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假设你是李华，前几天游览了北京城。请你根据下面的旅游记录给你的笔友Mark写封信，向他介绍一下你在北京的旅游经历及感受，并表达愿望。
Day 1: 到达；参观北京大学、清华大学 Day 2: 参观长城
Day 3:参观故宫博物馆(the Palace Museum);
Day 4: 在王府井品尝特色菜买纪念品
三段式作文，每段写什么？
三段式
Para 1 ____________________
Para 2 ____________________
Para 3 ____________________
寒暄问候，点明目的
讲述旅游经历
表达愿望
1) How are you doing these days
2) How time flies! It’s a long time since I last heard from you.
3) How is everything going with you
你最近怎么样？
时光飞逝。好久没收到你的来信了。
一切都好吗？
Para 1
寒暄问候。
Para 1
2. 点明目的
1) I am writing to _____________(与你分享) my ___________(游览观光) in ...
2)_________________(回来) from an _________(令人愉快的) tour of…, I have so much _________(要告诉你).
share with you
sightseeing
Having come back
enjoyable
to tell you
Para 2
3. 讲述旅游经历。
1) 游览/参观某地：
pay a visit to sp;
explore sp;
go sightseeing around/in sp
Para 2
3. 讲述旅游经历。
2)接触到浓厚的学术氛围：
be exposed to the strong academic atmosphere
Para 2
3. 讲述旅游经历。
3) 对他们的友善印象深刻：
Sb was impressed with their friendliness/kindness
=Their friendliness made a deep impression on sb.
Para 2
3. 讲述旅游经历。
4)欣赏美景： 5) 惊叹于古人的智慧
appreciate/admire breathtaking scenery
find oneself lost in fantastic scenery
be amazed at the wisdom of ancient people
Para 2
3. 讲述旅游经历。
6) 拍照： 7) 为展出的宝物感到激动;
8) 品尝当地特色菜肴：
have/get a lot of photos/pictures taken
be thrilled at/by the treasures
on display/exhibition /show
displayed in the museum
taste local special food
Para 2
3. 讲述旅游经历。
9) 挑选纪念品10) 开阔眼界11) 缓解压力
pick out some gifts /
select some souvenirs
broaden/widen one’s horizons
relax oneself
lessen/relieve stress
Para 2
3. 讲述旅游经历。
12) 强身健体：13) 结交朋友：
build up one’s body/strength
enlarge one’s circle of friends
have a wider range of social contacts
Para 3
4. 表达愿望。
I hope you can come to visit …, which will never ___________(让你失望).
2) I wish you to make a trip to…, which __________________(值得参观).
let you down
is well worth visiting
make you disappointed
三、习惯表达
第一天：____________
接下来的一天:
最后一天： ________________
the first day
the second day
the next day
the following day
the last day
三、习惯表达
2. 第一件让人高兴的事是做某事：
P 14
The first delight was doing sth.
The first thing that delighted me was to do sth/doing sth.
三、习惯表达
3. 一……就…….
The moment sb did sth, sb did sth.
No sooner had sb done sth than sb did sth.
Hardly had sb done sth when sb did sth.
On doing sth, sb did sth.
我一到北京就去参观了北京和清华大学。
我一到北京就去参观了北京和清华大学。
The moment I arrived in Beijing, I went sightseeing in Peking and Tsinghua University.
Hardly had I arrived in Beijing when I paid a visit to Peking and Tsinghua University.
On arriving in Beijing, I explored Peking and Tsinghua University .
三、习惯表达
4. 不仅……而且…… :
Not only/merely …but also…
高分作文
1. 添加合理细节，体现真情实感
2. 运用好词靓句，彰显语言水平
高级词汇：高中阶段所学词汇
高级句式：
定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、
非谓语、倒装、强调句型、虚拟语气等
非限制性定语从句，
对前面的名词进行解释说明！
我一到北京，就去参观了北京大学和清华大学。在那里， 我接触到了浓厚的学术氛围。
The moment I arrived in Beijing I paid a visit to Peking University and Tsinghua University. I was exposed to the strong academic atmosphere there .
→ The moment I arrived in Beijing I paid a visit to Peking University and Tsinghua University, where I was exposed to the strong academic atmosphere.
第二天，我去游览了长城。它是世界七大奇迹之一。
The next day, I went sightseeing to the Great Wall. It was one of the Seven Wonders of the world.
→ The next day, I went sightseeing to the Great Wall, which was considered to be one of the Seven Wonders of the world.
The following day, I toured around the Palace Museum, whose treasures on display amazed me.
I was thrilled by the treasures displayed there, which showed the wisdom of ancient people.
Day 3: 参观故宫博物馆(the Palace Museum);
否定副词放在句首
引起句子部分倒装
Through this trip, not merely did I relax myself and build myself up but I learned a lot as well.
Not only did I taste local some local specialities but also I selected some souvenirs, one of which has been sent to you.
Not merely was I exposed to strong academic atmosphere but also I was impressed with their friendliness.
Not only did I broaden my horizons but also I lessened stress.
非谓语作状语
I had a lot of photos taken standing on the Great Wall.
2. I appreciated the breathtaking scenery, amazed at the wisdom of ancient people.
3. The following day, I paid a visit to the Palace Museum, having a lot of photos taken there.
4. Having picked out some souvenirs, I came back.
5. Walking on the Great Wall, I found myself lost in fantastic scenery.
名词性从句
It seemed amazing that the ancient people were equipped with advanced wisdom.
What made me thrilled were the treasures on show.
What amazed me a lot was ancient people’s wisdom.
What delighted me most was tasting local specialities.
强调句型
It was the strong academic atmosphere I was exposed to that made a deep impression on me.
It was the treasures on display that made a deep impression on me.

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