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(共18张PPT)
Unit
PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
1
— Reading & Writing
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
introduce Einstein’s life story and achievements with the timeline;
work out the organization and language features of the text;
write an introduction about someone you admire.
Learning Objectives
What do you know about
Albert Einstein
a Jewish
a brilliant scientist (the general theory of relativity, E=mc , explanation of the photoelectric)
Got Nobel Prize for Physics
The man who changed our understanding of the universe.
Lead-in
1.The text mainly talks about
Albert Einstein’s ________ and ____________.
life story
achievements
THE MAN WHO CHANGED OUR UNDERSTANDING OF THE UNIVERSE
Predict the main idea from the picture and title.
2.What’s the type of this text
A. Narration B. Biography
C. Argumentation D. Practical writing
Pre-reading
What is a biography
A biography is a detailed third person account of another person’s life story. It contains basic information about the subject’s life .
first person —— autobiography 自传
What are talked about in a biography
their date and place of birth, education,work experience, interests, various accomplishments,personality and life events of a real person.
Title
Para1: Brief Introduction
Para 2: Educational experience
Para 3: Work experience & achievement
Para 4: Mid-life crisis（危机）
Para 5: Appearance &Personality
Para 6: Death
Beginning
Body
Ending
— for the structure
Fast-reading
How does the writer develop the text
In time order. (按时间次序)
Read and circle all numbers in the passage.
Detailed-reading
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
complete the timeline
1895
Failed to enter university
Entered university
1900
Graduated from university
1902
1905
1922
1909
Took a job
as a clerk
Earned a doctorate in physics
Entered research full-time at a university
Awarded the Nobel Prize for Physics
Fled
Germany
Passed away
Detailed-reading
— for the language feature
Circle out descriptive words(adjectives, nouns...) to describe Einstein.
Detailed-reading
……
cooperative
committed
persistent
modest
extraordinary
patient
devoted
selfless
creative
more words used to describe a person that you admire
hard-working
Detailed-reading
— for language features
What do you know about rhetorical devices
修辞手法
Simile明喻
Metaphor暗喻Personification拟人
Analogy类比Parallelism排比
Euphemism委婉语
Repitition重复 ......
Post-reading
— for language features
What rhetorical devices are used in the passage Give examples.
Sentences Rhetorical device
Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton (from para.3)
He found the doors of academic institutions closed to him. (from para.4)
...as though he had just received an electric shock (from para.5)
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end... (from para.5)
On 18Aprial 1955,it was reported that Einstein had passed away. (from para.6)
Analogy（类比）
Metaphor（暗喻）
Simile（明喻）
Personification（拟人）
Euphemism（委婉）
Post-reading
An introduction
Body
Ending
Structure
Beginning
Content
Name, identity,
basic information
Educational experience
Achievement, experience
Details and examples
Influence and evaluation
Structure of an introduction to someone you admire
Summary
西南农学院
Southwest Agricultural College
农业教学和研究工作
agricultural teaching and research
培育出了杂交水稻
breed hybrid rice
杂交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿
improve the rice production
and help rid the world of hunger
Relative words
Activity 2 Write a person you admire
Writing
Analyzing the task
Genre:
Tense:
Person:
Mapping out the structure
Headline: The Person I Admire Most
Para. 1.
Para. 2.
Para. 3.
narrative
mainly past/present tense
third person
Beginning (name and identity )
Body (appearance, life experience, reasons for his greatness)
Ending (a summary or comment)
Tips for writing a person you admire
Writing
范文欣赏
Yuan Longping，who is one of the greatest scientists in China，is acknowledged as the “father of hybrid rice”．
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on 7 September 1930，and graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953，after which he was committed to increasing the rice output. Although he encountered many extraordinary difficulties，he never acknowledged defeat，and his passion for his career never died down. Eventually，his efforts paid off，and he cultivated hybrid rice successfully in 1973. Incredibly，it was the person who was more like a farmer than a scientist that made such remarkable contributions to ridding the world of hunger.
On 22 May 2021, it was reported that Yuan Longping had passed away in Changsha, Hunan Province, and the whole world mourned the great loss of the brilliant scientist.
Beginning
Ending
Body
Sample
The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
我最崇拜的人是_______(人）. 出生于_______(地点/时间）, _______（人），是最伟大_______(职业）的人之一, 表现出对___________(方面）的热情。
在__________(学校）毕业后, 他/她大部分时间都花在做___________上。尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，这使他_____________(成就）.
为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。
写英雄/伟人/敬佩的人的模板
Sample

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