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08书面表达 （含答案解析）【广州专用】
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（23-24七年级下·广东广州·期末）英语课上, 班级正在进行题为”我的梦想职业”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文, 汇报你们小组四人的分享内容, 需包括以下要点：
Who Tom Jenny Jack You
What （请你补充）
Why 喜欢动物细心照顾各种动物 可饮用水少把海水变成淡水 节约能源生产更环保的电器 （请你补充）
注意：1）词数70字左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数）；
2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分；
3）参考词汇：electrical appliance电器；zookeeper动物园管理员。
In the English class, we are having a talk on “My dream job”.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（23-24七年级下·广东广州·期末）假如你是李华，你们班新来的英国同学Jessica想在家里种植盆栽，她通过邮件向你咨询。请根据以下植物信息卡的内容，向她介绍两种广州常见的盆栽（potted plants）。
Name Gerber a Daisy (非洲菊) Orchid (兰花) ZZ Plant (金钱树)
Features (特点) ·…harmful gases ·oxygen, at night ·a fresh smell ·good. . . sleep ·beautiful flowers ·…a little water ·long flowering time ·air, clean ·easy, take care ·a little water or sunlight ·clean, air ·evergreen leaves
注意：1.词数：70词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
3.需包含所选盆栽的全部提示要点。
Dear Jessica,
There are many beautiful potted plants for you to choose. I’d like to introduce two of them. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（23-24七年级下·广东广州·期末）请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以 “My father” 为题的英语作文，介绍你父亲的大概情况，并谈谈你对父亲的评价。
年龄 40岁
外貌 又高又胖，短头发，大眼睛
职业 数学教师 (工作努力，上课活泼生动并深受学生喜爱)
性格 诚实，善良
爱好 打乒乓球
注意：
1.词数：80词左右(短文的标题已给出，不计入词数)；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My father
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（23-24七年级下·广东广州·期末）假如你是学校动物俱乐部的一员，得到了一张Labrador拉布拉多的信息卡。现在请你根据信息卡内容，补全以下报告，让更多同学了解拉布拉多。
Labrador facts
Appearance: golden, brown or black; medium to large-sized (adj.中大型的)
Age: live up to 1214 years
Sleep:12-14 hours a day
Nature: friendly and outgoing; excellent swimmers; food lovers
More information: 1. become guide dogs: help blind people, … (请你补充)
2. … (请你补充)
注意：1）可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2）词数60词左右（报告结构已给出，不计入词数）；
3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Labradors—amazing dogs
Labradors are amazing dogs.
Labradors look lovely and strong.
Some Labradors can live . They have to
Labradors are good choices for families because of their good nature.
Labradors are also highly smart. They are also trainable.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Labradors live with humans not only as one of the most popular breeds due to their friendly, outgoing nature, but also great helpers with their high intelligence.
5．（23-24七年级下·广东广州·期末）学校英语报社正在开展主题为“热爱自然，节约资源”的“环保小能手”竞选活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下申请表，写一篇英文演讲稿，参加竞选。
Who am I Name: Li Hua Age: … Hobby: …
Why do I want to be one of the Earth protectors …important..., provide...with...; …waste...
How do I protect the Earth Trees
… …; …
要求： (1)短文应包括图中要点，可适当补充。
(2)词数70-100左右，短文开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总字数，文中不得出现个人信息。
Good morning, everyone. I’m happy to introduce myself here. I hope to be one of the Earth protectors this year.
I am Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I will try my best to be an Earth protector! Thank you!
6．（22-23七年级下·广东广州·期末）你要参加学校《英语报》正在开展的题为“朋友”的征稿活动，请根据下图相关信息，介绍你的好朋友李华， 展现他/她的优良品质。
注意：
1. 词数: 70 词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Li Hua is my good friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（22-23七年级下·广东广州·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Eric计划暑假来花都，他想邀请你做向导。请你写一封邮件向他推荐花都的好去处。内容包括：
1. 花都的基本情况 （地理位置和气候）；
2. 推荐两个好去处及相应的理由；
3. 表达你的期待。
注意：
1. 地名、特色美食和地方传统节日名可用拼音；
2. 词数：不少于 60词（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Eric,
I am glad that you are coming to Huadu for your holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．（22-23七年级下·广东广州·期末）“绿水青山就是金山银山”，坚持节约资源和保护环境是我国的基本国策。请你以“Live a Green Life”为题，根据以下文字提示，写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，并适当发表自己的观点。
主题 Live a Green Life
现状 到处都有浪费和污染
建议 出行 骑自行车、步行代替坐汽车，减少空气污染
购物 尽量使用布的购物袋
节约 ……（补充至少1项节约方式）
你的建议 ……（补充至少1 条建议）
写作要求：
1. 词数 70左右（开头已给出，不计入字数）；
2. 书写要整洁、规范；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
提示词：减少reduce 布的cloth
Live a Green Life As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（22-23七年级下·广东广州·期末）假如你叫李华，想交一名英国笔友，请写一封英文邮件发到交友平台。内容包含以下思维导图并适当拓展。
要求：
（1）短文应包括图中所有要点，需要适当发挥，补充相关内容；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
（3）词数 80 字左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Would you like to make friends with me
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（22-23七年级下·广东广州·期末）今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物，”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。
From Bob Kate Lily You
To parents good friend foreign teacher （请补充）
What soup photo album paper cutting （请补充）
Why thanks and love friendship culture （请补充）
注意：
1.词数：100词左右；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
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《08 书面表达 （含答案解析）【广州专用】》参考答案
1．例文
In the English class, we are having a talk on “My dream job”. Tom wants to be a zookeeper because he likes animals to take good care of all kinds of animals. Jenny wants to be a scientist. She knows that drinking water is scarce, so she wants to turn sea water into fresh water to save energy. Jack wants to be an engineering problem. He wants to save energy and make more environmentally friendly appliances. I want to be a scientist because I like being with children. And I want to teach them more knowledge.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”，。
③提示：文中直接呈现了写作内容，以课堂讨论为背景，分别介绍各位同学的梦想职业及原因，无额外添加细节要求，重点在于清晰表达每个人的想法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明场景，介绍英语课堂正在进行 “我的梦想工作” 主题讨论；
第二步，依次阐述 Tom、Jenny、Jack 三位同学的梦想职业及原因；
第三步，说明 “我” 自己的梦想职业和想从事该职业的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take good care of 照顾好
②turn...into... 把…… 变成……
③environmentally friendly 环保的
[高分句型]
①Tom wants to be a zookeeper because he likes animals to take good care of all kinds of animals.（because 引导原因状语从句）
②She knows that drinking water is scarce, so she wants to turn sea water into fresh water to save energy.（that 引导宾语从句，so 连接因果关系）
2．范文：
Dear Jessica,
There are many beautiful potted plants for you to choose. I’d like to introduce two of them. The first flower is Gerber a Daisy. It attracts harmful gases. At night it produces oxygen, so we feel a fresh smell. It can help us sleep well. The second is Orchid. It’s a beautiful flower. It only needs a little water. It has a long flowering time. It can make the air clean. So I suggest you keep them. I hope my advice is helpful to you. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；但写作时要按邮件格式写。
②时态：一般现在时（描述客观事实）。
③提示：需包含两种植物的全部特点，注意词数限制，避免透露个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步：确定推荐植物（非洲菊和兰花/金钱树）；
第二步：分别描述两种植物的特点（按信息卡逐条对应）；
第三步：补充结尾句（如希望建议对你有帮助等）。
[亮点词汇]
①harmful gases 有害气体
②long flowering time 花期长
[高分句型]
①At night it produces oxygen, so we feel a fresh smell. (so连接的因果并列句)
②I look forward to hearing from you. (动名词作宾语)
3．例文：
My father
My father is 40 years old. He is tall and a little fat, with short hair and big eyes. He works as a math teacher. He is very hardworking and makes his classes lively and interesting, so all his students like him very much. My father is an honest and kind man. He always helps others and teaches me to be a kind person. In his free time, he enjoys playing table tennis. He says it helps him relax.
I think my father is a great teacher and the best dad. I love him very much.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍父亲的年龄，外貌等基本情况；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍父亲的职业，爱好等；
第三步，父亲，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①very much 非常
②enjoy doing 喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①He always helps others and teaches me to be a kind person.（and连接并列句）
②I think my father is a great teacher and the best dad.（宾语从句）
4．例文：
Labradors—amazing dogs
Labradors are amazing dogs.
Labradors look lovely and strong. Some of them are golden, some are brown or black. They are medium to large-sized dogs.
Some Labradors can live up to 12 to 14 years. They have to sleep 12 to 14 hours a day.
Labradors are good choices for families because of their good nature. They are friendly and outgoing. They are excellent swimmers. They are food lovers.
Labradors are also highly smart. They are also trainable. They can become guide dogs and help blind people. They can also look after our homes and be good companions for us.
Labradors live with humans not only as one of the most popular breeds due to their friendly, outgoing nature, but also great helpers with their high intelligence.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代拉布拉多是一只神奇的狗；
第二步，具体介绍拉布拉多犬。从“拉布拉多犬的外貌、年龄、作息、本性和智商”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，总结拉布拉多犬与人类的关系。
[亮点词汇]
①trainable可训练的
②look after照顾
③due to因为，由于
[高分句型]
①Labradors live with humans not only as one of the most popular breeds due to their friendly, outgoing nature, but also great helpers with their high intelligence.（not only…but also…句型）
②Labradors are good choices for families because of their good nature.（because of引导原因状语）
5．例文
Good morning, everyone. I’m happy to introduce myself here. I hope to be one of the Earth protectors this year.
I am Li Hua, a fourteen-year-old student. I like fishing and making things by myself. And I also like making friends. I think environment is very important to everyone. Trees, rivers and lakes on the earth are treasures of human beings. They provide us with a beautiful home. However, the waste of wood and water do harm to our home—earth. We have to take action to change the situation.
If I am the Earth protector, I will call for volunteers to plant more trees. Besides, I will advise students to use cloth bags instead of paper bags, so that we can save more paper and wood. As for water, everyone should remember to turn off the tap. We students should be supervisors of our family members.
I will try my best to be an Earth protector! Thank you!
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿写作；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意围绕表格提示内容展开写作，并适当补充，使内容完整，行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己；
第二步，阐述想做地球保卫者的原因；
第三步，提出具体的措施和建议。
[亮点词汇]
① do harm to对……有害
② take action采取行动
③ call for呼吁
④ instead of而不是
⑤ turn off关闭
[高分句型]
① If I am the Earth protector, I will call for volunteers to plant more trees.（条件状语从句）
② Besides, I will advise students to use cloth bags instead of paper bags, so that we can save more paper and wood.（目的状语从句）
6．例文
Li Hua is my good friend. She is tall and slim. She has long hair and smiling eyes. Everybody likes her very much. She is friendly to me. She is generous and helpful. She often helps people in need. She also loves reading. She has read more than twenty famous books. She learned a lot from these books. She enjoys working with children.
This is my best friend. I like her very much!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的好朋友是谁；
第二步，介绍他/她的外貌及品质等；
第三步，书写结语，表示自己对朋友的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①slim苗条的
②very much非常
③friendly友好的
④generous慷慨的
⑤in need困难中的
[高分句型]
She enjoys working with children.(enjoy doing结构)
7．例文：
Dear Eric,
I am glad that you are coming to Huadu for your holiday. Huadu lies in the south of China. It is famous for the beautiful flowers and delicious food. So it is called Flower City. It’s very hot here in summer.
There are lots of famous places of interest such as the Canton Tower and the Baiyun Mountain. Baiyun Mountain attracts many visitors every day. The Yuexiu Park is one of the most famous parks in Guangzhou. It is cheerful to visit this park. Also, you will be excited to visit the Pearl River at night. If you are interested in delicious food, the most famous street in Guangzhou is the Beijing Road. This is the best place to go if you want to visit some shop and department stores. You can also enjoy Guangzhou’s traditional food there. In the evening, you can go singing in some KTV shops. It is wonderful to sing with friends. What’s more, Guangzhou has something for everyone.
Welcome to visit Guangzhou. I hope you have a good time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍花都的基本情况，例如它的地理位置和气候；
第二步，具体介绍几个好玩的地方，以及推荐的理由，例如广州塔、白云山、越秀公园、珠江、北京路等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达希望对方玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
①lies in 位于
②is famous for 因……而闻名
③places of interest 名胜古迹
④cheerful 令人愉快的
⑤traditional 传统的
⑥what’s more 而且
[高分句型]
①There are lots of famous places of interest such as the Canton Tower and the Baiyun Mountain.（there be句型）
② If you are interested in delicious food, the most famous street in Guangzhou is the Beijing Road.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．例文
Live a Green Life As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. There is waste and pollution everywhere. Waste and pollution become more and more serious, which has a bad effect on our earth. As a middle school student, it’s time for us to protect our earth to help build a green home.
We must do something to protect the earth. Firstly, we should often go outside on foot or by bike instead of by car. Therefore, we can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution. Secondly, we had better use cloth shopping bags rather than plastic bags when we go shopping. Otherwise, using too much plastic bags may cause mountains of rubbish and pollute the land. Thirdly, turn off the light when we leave, as a result, we can save much energy. Last but not least, it is a good way to plant more trees, which can make our earth become greener and more beautiful.
Being green has become a living habit for me. I believe that we can make a difference to the environment if we take action.
[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍环境污染严重，作为中学生应该做点事情来保护环境，从而引出话题；
第二步，依据表格内容，逐一介绍节约资源和保护环境的建议，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，呼吁大家行动起来。
［亮点词汇］
① instead of 代替
② turn off 关闭
③ rather than 而不是
［高分句型］
① Last but not least, it is a good way to plant more trees, which can make our earth become greener and more beautiful. (it作形式主语、which引导非限制性定语从句)
② Secondly, we had better use cloth shopping bags rather than plastic bags when we go shopping. (when引导时间状语从句)
9．例文
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you. I’m from Guangdong. I’m very tall. There are three people in my family. They are my parents and me. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. At school, I study Chinese, math, English, PE and so on. My favorite subject is PE. I also have many friends at school. I want to be a basketball player in the future. I hope my dream comes true.
Would you like to make friends with me
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的基本信息，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据思维导图介绍自己的基本信息；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce sb. to sb.把某人介绍给某人
②come true实现
[高分句型]
If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10．范文
In today’s English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in our group.
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.
For me, what I gave to my grandpa was a smart phone. We don’t live together and my grandpa was so busy that we can’t meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smart phone.
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，依据表格内容介绍Bob，Kate和Lily送过的一份珍贵礼物；
第二步，介绍你自己送过的珍贵礼物。
[亮点词汇]
①In his opinion在他看来
②In addition此外
③a piece of 一张
[高分句型]
①Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her, hoping that their friendship could last forever.（because引导原因状语从句）
②In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.（which引导定语从句）
③For me, what I gave to my grandpa was a smart phone.（what引导主语从句）

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