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(共20张PPT)
Unit1
Teenage Life
Write a letter of advice
generation gap(代沟) with parents
being addicted（上瘾的） to the Internet/computer games
great pressure（巨大的压力） from heavy schoolwork
feeling lonely and isolated（孤立的）
conflicts（矛盾） between friends/classmates
high expectations（期待） from parents and teachers
...
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As a teenager, what problems do you have in your daily life
Lead-in
contents目录
精准审题，谋篇布局
头脑风暴，遣词造句
斟酌词句，妙笔生花
衔接过渡，斐然成篇
一、精准审题，谋篇布局
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
1、明确体裁话题
2、确定时态人称
3、布局文章框架
4、列出核心要点
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
明确体裁话题
确定时态人称
建议信；如何适应新环境
一般现在时；第二人称为主
第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局
3. 布局文章框架
称呼 Dear XXX, （顶格）
首段：对收到信进行反馈；安慰对方；想给建议引出后文
中段：建议1/2/3 + 原因/结果
尾段：希望我的建议可以帮到你；期待你的来信
落款 Yours,（右对齐） XXX
4. 分析题目，列出核心要点
1. 指出问题所在
2. 提出摆脱困境、适应环境的建议
二、头脑风暴，遣词造句
Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice.
problem
advice
Who has a problem
__________
What’s the problem
______________
Who gives advice
__________
What’s the advice
1._________________
2._________________
3._________________
_____________
Chen Lei
Play games
Susan Luo
talk to your friend
try new hobbies
discuss the problem together
Read & Understand
I know what
The problem
is.
I understand
how you feel.
This is my
advice and
reason(s).
I think my advice
will help.
Reading for the organization
头脑风暴
收信反馈
分析现状，安慰对方
想给建议，引出后文
首段
不要太担心
面临同样的问题
进入高中
感觉不好
不适应高中生活
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
A. Knowing that you have come to China recently, I'm writing with delight to show my warm welcome to you.
B. Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Sentence B responds to the writing task.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Greeting
Beginning
Then
Body
The content of
is to give advice.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
A. First, you are supposed to(应该) get used to life in China.
B. First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends.
C. First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble.
Tip 1: Advice should be specific.
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble.
A. Besides, it's a good idea to know the environment.
B. Besides, it's a good idea to take part in some activities, which will help you get used to the life here easily.
C. Besides, it's a good idea to read more Chinese books whenever you are in trouble.
specific
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：
(1) 表示理解；(2) 提出建议（不少于2点）。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty in adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
First, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever in trouble.
A. Besides, it's a good idea to know the environment.
B. Besides, it's a good idea to take part in some activities, which will help you get used to the life here easily.
C. Besides, it's a good idea to read more Chinese books whenever you are in trouble.
specific
convincing
Tip 3: Advice should be relevant(相关的).
Write a letter to one of them, draft your letter according to the outline below.
Share your letter with everyone
10 september 2020
Dear Xu Ting，
You wrote that you feel lonely after school.
I understand how you feel.
I think maybe you should join the after-school class, because there are a lot of students like you. You can discuss anything with them or play some games. I'm sure that you will feel more pleased instead of feeling lonely.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
Writing Practice
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Can you give her some advice
Share your opinions!
Join more extra-curricular activities.
Connect with your parents online.
Make more friends.
Keep a pet.
Cultivate(培养) new hobbies.

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