Unit 3 My School 话题作文指导【含答案解析】-2025-2026人教版英语七年级上册

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Unit 3 话题作文指导-2025-2026人教版英语七年级上册
一、文档定位
目标受众:2025-2026 学年人教版英语七年级上册学生。
核心功能:帮助学生掌握英语写作技巧,提升英语综合运用能力,特别是在描述学校生活、校园环境、家庭情况、个人兴趣爱好等基础话题方面。
二、内容构成
八大板块:涵盖回复笔友邮件介绍个人情况、回复邮件介绍教室情况、介绍学校及校园生活、描述学校建筑和活动、分享初中生活、介绍学校平面图等实用写作场景。
写作指导:每个板块均提供写作要求、范文示例及写作详解,涵盖写作步骤、亮点词汇和高分句型,帮助学生写出条理清晰、语句通顺的文章。
三、出题特点
紧扣教材:题目设计贴合教材重点与考试大纲,匹配学生学习进度。
实用性与创新性:融合基础写作框架与多样化主题,激发学生写作兴趣与创造力。
能力培养:同时锻炼学生语言与思维能力,引导其思考、分析与总结。
四、教学价值
提升写作水平:帮助学生在基础话题写作上取得进步,提升英语写作能力。
培养综合素养:通过多样写作任务,增强学生观察力、逻辑思维与跨文化交流能力。
备考助力:为学生在英语写作板块取得优异成绩提供支持。
五、适用场景
日常学习:学生可参考写作指导,提升英语写作水平。
课堂教学:教师可将文档内容融入教学,丰富教学资源,提高教学效果。
家庭作业:作为作业帮助学生巩固课堂所学,提升写作能力。
一、书面表达
1.假如你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Fred给你发来一封电子邮件,请你阅读后回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to be your new penfriend. I want to know more about you. How many people are there in your family What’s your room like I like rabbits best. What are your favourite animals I study at a nice school. Do you like your school What’s your favourite place at school Why Can you tell me
Yours,
Fred
1.邮件应回答所有问题,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名
3.词数80左右。邮件的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Fred,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Fred,
Thank you for your email! There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. My room is not too big but cozy. It has a blue desk on the left and a bookshelf next to it. I also love rabbits! They are cute and gentle.
Yes, I like my school very much. My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. I often read there after class.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据题干提示,回答Fred的问题,介绍自己的家庭情况、房间布置、喜欢的动物和学校情况,注意内容齐全,保证语句通顺,无单词和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的家庭信息以及房间的摆设以及喜欢的动物;
第二步,介绍自己的学校情况和最喜欢的学校设施;
第三步,表达对成为笔友的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① next to 紧挨着
② look forward to sth./doing sth. 期待某事/做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. (there be句型)
②My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. (because引导原因状语从句)
2.假如你是李梅,你的英国网友Mary给你发了一封电子邮件询问你们教室的情况,请你仔细阅读并用英语给她回邮件。
Li Mei,How’s it going I need to give a report about the classrooms in the world next week. Can you tell me something about your classroom I’m looking forward to your reply (回信). Thank you so much.Yours,Mary
提示问题:
1.What do you have in the front of the classroom
2.What do you have in the middle of the classroom
3.What do you have at the back of the classroom
4.What do you often do in your classroom
5.What do you think of your classroom
参考词汇:
blackboard, smart whiteboard, desk, chair, notice, study hard, clean…
要求:
1.请根据提示问题,选择使用参考词汇完成邮件,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to tell you something about our classroom. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Mei
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m writing to tell you something about our classroom.
Our classroom is a lively space. In the front of the classroom, we have a blackboard and a smart white board for teaching. In the middle of the classroom, we have desks and chairs which are arranged for us to study. At the back of the classroom, we have a notice board to keep us updated. We often study hard in our classroom. I think our classroom is clean and tidy.
I hope this information is helpful for your report. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍教室的情况以及对教室的评价。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①in the front of在……的前部
②be helpful for对……有帮助
③study hard努力学习
④look forward to期待……
[高分句型]
①In the middle of the classroom, we have desks and chairs which are arranged for us to study. (定语从句)
②I think our classroom is clean and tidy. (宾语从句)
3.亲爱的同学,七年级上学期的校园生活即将画上句号,回顾这段时光,你的学校给你留下了怎样的印象呢 请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的学校、你最喜欢的校园一角以及你对同学和老师们的看法。
内容提示:
1. What is your school like
2. Which place do you like best Why
3. What do you think of your classmates and teachers
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A school is a place to start our dreams.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
A school is a place to start our dreams.
My school is large and beautiful. It has many classrooms, a library, a playground, and a garden. The place I like best is the library. It is quiet, and there are many interesting books to read. I enjoy spending time there, especially when I need some peace.
As for my classmates and teachers, I think they are friendly and helpful. My classmates are always ready to help me, and my teachers are kind and patient. They make me feel comfortable and encourage me to do my best.
I’m happy to be a part of this school!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:主要使用“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息“内容提示”的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍学校的整体环境和设施;
第二步,说明自己喜欢的校园一角,并给出理由;
第三步,描述同学和老师的特点,表达对他们的积极看法。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing喜欢做某事
②as for至于
③be a part of成为……的一部分
[高分句型]
①My classmates are always ready to help me, and my teachers are kind and patient. (并列句)
②I think they are friendly and helpful. (宾语从句)
4.当地英文报正在开展一项关于学校生活的征文活动,邀请你校学生投稿,请你按照征稿要求以“My school”为题写一篇文章投稿,介绍自己的学校和你的学校生活。
提示:
1. What is your school like
2. How many buildings are there in your school
3. What is your favorite place in your school Why
4. What do you like to do at school
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息和学校名称;
2. 词数60左右。
My school
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【答案】例文
My school is as beautiful as a park. There are six buildings in our school. The playground is my favorite place because I can do exercise and play games with my friends there. I really enjoy playing soccer with my classmates on the soccer field. I also like running on the playground and it makes me strong. I love my school because I can learn and make friends there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作对象——介绍自己的学校;
第二步,具体介绍自己的学校建筑和活动。
[亮点词汇]
①as beautiful as和……一样美丽;
②do exercise做锻炼;
③make friends交朋友。
[高分句型]
①There are six buildings in our school. (there be句型)
②The playground is my favorite place because I can do exercise and play games with my friends there. (原因状语从句)
5.同学们,时光荏苒,仿佛昨日你们才满怀憧憬地迈入初中大门,而今,一个学期的学习生活已悄然落幕。在这段宝贵的时间里,相信你们对自己的初中学校有了更为深刻的了解与感受。现在,请拿起你的笔,向我们简单介绍一下你的初中学校。
My Middle School What is in your school Which one do you like best Why
Buildings classroom building;a sports field;... ...
Subjects (学科) Maths;English; ... ...
要求:
1)必须包括所给信息, 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯;
2)文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Middle School
Let me talk about my middle school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My Middle School
Let me talk about my middle school. My school is wonderful. There are many buildings like the classroom building and the sports field. We have different subjects such as Maths and English. I like the sports field best because I love doing sports. The classroom building is also great, which provides a good environment for our study.
I love my middle school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,描述了作者的中学生活;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:介绍学校的建筑、你喜欢的学科,表达对学校的热爱。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表明要谈论自己的中学;
第二步,介绍学校的建筑,你喜欢的学科,说明自己最喜欢运动场的原因等;
第三步,结尾表达对中学的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful 极好的;精彩的
②such as 例如
③provide 提供
[高分句型]
①I like the sports field best because I love doing sports. (because引导原因状语从句)
②The classroom building is also great, which provides a good environment for our study. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
6.假如你是红星中学七年级学生李华,现校刊举办“分享美好时光”的主题活动。请你以“My school life”为题向校刊英文专栏投稿,介绍你的初中生活。
内容包括:
1. 校园环境;
2. 课外活动;
3. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 词数为60左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇: beautiful(adj.美丽的), after-school activities(课外活动), enjoy(v.喜欢)
My school life
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade Seven.
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【答案】例文
My school life
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade Seven. My school is big and beautiful. There are some buildings and a playground. My classroom is on the first floor and it’s clean and bright. After school, I usually run or play football in the playground. Football is my favourite sport and I join the football club. I like new friends there and it’s happy to train with them. I love my school and I enjoy my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时” ;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。介绍自己的基本信息,引出下文。(开头已给出)
第二步,具体阐述。根据内容提示,介绍校园环境、课外活动等。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己对学校和初中生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① after school 放学后
② play football 踢足球
③ train 训练
[高分句型]
① There are some buildings and a playground. (there be句型)
② Football is my favourite sport and I join the football club. (and并列结构)
7.假设你是 Li Ming,你的美国笔友Daniel询问你初中生活的近况,请你用英文给他回复邮件,介绍你的生活,要点如下:
1. 校园美丽,有图书馆、餐厅等;学校活动丰富:……
2. 饮食健康:……;经常运动:……
3. 最爱的中国节日是……,(介绍庆祝方式)。
要求:
1. 所写短文必须包括要点提示内容,并作适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Daniel,
I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Daniel.
I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my life.
My school is beautiful. There is a bright library, a big dining hall and 4 classroom buildings. We have many interesting activities at school. For example, we have a sports meeting in autumn.
I have a healthy diet. I like beef and vegetables. I seldom eat sweet snacks, because they are bad for my teeth. I often do sports. I play volleyball once a week.
My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. We usually have a big dinner with relatives and friends. It’s great fun!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍美丽校园及学校活动;
第二步,介绍健康饮食和运动;
第三步,介绍最爱的中国节日及庆祝方式。
[亮点词汇]
①many interesting activities许多有趣的活动
②a healthy diet一个健康的饮食
③relatives and friends亲朋好友
[高分句型]
I seldom eat sweet snacks, because they are bad for my teeth. (原因状语从句)
8.假如你叫李明,下面是一幅你们学校的平面图。请根据图片信息,写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下你们的学校。
参考词汇: in the middle of, right, left, between, in front of …
参考句型: There is/are …
要求:1. 可选择使用参考词汇及句型,亦可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:60左右。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hello! I’m Li Ming. Today I’d like to introduce my school to you.
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【答案】例文:
Hello! I’m Li Ming. Today I’d like to introduce my school to you.
In the middle of the school, there is a sports field. In front of the sports field, you’ll see the library and the science building. To the right of the sports field is the sports hall. It is between the dining hall and the science building. The last row of buildings includes the teachers’ building, then the classroom building, and finally the dining hall. I think my school is very beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据平面图,分别介绍学校的各个建筑的位置;
第二步,书写结语。表达对学校的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in the middle of在……的中间
②in front of在……的前面
③between...and...在……和……之间
④includes包含
[高分句型]
①I think my school is very beautiful. (宾语从句)

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