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Lead in
Kneel down on one knee
take out the ring
hand me a bunch of flowers
look at me affectionately
ask,“will you marry me ”
Lead in
notice the small flower
bend down
reach out my hand
pull it up
hand it to him
He asked me to marry him.
I sent him a sunflower
sunflower
more vivid and interesting
a little boring and plain
Compare
when
where
who
what
how
why
I was in middle school
social studies class, the teacher's office
my social studies teacher, I, my older sister
I refused to enter a writing contest.
I was not good at writing in English
I completed a story with great effort.
Story
the elements and main idea
main idea
What does the story mainly talk about
A hesitant student, encouraged by a teacher, overcomes fear of writing by working hard on a funny contest entry and discovers the joy of writing.
Main idea:
出处分析
A Wild Ride(2021)
Lighting the Candle系列
The Horn Book《号角》杂志
(1924年美国波士顿创刊）
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said,“Great. Now, write it again. "I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.
Read for the theme and language
Tip 1: Use specific verbs and adverbs to make the actions more vivid.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
What is the implied meaning (寓意) of his teacher’s words
The teacher thought hard work is more important than talent
Read for the theme and language
Tip 2: Use direct speech(直接引语) to reveal the theme.
Para.1 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.
Para.2 I went to my teacher’office after the award presentation.
生：得知获奖 I heard Iwon the award
[1]
生：经历授奖 I went through the award ceremony
[2]
生：急于分享 I couldn’t wait to share
[3]
Plan the plot(情节)
What will you para.1 mainly talk about
Tip 3: Plan a logical and reasonable plot based on the two given sentences.
Build up the word bank
eyes:
1.look excitedly into one’s eyes .
2.Heart pounding, eyes locked on sb.
arms :
1.hold/ hug sb. in one’s arms tightly
2.Give sb.a bear hug
face:
wear a shining smile on one’s face
Hands:
1.Wipe away one’s tears of joy.
2.Pat the one’s shoulder -’Well done! ’
3.High-five the students(击掌)-’You earned this! Keep shining!’
4.Shake one’s hand firmly-’Proud of you!’
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Describe the scene
After hearing she had won the award, the girl immediately turned to her mother.
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(激动地看着妈妈，和妈妈分享这个好消息，并紧紧地拥抱她。)
the girl looked excitedly into her morther’s eyes,shared this good news with her mother, and hugged her mother in her arms tightly
Para.1
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.
生：得知获奖 I heard Iwon the award
[1]
生：经历授奖 I went through the award ceremony
[2]
生：急于分享 I couldn’t wait to share
[3]
Write the story
Requirements
①specific verbs and adverbs
②direct speech(直接引语)
③sentences organized logically
Appreciate one version
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I heard I won the first prize in the writing contest .Wearing a shining smile on my face,I shared the news with my teacher. The teacher hugged me tightly, wiped away my tears of joy,and patted my shoulder , saying sincerely "As long as you are willing to apply yourself, you can achieve everything, even those you dislike or are not good at.”Then came the big day. When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher again.
（ ）①specific verbs and adverbs
（ ）②direct speech(直接引语)
（ ）③sentences organized logically
As long as you are willing to apply yourself, you can achieve everything,
even those you dislike or are not good at
Summary
As long as you are willing to apply yourself,you can achieve everything, even those you dislike or are not good at.
Assignment
Finish writing the first paragraph and design the second paragraph using the skills you have learnt in the class.

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