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Unit1　Wish you were here
Part 4　Writing
邀请信
写作题目
　　假定你是李华,你打算国庆节期间去武汉旅游。请你给来自新西兰的交换生Terry发邮件邀请他与你同游,内容包括:
1.邀请Terry与你同游;
2.你的旅游计划;
3.表达希望。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.　　　　 v.尝,品尝,体验
2.　　　　　　除了……外(还)
3.　　　　　　去,前往
4.　　　　　　不足为奇,毫不奇怪
答案　1.sample　2.apart from　3.make one's way to　4.come as no surprise　
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:说明写信目的——邀请对方同游武汉
(1)I am writing to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(邀请你去)with me.
第二段:介绍旅游计划
(2)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(除了欣赏) the beautiful scenery, I also plan to make my way to the Yangtze River.
(3)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(这一点不足为奇) that this trip can broaden my horizons.
(4)This trip can 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(帮助我减轻压力).
(5)In addition, I will spare the time to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(品尝当地的小吃).
第三段:表达希望,期待回复
(6)Please let me know 　　　　 　　　　(你的决定).
答案　(1)invite you to go　(2)Apart from enjoying　(3)It will come as no surprise
(4) help me reduce stress
(5)sample the local snacks
(6)your decision
2.句式升级
(7)用not only...but also...合并句(3)和句(4),并使用倒装语序
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用让步状语从句改写句(6)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案
(7)It will come as no surprise that not only can this trip broaden my horizons, but it can also help me reduce stress.
(8)Whatever/No matter what your decision is, please let me know.
连句成篇
Dear Terry,
How are you I intend to travel to Wuhan during the National Day holiday. I am writing to invite you to go with me.
According to my plan, I will stay in Wuhan for five days. Apart from enjoying the beautiful scenery, I also plan to make my way to the Yangtze River. It will come as no surprise that not only can this trip broaden my horizons, but it can also help me reduce stress. In addition, I will spare the time to sample the local snacks.
It will be pleasant to travel to the city with you. Please take my invitation into account.Whatever your decision is, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于邀请信的增分佳句
　　1.开头:简要说明活动并邀请对方
①An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。
②There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.周日,在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。
③I'm writing to invite you to...我写信是邀请你……
④It's my pleasure to invite you to...我很荣幸邀请你……
2.主体:介绍活动
①We will start at 8:00 a.m. and arrive there at 9:00.我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。
②Remember to take water and lunch with you.记得带上水和午餐。
③The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace.下一个你不能错过的名胜是颐和园。
④As a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization, it is one of the world's oldest and most magnificent man-made scenes.作为中国古代文明的象征,它是世界上最古老、最壮丽的人造景观之一。
⑤I'm sure that you will enjoy yourself there.我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
3.结尾:表达希望,期待对方回复
①Will you be available during that time Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.那期间你有空吗 请方便时尽快给我打电话,号码是1234567。
②Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation 请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗
③Looking forward to your early reply.期待你的早日回复。
④We will feel much honored if you can come.如果你能来,我们会感到非常荣幸。
⑤We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。
⑥I am longing to see you soon.我渴望尽早见到你。
实战演练
假设你是李华,你打算和几位朋友在国庆节期间去三亚旅游。请给你的外国朋友Mike发一封电子邮件介绍这次旅游计划,并邀请他一起旅游。旅游计划需包括:
1.出行时间安排;
2.主要活动。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:篝火晚会 campfire party
Dear Mike,
How is everything going 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写
写作题目
　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's gift
I grew up in a small town where it was a ten-minute walk from my house to the primary school. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
When I was in the third grade, I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped on the stage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白员) part for the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　After the play, I took home the dandelion.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense vt.觉察到
2.bunch n.串,束,扎
3.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
4.dig up挖出
5.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
6.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句剖析
原句　Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析　本句为主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文　在大树下,我们可以看到草地上一簇簇黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:
她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,战胜了紧张→演出成功。
第二段:
话剧演出结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回了家→妈妈和“我”一起把这朵蒲公英封存起来留作纪念→这件事带给“我”的感触。
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1)　　　　 a shining smile带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital　　　　至关重要
(3)go on　　　　上台
(4)keep...　　　　陪伴……
(5)　　　　　　结果是
(6)　　　　　　注视
(7)　　　　 v.记起,回忆起
(8)　　　　 adj.宝贵的
答案　(1)wear　(2)significance/importance(3)stage　(4)company　(5)turn out　(6)gaze at　(7)recall　(8)precious
2.完成句子
(1)“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(带着灿烂的笑容)on her gentle face.
(2)At that very moment, I found a dandelion 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(放进我口袋里) by my mother to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(陪伴我).
(3)Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(像往常一样微笑).
(4)Though decades have passed, I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(总是记起宝贵的午餐时光) we spent together.
(5)I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(感激) the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案　(1) wearing a shining smile　(2) put into my pocket; keep me company　(3)smiled as usual　(4)constantly recall the precious lunchtime　(5)was grateful for
3.句式升级
(6)把句(2)改写为强调时间状语的强调句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(7)把句(4)和句(5)合并为用形容词短语作状语的句子
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　答案　(6)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.
(7)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we spent together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
连句成篇
　　“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her gentle face. I began to accept that the narrator part was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
　　After the play, I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. “We were perhaps the only people that would keep such a sorry-looking weed.” Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we spent together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的分类
1.自然环境描写。如:
The country is very green in spring.
2.社会环境描写。如:
This small village was filled with flames of war at that time.
二、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:
After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助视觉、嗅觉进行描写)
2.从空间的角度进行环境描写,如由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:
I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用视觉上的由下到上的方式进行描写)
三、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天;the songs of birds鸟鸣;the fragile flowers娇嫩的花;the raining evening雨夜;the green grass青草;the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰;the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳;a gust of wind一阵狂风;the drooping branches of the weeping willow垂柳的低垂枝条;the soft and cool wind轻柔且凉爽的风
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4　Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going My friends and I have decided to go on a trip to Sanya during China's National Day holiday. I'm writing to tell you about our travel plan and invite you to join us.
We are leaving for Sanya by airplane the day before the holiday begins. We will start sightseeing on October 1st when we will visit some places of interest. In the following days, we will climb the mountains, swim near the beach, go diving and have a campfire party, through which I'm sure we will have a lot of fun being together.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①sightseeing n.观光　②place of interest名胜　③go diving去潜水
2.亮点句型
①We will start sightseeing on October 1st when we will visit some places of interest.(定语从句)我们将于10月1日开始观光,届时我们将参观一些名胜。
②In the following days, we will climb the mountains, swim near the beach, go diving and have a campfire party, through which I'm sure we will have a lot of fun being together.(非限制性定语从句;宾语从句)在接下来的日子里,我们将爬山、在海滩附近游泳、去潜水、举办篝火晚会,通过这些活动,我相信我们会在一起玩得很愉快。
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