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(共21张PPT)
Reading for Writing
Learn to write
a letter of advice
目 录
CONTENTS
01 Form of a letter
02 Study the organisation and
language features in a letter
of advice
03 Learn to give adcice properly
04 Wirte a letter on your own
Learn to write
a letter of advice
contents目录
精准审题，谋篇布局
头脑风暴，遣词造句
斟酌词句，妙笔生花
衔接过渡，斐然成篇
一、精准审题，谋篇布局
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
1、明确体裁话题
2、确定时态人称
3、布局文章框架
4、列出核心要点
Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice.
problem
advice
Who has a problem
__________
What’s the problem
______________
Who gives advice
__________
What’s the advice
1._________________
2._________________
3._________________
_____________
Chen Lei
Play games
Susan Luo
talk to your friend
try new hobbies
discuss the problem together
Read & Understand
I know what
The problem
is.
I understand
how you feel.
This is my
advice and
reason(s).
I think my advice
will help.
Reading for the organization
Advice:
talk to your friend about his behaviour
encourage his friend to try new hobbies
discuss the problem together
1. Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
2. What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.
Why not discuss the problem together
头脑风暴
收信反馈
分析现状，安慰对方
想给建议，引出后文
首段
不要太担心
面临同样的问题
进入高中
感觉不好
不适应高中生活
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
A. Knowing that you have come to China recently, I'm writing with delight to show my warm welcome to you.
B. Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Sentence B responds to the writing task.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Greeting
Beginning
Then
Body
The content of
is to give advice.
Write a letter to one of them, draft your letter according to the outline below.
Share your letter with everyone
10 september 2020
Dear Xu Ting，
You wrote that you feel lonely after school.
I understand how you feel.
I think maybe you should join the after-school class, because there are a lot of students like you. You can discuss anything with them or play some games. I'm sure that you will feel more pleased instead of feeling lonely.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
Writing Practice
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Can you give her some advice
Share your opinions!
Join more extra-curricular activities.
Connect with your parents online.
Make more friends.
Keep a pet.
Cultivate(培养) new hobbies.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Why does Susan mention the other information
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Why does Susan mention the other information
Tip 2: Advice should be convincing(有说服力的).
reasons
Write a letter to one of them, draft your letter according to the outline below.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble. Besides, it's a good idea to take part in some activities, which will help you get used to the life here easily.
Is there any other advice
specific
convincing
relevant
Discuss with your partner and write down the advice.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble. Besides, it's a good idea to take part in some activities, which will help you get used to the life here easily.
Is there any other advice
Above all, I recommend that you should take a tour around this place so that you'll have a better understanding of where you live.

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