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Part Ⅳ　Writing about a diving experience
Step Ⅰ　文本研读
理清脉络：整体理解
Place (地点): Oneday 1.________ to the Farne Islands
Time (时间): 2.________ every day from 1 June to 31 July
Activity (活动): Two 3.________： wreck diving and scenic diving
Accommodation (膳宿): lunch
Member (成员): 12 4.________ and 6 dive 5.________ per tour
Step Ⅱ　知识点
熟记下列重要短语
1．set sail 启航
2．appeal to sb. 对某人有吸引力
3．to make a long story short 长话短说
4．a spirit of exploration 探索精神
Step Ⅲ　Writing about a diving experience
[文体介绍]
描述个人经历属于记叙文，介绍自己的一次或有趣或有意义或留下深刻印象的经历。此类文章应围绕五个w (who, when, where, what, why)和一个h(how)展开。时态可用一般过去时和一般现在时，描述经历需用一般过去时，描述景观及个人感受通常用一般现在时。
[篇章结构]
(1)写作背景
开篇点题，总述自己的某次经历，介绍基本信息，包括时间、地点、人物等，引出下文。
(2)描述经历
详细介绍此次经历，从一定的角度入手，一般按时间或空间顺序进行描述。注意行文连贯性。
(3)个人感受
阐述本次经历带给自己的收获或感受。
[话题词汇及句式]
1．话题词汇
教材词汇
(1)explore v. 探索
(2)unforgettable adj. 难忘的
(3)survive v. 幸存
(4)thrilling adj. 令人兴奋的
(5)unique adj. 独特的
(6)broaden vt. 使扩大
(7)horizon n. 地平线；眼界
(8)awareness n. 意识
(9)take part in 参加
其他词汇
(1)be divided into 被分成
(2)get lost 迷路
(3)make a difference 有影响，有关系
(4)be of great help 有很大帮助
(5)be fascinated by 对……着迷
(6)turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
(7)carry out a rescue plan 执行救援计划
(8)be determined to do sth. 下定决心做某事
2．话题句式
(1)段首句
During the winter vacation, my parents took me to..., where I had an unforgettable experience of underwater diving.
在寒假期间，我的父母带我去了……在那里，我有一次难忘的潜水经历。
Today I took part in an adventurous/amazing/fantastic trip held/organized by..., which left a deep impression on me.
今天我参加了一次惊险/惊人/美妙的由……举办/组织的旅行，这给我留下了深刻的印象。
As I was eager to know about..., I went on an adventure...
因为我渴望知道……，我开始了一次……冒险。
(2)段落主题句
What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that...
最让我们惊讶/吸引我们/让我们高兴的是……
I felt so excited to see so many...
看到这么多的……，我感到很兴奋。
Under the guidance of the tourist guide, we gradually adapted ourselves to...and eventually...
在导游的指导下，我们逐渐适应了……并最终……
After that, we went diving, experiencing the beauty of...
在那之后，我们去潜水，体验了……的美丽。
(3)段末句
This was a real lifechanging experience that I would never forget.
这是一次我永不会忘的改变人生的经历。
This diving trip was so unforgettable. Not only did it let me see the wonderful underwater world, but also let me experience the vast sea.
这次潜水之旅真是令人难忘。它不仅让我看到了美妙的水下世界，也让我体验到了广阔的大海。
[实践应用]
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行，内容包括：
1．时间、地点；
2．探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：探险expedition
第一步　布局谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
?完成句子
1．昨天，我和一些游客参加了一家旅行社组织的西海海底探险活动。
Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition __________ in the West Sea.
2．我们有许多令人兴奋的活动。
We had ________________________．
3．其中之一是深海潜水。
One of them was __________________________．
4．在潜水期间，我们享受海底的美丽和观看海洋生物。
During the diving, we ______________________ and watched the marine life.
5．我们从未如此近距离地看到海洋生物。
We ____________________________ the marine life so close.
6．(一句多译)给我印象最深的是对海底古文明遗址的探索。
_________ was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. (主语从句)
＝The exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea __________________. (leave...impression on sb.)
＝_____________________________ the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. (be impressed by...)
＝It was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea that __________. (impress sb.)
7．当我看到那些废墟时，我不禁想知道古代人们的生活是什么样子的，他们后来经历了什么。
When I saw those ruins, I ___________ what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.
8．就我而言，这次旅行拓宽了我们的视野，也帮助我们了解了更多关于海洋的知识。
As far as I'm concerned, this travel ___________________ as well as helping us learn more about the sea.
?句式升级
9．用定语从句合并句2和句3。
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10．用现在分词短语作状语改写句7。
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第三步　完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
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Part Ⅳ　Writing about a diving experience
写作精析·技能提升
Step Ⅰ　文本研读
理清结构：深度理解
1．tour　2.Available　3.dives　4.divers　5.instructors
Step Ⅲ　Writing about a diving experience
第二步
1．organized by a travel agency
2．many exciting activities
3．deep sea diving
4．enjoyed the undersea beauty
5．had never seen
6．What impressed me most; left the deepest impression on me; I was most impressed by; impressed me most
7．couldn't help wondering
8．broadened our horizons
9．We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.
10．Seeing those ruins, I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.
第三步
Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.
We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving. During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close. What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. Seeing those ruins, I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.
As far as I'm concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.
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Part Ⅳ　Writing about a diving experience
Step Ⅰ　文本研读
理清脉络：整体理解
Place (地点): Oneday 1.________ to the Farne Islands
Time (时间): 2.________ every day from 1 June to 31 July
Activity (活动): Two 3.________： wreck diving and scenic diving
Accommodation (膳宿): lunch
Member (成员): 12 4.________ and 6 dive 5.____________ per tour
tour
Available
dives
divers
instructors
Step Ⅱ　知识点
熟记下列重要短语
1．set sail 启航
2．appeal to sb. 对某人有吸引力
3．to make a long story short 长话短说
4．a spirit of exploration 探索精神
Step Ⅲ　Writing about a diving experience
[文体介绍]
描述个人经历属于记叙文，介绍自己的一次或有趣或有意义或留下深刻印象的经历。此类文章应围绕五个w (who, when, where, what, why)和一个h(how)展开。时态可用一般过去时和一般现在时，描述经历需用一般过去时，描述景观及个人感受通常用一般现在时。
[篇章结构]
(1)写作背景
开篇点题，总述自己的某次经历，介绍基本信息，包括时间、地点、人物等，引出下文。
(2)描述经历
详细介绍此次经历，从一定的角度入手，一般按时间或空间顺序进行描述。注意行文连贯性。
(3)个人感受
阐述本次经历带给自己的收获或感受。
[话题词汇及句式]
1．话题词汇
教材词汇
(1)explore v. 探索
(2)unforgettable adj. 难忘的
(3)survive v. 幸存
(4)thrilling adj. 令人兴奋的
(5)unique adj. 独特的
(6)broaden vt. 使扩大
(7)horizon n. 地平线；眼界
(8)awareness n. 意识
(9)take part in 参加
其他词汇
(1)be divided into 被分成
(2)get lost 迷路
(3)make a difference 有影响，有关系
(4)be of great help 有很大帮助
(5)be fascinated by 对……着迷
(6)turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
(7)carry out a rescue plan 执行救援计划
(8)be determined to do sth. 下定决心做某事
2．话题句式
(1)段首句
During the winter vacation, my parents took me to..., where I had an unforgettable experience of underwater diving.
在寒假期间，我的父母带我去了……在那里，我有一次难忘的潜水经历。
Today I took part in an adventurous/amazing/fantastic trip held/organized by..., which left a deep impression on me.
今天我参加了一次惊险/惊人/美妙的由……举办/组织的旅行，这给我留下了深刻的印象。
As I was eager to know about..., I went on an adventure...
因为我渴望知道……，我开始了一次……冒险。
(2)段落主题句
What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that...
最让我们惊讶/吸引我们/让我们高兴的是……
I felt so excited to see so many...
看到这么多的……，我感到很兴奋。
Under the guidance of the tourist guide, we gradually adapted ourselves to...and eventually...
在导游的指导下，我们逐渐适应了……并最终……
After that, we went diving, experiencing the beauty of...
在那之后，我们去潜水，体验了……的美丽。
(3)段末句
This was a real lifechanging experience that I would never forget.
这是一次我永不会忘的改变人生的经历。
This diving trip was so unforgettable. Not only did it let me see the wonderful underwater world, but also let me experience the vast sea.
这次潜水之旅真是令人难忘。它不仅让我看到了美妙的水下世界，也让我体验到了广阔的大海。
[实践应用]
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行，内容包括：
1．时间、地点；
2．探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：探险expedition
第一步　布局谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
?完成句子
1．昨天，我和一些游客参加了一家旅行社组织的西海海底探险活动。
Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition _________________________ in the West Sea.
2．我们有许多令人兴奋的活动。
We had ________________________．
organized by a travel agency
many exciting activities
3．其中之一是深海潜水。
One of them was __________________________．
4．在潜水期间，我们享受海底的美丽和观看海洋生物。
During the diving, we ____________________and watched the marine life.
5．我们从未如此近距离地看到海洋生物。
We ____________________________ the marine life so close.
deep sea diving
enjoyed the undersea beauty
had never seen
6．(一句多译)给我印象最深的是对海底古文明遗址的探索。
__________________ was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. (主语从句)
＝The exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea ___________________________. (leave...impression on sb.)
＝_____________________________ the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. (be impressed by...)
＝It was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea that ________________. (impress sb.)
What impressed me most
left the deepest impression on me
I was most impressed by
impressed me most
7．当我看到那些废墟时，我不禁想知道古代人们的生活是什么样子的，他们后来经历了什么。
When I saw those ruins, I _________________ what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.
8．就我而言，这次旅行拓宽了我们的视野，也帮助我们了解了更多关于海洋的知识。
As far as I'm concerned, this travel ___________________ as well as helping us learn more about the sea.
couldn't help wondering
broadened our horizons
?句式升级
9．用定语从句合并句2和句3。
______________________________________________________
10．用现在分词短语作状语改写句7。
____________________________________________________________________________________
We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving.
Seeing those ruins, I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.
第三步　完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
Yesterday, I together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea.
We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving. During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close. What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. Seeing those ruins, I couldn't help wondering what the ancient people's life was like and what they experienced later.
As far as I'm concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helping us learn more about the sea.

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