长期梦想等。
在写作时，学生应做到逻辑清晰、重点突出，能够结合具体事例生动展现个人特点，并适当表达自己的感受与思考。
你校英文报正在举办主题为 “改变我的一个人” 的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以 “A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
内容要点：
1. Who is he/she What do you think of him/her
2. How did the person change you
3. What do you plan to do in the future
提示词：kind-hearted, helpful, encourage, confidence
注意事项：
包含以上内容要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80词左右。
审 题 1. 人称：第一人称 2. 时态：一般过去时；一般将来时 3. 体裁：记叙文 4. 主题：人与社会；人与自我
列 提 纲
短语：
1.在...中起关键作用 ______________ 2.彻底改变我的生活 ______________
3.看到我的潜力 ______________ 4.以身作则 ______________
5.尽最大努力 ______________ 6.当...时依然相信我 ______________
7.产生持久影响 ______________ 8.教会我...的价值 ______________
9.让我认识到 ______________ 10.推动我进步 ______________
句型1：It was... who taught me that..., and this has become my guiding light in...
我的数学老师告诉我，错误是成功的垫脚石，这成为我解决难题的指路明灯。
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是我的祖母教会了我，善良不花钱，却意味着一切，这成为我与人相处的指路明灯。
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我的足球教练告诉我，团队合作可以让梦想成真，这成为我在小组项目中的指路明灯。
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我最好的朋友告诉我，真正的勇气是面对恐惧，这已经成为我在充满挑战的情况下的指路明灯。
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是我遇到的一个无家可归的人教会了我感恩使我们拥有的变得足够，这成为我日常生活中的指路明灯。
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句型2：The way... showed me... ...的方式让我明白了。
朋友分享东西的方式让我明白了什么是真正的友谊。
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数学老师讲解题目的方式让我明白数学并不那么难。
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足球教练训练我们的方式让我明白团队合作比获胜更重要。
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奶奶照顾家人的方式让我明白了爱的意义。
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同桌利用午休背单词的方式，让我明白时间挤挤总是有的。
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A person who changed me I will never forget my English teacher, Ms. Li. She made me more confident and brave. Last term, I failed an English test. Ms. Li didn't get angry with me but helped me review after class. She said, "Mistakes help us learn." Slowly, my grades improved. Now I'm not afraid of making mistakes anymore. I will always be thankful for Ms. Li. I want to be like Ms. Li - always kind and helpful to others. 翻译： 我永远不会忘记我的英语老师，李老师。她让我更加自信和勇敢。 上学期，我英语考试不及格。李老师没有生我的气，而是在课后帮我复习。她说：“错误帮助我们学习。”慢慢地，我的成绩提高了。 现在我不再害怕犯错了。我将永远感激李老师。我想要像李老师一样——总是善良和乐于助人。
A person who changed me The person who influenced me most was my English teacher, Ms. Li. Her patience and encouragement completely changed my attitude towards learning. Last term, I struggled with English. Ms. Li often stayed after class to help me. “Let’s take it step by step.” she would say when I felt confused. Her clear explanations helped me understand difficult grammar. Now I follow Ms. Li’s learning methods. I review notes carefully and mark important points. Next term, I want to help classmates with English, just as Ms. Li helped me. Ms. Li taught me that good teachers don’t just teach knowledge - they teach us how to learn. I’ll always remember how she changed me. 赏析 主语（Her patience and encouragement） + 谓语（changed） + 宾语（my attitude） + 状语（towards learning）复合主语（patience和encouragement并列）体现教师特质的双重性 用直接引语 + 主句（she would say） + 时间状语从句（when...）;引语使用祈使句的包容性表达（Let's） 主句（Ms. Li taught me） + 宾语从句（that...） + 破折号补充说明从句内含not just...but...的隐性对比结构 主句（I'll remember） + 宾语从句（how...）将来时态（will）表达永恒记忆
对我影响最大的人是我的英语老师李老师。她的耐心和鼓励完全改变了我对学习的态度。
上学期，我英语学得很吃力。李老师经常下课后留下来帮助我。“让我们一步一步来，”当我感到困惑时，她会说。她清晰的解释帮助我理解了难懂的语法。
现在我遵循李老师的学习方法。我认真复习笔记，标出重点。下学期，我想帮助同学学习英语，就像李老师帮助我一样。
李老师告诉我，好老师不只是传授知识，他们还教会我们如何学习。我会永远记得她如何改变了我。
内容 (Content): ★★★★★ 5分
文章通过"课后辅导"、"分步讲解"等真实细节，生动刻画了Ms. Li耐心负责的教师形象。完整呈现题目三大核心要素：人物影响：具体说明英语学习态度的转变；改变过程：用"从害怕犯错到主动复习"展现成长轨迹；未来计划：提出"帮助同学"的实践性目标
结构 (Organization): ★★★★★ 4.5分
采用经典三段式架构：过去（问题+教师帮助）—现在（学习方法改变）—未来（价值传递）结尾若增加金句（如"教育是点燃火种而非灌输容器"）可使立意更深刻。
语言 (Language): ★★★★☆ 4分
精准使用教育类动词链（explain→understand→review→teach）；"step by step"等短语符合新课标"性
A person who changed me The person who influenced me most was my English teacher, Ms. Li. With her warm smile and endless patience, she completely transformed my attitude towards learning. Last term, English seemed like an impossible challenge for me. ①While other teachers focused only on test results, Ms. Li noticed my struggles and often stayed after class to help. “Let’s take it step by step.” she would say patiently whenever I felt confused. ②Not only did she explain grammar rules clearly, but she also taught me effective learning strategies that made difficult concepts easier to understand. Now, ③inspired by Ms. Li's dedication, I’ve developed my own study routine. Every evening, I carefully review my notes and use colorful markers to highlight key points, just as she taught me. What's more, I plan to start an English study group next term to help my classmates, hoping to pass on the kindness and knowledge I received. Ms. Li showed me that education is not just about memorizing facts - it's about developing the ability to learn. ④Though we may grow apart as I graduate, her influence continues to guide me in every challenge I face, reminding me that with patience and perseverance, no obstacle is too great to overcome. 对我影响最大的人是我的英语老师李老师。她温暖的微笑和无尽的耐心彻底改变了我对学习的态度。 上学期，英语对我来说似乎是一个不可能的挑战。当其他老师只关注考试成绩时，李老师注意到了我的困难，并经常在课后留下来帮助我。“让我们一步一步来，”每当我感到困惑时，她都会耐心地说。她不仅清楚地解释语法规则，而且还教我有效的学习策略，使难以理解的概念更容易理解。 现在，在李老师的奉献精神的鼓舞下，我制定了自己的学习计划。每天晚上，我都会像她教我的那样，仔细复习我的笔记，并用彩色记号笔标出重点。更重要的是，我计划下学期开始一个英语学习小组来帮助我的同学，希望传递我所获得的善良和知识。 李老师告诉我，教育不仅仅是记忆事实，而是培养学习的能力。虽然在我毕业的时候，我们可能会渐行渐远，但她的影响继续指引我面对每一个挑战，提醒我只要有耐心和毅力，没有什么障碍是克服不了的。 赏析 ①时间状语从句（While...） + 主句（Ms. Li noticed...and stayed...）的并列复合句，通过"while"建立对比关系，突出教师特质 ②Not only...but also...倒装结构 + 定语从句（that...），三个层级递进：知识讲解→方法传授→效果达成 ③现在分词短语作状语（inspired by...）前置，形成倒装结构，比常规语序"I have developed my own study routine, inspired by..."更具文学性，主句使用现在完成时（have developed），强调过去行为对现在的持续影响。 ④让步状语从句（Though...） + 主句（her influence continues...） + 现在分词结构（reminding...） + 宾语从句（that...） 四重逻辑嵌套：时空关系→持续影响→作用机制→哲理总结
单词 词性 英式音标 汉语意思
influence 动词 (v.)/名词（n.) / nflu ns/ 影响
perseverance 名词 (n.) / p s v r ns/ 坚持不懈
inspire 动词 (v.) / n spa (r)/ 激励
mentor 名词 (n.) / ment (r)/ 导师
transform 动词 (v.) /tr ns f m/ 转变
determination 名词 (n.) /d t m ne n/ 决心
guidance 名词 (n.) / ɡa dns/ 指导
impact 名词 (n.) / mp kt/ 深刻影响
legacy 名词 (n.) / leɡ si/ 精神遗产
attitude 名词 (n.) / t tju d/ 态度
overcome 动词 (v.) / v k m/ 克服
reflection 名词 (n.) /r flek n/ 反思
初阶 高阶
时间引入 Last year... As the autumn leaves fell in 2023... / On the morning of my final exam, when...
人物介绍 My teacher helped me. Ms. Li, whose patience was as endless as the summer sky, guided me...
改变过程 She taught me to work hard. Through her actions, she planted seeds of perseverance in my heart...
具体事例 Once I failed a test. She encouraged me. When my math score hit rock bottom, instead of criticism, she handed me a customized study plan...
品质描写 She was kind and patient. Her kindness flowed like a quiet river, wearing away my self-doubt stone by stone...
情感变化 I felt happy and confident. A newfound courage blossomed within me, fragile at first but growing stronger each day...
未来影响 Now I want to help others like her. Her legacy lives on through my volunteer work, where I pass forward the torch of encouragement she lit...
哲理升华 She taught me never to give up. Like a lighthouse keeper tending her flame, she showed me darkness only makes our inner light more visible...
俗语融入 反思 "As the saying goes, 'A single conversation with a wise man is better than ten years of study.' This perfectly describes my experience with ______."
短语：
1.在...中起关键作用 play a key role in 2.彻底改变我的生活 turned my life around
3.看到我的潜力 saw potential in me 4.以身作则 led by example
5.尽最大努力 try/do one’s best to do 6.当...时依然相信我 believed in me when
7.产生持久影响 made a lasting impact 8.教会我...的价值 taught me the value of
9.让我认识到 opened my eyes to 10.推动我进步 pushed me to be better
句型1：It was... who taught me that..., and this has become my guiding light in...
我的数学老师告诉我，错误是成功的垫脚石，这成为我解决难题的指路明灯。
It was my math teacher who taught me that mistakes are stepping stones to success, and this has become my guiding light in solving difficult problems.
是我的祖母教会了我，善良不花钱，却意味着一切，这成为我与人相处的指路明灯。
It was my grandmother who taught me that kindness costs nothing but means everything, and this has become my guiding light in dealing with people.
我的足球教练告诉我，团队合作可以让梦想成真，这成为我在小组项目中的指路明灯。
It was my soccer coach who taught me that teamwork makes the dream come true, and this has become my guiding light in group projects.
我最好的朋友告诉我，真正的勇气是面对恐惧，这已经成为我在充满挑战的情况下的指路明灯。
It was my best friend who taught me that true courage is facing fears, and this has become my guiding light in challenging situations.
是我遇到的一个无家可归的人教会了我感恩使我们拥有的变得足够，这成为我日常生活中的指路明灯。
It was a homeless man I met who taught me that gratitude turns what we have into enough, and this has become my guiding light in daily life.
句型2：The way... shows me... ...的方式让我明白了。
朋友分享东西的方式让我明白了什么是真正的友谊。
The way my friend shares things shows me what true friendship is.
数学老师讲解题目的方式让我明白数学并不那么难。
The way my math teacher explains problems shows me math isn't so difficult.
足球教练训练我们的方式让我明白团队合作比获胜更重要。
The way my soccer coach trains us shows me teamwork is more important than winning.
奶奶照顾家人的方式让我明白了爱的意义。
The way my grandma takes care of our family shows me the meaning of love.
同桌利用午休背单词的方式，让我明白时间挤挤总是有的。
The way my deskmate reviewed words during lunch break shows me time is always there if you seize it.
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