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读后续写“情感、心理”刻画的实用词汇和句式
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I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event.
I felt restless and bored.
Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
My heart sank and a wave of panic hit me.
名词结构：an urge, a wave of panic
恰当的形容词：restless, bored
反问句
精准的动词：sank, hit
人物的情感、心理随着故事的发展而变化，从而体现人物的性格，辅助情节发展。在续写中，需要关注并延续情感和心理线索，进而凸显人物的性格、升华文章的主题。与此同时，情感和心理刻画也使得文章的细节更生动，充分实现 “情节与细节” 并行推进，体现出文章的精彩度。
Part 1 常用情感心理词汇
常用情感、心理名词
愤怒
恐惧
喜悦
悲伤
惊讶
紧张
anger, rage, fury, outrage
fear, terror, panic, horror
joy, happiness, pleasure, delight, excitement, enthusiasm
sadness, sorrow, grief, misery, despair, heartbreak, heartache
surprise, shock, astonishment, amazement, disbelief
anxiety, tension, nervousness, unease, restlessness
自信
自卑
孤独
期待
满足
羞耻，懊悔
confidence, assurance, certainty, self-reliance
insecurity, self-doubt, low self-esteem
loneliness, isolation, abandonment
anticipation, expectation, hope, eagerness
contentment, satisfaction, fulfillment
shame, embarrassment, guilt, humiliation, regret
常用情感、心理名词
名词+动词(短语）
My stomach twisted in knots — 焦虑或不安
A cold shiver ran down my spine — 恐惧或惊恐
A wave of relief washed over me — 松一口气
My mind went blank — 突然的困惑或思维停滞
A sense of panic settled in my chest — 恐惧感
A rush of excitement surged through me — 激动或兴奋
A weight lifted off my shoulders — 解脱
Anger bubbled up inside me — 愤怒增长
My thoughts scattered like leaves in the wind — 思维混乱
A knot of tension tightened in my throat — 紧张或压抑
名词+动词(短语）
Part 2 实用句式
1. 他站起身来领奖。
He stood up to accept the prize.
Surprised and delighted, he stood up to accept the prize, feeling proud.
2. 他交了很多朋友。
He made a lot of friends.
Modest and easy-going, he soon made a lot of friends, getting along well with them.
3. 我们早早在校门口集合。
We gathered at the school gate early.
Eager and enthusiastic, we gathered at the school gate early, chatting and laughing all the time.
句式一 adj 1 and adj 2, 主句，doing… / with复合结构 / 独立主格
用法体验
1. 既害怕又无助，他一动不动站在那好一会，不敢相信刚才发生的一切。
2. 又绝望又疲惫，Jane 跪了下来，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。
3. 我们好奇而兴奋, 迫不及待地想要和外国学生交换礼物，以表达我们彼此真挚的友谊。
Scared and helpless, he stood still for a moment, not believing what had just happened.
Desperate and exhausted, Jane knelt down, tears rolling down her cheeks.
Curious and excited, we couldn’t wait to exchange gifts with the foreign students，conveying our sincere friendship to each other.
1. 当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited.
The instant she was informed of the result of the test, a surge of excitement seized her.
2. 她伤心不已。
She felt extremely sad.
She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.
3. 我感到很害怕。
I felt very scared.
I was seized by a strong sense of horror with my palms sweating.
句式二 量词 + 表情感状态的名词 + 动词 + sb
1. 当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited.
The instant she was informed of the result of the test, a surge of excitement seized her.
句式二 量词 + 表情感状态的名词 + 动词 + sb
常用量词：a burst / wave / flood / surge / sense of…
常用动词：seize, grasp, take hold of，crawl／creep爬，swallow吞噬，well up涌出，surge 涌动，sweep over 冲；卷，overwhelm充溢，压倒
用法体验
1. 看着他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悦。
2. 听见他说的话，Alice咧开嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。
3. 电话里，听见他的话，我羞愧得低下头, 一阵愧疚向我袭来, 脸上发烫。
用法体验
1. 看着他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悦。
At the sight of his confident smile, a sense of joy swept over / flooded over me.
2. 听见他说的话，Alice咧开嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。
Hearing what he said, Alice grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her.
3. 电话里，听见他的话，我羞愧得低下头, 一阵愧疚向我袭来, 脸上发烫。
Hearing his words on the phone, I hung my head shamefully, a wave of guilt sweeping over me with my face burning.
句式变化
Doing…......., sb felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb, doing… (某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。 )
句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因；句尾可以加上doing sth或which, 表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
1. Seeing his husband doing nothing, Jane felt a great sense of anger surging through her, throwing the tea cup at the girl.
2. Seeing his daughter safe and sound, he felt a great sense of relief welling up in his heart.
1. Jane忍不住哭了。
Jane couldn’t stop crying.
Recalling what she had done to her husband, so regretful was Jane that she couldn’t stop crying, tears sparking out her eyes.
2. 小鹿很害怕。
The deer was frightened.
Spotting this, so frightened was the deer that she shivered and trembled all over like a leaf.
1. Jane忍不住哭了。
Jane couldn’t stop crying.
Recalling what she had done to her husband, so regretful was Jane that she couldn’t stop crying, tears sparking out her eyes.
2. 小鹿很害怕。
The deer was frightened.
Spotting this, so frightened was the deer that she shivered and trembled all over like a leaf.
句式三 (doing…),so + adj / adv +部分倒装 + that…, (doing / 独立主格)
用法体验
1. 保罗回想起这些伤人的字眼，气得暴跳如雷，重重地摔门而去，头也不回地大步走开。
2. 杰克激动得走上舞台，给了妻子一个温暖的拥抱。
用法体验
1. 保罗回想起这些伤人的字眼，气得暴跳如雷，重重地摔门而去，头也不回地大步走开。
Recalling these hurtful words, so irritated was Paul that he stormed out and slammed the door heavily, striding away without looking back.
2. 杰克激动得走上舞台，给了妻子一个温暖的拥抱。
So thrilled was Jack that he stepped into the stage, giving his wife a warm hug.
其他句式
四、to one’s + 情感名词（见前面名词）
五、What + 情感动词 + sb is that ...
【高兴类】delight, excite, cheer, 【生气类】annoy, upset
【惊讶类】astonish, shock, amaze 【害怕类】frighten, terrify,
【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage 【忧虑类】worry, concern
【其他类】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
What frustrates me is that I’ve tried everything and still can’t solve this problem.
What saddens me is that I never got the chance to say goodbye.
What relieves me is that everything will be okay in the end.
段落训练
描写考试后去教师办公室的情景（你可以考虑人物本身情绪和周围环境来续写丰富的内容）
Finally, it was time to face the music(接受应有的惩罚). _________________
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自由发挥创作，字数80左右。不限情节，合理即可。需体现所学内容，加入一定的环境描写和情感刻画。
Finally, it was time to face the music. I struggle to my feet from my seat and slowly made my way out to the teacher’s office. A sudden gust of cold wind made me shiver, just like a sharp knife piercing through my heart. After what seemed a long time, I came to the windows of the office, from where I could see Mr. Xu was seated in front of a computer, eyes glued to the screen. After a minute's hesitation,I pushed the door open and Mr. Xu looked away from his computer, staring directly into my eyes. Recalling what I had done in the examination, I felt a strong sense of shame welling up in my heart and surging through me. I could figure out what was going to happen and what he was to say.
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