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(共18张PPT)
单元写作
描写你眼中伟大的人物
Unit 5 Work education
写作维度
本单元的写作项目是“描写你眼中伟大的人物”，相关内容包含以下几个方面：（1）人物出生与成长环境（2）面对的困境以及如何克服挑战（3）获得的荣誉以及对他人的启示。
写作支架/模板
描写你眼中伟大的人物 人物出生与成长环境
面对的困境以及如何克服挑战
获得的荣誉以及对他人的启示
黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)
开头段
① The great figure in my mind is ...
② ...is my most respected ...
③ He is one of the best ... in the world.
中间段
① He/She stayed calm under the gaze of the audience.
② Although he/she didn’t win medals, he/she fought for himself/ herself and his/her country.
③He/She was born in... He/She studied...
④...is one of the most excellent Chinese ...
⑤ He/She won not only medals for himself/ herself but also glory for the whole country.
⑥ There is no doubt that ... is very talented, but he/she...
⑦ As a result, ... amazed the world with his/her perfect ... performance.
结尾段
① Nothing is impossible as long as you try and stick to it.
② His/Her great achievements inspire me.
③ He/She proves that nothing is impossible if you put your effort into it.
经典例题(从经典例题中学会审题)
每个人心中都有一个伟大的人物，他/ 她可能是历史名人、科学家、运动员、艺术家，也可能是你身边的普通人。请以“The Great Figure in My Hear t”为题，写一篇短文，描述你心中伟大的人物，并说明他/ 她为什么让你感到敬佩。
审体裁：说明文 审人称：第一人称；第三人称
审时态：一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时
提示：1. 他/ 她是谁？
2. 你为什么认为他/ 她是伟大的？
3. 他/ 她对你有什么影响或启发？
审要点：人物、经历及喜欢的原因、启发
精彩范文展示
The Great Figure in My Heart
　　The great figure in my heart is my mother. She is not a famous person, but she is the most important person in my life. My mother is hard-working and always puts our family first. She wakes up early every day to prepare our breakfast and stays up late to help me with my homework.
　
What makes her great is her kindness and patience. No matter how tired she is, she always smiles and encourages me to do my best. She teaches me to be honest and brave, and never to give up. She serves as a guiding light for me.
① He served as a bridge for villagers in the mountains.（教材P64）
My mother is my hero because she shows me true love and strength. Her endless care and support helped our family stay strong and united during the difficult times. I hope to be like her one day.
② His great service helped the local people stay in touch
with the outside world. （教材 P64）
【亮点词块】
not...but... 不是……而是……
put...first 把……放在第一位
give up 放弃
【高分句子】
She i s not a famous person, but she is the most important person in my life.
（运用了对比手法）她不是一个名人，但她是我生命中最
重要的人。
What makes her great is her kindness and patience.（What 引导的主语从句）
使她伟大的是她的善良和耐心。
实战演练
“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄 ”做出惊天动地贡献的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……。
姓名 胡佩兰（Hu Peilan）
身份 医生
主要事迹 1. 行医70 多年，致力于服务患者。
2. 年老体弱仍坚持工作。
3. 捐出积蓄为贫困人群建立诊所。
精神品质 无私奉献、坚持不懈、善良
对我的影响 1. 激励我努力学习。
2. 学会帮助他人。
3. 立志为社会做出贡献。
结合以上信息卡，以“The Hero in My Heart”为题写一篇短文。
要求：1. 包含信息卡上的内容；2. 适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；3. 不能出现表明你身份的信息；4. 词数80 左右，不含已给出部分。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文参考
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Hu Peilan is the hero in my heart. She was a dedicated doctor who spent her life serving patients, even in her old age.
Hu Peilan worked tirelessly as a doctor for over 70 years. Despite her age and health issues, she continued to treat patients and even donated her savings to build a clinic for the poor.
Her selflessness and perseverance touched countless people.
Her story inspires me to work hard and help others. I want to learn from her kindness and dedication to make the world a better place. Hu Peilan may not be famous, but she is a true hero in my heart.

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