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Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing about a lesson
from nature)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Writing about a lesson from nature)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇从自然界中获得的启示的文章，属于生活哲理类文章。此类文章一般是通过描写生活中的一件事来阐述与之相关的生活哲理以及自己的感悟。文章叙议结合，以议论为主。
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：A general introduction of a natural phenomenon.
Para.2：The statement of the lesson from nature.
由教材学写作
(二)根据教材课文可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
1．第一段第一句使用了One day作为讲述故事的开头，表示“某一天……”。除此之外，还有很多关于时间的表达可以用于故事的开头，例如The other night或者It was a cold morning，然后顺承着继续往下讲述故事。
2．本文讲述后续故事的发展是按照时间顺序展开的，使用了一些衔接词，如so, however, then, but等，用以说明破茧成蝶的过程。
①________________ (从前), there was a miser (守财奴)．He hid his gold under a tree.Every week he used to dig it up.②_________ (一天晚上), a robber stole all the gold.③_______________________ (当守财奴再次来的时候), he found nothing but an empty hole.He was surprised, ④________________________ (然后放声大哭)．All the neighbors gathered around him.He told them how he used to come and
仿写训练/完成下面寓言故事
Once upon a time
One night
When the miser came again
and then burst into tears
visit his gold.“Did you ever take any of it out？” asked one of them.“No，” he said, “I only came to look at it.” ⑤“____________
___________________________(那就以后再来看这个洞)，” said the neighbor, “it will be the same as looking at the gold.”
Then come
again and look at the hole
三、学逻辑衔接
作者在第一段使用了衔接词So, However, But清晰地描写画面内容。在第二段开头，作者使用短语In the same way承上启下，由浅入深，说明图画的隐喻意义，并清楚地表达自己的看法。
四、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段第三句中的force its body through the little hole，第四句中的still couldn't get out和第五句中的too hard和its weak body，既描绘破茧化蝶的艰难，也为接下来这位男子的热心帮助埋下伏笔。第七句中的instead of承接上文，表示转折，动词短语drag ...around意为“沉重或缓慢地将某物或某人沿着地面拉到某处”，使动作描写形象生动。倒数第二句使用形容词necessary积极评价破茧过程的必要性。尾句too weak to live对其作了解释。
(2)第二段中的go through some difficult things与第一段中的struggled to force its body through the little hole进行类比，点明寓言故事的主题：诞生总要经历痛苦艰难的过程，所以遇到困难要靠自己去克服，去突破。
①I dragged myself through daily household chores, feeling exhausted.________________________________________
②Gasping with pain, he forced himself to his feet and with slow, shaky steps, began to walk._____________________________________
_____________________________________
③She was _____________________________what had happened.她太害怕了，不敢告诉家人发生了什么事。
仿写训练/翻译句子/完成句子
我费力地做着每天的家务，感到筋疲力尽。
他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈
着缓慢的步子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。
too frightened to tell her family
2．亮点句式
文章第一段中使用了一些高级句式，增强了文章的表达效果，使文章显得更有文采。如第二句使用了非谓语Seeing an opening in the pupa作状语，第三句使用了as引导的时间状语从句，第六句使用了so that引导的目的状语从句，第八句使用了because引导的原因状语从句等，形象地刻画了助茧成蝶的全过程及作者的感悟。
①Tom needs to learn German______________________________
_________.汤姆需要学习德语，因为他即将去德国工作。
②_____________________________, tears ran down her cheeks.当我妈妈唱起那些老歌时，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。
仿写训练/完成句子
because he is going to work in
Germany
As my mother sang those old songs
How to write about a lesson from nature
——如何写一篇从自然界中获得启示的文章
第一步：构思谋篇
具体写作指导
Part 1 A brief introduction to a lesson from nature.
Part 2 Introduce detailed information.
Part 3 Explain the moral of the lesson from nature.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　 引入话题
1．Nature can sometimes __________________________.
大自然有时会给我们上宝贵的一课。
2．Some small things in nature often ________________________
enlightenment.
自然界中的一些小事往往给我们一些有用的启示。
teach us a valuable lesson
give us some useful
3．I ___________________________ ants.
我从蚂蚁那里学到了人生的一课。
4．Recently I read a small story from Aesop's Fables, __________
____The Fox and the Grapes.
最近我读了《伊索寓言》中的一个小故事，名叫《狐狸与葡萄》。
learned about a life lesson from
whose name
is
第二部分　详细介绍故事情节
1．I was jogging on the path when I _________________________
a little bird.
我在小路上慢跑时，碰巧看见了一只小鸟。
2．I ____________________________________________________
I saw some ants.
我正在农田小路上徘徊，这时突然看到一些蚂蚁。
happened to catch sight of
was wandering along the path of the farmland when
3．______________________, it was still holding on.
让我非常吃惊的是，它仍然坚持着。
4．__________________________, I stopped to see whether it would give up.
看到这个情景，我停下来看看它是否会放弃。
Much to my amazement
Catching sight of the scene
5．Just at that time, I____________________________________.
就在那时，我禁不住羡慕它的坚强意志。
6．To facilitate movement for themselves and the future generations, Yugong, approaching his 90s,________________________
_____________, shovel by shovel.
为了方便自己和子孙后代的出行，年近九十的愚公决心一铲一铲地把山移走。
couldn't help admiring its strong will
was determined to remove
the mountains
第三部分　 获得的启示
1．常用词汇
①_____________　　 从……中获得……
②_______________ 提醒某人某事
③___________________ 做充分准备
④________________ 反省/认真思考某事
draw ...from ...　
remind sb.of sth.
make full preparations
reflect on/upon sth.
⑤attain one's goal ________________
⑥be inspired by ________
⑦gain any insight on ________
⑧make sense of ______
达成某人的目标
受到启发
获得感悟
理解
2．常用句式
①From my perspective, at no time should we__________________
________.在我看来，在任何时候我们都不能忽视团结的重要性。
②Accordingly, we should foster the consciousness of unity and always ____________that unity can create miracles ________________
obstacles we meet.
因此，我们应该培养团结的意识，并且永远铭记在心：无论我们遇到什么样的阻碍，团结都能够创造奇迹。
ignore the importance
of unity
bear in mind
no matter what
③Failure is the mother of success.Sometimes, in order to succeed, we __________________________________________and learn from it.
失败乃成功之母。有时候，为了成功，我们不得不勇敢地直面失败并从中吸取教训。
④The fable Yu Gong Yi Shan has become a synonym for forging ahead while ________________________and persevering to the end.
寓言《愚公移山》已成为迎难而上、坚持到底的代名词。
have no alternative but to face failure bravely
facing enormous difficulties
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你们班要举办一个主题为“A lesson from nature”的班会，请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语发言稿，内容包括：
1．某种自然现象；2．得到的人生感悟。
根据提示完成短文，选择恰当的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Nature can always teach us some valuable lessons and I have learned from ants that ① .
One day, I was sitting in the park when I saw a small ant ② ， as if trying to take it away.However, the bread was ③ to carry, so it had to leave.I had thought it ④ .But to my great amazement, more ants came and managed to ⑤ .
Seeing this, I realized that it was ⑥ that led to their success.I have deeply understood what the proverb “Unity is strength” ⑦ .
A．carry the bread away B．too large for it
C．climbing around a piece of bread D．unity is strength
E．must have given up F．the ants' unity
G．really means
答案：①～⑦　DCBEAFG
1．描述图画内容
①As is shown in the picture, a man is planting a tree.
如图画所示，一个人正在种树。
②We can see that the butterfly is ready to emerge.
我们可以看到，蝴蝶已经准备好出来了。
写作素材储备
③As can be clearly seen from the picture above, a turtle is crossing the road.
从上图可以清楚地看到，一只乌龟正在过马路。
④As the picture shows, there are two birds, one sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth.
如图所示，有两只鸟，一只在睡觉，另一只嘴里叼着一条虫子。
2．阐明寓意
①What the picture attempts to convey is that cooperation will benefit everyone.图片试图传达的是：合作将使每个人受益。
②It is obvious that if we behave like the ant, we will overcome all the difficulties.
显然，如果我们表现得像蚂蚁一样，我们将克服一切困难。
③This tells us that life is fair and that anything can happen.
这告诉我们生活是公平的，任何事情都可能发生。
3．发表看法
①I think people can live in harmony with nature.
我认为人与自然可以和谐相处。
②We should always remember: Be patient for success and Rome was not built in one day.
我们应该永远记住：对成功要有耐心，罗马不是一天建成的。
③As far as I'm concerned, we should keep in mind that as long as every one of us combines our efforts, we can surely make it.
就我而言，我们应该记住：只要我们每个人共同努力，我们就一定能获得成功。
④We need struggles to make ourselves stronger.
我们需要奋斗来使我们更强大。
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．I didn't realise there was an even larger lesson that disaster is a natural part of life until recently. (用强调句升级)
→______________________________________________________
_____________________________________
No.2 课时跟踪检测
It was not until recently that I realised there was an even larger lesson that disaster is a natural part of life.
2．That we can get much inspiration from nature which would lead to a full and happy life is true.(用it作形式主语升级)
→______________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
It is true that we can get much inspiration from nature which would lead to a full and happy life.
3．The things that we can learn from nature are limitless.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
→______________________________________
4．It is known that nature can benefit us a lot, as long as we learn from it.(用as引导的定语从句升级)
→_______________________________________________________________
What we can learn from nature is limitless.
As is known to all, nature can benefit us a lot, as long as we learn from it.
5．I felt honored to speak here and my topic is “Learn from nature”．(用it作形式主语升级)
→______________________________________________________________
It is an honor for me to speak here and my topic is “Learn from nature”.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．________________________ (和平共处) is also a valuable lesson we can learn from nature.
2．Nature provides every creature with a chance of survival,
_____________________________(不管它多大或多小)．
3．______________________________ (自然界教给我们的另一堂人生之课) is that creativity is more important than repetitive work.
Living in peaceful coexistence
no matter how big or small it is
Another life lesson nature teaches us
4．_____________________________________________________ (理解我们的存在和安乐依赖于其他人) would help us create a more harmonious society.
5．Change can't be avoided; the sooner we accept it, ___________
_____________(对我们就越好)．
6．So learn to respect nature and ___________________________
(把它的智慧应用于我们的生活中)．
Understanding that our existence and well-being relies on others
the better it
does good to us
apply the wisdom of it to our life
Ⅲ.应用文写作
请根据下面图画，按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1．简述图画；
2．概述其含义及对你的启示。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
参考范文：
As we can see in the picture, it is early in the morning and there are two birds.One of the birds is sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth.
This reminds me of a well-known Chinese proverb: The early bird catches the worm.It tells us that if we want to be successful and outstanding, we should not only plan ahead of time but also make diligence a habit.Living in an age when most people are intelligent, diligence seems more necessary.
As the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, we should realize the importance of early beginning.
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Nature, while beautiful, could also be unpredictable and merciless. But most importantly we bear in mind that in the darkest times, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel, just like Mrs Evans' cabin light.
One bright summer day, my friend Peter and I decided to venture into the unexplored trails of the Great Smoky Mountains. Blessed with rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes, the national park seemed a perfect getaway. Little did we know that our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident, forever engraved in our memories.
We set off early in the morning, equipped with our backpacks and a map that was supposed to guide us through the winding trails. The sun was up, casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our journey. We trekked (艰难行走), laughed, and marveled at the beauty of nature around us.
As we trekked through the dense forests, taking in the natural wonders around us, we couldn't help but feel a sense of adventure coursing through our veins. The trail was rugged and uneven, but we persevered through the challenging landscape.
Midway through our expedition, we stumbled upon a breathtaking waterfall, its glistening waters cascading (倾泻) down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody. We sat down by the water's edge, taking a moment to get lost in the beauty of nature. The cool mist from the waterfall enveloped us, and we felt refreshed and energetic.
As the day wore on, we ventured deeper into the wilderness, eager to explore every corner of this wonderland. We were so absorbed in the beauty of nature that just didn't notice our way and it seemed that we could not find the way back to the familiar part of the forest. Panicking, we scrambled to find our way back but the dense vegetation and winding trails only served to confuse us further. We tried to remember any possible signs that might lead us back. No sooner had we celebrated our return to the clear trails than something worse happened.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn.　__________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance.　 __________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Dark clouds shrouded the sky, and a heavy downpour followed. The comforting forest sounds quickly proved a terrifying symphony of thunder and wind. The trail that was once so clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to go on. We tried to consult our map, but it was too late; we got lost in the wilderness. Hours passing, our attempts to find the trail turned out to be in vain. With the cold creeping in, despair started to set in.
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance. Curiosity overpowered our fear, and we decided to follow it. When we drew nearer, we saw a small log cabin, lights shining from its windows. Knocking on the door, an elderly woman, Mrs Evans, welcomed us with a warm smile. She was a retired ranger who had chosen to live her twilight years in the heart of the mountains. She offered us shelter for the night, and the next morning, guided us back to the main trail. This incident strengthened our friendship and taught us the importance of resilience and hope. The experience was beyond expectation, terrifying, but enlightening all the same.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
The days start to warm up and daylight lasts longer. 1 You should, by now, be seeing spring arriving in your garden, with new growth on your trees and bushes.
With the sun shining stronger, its warmth can be felt and the plants respond accordingly. 2 So you need to make sure that you remove them before they take hold.Treat where you can and dig up where you can't, and remember to keep your pets out of the garden for the correct amount of time.We wouldn't want them to get poorly!
If you have trees to plant，then make sure you give them enough compost (堆肥) or manure (粪肥), to ensure they take to their new homes. 3 If not, you can always head to your local garden centre to top up your supplies! And why not pick up more flowers while you're there for your hanging pots or window sills (窗台)
4 There are a variety of summer-flowering bulbs that can also be grown in pots, hanging baskets and other containers, to brighten up a rock garden.In fact, if you plant your bulbs in a container that's a few sizes smaller than looks comfortable, it'll help them to burst into bloom. 5
So, what will you be planting out in the garden I have a few bulbs to get ready to go into the ground, what's your favorite flower to plant at this time of a year
A．It's a good idea to try different plants.
B．If you only have small space, don't worry.
C．If you are not well prepared, it doesn't matter.
D．Sadly, the weeds are also beginning to come up.
E．You know that means early flowers for indoors!
F．If you are able to use your own home-made fertilizer，then do so.
G．Therefore, it's time to get out in the garden and plant some plants.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。春天到了，有没有在你家花园中种植花草的计划呢？具体又该如何实施呢？
1．选G　根据上文“The days start to warm up and daylight lasts longer.”和下文“You should, by now, be seeing spring arriving in your garden, with new growth on your trees and bushes.”可知，上文提及天气暖和了起来，下文提及了树木发芽，因此，此处应是种植植物。故选G。
2．选D　根据下文“So you need to make sure that you remove them before they take hold.”可知，杂草已经长出来了。下文中的them显然指代D选项中的weeds，且前后句之间为因果关系。故选D。
3．选F　根据上文“If you have trees to plant, then make sure you give them enough compost (堆肥) or manure (粪肥), to ensure they take to their new homes.”中的堆肥和粪肥可知，也可以使用自己自制的肥料。而且下文的“If not”也给出了暗示。选项F中home-made fertilizer与上文中的compost以及manure相一致。故选F。
4．选B　下文提及的都是各种种植花草的地方，因此本段理应是说明空间问题。所以选项B“如果你只有很小的空间，不要担心。”符合上下文语境。
5．选E　根据上文“In fact, if you plant your bulbs in a container that's a few sizes smaller than looks comfortable, it'll help them to burst into bloom.”可知，上文提及花儿盛开，这里自然会谈到花儿。所以选项E“你知道，那意味着在室内的花儿要早开！”符合上下文语境。1 / 5
Section Ⅵ　Writing
写作项目——Writing about a lesson from nature
本单元的写作任务是写一篇从自然界中获得的启示的文章，属于生活哲理类文章。此类文章一般是通过描写生活中的一件事来阐述与之相关的生活哲理以及自己的感悟。文章叙议结合，以议论为主。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：A general introduction of a natural phenomenon.
Para.2：The statement of the lesson from nature.
(二)根据教材课文可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
1．第一段第一句使用了One day作为讲述故事的开头，表示“某一天……”。除此之外，还有很多关于时间的表达可以用于故事的开头，例如The other night或者It was a cold morning，然后顺承着继续往下讲述故事。
2．本文讲述后续故事的发展是按照时间顺序展开的，使用了一些衔接词，如so, however, then, but等，用以说明破茧成蝶的过程。
①____________________ (从前), there was a miser (守财奴)．He hid his gold under a tree.Every week he used to dig it up.②____________ (一天晚上), a robber stole all the gold.③______________________________ (当守财奴再次来的时候), he found nothing but an empty hole.He was surprised, ④____________________ (然后放声大哭)．All the neighbors gathered around him.He told them how he used to come and visit his gold.“Did you ever take any of it out？” asked one of them.“No，” he said, “I only came to look at it.” ⑤“______________________________ (那就以后再来看这个洞)，” said the neighbor, “it will be the same as looking at the gold.”　　
三、学逻辑衔接
作者在第一段使用了衔接词So, However, But清晰地描写画面内容。在第二段开头，作者使用短语In the same way承上启下，由浅入深，说明图画的隐喻意义，并清楚地表达自己的看法。
四、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段第三句中的force its body through the little hole，第四句中的still couldn't get out和第五句中的too hard和its weak body，既描绘破茧化蝶的艰难，也为接下来这位男子的热心帮助埋下伏笔。第七句中的instead of承接上文，表示转折，动词短语drag ...around意为“沉重或缓慢地将某物或某人沿着地面拉到某处”，使动作描写形象生动。倒数第二句使用形容词necessary积极评价破茧过程的必要性。尾句too weak to live对其作了解释。
(2)第二段中的go through some difficult things与第一段中的struggled to force its body through the little hole进行类比，点明寓言故事的主题：诞生总要经历痛苦艰难的过程，所以遇到困难要靠自己去克服，去突破。
①I dragged myself through daily household chores, feeling exhausted.
________________________________________________________________________
②Gasping with pain, he forced himself to his feet and with slow, shaky steps, began to walk.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
③She was ______________________________ what had happened.
她太害怕了，不敢告诉家人发生了什么事。　　
2．亮点句式
文章第一段中使用了一些高级句式，增强了文章的表达效果，使文章显得更有文采。如第二句使用了非谓语Seeing an opening in the pupa作状语，第三句使用了as引导的时间状语从句，第六句使用了so that引导的目的状语从句，第八句使用了because引导的原因状语从句等，形象地刻画了助茧成蝶的全过程及作者的感悟。
①Tom needs to learn German ______________________________________.
汤姆需要学习德语，因为他即将去德国工作。
②________________________________________________________________________，
tears ran down her cheeks.
当我妈妈唱起那些老歌时，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。　　
具体写作指导
How to write about a lesson from nature
——如何写一篇从自然界中获得启示的文章
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction to a lesson from nature.
Part 2 Introduce detailed information.
Part 3 Explain the moral of the lesson from nature.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　 引入话题
1．Nature can sometimes ______________________________________.
大自然有时会给我们上宝贵的一课。
2．Some small things in nature often ______________________ enlightenment.
自然界中的一些小事往往给我们一些有用的启示。
3．I ________________________________________________________________________ ants.
我从蚂蚁那里学到了人生的一课。
4．Recently I read a small story from Aesop's Fables, ________________ The Fox and the Grapes.
最近我读了《伊索寓言》中的一个小故事，名叫《狐狸与葡萄》。
第二部分　详细介绍故事情节
1．I was jogging on the path when I ____________________________ a little bird.
我在小路上慢跑时，碰巧看见了一只小鸟。
2．I ________________________________________________ I saw some ants.
我正在农田小路上徘徊，这时突然看到一些蚂蚁。
3．________________________， it was still holding on.让我非常吃惊的是，它仍然坚持着。
4．________________________________， I stopped to see whether it would give up.
看到这个情景，我停下来看看它是否会放弃。
5．Just at that time, I ________________________________________.
就在那时，我禁不住羡慕它的坚强意志。
6．To facilitate movement for themselves and the future generations, Yugong, approaching his 90s, ________________________________________， shovel by shovel.
为了方便自己和子孙后代的出行，年近九十的愚公决心一铲一铲地把山移走。
第三部分　 获得的启示
1．常用词汇
①______________　　　 从……中获得……
②______________ 提醒某人某事
③______________ 做充分准备
④______________ 反省/认真思考某事
⑤attain one's goal ______________
⑥be inspired by ______________
⑦gain any insight on ______________
⑧make sense of ______________
2．常用句式
①From my perspective, at no time should we ____________________________.在我看来，在任何时候我们都不能忽视团结的重要性。
②Accordingly, we should foster the consciousness of unity and always ______________ that unity can create miracles ______________ obstacles we meet.
因此，我们应该培养团结的意识，并且永远铭记在心：无论我们遇到什么样的阻碍，团结都能够创造奇迹。
③Failure is the mother of success.Sometimes, in order to succeed, we _________________________________________ and learn from it.
失败乃成功之母。有时候，为了成功，我们不得不勇敢地直面失败并从中吸取教训。
④The fable Yu Gong Yi Shan has become a synonym for forging ahead while ____________________________________ and persevering to the end.
寓言《愚公移山》已成为迎难而上、坚持到底的代名词。
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你们班要举办一个主题为“A lesson from nature”的班会，请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语发言稿，内容包括：
1．某种自然现象；　2.得到的人生感悟。
根据提示完成短文，选择恰当的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Nature can always teach us some valuable lessons and I have learned from ants that ①______________________________.
One day, I was sitting in the park when I saw a small ant ②______________________， as if trying to take it away.However, the bread was ③__________________ to carry, so it had to leave.I had thought it ④__________________.But to my great amazement, more ants came and managed to ⑤____________________________.
Seeing this, I realized that it was ⑥____________________________ that led to their success.I have deeply understood what the proverb “Unity is strength” ⑦________________________________________________________________________.
写作素材储备
1．描述图画内容
①As is shown in the picture, a man is planting a tree.如图画所示，一个人正在种树。
②We can see that the butterfly is ready to emerge.
我们可以看到，蝴蝶已经准备好出来了。
③As can be clearly seen from the picture above, a turtle is crossing the road.
从上图可以清楚地看到，一只乌龟正在过马路。
④As the picture shows, there are two birds, one sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth.如图所示，有两只鸟，一只在睡觉，另一只嘴里叼着一条虫子。
2．阐明寓意
①What the picture attempts to convey is that cooperation will benefit everyone.
图片试图传达的是：合作将使每个人受益。
②It is obvious that if we behave like the ant, we will overcome all the difficulties.
显然，如果我们表现得像蚂蚁一样，我们将克服一切困难。
③This tells us that life is fair and that anything can happen.
这告诉我们生活是公平的，任何事情都可能发生。
3．发表看法
①I think people can live in harmony with nature.
我认为人与自然可以和谐相处。
②We should always remember: Be patient for success and Rome was not built in one day.
我们应该永远记住：对成功要有耐心，罗马不是一天建成的。
③As far as I'm concerned, we should keep in mind that as long as every one of us combines our efforts, we can surely make it.
就我而言，我们应该记住：只要我们每个人共同努力，我们就一定能获得成功。
④We need struggles to make ourselves stronger.
我们需要奋斗来使我们更强大。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作　
二、①Once upon a time　②One night
③When the miser came again　④and then burst into tears
⑤Then come again and look at the hole
四、1.①我费力地做着每天的家务，感到筋疲力尽。
②他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈着缓慢的步子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。
③too frightened to tell her family
2．①because he is going to work in Germany
②As my mother sang those old songs
具体写作指导　
第二步　第一部分：1.teach us a valuable lesson　2.give us some useful　3.learned about a life lesson from　4.whose name is
第二部分：1.happened to catch sight of　2.was wandering along the path of the farmland when　3.Much to my amazement
4．Catching sight of the scene　5.couldn't help admiring its strong will　6.was determined to remove the mountains
第三部分：1.①draw ...from ...　②remind sb.of sth.　③make full preparations　④reflect on/upon sth.　⑤达成某人的目标
⑥受到启发　⑦获得感悟　⑧理解
2．①ignore the importance of unity　②bear in mind; no matter what　③have no alternative but to face failure bravely
④facing enormous difficulties
[针对练笔]
①～⑦　DCBEAFG1 / 3
UNIT 5　课时检测(六)　Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．I didn't realise there was an even larger lesson that disaster is a natural part of life until recently. (用强调句升级)
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2．That we can get much inspiration from nature which would lead to a full and happy life is true.(用it作形式主语升级)
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　3．The things that we can learn from nature are limitless.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
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4．It is known that nature can benefit us a lot, as long as we learn from it.(用as引导的定语从句升级)
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　5．I felt honored to speak here and my topic is “Learn from nature”．(用it作形式主语升级)
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　Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．____________________________ (和平共处) is also a valuable lesson we can learn from nature.
2．Nature provides every creature with a chance of survival, ________________________________ (不管它多大或多小)．
3．____________________________________ (自然界教给我们的另一堂人生之课) is that creativity is more important than repetitive work.
4．________________________________________________________________ (理解我们的存在和安乐依赖于其他人) would help us create a more harmonious society.
5．Change can't be avoided; the sooner we accept it, __________________________ (对我们就越好)．
6．So learn to respect nature and ____________________________ (把它的智慧应用于我们的生活中)．
Ⅲ.应用文写作
请根据下面图画，按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1．简述图画；　2.概述其含义及对你的启示。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　
　
　
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Nature, while beautiful, could also be unpredictable and merciless. But most importantly we bear in mind that in the darkest times, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel, just like Mrs Evans' cabin light.
One bright summer day, my friend Peter and I decided to venture into the unexplored trails of the Great Smoky Mountains. Blessed with rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes, the national park seemed a perfect getaway. Little did we know that our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident, forever engraved in our memories.
We set off early in the morning, equipped with our backpacks and a map that was supposed to guide us through the winding trails. The sun was up, casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our journey. We trekked (艰难行走), laughed, and marveled at the beauty of nature around us.
As we trekked through the dense forests, taking in the natural wonders around us, we couldn't help but feel a sense of adventure coursing through our veins. The trail was rugged and uneven, but we persevered through the challenging landscape.
Midway through our expedition, we stumbled upon a breathtaking waterfall, its glistening waters cascading (倾泻) down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody. We sat down by the water's edge, taking a moment to get lost in the beauty of nature. The cool mist from the waterfall enveloped us, and we felt refreshed and energetic.
As the day wore on, we ventured deeper into the wilderness, eager to explore every corner of this wonderland. We were so absorbed in the beauty of nature that just didn't notice our way and it seemed that we could not find the way back to the familiar part of the forest. Panicking, we scrambled to find our way back but the dense vegetation and winding trails only served to confuse us further. We tried to remember any possible signs that might lead us back. No sooner had we celebrated our return to the clear trails than something worse happened.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn.　
　
　　
　
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance.　
　
　
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
The days start to warm up and daylight lasts longer. __1__ You should, by now, be seeing spring arriving in your garden, with new growth on your trees and bushes.
With the sun shining stronger, its warmth can be felt and the plants respond accordingly.__2__ So you need to make sure that you remove them before they take hold.Treat where you can and dig up where you can't, and remember to keep your pets out of the garden for the correct amount of time.We wouldn't want them to get poorly!
If you have trees to plant，then make sure you give them enough compost (堆肥) or manure (粪肥), to ensure they take to their new homes.__3__ If not, you can always head to your local garden centre to top up your supplies! And why not pick up more flowers while you're there for your hanging pots or window sills (窗台)
__4__ There are a variety of summer flowering bulbs that can also be grown in pots, hanging baskets and other containers, to brighten up a rock garden.In fact, if you plant your bulbs in a container that's a few sizes smaller than looks comfortable, it'll help them to burst into bloom.__5__
So, what will you be planting out in the garden I have a few bulbs to get ready to go into the ground, what's your favorite flower to plant at this time of a year
A．It's a good idea to try different plants.
B．If you only have small space, don't worry.
C．If you are not well prepared, it doesn't matter.
D．Sadly, the weeds are also beginning to come up.
E．You know that means early flowers for indoors!
F．If you are able to use your own home made fertilizer，then do so.
G．Therefore, it's time to get out in the garden and plant some plants.
UNIT 5　课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.It was not until recently that I realised there was an even larger lesson that disaster is a natural part of life.
2．It is true that we can get much inspiration from nature which would lead to a full and happy life.
3．What we can learn from nature is limitless.
4．As is known to all, nature can benefit us a lot, as long as we learn from it.
5．It is an honor for me to speak here and my topic is “Learn from nature”．
Ⅱ.1.Living in peaceful coexistence　2.no matter how big or small it is　3.Another life lesson nature teaches us
4．Understanding that our existence and well being relies on others
5．the better it does good to us
6．apply the wisdom of it to our life
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
As we can see in the picture, it is early in the morning and there are two birds.One of the birds is sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth.
This reminds me of a well known Chinese proverb: The early bird catches the worm.It tells us that if we want to be successful and outstanding, we should not only plan ahead of time but also make diligence a habit.Living in an age when most people are intelligent, diligence seems more necessary.
As the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, we should realize the importance of early beginning.
Ⅳ.读后续写(参考范文)
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Dark clouds shrouded the sky, and a heavy downpour followed. The comforting forest sounds quickly proved a terrifying symphony of thunder and wind. The trail that was once so clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to go on. We tried to consult our map, but it was too late; we got lost in the wilderness. Hours passing, our attempts to find the trail turned out to be in vain. With the cold creeping in, despair started to set in.
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance. Curiosity overpowered our fear, and we decided to follow it. When we drew nearer, we saw a small log cabin, lights shining from its windows. Knocking on the door, an elderly woman, Mrs Evans, welcomed us with a warm smile. She was a retired ranger who had chosen to live her twilight years in the heart of the mountains. She offered us shelter for the night, and the next morning, guided us back to the main trail. This incident strengthened our friendship and taught us the importance of resilience and hope. The experience was beyond expectation, terrifying, but enlightening all the same.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。春天到了，有没有在你家花园中种植花草的计划呢？具体又该如何实施呢？
1．选G　根据上文“The days start to warm up and daylight lasts longer.”和下文“You should, by now, be seeing spring arriving in your garden, with new growth on your trees and bushes.”可知，上文提及天气暖和了起来，下文提及了树木发芽，因此，此处应是种植植物。故选G。
2．选D　根据下文“So you need to make sure that you remove them before they take hold.”可知，杂草已经长出来了。下文中的them显然指代D选项中的weeds，且前后句之间为因果关系。故选D。
3．选F　根据上文“If you have trees to plant, then make sure you give them enough compost (堆肥) or manure (粪肥), to ensure they take to their new homes.”中的堆肥和粪肥可知，也可以使用自己自制的肥料。而且下文的“If not”也给出了暗示。选项F中home made fertilizer与上文中的compost以及manure相一致。故选F。
4．选B　下文提及的都是各种种植花草的地方，因此本段理应是说明空间问题。所以选项B“如果你只有很小的空间，不要担心。”符合上下文语境。
5．选E　根据上文“In fact, if you plant your bulbs in a container that's a few sizes smaller than looks comfortable, it'll help them to burst into bloom.”可知，上文提及花儿盛开，这里自然会谈到花儿。所以选项E“你知道，那意味着在室内的花儿要早开！”符合上下文语境。

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