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MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE
1. Have you ever been to Inner Mongolia (内蒙古) What's your impression of it Step 1 Lead-inMongolian tentsMongolian robesroast muttonMongolian steppes1234When/Where/Major events
What do you know about Naadam Festival
lead-in
shooting arrows/archery
horse racing
wrestling
What Naadam Festival customs did you learn about
Folk costume
People wear .
fancy Mongolian robes
Time of the Festival
It falls on day of month of , lasting .
the 4th
the 6th
the lunar calendar
At the beginning
There is an and .
opening ceremony
amazing performances
Activities
There are three main competitions during the festival, namely, , and .
Mongolian wrestling
hose racing
archery
3 days
How does the author express his feelings about the festival
fancy Mongolian robes
amazing performances
I was quite moved
I absolutely enjoyed the archery
How does the author express his feelings about the festival
my favorite part
surprised to see the riders were boys and girls!
I was a little worried about the children’s safety.
I’m finally back home now, feeling tired. But it was totally worth it. I can’t wait to pay another visit.
4. What's in your opinion is the most impressive thing about the festival
[针对训练]　完成句子
①She treats the young girl _____________________________.
她对待这个小女孩好像她是她自己的女儿一样。
②He opened his mouth as if he __________(say) something.
他张开嘴好像要说什么。
③She looks as if __________________________.
她看起来好像年轻了10岁。
④He talks about Rome as if he ________(be) before.
他说起罗马来好像他以前去过那里似的。
⑤Look at the clouds in the sky!
It looks as if _______________.Let’s hurry up.
看看天上的云彩！看起来要下雨。咱们快一点。
as if she were her own daughter
would say
she were ten years younger
had been
it is going to rain
In what order did the author write the diary
And how do you know that
Time order
On the first day….
After the opening ceremony
and performances….
I’m finally back home now…
Tip1: To make our article more organized, we can
follow the time order when writing.
Task 2
1. Match the main idea with each paragraph.
Brief introduction of Naadam Festival
What the author saw before the opening ceremony.
The wrestling competition and rules about it.
The horse race.
Brief summary of Naadam Festival
para1.
para2.
para3.
para4.
para5.
Step 2 Reading - for main ideas
2. The text is mainly about the writer’s _________ of taking part in __________________in Mongolia and the writer feels _______at it.
amazed
the Naadam Festival
experience
According to the left information，we can divide the passage into ________ parts.
3
Body
para. _____
Describe the festival in _______:
activities + my feelings
Give a _________ of the experience:
evaluation + feelings
Opening para. __
Closing
para. __
State the ______: what, when, where, who...
My amazing Naadam Expe-rience
The structure
(1)
(2-4)
(5)
topic
detail
summary
2. How to divide the diary into three parts
Write a narrative essay
opening paragraph
This was my first time spending … and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
I’ll always remember… because…
The festival falls on the … day of ...
when
where
what…
topic
It is a time for family reunion.
Write a speech
Before the festival, people are busy shopping and cleaning their houses.
Our living-room is decorated with many colorful lights.
Every corner is filled with joy, so we feel happy.
I will never forget this festival because so many fascinating moments have left a deep impression on me.
Body
start of the activity
details of the activity
feelings & emotions
Write a speech
The festival experience made me realize the importance of family and inspired me to spend more time with my family.
So fantastic experience was it that I would remember it forever.
Closing paragraph
a brief summary
Study the organization and
language features.
Structure Analysis
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
Para 4:
Para 5:
Describe the start of the festival and the surroundings.
Opening Paragraph
Closing Paragraph
First body
paragraph
Second body
paragraph
Third body
paragraph
State the topic:
(when, where and with
whom and main feelings)
Describe in detail the festival activities.
Give a brief summary of the experience.
Tip4: When writing a narrative essay about festival or
celebration experience, we should follow certain
passage structure to make it more organized.
Language features
Read the sentence patterns below and use them to
rewrite the opening sentence of the article.
1. This was my first time spending…and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience.
2. I’ll never forget…because…
3. I’ll always…because….
Possible version:
This was my first time spending the Naadam Festival in
China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region and it was an
enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
Tip5: When writing the opening sentences of each
paragraph, we can use topic sentences like
above to impress the readers and make the
paragraph more organized.
para3¶ 4:
1. How did the writer feel about the wrestling competition
2. What is the most impressive thing about the festival for the
writer and why
3. What did the writer think of the horse
horse racing
very important
describe in detail the activities:
wrestling competition and the horse races
Q. What does the writer think of the
festival he / she experienced and why
In my eyes, the writer enjoys the festival very much. I can tell from the words the writer uses, like
“exciting”
“amazing”
“quite moved”
“absolutely enjoy”
“favourite part”
“totally worth it”
etc. ...
Para 1: State the topic (when, where and with whom and main feelings)
Para 2-4:
Describe the festival in detail:
activities(what I saw, what I heard), and my feelings
Para 5:
Give a brief summary of the experience.
Organisation of the diary entry
____________________________在度假
____________穿上盛装；乔装打扮
__________________(节日等)是在(某天)
_________________期望，期待，盼望
____________________在特殊场合
_________________燃放鞭炮
be on holiday/leave/vacation
dress up
fall on (some day)
look forward to
on special occasions
set off fireworks
假如你是May，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文来记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容包括：
1.春节期间你们参加了什么活动；
2.谈谈你的感受。
Step 1　List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1：__________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：__________________________________________________________
Paragraph 3：__________________________________________________________
I was invited to enjoy the Spring Festival.
Describe the experience in detail.
Brief summary and the feelings.
Words&phrases
①____________ adj.高兴的；满意的　　　
②____________ vt.邀请
③____________ adj.愉快的；快乐的
④______________________探索外国文化
⑤_________________一个特殊的场合
pleased
invite
enjoyable
explore a foreign culture
a special occasion
⑥____________聚会； 联欢
⑦_________________传统食品
⑧____________参加
⑨__________________________________
独特的文化和迷人的风景
⑩____________ adj.(经历)难以忘怀的；
不会被遗忘的
get together
traditional foods
participate in
unique culture and attractive scenery
unforgettable

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