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单元话题作文强化训练（二）-2025-2026人教版英语八年级上册
一、文档定位
目标受众：2025-2026 学年人教版英语八年级上册学生。
核心功能：帮助学生强化英语写作能力，提升英语综合运用能力，特别是在描述旅行经历、家务劳动、个人成长、动物保护、烹饪过程、职业理想、未来生活畅想和线上交流等话题方面。
二、内容构成
八大板块：涵盖介绍旅行经历、家务劳动、个人成长、动物保护、烹饪过程、职业理想、未来生活畅想和线上交流等多样化的写作场景。
写作指导：每个板块均提供写作要求、范文示例及写作详解，涵盖写作步骤、亮点词汇和高分句型，帮助学生掌握写作技巧。
三、出题特点
紧扣教材：题目设计与教材重点和考试大纲紧密结合，确保学生复习内容与学习进度相匹配。
实用性与创新性：题目既包含基础写作框架与常用表达，又通过多样化的主题设置激发学生的写作兴趣与创造力。
能力培养：强调语言能力与思维能力的双重培养，通过不同类型的写作任务，引导学生在语言表达的同时，学会思考、分析与总结。
四、教学价值
提升写作水平：帮助学生在英语写作方面查漏补缺，提升写作水平，特别是在描述旅行经历、家务劳动、个人成长等基础话题方面。
培养综合素养：通过多样化的写作任务，培养学生的观察力、逻辑思维能力、家庭责任感、跨文化交流能力与文化自信。
备考助力：为学生在英语写作板块取得优异成绩奠定坚实基础，帮助学生在写作板块取得满分。
五、适用场景
日常学习：学生可参考写作指导，提升英语写作水平。
课堂教学：教师可将文档内容融入教学，丰富教学资源，提高教学效果。
家庭作业：作为作业帮助学生巩固课堂所学，提升写作能力。
一、书面表达
1．假设你是吴明，在寒假期间，你和你家人一起去了武夷山游玩。请根据下列表格写一篇短文介绍一下此次旅行的情况，字数80左右。开头已给出。
Before the trip the way of transportation (交通) , book the hotel
During the trip go mountain climbingtake the bamboo raft (竹排)watch Impression Da Hong Pao Show (印象大红袍)...
After the trip feelings
During the winter holiday, I went on a 3-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
During the winter holiday, I went on a 3-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents.
It lies in the north of Fujian Province, China. We took the train for this trip because the high-speed train is very convenient and fast now. Father booked the hotel before the trip.
On the first day, we went mountain climbing. When we reached the top of the mountain, we can see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful. The next day, we took the bamboo raft at Jiuqu Creek. It was very exciting and fun. In the evening, we also watched the live show of Impression Da Hong Pao. It takes Mount Wuyi tea culture as its theme. On the third day we enjoyed the local delicious food. And we tasted Dahongpao as well.
The three-day visit quickly came to an end. Although I felt a little tired, I had a great time and learned a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍去武夷山旅游的背景；
第二步，中间分别详细描述三天的行程；
第三步，结尾总结这次旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient方便的
②exciting令人兴奋的
③delicious美味的
[高分句型]
①When we reached the top of the mountain, we could see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful.（which引导的非限定性定语从句）
2．为了配合学校“劳动教育月”的主题活动，学校英文报正在开展以“Doing chores makes me _____”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，补全题目后用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要点提示：
1. What kind of housework do you often do at home
2. Why do you do it
3. What can you learn from doing it
注意事项：
1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、包含提示所给的全部内容；
2. 词数不少于 70 个；
3. 文中不得透露考生本人的姓名或学校名称；
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【答案】例文
Housework makes me independent
Housework is important for our family life. I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy.
I help by cleaning my room and doing the dishes. Sometimes, when Mom and Dad are busy, I even help cook our meals!
I learn a lot from doing chores. It teaches me many important life skills such as cooking and repairing things. Now I become more and more independent. Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better.
All in all, chores are not just work for me, they are a way to enjoy time with family. I love being a helper at home!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“家务对我们的家庭生活很重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你经常做的家务是哪些、做家务的原因及感悟等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn...from...从……学到……
②more and more independent越来越独立
[高分句型]
①I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy. (宾语从句）
②Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better. (动名词作主语)
3．假如你是李磊，你和你远在美国的笔友Lucy已有两年没有见面了，她想了解你这两年的变化，请你按照以下提示，写一封信介绍一下吧！
提示：
外貌：taller, longer hair…
性格：more outgoing, more popular…
爱好：basketball, twice a week…
学习：more subjects, work harder…
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包含所提供的要点，可适当发挥。
2. 不得出现真实的姓名、班级及地名。
3. 不少于70 词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to tell you some changes about me.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about you Can you tell me something about your changes
Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】范文：
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to tell you some changes about me. I am taller than the last time I saw you. And now I like long hair, so I have longer hair than before. Because I become more outgoing, I have so many friends and I am more popular at school. Basketball is my favorite sport. I play it twice a week with my classmates. In my opinion, it’s good for my health. In this term, there are more subjects than last term, so I must work harder than before. Of course, I watch some shows in my spare time, which can make me relaxed.
What about you Can you tell me something about your changes
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我的变化”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身材样貌、兴趣爱好、学业课程”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth.乐于做某事
②in my opinion在我看来
③in my spare time在业余时间
[高分句型]
①I watch some shows in my spare time, which can make me relaxed.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．大象是陆地上最大的动物，它们喜欢群居，体型较大但性情温和。但是由于人类对象牙制品（ivory products）的追捧，每年都有大量的大象被猎杀，一些种类的大象已濒临灭绝（extinction）。作为中学生，我们可以为保护大象做点什么呢？请根据提示，写一篇英文倡议书为保护大象助力。
要点提示：
1. What are elephants like
2. What are their living habits
3. Why do they have to be protected
4. How can we protect them
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，条理清楚，意思连贯；
2. 词数：80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Boys and girls,
Elephants are our good friends, but how much do you know about them
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Let’s do something to make a difference!
【答案】例文：
Boys and girls,
Elephants are our good friends, but how much do you know about them
Elephants are big and strong and they’re the biggest animals on land. Elephants live in groups and they’re friendly. However, a large number of elephants are killed every year because people want their ivories. The number of elephants is falling quickly and some kinds of elephants are in danger of extinction. Elephants need our help! What can we students do Firstly, we can help people learn more about elephants and tell them the importance of protecting elephants. Secondly, we should say no to ivory products. No buying, no killing. Finally, we should protect the living environment of elephants.
Let’s do something to make a difference!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据题目要点提示，完成倡议书，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充，同时要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文主要使用一般现在时态，人称主要使用第三人称。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，注意连词的使用；保证全文要点明确，结构严谨，语法运用准确，意思连贯。
5．根据下面的表格提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下罗宋汤的做法，不少于80 词，可适当发挥。
怎样做罗宋汤 （Russian soup）
所需原料 一块牛肉，一棵卷心菜，四根胡萝卜，三个土豆， 五个西红柿和一个洋葱。
做法 1. 把牛肉切成块并把所有的蔬菜切碎。2. 把牛肉、胡萝卜和土豆放进罐中并添上适量的水，炖30 分钟。3. 加入卷心菜、西红柿和洋葱，再炖10 分钟。4. 最后加盐。
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【答案】例文
My favorite soup is Russian soup. To make the soup, you need to buy some beef, one cabbage, four carrots, three potatoes, five tomatoes and one onion. Now let me tell you how to make the soup. First, cut the beef into small pieces and then cut up all the vegetables. Next, put the beef, carrots and potatoes into a pot and add some water. After that, cook them for 30 minutes. Then, add the cabbage, tomatoes and onion and cook for another 10 minutes. Finally, add some salt. The soup is ready and you can enjoy it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“我”最喜欢的食物——罗宋汤；
第二步，具体介绍做罗宋汤所需的原料以及具体做法；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite最喜欢的
②need to do需要做某事
③cut up切碎
[高分句型]
①To make the soup, you need to buy some beef, one cabbage, four carrots, three potatoes, five tomatoes and one onion.（不定式作目的状语）
6．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你以“I want to be a/an…”为题写一篇短文。词数: 80—100 (已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。
提纲
What is your dream job
Where are you going to work
Which motto (座右铭) encourages you most
Why do you like this job
How will you get your future dream job
I want to be a/an…
I have a dream. I want to be_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I want to be a teacher
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied.
The motto encourages me most is “Teachers’ biggest happiness is to see the children grow up!” I think teachers are very important people in our life. They teach us knowledge. They help us with our study. They give us confidence. If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.
To be a teacher, I’ll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. I won’t give up my dream. I think it will come true soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求以“I want to be a/an..”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍理想的工作是什么，以及在哪里工作；
第二步，介绍喜欢的座右铭以及喜欢工作的原因；
第三步，介绍怎样才能得到理想的工作。
[亮点词汇]
①help...with...在某方面帮助
②give sb sth给某人某物
③work hard努力工作
[高分句型]
①I think teachers are very important people in our life.（宾语从句）
②If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.（条件状语从句）
7．科技改变未来，学校正在开展主题为《畅想未来》的征文活动。请根据以下图示写一篇英语短文，进行投稿，谈谈你对未来生活的畅想。
注意：
1. 词数80-120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提 示适当发挥）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
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【答案】例文：
With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
Our environment will be much better. There will be no more pollution because more green energies will be developed. New kinds of plants and flowers will be grown to make the earth more beautiful. Besides, higher and newer technology will come along to make our life more comfortable. Robots will be commonly used in all fields.With moving houses, people don’t have to stay in hotels even when travelling. The exploration of space will be another big progress. Our dream to travel in space freely and learn more about other planets will come true. More excitingly, making friends with aliens will also be possible.
Life in the future will be fantastic. How I wish it would come soon!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。针对未来生活进行畅想，完成写作，包括环境、科技和太空三方面。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般将来时，人称以第三人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段叙述环境、科技和太空方面未来的情况；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时做到无语法和标点错误。
8．随着科学技术的飞速发展，人们的交流方式发生了巨大的变化。目前，线上交流已成为主流。请根据以下要点和要求，以“How Online Communication Influences Our Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这种新型交流方式的看法。
要点：
1.线上交流的优点；
2.线上交流带来的问题；
3.你对线上交流的看法。
要求：
1.文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How Online Communication Influences Our Life
As we all know, online communication is becoming more and more popular now. It’s widely used in daily life._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
How Online Communication Influences Our Life
As we all know, online communication is becoming more and more popular now. It’s widely used in daily life.
No matter where we are, we can always find that people use online communication around us. Making friends is becoming much easier by using online communication. We can also share our happiness and sadness with our families, relatives and friends. What’s more, we can read some good books on it.
However, everything has its advantages and disadvantages. We should use online communication properly. Using online communication can also cause some problems. If we use online communication too often, we will have less time to study. Sometimes it isn’t safe for students to make friends by online communication.
In my opinion, online communication is helpful in our life, but we should use it carefully.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指出在线交流现在变得越来越流行；
第二步，具体介绍在线交流的优点和缺点；
第三步，最后介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① no matter where无论在哪里
② share sth with sb与某人分享某物
③ make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
① If we use online communication too often, we will have less time to study.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② Using online communication can also cause some problems.（动名词作主语）

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