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2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末高频考点汇编
(江苏专版)专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．（24·镇江）作为新时代的青少年，应当倡导健康生活理念，既要有责任担当意识，也要有不畏艰难、乐善好施的优秀品质。你校英语网站以“How to Be a Better Person”为题开展征文活动，请根据征稿内容写一篇短文，要点如下：
1. 健康生活，如：饮食、锻炼……
2. 牢记责任，如：保护环境……
3. 不畏艰难，如：勇敢面对……
4. 乐善好施，如：参与慈善……
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I should try my best to be a better person. I will do the following things.
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2．（24·淮安）文明从点滴做起，城市因你我而美丽。近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的短文。内容应包含以下要点：
行为习惯 遵守交通规则，公共场合举止礼貌……
公益活动 捐钱给慈善机构，做志愿者……
绿色生活 节约用水，选择公共交通……
暑假计划 按时完成作业，多读有意义的书……
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Huai’an more civilized.
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From now on, let’s join together to be civilized students. And we’ll have a happy and meaningful summer holiday!
3．（24·泰州）用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，我们每个人都要力争做“阳光少年”。请你根据以下要点提示，以“A sunshine teenager”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”。
要点：
1. Good personalities.
2. Meaningful activities.
3. Influence on me.
要求：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点, 并适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A sunshine teenager
Each of us should try to be a sunshine teenager. But what is a sunshine teenager like Now I will introduce one to you.
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4．（24·盐城）很快就要到世界环境保护日，你校组织以“Being a volunteer of going green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛，提示如下：
1. What are you like
2. What have you ever done for going green
3. Tell us the reasons for going green and how to do it
Being a volunteer of going green
Hello,everyone. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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Thank you for listening!
5．（24·淮安）旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。假如你是八（1）班的李海，很喜欢旅行，请用英语写一篇短文，与同学们分享一下你的旅行体验。
内容需包括以下要点：
1. 旅行的好处（至少两点）；
2. 介绍你的一次旅行经历（时间、地点、人物、出行方式、经过、心得、感受）；
3. 你对同学们有关旅行的倡议。
要求：
1. 词数在80-100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle.
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6．（24·淮安）旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。假如你是八（1）班的李海，很喜欢旅行，请用英语写一篇短文，分享你的旅行经验。内容需包括以下要点：
1. 旅行的好处；
2. 介绍一次你的旅行经历（时间、地点、人物、经过、感受）；
3. 关于旅行的建议。
要求：1. 词数在80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所有要点，并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans, travelling is loved by more and more people.
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7．（24·镇江）优质生活需要文明的社会公德和健康的社会环境作为保障，请根据下表所给信息，以We can improve our life为题写一封倡议书向校英文报投稿，动员同学们争做文明好少年。
Public morality (社会公德) 1. help others 2. obey rules 3. …
Living environment (生活环境) 1. save energy 2. reduce pollution 3. …
要求：
1. 词数：不少于80词，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 倡议书内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3. 段落分明，语意通顺，书写规范；
4. 不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等信息。
We can improve our life
Dear classmates,
I will talk about “duty” with you today. As students, it is our duty to
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Let’s start now!
8．（24·扬州）近期你参加了学校组织的题为“What can we do for our city”主题演讲比赛，请根据以下材料写一篇英文演讲稿。
在学校 1. 走路或骑车上学，代替家长用小轿车接送
2. 尽可能多地再利用使用过的书本
3.……
在日常生活中 1. 购物时使用布袋子(cloth bag)，不使用塑料袋
2. 节约用水，保护水源
3. 垃圾分类，循环利用
4. ……
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；
3. 词数：100词左右（开头不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。
What can we do for our city
Dear teachers and students,
The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city ”
As students, we can do something to help.
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If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
9．（24·泰州）热心公益，争当志愿者，积极为文明实践、阳光助残、环境保护、为老弱服务等志愿项目作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你按以下要点，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备作为志愿者参加的一次服务活动。
1. What type of volunteer do you want to be
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer like that
3. How will you work as a volunteer
要求：
1.短文必须包含所有要求并适当发挥。
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
3.词数100词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（24·扬州）为建美好社区，阳光社区的工作人员请你以“Work together to make a better community”为题并根据下面的问题提示，写一篇面向社区外籍居民的英文倡议书，要点如下：
提示问题：
1. What can we do to protect the environment
2. How can we save natural resources
3. How can neighbors help each other
注意：
1)条理清楚，语言流畅，语法正确，书写工整；
2)必须包含问题所给提示，并做适当发挥；
3)词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Work together to make a better community
Dear members of Sunshine Community,
We are writing this letter to call on everyone to make our community a better place.
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Best regards,
Sunshine Community
11．（24·扬州）你校正在开展以“新时代优秀中学生 ”为主题的演讲比赛，你打算介绍你的同学琳达。 请根据以下信息写一篇英语演讲稿介绍琳达，并号召全校学生向她学习。
懂礼仪 1. 公共场所举止得体；2. …… （自拟一点）
爱环境 1. 节约能源；2. …… （自拟一点）
有爱心 1. 捐款给有需要的人；2. ……（自拟一点）
有理想 梦想成为…… ；理由：……
注意：
1. 词数：100 词左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数； 2. 必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Dear all,
Linda is my classmate.
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I suggest that we should learn from her. Let’s start from now on!
12．（24·泰州）少年强则国强，值此新中国成立75周年之际，你校八年级举行了题为“How to be an excellent teenager”的演讲比赛，请你准备一份100字左右的演讲稿，具体要点内容如下：
注意：1.短文中应包含所要求的信息，可以适当发挥。
2.词数100词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
How to be an excellent teenager
Dear friends,
I feel very proud to make a speech for you. I would like to talk about how to be an excellent teenager.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
13．（24·淮安）为配合盱眙县开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)活动”，学校举办以“How to be a more civilized student”为主题的演讲比赛。请结合以下要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
个人修养 1. 对人友善，礼貌待人； 2. 乐于助人，积极参与志愿服务； 3. ……
公共礼仪 1. 保持干净整洁，不乱扔垃圾； 2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆、阅览室保持安静； 3. ……
绿色生活 1. 节能，随手关灯，出行乘坐公共交通工具； 2. 垃圾分类回收； 3. ……
要求：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 必须包含以上要点，适当发挥；
3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚, 书写规范；
4. 词数为80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its efforts to be a civilized city. I think we can do something to make a difference!
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14．（24·常州）假如你是李华，英语老师让你们分享各自帮助他人的经历。请你根据下面的提示信息，写一篇英文演讲稿，与老师和同学们分享你的经历。
提示：
1. When and how did you help someone
2. What happened at last
3. What do you think you can do to help others in daily life
要求：
1.必须包含所给提示，并适当发挥；
2.词数：90词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Good morning, everyone! Today I’d like to share my experience of helping...
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15．（24·扬州）最近，校英语报发起了关于“如何成为一名合格的中学生？”的讨论，请即将进入初三的你谈一谈，你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下：
平时 1.培养良好的阅读习惯，提高自己； 2.保护环境，步行或骑自行车上学； 3.举止文明……(自由发挥1-2句)
空余时间 1.关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示技能的机会； 2.欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然的重要性。
总结 ……(1-2句)
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified (合格的) middle school student, I think
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16．（24·宿迁）在八年级举行的“青春仪式”活动中，同学们畅谈青春之梦，立志发展自己，服务社会。十四岁的我们可以做什么，让我们的家乡泗洪更文明、家园更美丽、生活更幸福？请根据下面表格提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
文明礼仪 (1)公共场合保持安静； (2)不插队,有礼貌……(自由发挥 1-2 句)
关爱他人 (1)乐于助人， 友善待人； (2)参加社区志愿者工作(举 1例)
环境保护 (1)不乱丢垃圾： (2)步行或骑自行车上学；……(自由发挥 1-2句)
注意：1.根据提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯：
2.词数 90个字左右，标题和开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Sihong is now trying to become a national civilized modern city. As middle students, what should we do
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I believe Sihong will be more and more beautiful.
17．（24·连云港）假如你是李华，你校英语社团将举办一场“变废为宝”经验分享会，请你写一篇发言稿，分享你的做法，内容包括：
（1）你对“变废为宝”的认识；
（2）你“变废为宝”的具体事例；
（3）你的环保倡议。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Waste pollution has become a serious problem all over the world.
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18．（24·泰州）暑假即将到来，为了丰富学生的暑假生活，光明社区活动中心举办了一次英语演讲比赛，请以“To be a civilized citizen(争当文明市民) ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点如下：1、讲礼貌 2、保环境 3、献爱心
注意事项：
1. 包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To be a civilized citizen
Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. To be a civilized citizen, we should do the following things.
First, have good manners.
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Second, know how to go green.
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Third, give care and love to people in need.
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In a word, it is important for us to be a civilized citizen.
That’s all. Thank you!
19．（24·宿迁）为了创建文明城市，共建美好泗阳，全县上下正在开展”讲文明、树新风”活动。作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。
文明礼仪 遵守交通规则，公共场合保持安静，文明就餐（举例说明）
环保意识 公园里不摘花，不到处丢垃圾，节约水电（举例说明）
你的建议 做慈善工作，……
注意：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
In order to build a civilized (文明)city, we students should behave well in our daily life.
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In a word, let’s act now. I believe Siyang will be more and more beautiful.
20．（24·扬州）目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题，根据下列提示用英语写一封100词左右的倡议书。要点提示如下：
（1）保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾；
（2）不在公共场所大声喧哗，图书馆保持安静；
（3）遵守交通规则，总是排队；
（4）举止有礼，互帮互助；
（5）……
写作要求：
（1）可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
（2）语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑正确；
（3）词数100字左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
注意事项：文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all of us. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something for it.
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Let’s start from ourselves!
The Students’ Union
June 13th, 2024
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
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参考答案与试题解析
1．例文：
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I should try my best to be a better person. I will do the following things.
First of all, we should have healthy food and we had better do more exercise to build up our bodies. What’s more, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. I can separate the waste into different groups so that it can be recycled in my daily life. Besides, I will not be afraid to face difficulties or challenges any more and try my best to solve problems in life and study. I will never give up trying. Moreover, I will be an honest person and never tell lies. Last but not least, it is necessary to be ready to help others. I can support some charities by donating money or working as a volunteer.
I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. If I start to develop these good habits, I believe I will become a better person and make a difference to the world.
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列4个提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍作为中学生要尽力去做一个优秀的人，从而引出话题；
第二步，根据所列要点，逐一陈述，适当拓展，介绍自己的做法；
第三步，书写总结。
［亮点词汇］
① try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力去做某事
② give up 放弃
［高分句型］
① What’s more, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. (it作形式主语)
② I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. (宾语从句)
2．例文
How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student？
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Huai’an more civilized.
First, we should always obey traffic rules when crossing the road. In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. For example, we must keep quiet in the library. Then, learning to care about others is also important. We can donate our pocket money to charities and work as volunteers at the community centre.During the summer holiday, we can also take part in charity activities.
Moreover, we can save water by taking shorter showers. (At the same time, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room). It’s wise for us to choose public transport, because protecting the environment can help us live a green life.
Finally, as a middle school student, I plan to finish my homework on time and read more meaningful books in the next two months. Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. Just as the saying goes, read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
From now on, let’s join together to be civilized students. And we’ll have a happy and meaningful summer holiday!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何做一个文明的中学生的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“近期，淮安正在创建全国文明典范城市，以文明之风，创文明之城。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇“How to be a civilized (文明的) middle school student ”为主题的短文。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“行为习惯、公益活动、暑假计划等”几个方面重点介绍如何做一个文明的中学生的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们将有一个快乐而有意义的暑假”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心；
②take part in参加；
③plan to do sth计划做某事；
④from now on从现在起。
[高分句型]
①In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. (“It’s+形容词+to do sth”句型)
②Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. (动词不定式作目的状语)
3．One possible version
A sunshine teenager
Each of us should try to be a sunshine teenager. But what is a sunshine teenager like Now I will introduce one to you.
He is my best friend Daniel. He is confident and always full of hope for the future. He is ready to take on new challenges any time. He is also kind and helpful. He cares more about others. He will help us if something difficult worries us. Daniel always works to high standards and gets high marks in exams, but he is modest and easy to work with.
Daniel takes an active part in different kinds of voluntary work. He has devoted most of his free time to it, such as helping with doing a bird count in Bird Watching Society, collecting books and clothes for children in poor areas, planting trees at weekends. He wants to do his best to make our earth a better place.
Daniel is a good example to me. I have learned a lot from him.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，介绍这位阳光少年的优良性格；
第二步，介绍少年参加的有意义的活动，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，介绍这位少年对我的影响并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth.乐意做某事
②takes an active part in积极参与
③such as比如
[高分句型]
①He will help us if something difficult worries us.（if引导条件状语从句）
②He wants to do his best to make our earth a better place.（动词不定式作目的状语）
4．例文
Being a volunteer of going green
Hello, everyone. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I’m kind to others. I’m willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I have ever worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. We shouldn’t drop the litter carelessly. I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，是一篇材料作文。
②时态：文章以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。表明作者想成为绿色环保志愿者并进行演讲的意图。
第二步，具体阐述原因。通过描述自己的性格、爱好和志愿者经历，说明自己具备成为志愿者的素质和能力。
第三步，书写结语。文章结尾强调了保护环境的重要性，并表示自己会尽力为地球做出改变。
［亮点词汇］
①be willing to do sth愿意做某事
②raise money 筹款
③make a difference 产生影响
［高分句型］
①I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.（when引导时间状语从句）
②If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．例文
Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle. As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans, travelling is loved by more and more people. Traveling can not only broaden our horizon, but also relax us physically and mentally.
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It’s a good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb the mountains and took many photos. We all had a good time. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.
When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather. We also need to bring some common medicines.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍旅行的好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次旅行经历；
第三步，提出关于旅行的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②took photos照相
③had a good time玩得高兴
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere.（情态动词的被动语态）
②Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.（让步状语从句；宾语从句）
③When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather.（时间状语从句）
6．例文
As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans , travelling is loved by more and more people. Traveling can not only broaden our horizon, but also relax us physically and mentally.
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It’s a good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb the mountains and took many photos. We all had a good time. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.
When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather. We also need to bring some common medicines.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍旅行的好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次旅行经历；
第三步，提出关于旅行的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②took photos照相
③had a good time玩得高兴
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere.(情态动词的被动语态)
②Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.(让步状语从句；宾语从句)
③When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather.(时间状语从句)
7．例文
We can improve our lifeDear classmates,
I will talk about “duty” with you today. As students, it is our duty to do something to improve our life, and we can do as follows.
We should be polite in public. Firstly, it’s kind to help others in seed. For example, we can help the disabled cross the road. Secondly, we should obey rules in different places. We can’t speak loudly in public places like libraries or museums. And it’s rude to push in before others. We should queue for our time.
On the other hand, more attention should be paid to our living environment. To us, it’s meaningful to save energy. We can save water by taking shorter showers. Moreover, we can reduce pollution by separating and recycling the waste. Last but not least, we can plant more trees and flowers to help protect the environment.
Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference.
Let’s start now!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应对题干给出的“如何改善我们的生活”进行描述并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明意图，引出话题；
第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，从社会公德和生活环境两方面介绍如何改善现在的生活；
第三步，书写结语，鼓励大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①in public当众
②make a difference对……产生影响
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s kind to help others in seed.（it is adj to do sth固定句型）
②Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference.（祈使句，that引导宾语从句）
8．参考例文
What can we do for our city Dear teachers and students,
The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city ”
As students, we can do something to help. First of all, we should walk or ride to school when we study at school, instead of parents picking us up in cars. Second, we should reuse used books as much as possible. Finally, we must not waste food.
In our daily life, we can do more. First, we use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we shop. Second, we must save water and protect water resources. Third, we need to sort and recycle waste.
If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍演讲的话题；
第二步，介绍在学校和在日常生活中能够采取的措施；
第三步，鼓励大家行动起来并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②instead of而不是
③pick up接载
④recycle回收利用
⑤take action采取行动
[高分句型]
First, we use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we shop.(when引导时间状语从句)
9．例文
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I’m going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People’s Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Second, I will sing for the old people to cheer them up. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. Isn’t it meaningful
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍做什么，为何做；
第二步，介绍怎么做；
第三步，再次点明活动的益处，暗含这么做的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②such as 例如
③fold clothes 叠衣服
[高分句型]
①Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.（whatever引导宾语从句）
②Isn’t it meaningful （否定疑问句）
10．例文
Work together to make a better community
Dear members of Sunshine Community,
We are writing this letter to call on everyone to make our community a better place. Firstly, it’s important for everyone to take care of the environment. For example, it’s good manners not to drop litter everywhere. We should also remember not to pick flowers.
Secondly, everyone should do something to save natural resources, such as taking shorter showers and turning off the lights when leaving a room. Otherwise, our natural resources will soon run out.
Finally, all the members are encouraged to help each other. Chinese people believe that it’s luckier to have helpful neighbors than relatives living far away. We can live through difficult times more easily by helping our community members.
Let’s take action together right now.
Best regards,
Sunshine Community
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我们能做些什么来保护环境；
第二步，介绍我们如何节约自然资源；
第三步，介绍邻里之间应该互相帮助，并说明原因；
第四步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of 照顾
②turn off 关闭
③such as 例如
④run out 用光
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s important for everyone to take care of the environment.（it作形式主语）
②Finally, all the members are encouraged to help each other.（被动语态）
③Chinese people believe that it’s luckier to have helpful neighbors than relatives living far away.（含有比较级的句式）
11．例文
Dear all,
Linda is my classmate. She learns about many good manners. She always behave politely in public. She never makes too much noise in public and she will say “Excuse me” when she is in the way. Also, Linda saves energy by riding to school and protects the environment wisely. She thinks that it’s very important to develop a green lifestyle. What’s more, she donates money to people in need. She often takes part in charity activities and she is a member of the Helping Hands Club.
Linda would like to be a doctor when she grows up because she wants to help more people improve their lives.
I suggest that we should learn from her. Let’s start from now on!
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，承接文章开头，从“懂礼貌，爱环境，有爱心”三方面介绍Linda；
第二步，具介绍她的梦想；
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
［亮点词汇］
①learn about了解
②in public公开地，在公共场合
③in the way阻碍，妨碍
④donate money to给……捐钱
⑤take part in参加
［高分句型］
①She thinks that it’s very important to develop a green lifestyle.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Linda would like to be a doctor when she grows up because she wants to help more people improve their lives.（when引导时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
12．范文：
How to be an excellent teenager
Dear friends,
I feel very proud to make a speech for you. I would like to talk about how to be an excellent teenager.
First of all, it is necessary to be honest and behave politely. We never tell lies so that our friends trust us and believe what we say. We are polite enough to queue in public. Also, we show great interest in many activities in our spare time. Being good at sports makes us healthier and healthier. Reading can help us get a lot of knowledge and make us wiser.
What’s more, going green is important for us to be excellent. For example, we should separate waste into different groups. And we should plant more trees and flowers. Don’t walk on the grass. Finally, we can take part in charity activities and help more people in need. We can work as volunteers and donate money to the children in poor areas.
I’m sure I can be better and better in Grade 9. Everyone can do something to make a difference to our environment and ourselves.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于一篇讲稿；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明接下来要讲什么；
第二步，从品质、爱好、爱心、理想和环保意识等方面具体阐述将要怎么做；
第三步，表达自己的期望和感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②show great interest in对……表现出浓厚的兴趣
③take part in参加
④make a difference to对……有重要意义
[高分句型]
①First of all, it is necessary to be honest and behave politely.（it作形式主语）
②Everyone can do something to make a difference to our environment and ourselves.（动词不定式表目的）
13．例文
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its efforts to be a civilized city. I think we can do something to make a difference!
As students, we should be kind to others and often help people. We should actively take part in voluntary service.
In public, we shouldn’t litter everywhere and should keep it clean. It is not polite to speak loudly in public places, and we should keep quiet in libraries, reading rooms and other places like that.
It is important to save energy and reduce waste. We should also separate the waste and try our best to recycle it. We should always turn off the lights and travel by public transportation.
Let’s start with ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出创建文明城市活动的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从个人修养、公共礼仪和绿色生活三个方面介绍；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家一同为创建文明城市活动努力。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference有所作为
②take part in参加
③turn off关
[高分句型]
It is important to save energy and reduce waste.（不定式作主语）
14．例文
Good morning, everyone! Today I’d like to share my experience of helping my classmate with you.
When I was at primary school, one of my classmates got seriously ill and had to be operated on at once. The operation cost too much, but his family couldn’t afford it. My classmates, teachers and I donated money to help him. Moreover, we called on more teachers and students in our school to give a helping hand to him. At last, over 200, 000 yuan was donated to the family. The operation was successful and my classmate returned to school three months later.
I think we can help others by doing small things in daily life such as donating pocket money to charities and giving a seat to someone in need on a bus. We should always remember even small acts of kindness can make a big difference to others.
So much for my speech. Thanks for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿写作；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意围绕提示问题展开，增加细节，使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明帮助过的人，开启文章；
第二步，具体描述帮助他人的经过及结果；
第三步，表达自己对于如何帮助别人的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①at once立刻
②call on呼吁
③such as不得不
④make a big difference有很大的影响
[高分句型]
①When I was at primary school, one of my classmates got seriously ill and had to be operated on at once.（时间状语从句）
②I think we can help others by doing small things in daily life such as donating pocket money to charities and giving a seat to someone in need on a bus.（宾语从句）
15．例文：
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. Second, we should pay attention to protecting the environment. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Third, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before leaving the table. In our spare time, we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their skills to the public. Also, we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature in order to understand the importance of protecting nature.
In a word, if we follow the advice, we will make a big difference to ourselves.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，有很多事情可以成为一个合格的中学生；
第二步，具体介绍要成为一名合格的中学生要做的事情；
第三步，最后总结并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① pay attention to注意
② on foot步行
③ in a word总之
[高分句型]
① I think we have a lot of things to do. (省略that的宾语从句)
② In a word, if we follow the advice, we will make a big difference to ourselves. (if引导的条件状语从句)
16．例文
Sihong is now trying to become a national civilized modern city. As middle students, what should we do
Firstly, we should keep quiet and behave well in public. When we get on the bus, we don’t cut in line or talk loudly. It’s impolite to speak loudly in public. Secondly, we should be helpful and friendly to others. On weekends, it’s important for us to help our parents with housework. As volunteers, we can help old people do some shopping at the community center. Thirdly, we should protect the environment. We can’t throw rubbish everywhere. Walking or cycling to school is a good way to protect the environment. It is also necessary to save water.
I believe Sihong will be more and more beautiful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示，具体介绍我们可以做的事情；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①cut in line 插队
②community center 社区中心
③necessary 必要的
[高分句型]
①On weekends, it’s important for us to help our parents with housework. （it is +adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型）
② Walking or cycling to school is a good way to protect the environment. （动名词短语作主语）
17．例文
Waste pollution has become a serious problem all over the world. Recycling is a good way to solve the problem. It also helps us develop a green lifestyle.
For recycling, I once made a pencil case out of old jeans. I also cut used plastic bottles into different shapes and planted flowers in them. Besides, I built a comfortable home for my cat with shoe boxes.
There are many more ways to reduce waste pollution. Everyone can make a difference. Let’s take action together to make our world a better place.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：要点已给出，注意详略得当，不要存在语法错误，注意上下文的衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己对“变废为宝”的认识；
第二步，用具体的事例介绍“变废为宝”；
第三步，介绍自己的倡议内容。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference起到影响
②take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①Let’s take action together to make our world a better place.（祈使句）
18．One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Tobe a civilized citizen, we should do the following things.
First, have good manners. Always queue for our turn. Don’t push in before others. Don’t shout loudly in public. Don’t drop litter everywhere. It’s impolite to talk or laugh loudly in the park. If someone is in our way, we may say “Excuse me”. Wait till he moves.
Second, know how to go green. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. We can save water by taking shorter showers. We can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave the room. We can protect the environment by recycling waste.
Third, give care and love to people in need. We should help children in poor areas. We can donate our pocket money to them. We can collect things for Project Hope. We can visit the old people’s home and give love to them.
In a word, it is important for us to be a civilized citizen.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“To be a civilized citizen”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从have good manners、know how to go green和give care and love to people in need等方面来介绍具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对争当文明市民的期待。
【亮点词汇】
①queue for one’s turn排队等候
②drop litter扔垃圾
③go green生产或使用绿色产品
④pocket money零用钱
【高分句型】
If someone is in our way, we may say “Excuse me”. （If引导条件状语从句）
19．例文:
In order to build a civilized city, we students should behave well in our daily life.
First, we should try to protect the environment. Don’t pick flowers in the park. Don’t drop litter everywhere. Don’t use the plastic bags. Don’t leave the tap running. Turn off the lights when we leave the room. We should go to school by bike or on foot.
Second, we should try to show good manners to others. We should often say “thank you”, “sorry”, “please” or “nice to see you”. We should obey the traffic rules. We should always queue for our turn. Don’t push in. We should keep quiet in public. We have to eat civilized.
Third, we should always be ready to help others. We should be helpful. We should give our seats to people in need. We should often take part in the charity activities. We should raise money for Project Hope and donate money to those in need.
Finally, we should try our best to make Siyang more and more beautiful.
In a word, let’s act now. I believe Siyang will be more and more beautiful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇议论文；
②时态： 以一般现在时和祈使句为主；
③提示：根据表格提示，写一篇短文来规范自己的言行举止，写作时必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，确保文章条理清晰、语句连贯、符合英语表达习惯，但文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步， 文明礼仪，包括遵守交通规则、保持公共场合安静、文明就餐等；
第二步， 环保意识，包括保护公园环境、节约水电资源、使用环保袋等；
第三步， 具体建议，帮助他人，包括做慈善工作、参与公益活动、帮助需要帮助的人等；
[亮点词汇]
① keep quiet保持安静
②take part in参加
③ donate money to sb.捐钱给某人
④ be ready to do sth准备好做某事
[高分句型]
① Turn off the lights when we leave the room.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I believe Siyang will be more and more beautiful.（省略that的宾语从句）
20．例文：
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all of us. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something for it. In order to make our school more beautiful, we must keep our classrooms clean and tidy. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. We should remember not to make too much noise in public places. We must keep quiet when we are in the library. It’s important for us to follow the traffic rules. Remember to wait in line at any time. We should behave politely and help each other. Everyone should save water and electricity. Wasting food is not allowed.
Let’s start from ourselves!
The Students’ Union
June 13th, 2024
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，交代创建文明校园的重要性；
第二步，具体创建文明校园的方法。从“教室的整洁、不在公共场所大声喧哗、遵守交通规则、举止有礼”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，号召大家从自身做起。
[亮点词汇]
①manners行为，举止
②in order to为了……
③keep quiet 保持安静
[高分句型]
①We must keep quiet when we are in the library.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Wasting food is not allowed.（动名词作主语）
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