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Teenage life – Reading for Writing
Write a letter of advice
When you have some problems in life or in study, what will you do
ask parents for help
talk with a friend
turn to a net friend
find a way by yourself
go to a school adviser
turn to sb.求助于某人
net friend 网友
Lead in
Free Talk
1. If you were her, what would you do
2. Can you write a letter of advice to her to offer her your advice
3. How to write a letter of advice
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Read for details
Read the letter of advice and answer the questions below.
1. What is Worried Friend’s problem
2. What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
3. Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
Worried Friend is worried that his or her friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Talk to your friend about his behaviour; encourage your friend to try new hobbies; discuss the problem together
She expresses her understanding for Worried Friend’s problem and feelings.
She also talks about the harmful effects of computer addiction.
Read for structure
1. What are the necessary parts of a
letter of advice
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reasons.
D. I think my advice will help.
2. What is included in Body Part
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Structer of a letter
A letter should include the following parts:
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
Read for structure
A letter of advice should include the four parts:
1. I know what the problem is.
2. I understand how you feel.
3. This is my advice and reason (s).
4. I think my advice will help.
点明问题
表示理解
提出建议和理由
表达愿望
文章开头
文章主体段
文章结尾
Useful sentences structures
首段：先明确来信人的问题，表达理解来信人的感受,注意语气。
I am sorry to know/hear that...
I have met the same problems as you before so I totally understand your feelings.
You have asked for my advice about... and I will try to make some suggestions.
I am writing to express my views concerning(关于）...
…Here are a few suggestions about ...
Here come some tips for you.
You wrote that you are very worried about...I understand quite well that...
Useful sentences structures
第二段：提出建议，说明建议的理由和对解决问题的期望。
As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion...
If I were you, I would…
It would be a good idea if you...
You’d better do...
I’d like to suggest...
It’s a wise choice if you...
Why don’t you...
Maybe you’re supposed to do.
I recommend that you should do sth
I think you should...
Why not do sth
过渡衔接语，让文章更具条理。
1.Firstly ,Besides,in addition.
2.Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly/Finally.
3.First,Then, Finally.
4.First of all,What’more, last but not least.
Advanced words & phrases
1. Understand quite well__________
2. make it difficult to do sth. ______________
3. recommend sb. that sb. (should) do _________________
4. It is not unusual for sb. to do sth. _____________________
5. _________________ 对...上瘾
6. __________________ 喜爱…
7. ________________________ 聚精会神
8. be anxious and feel terrible _________________
很能理解
使做某事变得困难
建议某人做某事
对某人来说做某事很常见
be addicted to
感到焦虑和糟糕
focus on/concentrate on
be attracted to
Proper expressions
I always feel lonely.
My parents won't listen.
problems
There is a girl I like in my class.
1. Group work：Now you have three friends, they all have problems, what's your suggestions to them
Useful sentences structures
结尾段：希望建议得到采纳并祝愿，或盼望回复。
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
I believe you will take my advice into consideration.
I feel that it would be helpful if you stick to (坚持）it.
I am looking forward to your reply/hearing from you.
I believe that if you follow my advice, you will...
Discussion
What suggestions will you offer to her and what are the reasons
Drafting
Draft your letter
Evaluation scores 1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in good order？ 1 2 3 4 5
2.Does the writer give reasons for the advice？ 1 2 3 4 5
3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions？ 1 2 3 4 5
4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly 1 2 3 4 5
5.Is the handwriting easy to read？ 1 2 3 4 5
Work in pairs and exchange your drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft.
Evaluation
Read the advice carefully and answer the following questions:
What advice did Susan give
Reading for details
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.
Why not dicuss the problem together
What reason did Susan list to support her advice
Spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.
Reading for writing
Read the suggestions. Find the sentence structures Ms Luo used to offer advice.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Reading for writing
I recommend that you (should) do sth.
I think you should do sth.
Why not …
Pre-writing
Expressions you may use when offering advice
I recommend/suggest that you (should) do sth.
I think that you should do sth.
Why not…
It’s a good idea/choice to do sth.
I think you’d better do sth.
If I were you, I would do sth.
___________
Dear _________,
You wrote that ___________
I understand that _________
I think __________________
because ________________.
I am sure that ___________
Best wishes,
____________
Draft your letter according to the outline below.
draft 起草；拟稿
Useful expressions
1.You have asked me for my advice on ... and I will try to make some suggestions.
2.It's my great pleasure to give you some suggestions / advice on ...
3. I am writing to express my views concerning ...
4. I'm sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in ...
Beginning
How
What
Useful expressions
1. I would like to suggest / recommend that ...
2. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.
3. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should ...
4. Why not…
5. It would be better / a good idea if ...
Body
Why
What
An advive letter
Date
Beginning
Body
Close
What
Greeting
What
How
Why
Signature
Useful expressions
1.You have asked me for my advice on ... and I will try to make some suggestions.
2.It's my great pleasure to give you some suggestions / advice on ...
3. I am writing to express my views concerning ...
4. I'm sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in ...
Beginning
How
What
Thank you

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