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(共20张PPT)
Unit1
Teenage Life
Write a letter of advice
generation gap(代沟) with parents
being addicted（上瘾的） to the Internet/computer games
great pressure（巨大的压力） from heavy schoolwork
feeling lonely and isolated（孤立的）
conflicts（矛盾） between friends/classmates
high expectations（期待） from parents and teachers
...
...
As a teenager, what problems do you have in your daily life
Lead-in
Contact（联系） your parents with your phone
Talk to your teachers about your problems
Ask for advice on social media
Write a letter to a professional（专业的） adviser
Turn to（向……求助） trustworthy friends
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
While-reading
Read her reply and get the structure of the letter.
summary
1.先明确来信人的问题，表达理解来信人的感受。
2. 提出建议，说明建议的理由
3.希望建议得到采纳,
并祝愿或盼望回复。
Basic structure of a letter of advice
作者：An adviser
I know what the problem is.
I understand how you feel.
This is my advice and reason(s).
I think my advice will help.
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2
3
4
体裁：Narrative
主题： Offer advice
读者：Questioner
I recommend that ...
why not...
Doing sth is....
I think you should
I understand quite well that...
You wrote that ...
I am sure...
Extract some useful expresions from the sample letter
Q1: What would you NOT say when you want to show your understanding
1. You have every right to feel upset about that.
2. I am sorry to hear that you feel lonely and upset when...
3. It’s totally normal to feel this way.
4. How can you have such a feeling...
Not considerate
Quizzes
Q2: What expressions will you NOT use when you give advice
1. If I were you, I would...
2. Why not... If you do this, you are likely to...
3. I think that it would be more beneficial if you could...
4. You must do...
5. You might as well...
Not courteous
Quizzes
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
A. First, you are supposed to(应该) get used to life in China.
B. First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends.
C. First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble.
Tip 1: Advice should be specific.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble.
A. Besides, it's a good idea to know the environment.
B. Besides, it's a good idea to take part in some activities, which will help you get used to the life here easily.
C. Besides, it's a good idea to read more Chinese books whenever you are in trouble.
specific
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble.
A. Besides, it's a good idea to know the environment.
B. Besides, it's a good idea to take part in some activities, which will help you get used to the life here easily.
C. Besides, it's a good idea to read more Chinese books whenever you are in trouble.
specific
convincing
Tip 3: Advice should be relevant(相关的).
Post-reading
Suggestion: ask a friend to introduce you to her.
Reason:
I think that you should ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her because your friend may probably help you break the ice with her and create the chance for you to talk with her.
Write the date
and greet the reader.
writing
Show the reader that you know the problem is.
Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels.
Tell the reader what you think he/she should do and explain your reason(s).
Tell the reader what you think will happen.
Close and sign the letter.
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
明确体裁话题
确定时态人称
建议信；如何适应新环境
一般现在时；第二人称为主
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
3. 布局文章框架
称呼 Dear XXX, （顶格）
首段：对收到信进行反馈；安慰对方；想给建议引出后文
中段：建议1/2/3 + 原因/结果
尾段：希望我的建议可以帮到你；期待你的来信
落款 Yours,（右对齐） XXX
4. 分析题目，列出核心要点
1. 指出问题所在
2. 提出摆脱困境、适应环境的建议
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
明确体裁话题
确定时态人称
建议信；如何适应新环境
一般现在时；第二人称为主
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
3. 布局文章框架
称呼 Dear XXX, （顶格）
首段：对收到信进行反馈；安慰对方；想给建议引出后文
中段：建议1/2/3 + 原因/结果
尾段：希望我的建议可以帮到你；期待你的来信
落款 Yours,（右对齐） XXX
4. 分析题目，列出核心要点
1. 指出问题所在
2. 提出摆脱困境、适应环境的建议
遣词 —— 中段
邀请
参加
活动
感到孤独
多交新朋友
与……沟通
相互理解
丰富知识
invite
take part in/ join in/ participant in
activity
feel lonely
make more new friends
communicate with sb
understand each other
enrich knowledge
强壮身体
校园生活将变得多姿多彩
处于困境
互相帮助
听歌
看电影
制定好的日程安排
专注学习
向…寻求帮助
build up body
school life will become colorful
in trouble
help each other
listen to the music
watch movie/ film
make a good schedule
focus/ concetrate on studying
ask sb for help
遣词 —— 中段
头脑风暴，遣词造句
给出祝愿
期待你的回信
尾段
希望建议有用
希望建议适合你
希望适应校园生活、结交许多好朋友
Looking forward to your early reply.

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