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Reading for Writing
人教（2019）必修第一册
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Lead in
Free Talk
1. If you were her, what would you do
2. Can you write a letter of advice to her to offer her your advice
3. How to write a letter of advice
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Read for details
Read the letter of advice and answer the questions below.
1. What is Worried Friend’s problem
2. What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
3. Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
Worried Friend is worried that his or her friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Talk to your friend about his behaviour; encourage your friend to try new hobbies; discuss the problem together
She expresses her understanding for Worried Friend’s problem and feelings.
She also talks about the harmful effects of computer addiction.
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Structer of a letter
A letter should include the following parts:
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
Read for structure
1. What are the necessary parts of a
letter of advice
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reasons.
D. I think my advice will help.
2. What is included in Body Part
Talking
What is the boy’s problem
is addicted to
online
The boy is worried about ____________because he ____________ computer games
and stayed ________ for too much time.
his friend Chen Lei
Reading
What is Ms Luo’s advice
Talk to his friend about his behaviour.
Encourage his friend to try new hobbies.
Discuss the problem together.
Challenge Yourself
How does Ms. Luo make the letter so persuasive
B. I know what the problem is. (problem)
A. I understand(feeling) how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reasons.
D. I think my advice will help. (hope)
Clear structure
Read the body part carefully and underline the sentences that express the following meanings.
Reading for details
I know what the problem is.
I understand how you feel.
This is my advice and reason(s).
I think my advice will help.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Body
I know what the problem is
I understand how you feel
This is my advice and reasons
I think my advice will help
Reading for details
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Body
I know what the problem is
I understand how you feel
This is my advice and reasons
I think my advice will help
Reading for details
What is Worried Friend’s problem
Reading for details
His friend plays computer games too often and spend too much time online.
Useful sentences structures
结尾段：希望建议得到采纳并祝愿，或盼望回复。
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
I believe you will take my advice into consideration.
I feel that it would be helpful if you stick to (坚持）it.
I am looking forward to your reply/hearing from you.
I believe that if you follow my advice, you will...
Discussion
What suggestions will you offer to her and what are the reasons
Drafting
Draft your letter
Evaluation scores 1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in good order？ 1 2 3 4 5
2.Does the writer give reasons for the advice？ 1 2 3 4 5
3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions？ 1 2 3 4 5
4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly 1 2 3 4 5
5.Is the handwriting easy to read？ 1 2 3 4 5
Work in pairs and exchange your drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft.
Evaluation
My parents won’t listen when I tell them things. I guess it’s because they’re adults and can’t understand me. Do you have any suggestions
suggestion reason
To begin with, you are supposed to have a timely communication with …
In order not to make things worse, you’d better… and I think in this way you’ll surely…
In that case, you can try to … and I believe that …
They need your help!
I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. What can I do
suggestion reason
It will certainly help a lot if you...
It is advisable to do...
I suggest that you try to do...
They need your help!
There is a girt I like in my class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
suggestion reason
I (don’t) think it wise of you to… because …
It would be much better if you...
In addition to that, wouldn't it be a good idea to …
They need your help!
Name Suggestions Reasons
Eric 1. Try listening to your parents. 2. Invite them out for something to eat. 1.Maybe aren't listening to you because you don't listen to them.
2. This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.
Xu Ting 1. Join a volunteer group. 2. Connect with your parents online. 1. This will give you a chance to be around other people, and to make more friends.
2. Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them.
Min Ho 1.Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her. 2. Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member. Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you a in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. What should I do
Pre-writing
There is a girl I like in my class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
Read the three cases and find out their problems.
His parents won’t listen to him.
Always feels lonely after school.
Too shy to talk to the girl he likes.
cases suggestions reasons
Eric
Xu Ting
Min Ho
Pre-writing
Choose one of the teenagers and list your suggestions and reasons.
Expressions:
I recommend/suggest that you (should) do sth.
I think that you should do sth.
Why not…
It’s a good idea/choice to do sth.
I think you’d better do sth.
If I were you, I would …
Group Work:
Writing
Write a letter to one of the teenagers according to the outline and your disussion above.
___________
Dear _______,
You wrote that _____________.
I understand that ___________.
I think _____________ because
__________________________.
I am sure that _____________.
Best wishes,
___________
Write the date and greet the reader.
Show the reader that you know what the problem is.
Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels.
Tell the reader what you think he/she should do and explain your reason(s).
Tell the reader what you think will happen.
Close and sign the letter.
Homework
Write a letter of advice to one of the following two boys.

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