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(共21张PPT)
Reading for Writing
Learn to write
a letter of advice
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To be able to give advice.
To be able to grasp the writing style and the structure.
To be able to write a letter of advice.
Aims:
目 录
CONTENTS
01 Form of a letter
02 Study the organisation and
language features in a letter
of advice
03 Learn to give adcice properly
04 Wirte a letter on your own
Learn to write
a letter of advice
Lead in
1. Did you still remember Adam’s challenges or problems
at the beginning of the school
2. What were they
3. How did he solve his problems
It’s challenging for him to know how to choose
courses and extra-curricular activities and how to study.
He solved his problems by getting help from advisers and with his positive
attitude.
Recently, there is a teenager worrying about a problem. Luckily, he is a person who is not shy to ask for help and knows who he can turn to. Thus he wrote a letter to Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers.
Please read Susan's reply to find out
What is Worried Friend's problem
What is Susan Luo's advice
Problem:
His friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Advice:
talk to your friend about his behaviour
encourage his friend to try new hobbies
discuss the problem together
1. Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
2. What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.
Why not discuss the problem together
Never say:
You must...
If you want to give sb advice...
You can say:
You should...
You'd better...
You might as well...
A
B
C
D
E
F
I think you should...
I recommend that you (should)...
I advise you to...
If I were you, I would...
You'd better...
Why not.../Why don't you ...
Memorize these sentence structures when offering advice.
What are their problems
My parents won't listen.
I always feel lonely.
There is a girl I like in my class.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
What do you think of Susan's advice
I think you should talk to your friend and encourage him.
Compare
Advice should be specific(具体的).
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Why does Susan mention the other information
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Why does Susan mention the other information
Tip 2: Advice should be convincing(有说服力的).
reasons
Write a letter to one of them, draft your letter according to the outline below.
Share your letter with everyone
10 september 2020
Dear Xu Ting，
You wrote that you feel lonely after school.
I understand how you feel.
I think maybe you should join the after-school class, because there are a lot of students like you. You can discuss anything with them or play some games. I'm sure that you will feel more pleased instead of feeling lonely.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
A better version
10 september 2020
Dear Xu Ting，
You are worried that you feel lonely because you don't stay with your parents who are working in another city. I understand exactly how you feel because I had the same experience.
To be honest, I recommend that you should join in after-school activities because there are a lot of students like you. Of course, you can focus on discussing anything with them or even playing some games. If you still feel lonely, personally you ought to arrange some study tasks for yourself and concentrate on it. I'm sure you will be attracted to your study here. You should be responsible for yourself.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
Analyze and Practice
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；字数80左右。
词汇：适应 adapt to ...
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
A. Knowing that you have come to China recently, I'm writing with delight to show my warm welcome to you.
B. Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Greeting
Which beginning is better
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
A. Knowing that you have come to China recently, I'm writing with delight to show my warm welcome to you.
B. Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Sentence B responds to the writing task.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Greeting
Beginning
Then
Body
The content of
is to give advice.

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